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Comments and criticism appreciated!","writing":"Deep within the outskirts of the Saddle Arabian deserts, amidst the blistering heat and large stretches of sand dunes, sat a large temple half buried in the desert sands. This temple was said to be the home of once great Pharaoh Amon-Da, ruler of the land over two thousand years ago, a temple which no pony had ever trekked into due to rumoured curses or traps, that whoever enters the temple will never come out alive. Said temples were said to hold many great treasures hidden within its depths, but no pony has ever seen them to confirm that they're real.\n\nHowever, Rarity had been researching about new fashion designs after getting a contract from a Saddle Arabian tailor, trying to create new fashions for the country's noble ponies and royalty. After hearing about this place through old books and word of mouth, she decided that her inspiration was going to be found within the temple walls, despite the warnings of the temple's dangers beforehand. \n\nTaking Sweetie Belle along with her to help her expedition, they travelled tirelessly to the temple, setting up camp before heading inside. Rarity decided on going into Amon-Da's without clothing as the heat from their clothes would only slow them further. Sweetie Belle pondered on why but followed along anyway, agreeing that the heat was still stifling with her clothes on anyway.\n\nThe two approached the temple entrance and stood before it, gazing at the temple as Rarity inspected the walls with her hands, \"Now there should be a means of entry on here somewhere...\"\n\nSweetie Belle stood back and yawned, stretching her nude form as she did so. The older mare ran her hands along the bricks in the wall, stopping as her hand sunk into a loose tile, \"A-ha! Here it is.\"\n\nThe large stone door rumbled and opened upwards, the two watching in awe as it rose to the top with a loud 'BOOM'. Sweetie smiled and remarked, \"Wow, forboding. I like it.\"\n\nRarity headed into the temple entrance, noticing some stairs leading downwards into pitch darkness. She simply cast her magic and her horn glowed a bright, brilliant purple, providing them with plenty of light to see. The two sisters walked down the stairs into the depths of the temple and gazed at the wall patterns and hieroglyphs, marvelled by how well the temple had been maintained. As they reached the bottom of the stairs, they found the stone floor was submerged under a few inches of water, reaching up to their ankles. Not paying much heed, they walked down the old, darkened halls.\n\nTurning a corner, the rest of the temple didn't seem as well kept, there were fallen pillars, rocks and debris everywhere and some chunks missing from the ceilings and walls. They stuck close together as they wandered on through, Rarity's light guiding them as they waded through the shallow water.\n\n\"This temple has seen better days, hasn't it Sweetie?\" Rarity asked, looking around at the scattered and messy debris.\n\nThe younger sister nodded, \"Yeah, it's quite old.\" She looked up at her sister and decided to ask her a burning question, \"Okay, so why are we in here without any clothes or tools again?\"\n\n\"It's very simple, this trek is just to find the treasure, which is said to be hidden deep within these walls, all we do is find it, teleport back outside and then start gathering once we set up that teleportation point.\" She explained, her sister nodding at her words.\n\n\"I still don't see why we have to do this naked, though.\" Sweetie muttered, folding her arms to cover her chest.\n\n\"Well, due to heat and whatever grime and muck we could run into, I'd much rather have my body dirty than any of our nice clothes.\" She replied, looking at her nude form, running her hands over her breasts.\n\nSweetie laughed and shook her head, \"Typical Rarity...\"\n\nThe older sister shot her a cold look as they continued down the corridors of the decrepit temple. They made a few turns at some intersections, running into a few dead ends here and there, and they travelled for what seemed like an age as they traversed deeper and deeper into the winding, maze-like corridors.\n\nSweetie followed behind her sister, clambering over a fallen pillar as she remarked, \"You know for a Pharaoh, you think this pony would put his treasure somewhere where he could find it easily.\"\n\n\"Well, you don't normally put rare and valuable belongings where it's easy to find them, especially in a place like this.\" Rarity replied back, turning her head to her.\n\n\"Just hope we don't get lost...\" Sweetie replied with concern, her heart fluttering with slight fear.\n\n\"We'll be fine, we just have to find the supposed treasure room and then teleport out, doesn't matter if we get lost.\" Rarity reassured to her older sister with a comforting smile.\n\nAs they walked on, Sweetie kept her eyes on the walls, not watching where her footing was as she felt her foot sink into a loose tile as she tripped into her front. Rarity noticed and ran to her, picking the foal back up, \"Sweetie, are you okay?\"\n\nThe young unicorn shook her head to clear her senses, \"I'm fine, just tripped over a loose tile.\" She got back to her feet and brushed off her chest.\n\n\"Well, let's hope that didn't change anything. Come along now.\" The older mare replied, turning and walking on. As Sweetie sighed, she felt the water that was once at her ankles, crawl up to her shins. \"H-hey sis?\" She quavered as her mind imagined the worst.\n\n\"Hmm?\" Rarity didn't look back at her sister as she walked on, leaving Sweetie behind.\"\n\n\"Sis!\" Sweetie yelled back.\n\nThe older unicorn stopped in her tracks, \"What is it, Sweetie?\" She replied in a frustrated tone.\n\n\"Is it me or is the w-water getting higher?\" The foal asked as her voice cracked slightly.\n\nRarity raised an eyebrow and felt the water almost reach up to her shins as well, \"Oh no. Oh no no no no...\" She repeated as her hands reached her mouth, shaking her head as her worst fears came to pass.\n\n\"Rarity, the temple's flooding and we're stuck here!\" Sweetie squealed with fear, wading towards her sister.\n\nThe older unicorn felt the water reach up to her knees as she held her sister's hands, \"Don't panic, I'll try and teleport us out!\"\n\nHer horn flashed as she braced herself, but nothing came of it but a small spark. She tried again as her sister watched on in growing panic, \"What's happening, why isn't it working?!\"\n\n\"I-I don't know!\" Rarity replied, trying her magic again but failing, \"It's as if the temple's put a stop to my more powerful magic.\"\n\n\"Y-you mean we can't get out?!\" Sweetie screamed in fear, gripping her sister's arms.\n\nRarity felt the same fear as the waters crawled up their bodies, reaching up to Sweetie's waist as they tried to gather their bearings. The older unicorn swallowed her fear and pointed back, \"Okay, let's just find the exit and get out!\"\n\nThe two waded through the rising water back the way they came, taking a few turns at the corners and intersections, Rarity believing they were the way they once passed through, but as the water crawled up further these corridors lead to more dead ends and loops to where they once were. They continued down the corridors as the water eventually reached Sweetie's chest, making her float as she swam behind her older sister, her stylised tail melting in the water as it flowed freely.\n\nThe young foal was practically scared out of her wits, tears streaming down her eyes, \"Sis, I'm so sorry I tripped that panel, if I knew where I was going this wouldn't have happened!\" She apologised profusely, her older sister gathering her up close as they continued to swim through the corridors, the water causing Rarity's nipples to stand on end.\n\nRarity stroked her sister's mane and replied, \"Don't worry Sweetie, it wasn't your fault...\"\n\nSweetie sobbed uncontrollably into her side, \"Oh, we're gonna die and it's all my fault! Somebody help us, please!!\" Soon, the water had lifted Rarity off her feet as they kept on swimming, the older sister adamant to finding their way out through the mass of hallways and misleading intersections. \n\nIn very little time, the water neared the ceiling as the older mare stopped and put a hand to the cold stone her neck breaching the cold surface, \"Oh dear, oh no this is really bad.\"\n\n\"We're gonna die, WE'RE GONNA DIE!!\" Sweetie hollered as she looked at the rising surface.\n\nRarity breathed deep and composed herself, \"Sweetie, I want you to take a deep breath and hold it for as long as you can!\"\n\n\"What?! But sis, I can't hold my breath for long--\"\n\n\"JUST DO IT, SWEETIE!!\" Rarity yelled back against the rising water.\n\nThe younger mare took a moment to compose her hyperventilating and nodded with some confidence, \"Okay, I'll try!\"\n\nThe two cocked their heads to the ceiling as the water crawled up their cheeks, taking slow, deep breaths to ready themselves. Then, they simultaneously took a large, deep breath and submerged under the water, blurring their vision as they opened their eyes, Rarity's curly mane melting a flowing in the cold water. Her horn flashed again as their vision soon cleared as they could see perfectly in the water, \"Good, that still works.\" She thought as the two joined hands and swum side by side.\n\nSweetie's heart was thumping a thousand miles a minute inside her as she kicked alongside her older sister, giving her a a reassuring smile through her pursed lips, which she nervously returned. A few bubbles seeped through the foal's nose as small, purple streaks thanks to Rarity's light. They kicked through the corridors, swimming over the scattered debris as the sounds of escaping air was the only noise to comfort them.\n\nThe two continued to swim with each passing moment, their lungs still holding out as they kept on kicking, keeping their panicking to a minimum as to not lose any air. Sweetie looked around the flooded corridors, fascinated by the light of her sister's magic rippling on the walls and ceiling, distracting her from her breath holding. A quick sting and gurgle of her lungs brought her back to reality, kicking harder to stay by Rarity's side as she flashed another warm smile, another string of bubbles trickling from her nose. As she breast stroked through the submerged hallways, Rarity's large breasts flowed freely as the water tickled her erect nipples, trying to hold her breath despite the slight stimulation from her predicament.\n\nSoon, those moments passed by and as seconds turned into minutes, their struggles were finally beginning to seep through. Sweetie Belle kept up with her sister still, but her cheeks began puffing as her lungs twitched inside her, her chest convulsing as she let out a small surge of air to relieve the building pressure, but it was starting to wear on her as her need to breathe grew stronger and stronger. The filly clutched her mouth with her free hand as she tried to hold her air in through any means, but it wasn't enough as her breath holding capabilities were nearing its peak. \n\n\"Mmbglbl... MMFFGBLBL!!\" She gurgled a small cloud of air which continually ripped from her pursed lips and nose, clenching her eyes shut as her grip on her sister's hand loosened, Rarity turning to her and swimming back. Sweetie kicked on as she kept on coughing, calming herself to hold her lessened breath, but she would soon need to exhale again.\n\nRarity took the foal's hand again and continued swimming, wrapping an arm around her and carried her along as she swam for the both of them, \"Come on, Sweetie. Hold it together...\" Her mind said to the filly, Sweetie clenching her lips as her cheeks puffed up and receded as she swallowed her breath again.\n\nThe two found themselves at another dead end, pushing back as Rarity began to pump her free arm and legs, picking up the pace as she felt her own lungs sting inside her. \"Hmmblbl...\" She bubbled, swallowing her breath back. Time seemed to slow to a crawl as they swam through the corridor, still keeping a quick pace but each path seemed to lead nowhere as she began to worry even more, moreso for her sister who started to convulse in her grasp, clutching her mouth with her right hand, her left outstretched to paddle.\n\nRarity looked down at the filly and grew increasingly worried at her sister's current situation, fearing that her current breath won't last her. As she thought that, her own lungs began to sting as she bubbled a small cloud of air bubbles to ease the pain in her chest. She thought the best thing to do at that moment was to give her younger sister some of her own air to help her out, but Rarity would have to sacrifice a lot of air and time which neither of them really had at that moment.\n\nHer own air started streaming in small silvery streaks from her pursed lips, looking with dread as her sister tried to hold on to what little air she had left, \"Oh Sweetie Belle, just hold on a little while longer...\" Her mind thought, watching the filly puff her cheeks as she held the last of her air.\n\nSweetie Belle was exhausted, her lungs had exceeded bursting point as she had long surpassed any previous breath holding records she had before, her chest thumping and convulsing rapidly as her cheeks puffed, her eyes widening as she clutched her mouth shut again, hoping to keep the air in her lungs just a bit longer. But her efforts proved futile as holding onto a few large convulsions, the next one hit her with the force of a runaway carriage as she finally relented after holding for well over two minutes.\n\n\"BGLAAAGBLBL!!\" Bubbles exploded from the young foal's mouth. Sweetie Belle was drowning. The convulsion forced her to exhale her remaining air as she fought desperately to not inhale, but her wild flailing of her body proved that to be difficult. Rarity watched in horror as she watched her own sister drown in her arms, Sweetie's head cocking back as more bubbles frothed from her tired lungs, her legs frantically kicking as she convulsed.\n\n\"Hrrk... Aagk... Mglup!\" Sweetie gurgled in her drowning throes, her body still exhaling stale air as her head tilted back, hands near her throat in half clenched claws, trying as hard as she could to keep water from her lungs. Rarity held the mare close, unable to keep her eyes off her drowning sister as she began praying for her safety.\n\n\"Stay with me, Sweetie... We're going to get through this, I promise.\" Her mind whispered to her, the unicorn feeling tears of despair wash away in the waters of the temple. Rarity reached another dead end took the time to try and calm her sister's breathing.\n\nShe stopped their swimming and floated in front of her younger sister, gripping her hands as she tried to get her attention. Sweetie looked at the mare wearily holding onto her last gulps of air as Rarity signalled with her hand and pointed at her throat, then to her mouth as she tried to think what she was saying. Rarity tried another method, she let loose a gentle string of air and pointed at it then to her sister's mouth. Then, the filly got the idea, she wanted to share air.\n\nShe nodded as Rarity leant in and opened her mouth, holding onto her head and locking lips with her, breathing into her sister's lungs. It wasn't a lot, but the young filly did feel her strength return as she felt Rarity's warm air enter her mouth. The older unicorn pulled back and looked inquisitively at the filly, who nodded in reply as she scooped up the mare again and continued swimming on.\n\nRarity kicked as hard as her remaining energy would let her, her own chest convulsing due to the air she had to give her sister and the time spent underwater. She had lost track of how long they were under, but it felt like forever to the unicorns. Sweetie felt her lungs quake and quiver again, but kept a firm hold on her breath as she slung an arm around her big sister, the two kicking on. After turning the corner, Sweetie saw light from one of the corridors and pointed it out to her sister.\n\nRarity noticed and continued swimming towards it, hoping for a reprieve of any description, a means of escape to get a breath at long last. As they turned the corner and smiled at the bright light hoping for an exit, they felt an odd sensation, a water current leading into the blinding light. As they approached the light, the current suddenly picked up and they were being sucked into the light, Rarity scrambling for a hold as she grabbed onto the corner of the wall, Sweetie slipping from her grasp.\n\nThe filly tried desperately to hold on as her mind began yelling at her, \"Rarity, help me! I don't want to drown again!\"\n\nThe older unicorn tried her magic again and felt the strange curse block it as she tried her hardest to pull Sweetie to safety, but she ultimately slipped from her hands and disappeared into the light.\n\n\"NOOGHBLBL!!\" Rarity bubbled as she watched in horror as her sister vanished into the light. With a determined scowl, she released her grip from the wall and let the current carry her away to reach her sister, the light blinding her vision as she kicked forwards within the current, \"Hold on Sweetie, Rarity's coming!\"\n\nSoon, they felt the current subside as they tumbled into a medium sized room, no bigger than Rarity's bedroom at home. The mare opened her eyes as Sweetie swam to her, struggling to hold her breath again and pointing to the opposite end of the room. Rarity's eyes glistened as she gazed upon a vast mountain of glittering treasures, gold, gems, chests, swords and other treasures littering the room. Amon-Da's treasure DOES exist, it would seem. It didn't seem much but it sure looked very expensive.\n\n\"No, we must get out at once, we need to escape.\" Shaking her head, she pulled at her sister as they swam to the exit of the room or... the door that wasn't there before. The door that blocked their only means of escape. Rarity's eyes widened with shock; they were trapped. Trapped cold, alone and drowning in a room of glistening treasures and wonders, \"No, no, no, NO! This cannot be happening!\"\n\nSweetie Belle almost screamed again in fear but caught her breath before she could exhale, Rarity letting go of her sister and swimming to the bottom of the door, trying to grip its underside and lift it up, gritting her teeth as she grunted into the water, \"Hnnnblbl!...\" The unicorn pulled and pulled as Sweetie Belle joined her, but their efforts were futile as the door didn't budge. \n\nRarity felt her own lungs prang inside her as she coughed out another gulp of air, struggling to hold it in as she clutched her neck and kicked her legs. Sweetie felt her lungs began to give in as she too started to convulse, gripping at her mouth as air frothed from between her fingers, \"Hhrk! Mmglpbl!!\"\n\nThe older unicorn had reached her breaking point and wanted to breathe so badly, her body heaving as she convulsed, her breasts bouncing with each twitch. She puffed her cheeks as hard as she could and began banging her fists on the door, futilely trying to escape the death trap they got themselves in, \"Let me out, I have to breathe! Oh sweet Celestia, let us go please!!\"\n\nSoon, Sweetie Belle released the last of her shared air from her weary lungs and began spasming wildly, clutching her throat, \"GHKLAAABL! NNGBLAAAHGBLBL!!\"\n\nRarity swam to her sister and tried again to give her air, locking lips with her but Sweetie's body refused the air as she coughed it back out. She hugged her sister close, watching in horror as her sister drowned, \"NO, DON'T YOU DARE DROWN ON ME, I NEED YOU SWEETIE BELLE!!\" Her mind screamed at her sister.\n\nThe filly then felt herself swallowing water, giving her a quick burst of energy as she tried not to gulp down, flailing her arms and legs, but her lungs failed to relent as she painfully drunk the temple's waters, \"Glup... Hrrk... Nglp...\"\n\nThen, after spending what seemed like an eternity underwater, Sweetie Belle fell limp in her sister's arms as her eyes rolled up, Rarity shaking her drowned sister, \"SWEETIE BELLE, NO!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS, PLEASE!!\" \n\nRarity silently sobbed for her sister, the water stealing her tears as she hugged her limp body close. She no longer cared if she ever breathed again, her sister was gone and there was nothing she could do. With a nod, she decided to join her sister, \"Hold on, Sweetie... I'm coming.\"\n\nThe unicorn took a deep gulp of water, her body inadvertently convulsing as the water entered her lungs, watching the last trickles of air escape her mouth, her hands trying to grab the air back but failing. She began swallowing the water that claimed her sister, choking on the liquid, \"Hrk! Nggbl! Glup!\"\n\nShe planted a soft kiss on her sister's lips and felt her consciousness ebb from her tired body. She would never breathe again, but she felt content as she breathed in the water, the thumping noise in her head singing her to sleep as she leant back, landing on the treasure she initially tried to find with her sister in her arms. \n\nThey rested on the pile of gold, drowned and completely naked as their eyes slowly closed in their embrace, their bodies symbolising a reminder for the other explorers that dared explore the temple, showing another addition to Amon-Da's treasure hoard. ","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Deep within the outskirts of the Saddle Arabian deserts, amidst the blistering heat and large stretches of sand dunes, sat a large temple half buried in the desert sands. This temple was said to be the home of once great Pharaoh Amon-Da, ruler of the land over two thousand years ago, a temple which no pony had ever trekked into due to rumoured curses or traps, that whoever enters the temple will never come out alive. Said temples were said to hold many great treasures hidden within its depths, but no pony has ever seen them to confirm that they're real.
However, Rarity had been researching about new fashion designs after getting a contract from a Saddle Arabian tailor, trying to create new fashions for the country's noble ponies and royalty. After hearing about this place through old books and word of mouth, she decided that her inspiration was going to be found within the temple walls, despite the warnings of the temple's dangers beforehand.
Taking Sweetie Belle along with her to help her expedition, they travelled tirelessly to the temple, setting up camp before heading inside. Rarity decided on going into Amon-Da's without clothing as the heat from their clothes would only slow them further. Sweetie Belle pondered on why but followed along anyway, agreeing that the heat was still stifling with her clothes on anyway.
The two approached the temple entrance and stood before it, gazing at the temple as Rarity inspected the walls with her hands, "Now there should be a means of entry on here somewhere..."
Sweetie Belle stood back and yawned, stretching her nude form as she did so. The older mare ran her hands along the bricks in the wall, stopping as her hand sunk into a loose tile, "A-ha! Here it is."
The large stone door rumbled and opened upwards, the two watching in awe as it rose to the top with a loud 'BOOM'. Sweetie smiled and remarked, "Wow, forboding. I like it."
Rarity headed into the temple entrance, noticing some stairs leading downwards into pitch darkness. She simply cast her magic and her horn glowed a bright, brilliant purple, providing them with plenty of light to see. The two sisters walked down the stairs into the depths of the temple and gazed at the wall patterns and hieroglyphs, marvelled by how well the temple had been maintained. As they reached the bottom of the stairs, they found the stone floor was submerged under a few inches of water, reaching up to their ankles. Not paying much heed, they walked down the old, darkened halls.
Turning a corner, the rest of the temple didn't seem as well kept, there were fallen pillars, rocks and debris everywhere and some chunks missing from the ceilings and walls. They stuck close together as they wandered on through, Rarity's light guiding them as they waded through the shallow water.
"This temple has seen better days, hasn't it Sweetie?" Rarity asked, looking around at the scattered and messy debris.
The younger sister nodded, "Yeah, it's quite old." She looked up at her sister and decided to ask her a burning question, "Okay, so why are we in here without any clothes or tools again?"
"It's very simple, this trek is just to find the treasure, which is said to be hidden deep within these walls, all we do is find it, teleport back outside and then start gathering once we set up that teleportation point." She explained, her sister nodding at her words.
"I still don't see why we have to do this naked, though." Sweetie muttered, folding her arms to cover her chest.
"Well, due to heat and whatever grime and muck we could run into, I'd much rather have my body dirty than any of our nice clothes." She replied, looking at her nude form, running her hands over her breasts.
Sweetie laughed and shook her head, "Typical Rarity..."
The older sister shot her a cold look as they continued down the corridors of the decrepit temple. They made a few turns at some intersections, running into a few dead ends here and there, and they travelled for what seemed like an age as they traversed deeper and deeper into the winding, maze-like corridors.
Sweetie followed behind her sister, clambering over a fallen pillar as she remarked, "You know for a Pharaoh, you think this pony would put his treasure somewhere where he could find it easily."
"Well, you don't normally put rare and valuable belongings where it's easy to find them, especially in a place like this." Rarity replied back, turning her head to her.
"Just hope we don't get lost..." Sweetie replied with concern, her heart fluttering with slight fear.
"We'll be fine, we just have to find the supposed treasure room and then teleport out, doesn't matter if we get lost." Rarity reassured to her older sister with a comforting smile.
As they walked on, Sweetie kept her eyes on the walls, not watching where her footing was as she felt her foot sink into a loose tile as she tripped into her front. Rarity noticed and ran to her, picking the foal back up, "Sweetie, are you okay?"
The young unicorn shook her head to clear her senses, "I'm fine, just tripped over a loose tile." She got back to her feet and brushed off her chest.
"Well, let's hope that didn't change anything. Come along now." The older mare replied, turning and walking on. As Sweetie sighed, she felt the water that was once at her ankles, crawl up to her shins. "H-hey sis?" She quavered as her mind imagined the worst.
"Hmm?" Rarity didn't look back at her sister as she walked on, leaving Sweetie behind."
"Sis!" Sweetie yelled back.
The older unicorn stopped in her tracks, "What is it, Sweetie?" She replied in a frustrated tone.
"Is it me or is the w-water getting higher?" The foal asked as her voice cracked slightly.
Rarity raised an eyebrow and felt the water almost reach up to her shins as well, "Oh no. Oh no no no no..." She repeated as her hands reached her mouth, shaking her head as her worst fears came to pass.
"Rarity, the temple's flooding and we're stuck here!" Sweetie squealed with fear, wading towards her sister.
The older unicorn felt the water reach up to her knees as she held her sister's hands, "Don't panic, I'll try and teleport us out!"
Her horn flashed as she braced herself, but nothing came of it but a small spark. She tried again as her sister watched on in growing panic, "What's happening, why isn't it working?!"
"I-I don't know!" Rarity replied, trying her magic again but failing, "It's as if the temple's put a stop to my more powerful magic."
"Y-you mean we can't get out?!" Sweetie screamed in fear, gripping her sister's arms.
Rarity felt the same fear as the waters crawled up their bodies, reaching up to Sweetie's waist as they tried to gather their bearings. The older unicorn swallowed her fear and pointed back, "Okay, let's just find the exit and get out!"
The two waded through the rising water back the way they came, taking a few turns at the corners and intersections, Rarity believing they were the way they once passed through, but as the water crawled up further these corridors lead to more dead ends and loops to where they once were. They continued down the corridors as the water eventually reached Sweetie's chest, making her float as she swam behind her older sister, her stylised tail melting in the water as it flowed freely.
The young foal was practically scared out of her wits, tears streaming down her eyes, "Sis, I'm so sorry I tripped that panel, if I knew where I was going this wouldn't have happened!" She apologised profusely, her older sister gathering her up close as they continued to swim through the corridors, the water causing Rarity's nipples to stand on end.
Rarity stroked her sister's mane and replied, "Don't worry Sweetie, it wasn't your fault..."
Sweetie sobbed uncontrollably into her side, "Oh, we're gonna die and it's all my fault! Somebody help us, please!!" Soon, the water had lifted Rarity off her feet as they kept on swimming, the older sister adamant to finding their way out through the mass of hallways and misleading intersections.
In very little time, the water neared the ceiling as the older mare stopped and put a hand to the cold stone her neck breaching the cold surface, "Oh dear, oh no this is really bad."
"We're gonna die, WE'RE GONNA DIE!!" Sweetie hollered as she looked at the rising surface.
Rarity breathed deep and composed herself, "Sweetie, I want you to take a deep breath and hold it for as long as you can!"
"What?! But sis, I can't hold my breath for long--"
"JUST DO IT, SWEETIE!!" Rarity yelled back against the rising water.
The younger mare took a moment to compose her hyperventilating and nodded with some confidence, "Okay, I'll try!"
The two cocked their heads to the ceiling as the water crawled up their cheeks, taking slow, deep breaths to ready themselves. Then, they simultaneously took a large, deep breath and submerged under the water, blurring their vision as they opened their eyes, Rarity's curly mane melting a flowing in the cold water. Her horn flashed again as their vision soon cleared as they could see perfectly in the water, "Good, that still works." She thought as the two joined hands and swum side by side.
Sweetie's heart was thumping a thousand miles a minute inside her as she kicked alongside her older sister, giving her a a reassuring smile through her pursed lips, which she nervously returned. A few bubbles seeped through the foal's nose as small, purple streaks thanks to Rarity's light. They kicked through the corridors, swimming over the scattered debris as the sounds of escaping air was the only noise to comfort them.
The two continued to swim with each passing moment, their lungs still holding out as they kept on kicking, keeping their panicking to a minimum as to not lose any air. Sweetie looked around the flooded corridors, fascinated by the light of her sister's magic rippling on the walls and ceiling, distracting her from her breath holding. A quick sting and gurgle of her lungs brought her back to reality, kicking harder to stay by Rarity's side as she flashed another warm smile, another string of bubbles trickling from her nose. As she breast stroked through the submerged hallways, Rarity's large breasts flowed freely as the water tickled her erect nipples, trying to hold her breath despite the slight stimulation from her predicament.
Soon, those moments passed by and as seconds turned into minutes, their struggles were finally beginning to seep through. Sweetie Belle kept up with her sister still, but her cheeks began puffing as her lungs twitched inside her, her chest convulsing as she let out a small surge of air to relieve the building pressure, but it was starting to wear on her as her need to breathe grew stronger and stronger. The filly clutched her mouth with her free hand as she tried to hold her air in through any means, but it wasn't enough as her breath holding capabilities were nearing its peak.
"Mmbglbl... MMFFGBLBL!!" She gurgled a small cloud of air which continually ripped from her pursed lips and nose, clenching her eyes shut as her grip on her sister's hand loosened, Rarity turning to her and swimming back. Sweetie kicked on as she kept on coughing, calming herself to hold her lessened breath, but she would soon need to exhale again.
Rarity took the foal's hand again and continued swimming, wrapping an arm around her and carried her along as she swam for the both of them, "Come on, Sweetie. Hold it together..." Her mind said to the filly, Sweetie clenching her lips as her cheeks puffed up and receded as she swallowed her breath again.
The two found themselves at another dead end, pushing back as Rarity began to pump her free arm and legs, picking up the pace as she felt her own lungs sting inside her. "Hmmblbl..." She bubbled, swallowing her breath back. Time seemed to slow to a crawl as they swam through the corridor, still keeping a quick pace but each path seemed to lead nowhere as she began to worry even more, moreso for her sister who started to convulse in her grasp, clutching her mouth with her right hand, her left outstretched to paddle.
Rarity looked down at the filly and grew increasingly worried at her sister's current situation, fearing that her current breath won't last her. As she thought that, her own lungs began to sting as she bubbled a small cloud of air bubbles to ease the pain in her chest. She thought the best thing to do at that moment was to give her younger sister some of her own air to help her out, but Rarity would have to sacrifice a lot of air and time which neither of them really had at that moment.
Her own air started streaming in small silvery streaks from her pursed lips, looking with dread as her sister tried to hold on to what little air she had left, "Oh Sweetie Belle, just hold on a little while longer..." Her mind thought, watching the filly puff her cheeks as she held the last of her air.
Sweetie Belle was exhausted, her lungs had exceeded bursting point as she had long surpassed any previous breath holding records she had before, her chest thumping and convulsing rapidly as her cheeks puffed, her eyes widening as she clutched her mouth shut again, hoping to keep the air in her lungs just a bit longer. But her efforts proved futile as holding onto a few large convulsions, the next one hit her with the force of a runaway carriage as she finally relented after holding for well over two minutes.
"BGLAAAGBLBL!!" Bubbles exploded from the young foal's mouth. Sweetie Belle was drowning. The convulsion forced her to exhale her remaining air as she fought desperately to not inhale, but her wild flailing of her body proved that to be difficult. Rarity watched in horror as she watched her own sister drown in her arms, Sweetie's head cocking back as more bubbles frothed from her tired lungs, her legs frantically kicking as she convulsed.
"Hrrk... Aagk... Mglup!" Sweetie gurgled in her drowning throes, her body still exhaling stale air as her head tilted back, hands near her throat in half clenched claws, trying as hard as she could to keep water from her lungs. Rarity held the mare close, unable to keep her eyes off her drowning sister as she began praying for her safety.
"Stay with me, Sweetie... We're going to get through this, I promise." Her mind whispered to her, the unicorn feeling tears of despair wash away in the waters of the temple. Rarity reached another dead end took the time to try and calm her sister's breathing.
She stopped their swimming and floated in front of her younger sister, gripping her hands as she tried to get her attention. Sweetie looked at the mare wearily holding onto her last gulps of air as Rarity signalled with her hand and pointed at her throat, then to her mouth as she tried to think what she was saying. Rarity tried another method, she let loose a gentle string of air and pointed at it then to her sister's mouth. Then, the filly got the idea, she wanted to share air.
She nodded as Rarity leant in and opened her mouth, holding onto her head and locking lips with her, breathing into her sister's lungs. It wasn't a lot, but the young filly did feel her strength return as she felt Rarity's warm air enter her mouth. The older unicorn pulled back and looked inquisitively at the filly, who nodded in reply as she scooped up the mare again and continued swimming on.
Rarity kicked as hard as her remaining energy would let her, her own chest convulsing due to the air she had to give her sister and the time spent underwater. She had lost track of how long they were under, but it felt like forever to the unicorns. Sweetie felt her lungs quake and quiver again, but kept a firm hold on her breath as she slung an arm around her big sister, the two kicking on. After turning the corner, Sweetie saw light from one of the corridors and pointed it out to her sister.
Rarity noticed and continued swimming towards it, hoping for a reprieve of any description, a means of escape to get a breath at long last. As they turned the corner and smiled at the bright light hoping for an exit, they felt an odd sensation, a water current leading into the blinding light. As they approached the light, the current suddenly picked up and they were being sucked into the light, Rarity scrambling for a hold as she grabbed onto the corner of the wall, Sweetie slipping from her grasp.
The filly tried desperately to hold on as her mind began yelling at her, "Rarity, help me! I don't want to drown again!"
The older unicorn tried her magic again and felt the strange curse block it as she tried her hardest to pull Sweetie to safety, but she ultimately slipped from her hands and disappeared into the light.
"NOOGHBLBL!!" Rarity bubbled as she watched in horror as her sister vanished into the light. With a determined scowl, she released her grip from the wall and let the current carry her away to reach her sister, the light blinding her vision as she kicked forwards within the current, "Hold on Sweetie, Rarity's coming!"
Soon, they felt the current subside as they tumbled into a medium sized room, no bigger than Rarity's bedroom at home. The mare opened her eyes as Sweetie swam to her, struggling to hold her breath again and pointing to the opposite end of the room. Rarity's eyes glistened as she gazed upon a vast mountain of glittering treasures, gold, gems, chests, swords and other treasures littering the room. Amon-Da's treasure DOES exist, it would seem. It didn't seem much but it sure looked very expensive.
"No, we must get out at once, we need to escape." Shaking her head, she pulled at her sister as they swam to the exit of the room or... the door that wasn't there before. The door that blocked their only means of escape. Rarity's eyes widened with shock; they were trapped. Trapped cold, alone and drowning in a room of glistening treasures and wonders, "No, no, no, NO! This cannot be happening!"
Sweetie Belle almost screamed again in fear but caught her breath before she could exhale, Rarity letting go of her sister and swimming to the bottom of the door, trying to grip its underside and lift it up, gritting her teeth as she grunted into the water, "Hnnnblbl!..." The unicorn pulled and pulled as Sweetie Belle joined her, but their efforts were futile as the door didn't budge.
Rarity felt her own lungs prang inside her as she coughed out another gulp of air, struggling to hold it in as she clutched her neck and kicked her legs. Sweetie felt her lungs began to give in as she too started to convulse, gripping at her mouth as air frothed from between her fingers, "Hhrk! Mmglpbl!!"
The older unicorn had reached her breaking point and wanted to breathe so badly, her body heaving as she convulsed, her breasts bouncing with each twitch. She puffed her cheeks as hard as she could and began banging her fists on the door, futilely trying to escape the death trap they got themselves in, "Let me out, I have to breathe! Oh sweet Celestia, let us go please!!"
Soon, Sweetie Belle released the last of her shared air from her weary lungs and began spasming wildly, clutching her throat, "GHKLAAABL! NNGBLAAAHGBLBL!!"
Rarity swam to her sister and tried again to give her air, locking lips with her but Sweetie's body refused the air as she coughed it back out. She hugged her sister close, watching in horror as her sister drowned, "NO, DON'T YOU DARE DROWN ON ME, I NEED YOU SWEETIE BELLE!!" Her mind screamed at her sister.
The filly then felt herself swallowing water, giving her a quick burst of energy as she tried not to gulp down, flailing her arms and legs, but her lungs failed to relent as she painfully drunk the temple's waters, "Glup... Hrrk... Nglp..."
Then, after spending what seemed like an eternity underwater, Sweetie Belle fell limp in her sister's arms as her eyes rolled up, Rarity shaking her drowned sister, "SWEETIE BELLE, NO!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS, PLEASE!!"
Rarity silently sobbed for her sister, the water stealing her tears as she hugged her limp body close. She no longer cared if she ever breathed again, her sister was gone and there was nothing she could do. With a nod, she decided to join her sister, "Hold on, Sweetie... I'm coming."
The unicorn took a deep gulp of water, her body inadvertently convulsing as the water entered her lungs, watching the last trickles of air escape her mouth, her hands trying to grab the air back but failing. She began swallowing the water that claimed her sister, choking on the liquid, "Hrk! Nggbl! Glup!"
She planted a soft kiss on her sister's lips and felt her consciousness ebb from her tired body. She would never breathe again, but she felt content as she breathed in the water, the thumping noise in her head singing her to sleep as she leant back, landing on the treasure she initially tried to find with her sister in her arms.
They rested on the pile of gold, drowned and completely naked as their eyes slowly closed in their embrace, their bodies symbolising a reminder for the other explorers that dared explore the temple, showing another addition to Amon-Da's treasure hoard. ","pools_count":2,"title":"[Story] Rarity and Sweetie in the Flooded Temple","deleted":"f","public":"t","mimetype":"text/plain","pagecount":"1","rating_id":"2","rating_name":"Adult","ratings":[{"content_tag_id":"4","name":"Sexual Themes","description":"Erotic imagery, sexual activity or arousal","rating_id":"2"},{"content_tag_id":"5","name":"Strong Violence","description":"Strong violence, blood, serious injury or death","rating_id":"2"}],"submission_type_id":"12","type_name":"Writing - Document","guest_block":"t","friends_only":"f","comments_count":"2","views":"680","sales_description":null,"forsale":"f","digitalsales":"f","printsales":"f","digital_price":""}