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Description
This story follows a cute innocent male cub who’s parent decided to join him to a medical study allowing these new advanced chastity devices to be used on cubs long term and for data collection. The parents paid during the study give a portion their son to spend on whatever he likes. We follow him though puberty, unable to experience a first orgasm and living vicariously though his friend.
Script
Characters (all fox):
-Danny 11-14yr: An innocent mocha colored cub fox. Certified good boy.
-Tommy: Danny’s best friend
-Steven: Danny’s dad
-Dr. Sophia – Danny’s female doctor.
All characters thin/healthy figures.
Orange : Written Story above the panels.
Yellow: Panels and Speech Bubbles
Page 1
Top Left Header: In the not so distant future…
TOP OF PAGE 1
It all started with an E-Mail, my dad forwarded it to me when I was 11. Asking if I wanted to be apart of a medical study. It would pay for college and I’d get some monthly spending money. All I would have to do is wear something called a StaySoft on my penis for 3 years.
\tPanel 1: A slightly tilted shot of the back of a StaySoft product box with a bullet point list of features of the StaySoft chastity device with a diagram of the device.
Writer Note: (educates the comic readers what StaySoft is and how it works to make it realistic to the reader)
Black Background with speech bubbles:
Dad: “Danny, everything okay?”
Danny: “Yeah dad.”
\tPanel 2/3: At home - Bathroom door opens, Danny exits after putting on the device privately.
\tOur first view of a young 11 year old Danny dressed with only a soccer team polo shirt and shorts on his summer off before starting 6th grade. His tail slightly hugging his body in embarrassment as he sees his dad waiting for him.
Writer Note: Establishing shot demonstrates Danny’s modesty. Danny’s home life is private, without any talk about sex, today was a big change in his life.
Dad: “Does it fit okay?”
Danny: “Yup. Can I buy a games now?”
Dad: “Sure, if that’s what you want.”
ABOVE PANEL 4/5:
It felt annoying, but I got to buy whatever I wanted.
\tPanel Split 4/5: We see Danny and his friend holding wireless game controllers, having fun. some candy nearby. In the other panel we see only Danny cross legged on a recliner chair at night, a reading lamp overhead. Quietly reading a new novel he just bought.
Writer Note: Establishing the device didn’t bother 11yr Danny yet. A modest quiet person who likes video games and reading.