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Crystal, her mom, wants Aurora to try and meet boys and to have a good time rather than staying in cooped up like she is at home. Aurora on the other doesn't want to meet boys.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is the story following a 14 year old bunny girl Aurora Sheppard on her family vacation on an extravagant cruise through the Caribbean. Crystal, her mom, wants Aurora to try and meet boys and to have a good time rather than staying in cooped up like she is at home. Aurora on the other doesn't want to meet boys.", "writing": "[t][i][b]Seven Days in Paradise[/b][/i][/t]\n[t][i][b]Written By:[/b][/i][/t]\n[t][i][b]Packers848848[/b][/i][/t]\n\n\"Wake up sweetie!\" A soft, muffled voice called out from behind the bedroom door of the sleeping bunny girl. \"Aurora, were gonna be late if you don't get your sleepy butt out of bed!\" Crystal Sheppard, a rabbit in her late 30's, average in height, above average in bust, she has deep, almost piercing, green eyes. Her blonde hair in a pony tail, and a simple white floral dress, knocks on her daughters door.\n\nAurora, a teenaged bunny girl, slowly stirs in her bed. Her shoulder length brown hair covers her face, a severe case of bed head. The sun barely over the horizon, still managing to sneak a ray of light into her room from her window. She rolls out of her bed and plops on the floor. \n\n\"Ugh, mom. Can't I get like, another half hour of sleep?\" She pleads, her face still hidden behind her hair.\n\"I'm sorry baby, but you know how long you take in the morning.\" A slight giggle escapes her lips, \"Now come on and get ready, we have to leave by seven, that gives you plenty of time to get up and get ready.\"\n\nAurora inchworms her way to her dresser, still refusing to stand up to start the day. \"I hate mornings.\" her voice, almost defeated as she reluctantly stands up to start pulling her clothes out of her dresser. Fortunately for her mother, she won't have to waste time undressing to get into the shower, as Aurora likes to sleep free of clothes. She grabs her clothes out of the dresser and shambles almost like a zombie to her door and she opens it.\n\n\"Oh lord Aurora. Can you at least wear a robe?\" Crystal turns away from her nude daughter.\n\n\"Hey, you're the one that wanted me up this early, deal with it.\" Aurora laughs to herself as she continues to shamble her way to the bathroom down the hall. Once inside, she turns on the shower and she waits for the water to heat up. After the water heats up enough, she steps in and washed herself, waking up in the process. When she's finally all clean and done standing in the delightfully warm water cascading down upon her body, she turns off the shower and prepares for the blast of cold air outside the curtain.\n\nAurora shivers slightly as she grabs a towel and dries her soaked fur. She wraps her hair in a towel after toweling off, steps up to the bathroom's sink and wipes away the fog from the mirror. Her green eyes are the first visible thing reflected off the mirror that she can see. Followed by her white fur, and then her long bunny ears. After brushing her teeth and combing her hair, she begins her morning makeup routine, blush, eye liner, plucking her eyebrows/eye lashes, and finishes it off with strawberry flavored lip gloss.\n\nAfter completing her beauty routine, she steps back from the mirror, with a hand on her hip she poses for herself. Aurora sighs softly \"Oh, when will I find someone?\" She holds her B cup breasts, \"I'm just so much smaller than the rest of the girls in class, no one will ever want me\" A little more of a sigh escapes her and she starts getting dressed.\n\nA light knock comes from the bathroom door. \"Aurora honey, you have all your stuff packed right?\"\n\nAurora gasps suddenly, almost tripping over herself as she was pulling up her panties, she regains her balance and pulls her panties up. \"U-uh... Yeah mom! I'm all packed up!\" A light blush on her face.\n\"Great! I'll go grab your bags then and put them in the car!\"\n\n\"NO!.... No mom, I'll get them, I still have a couple things to toss in them, a few... personal things...\"\n\n\"Aurora, you had weeks to get ready for this.\" A little irritation in her voice.\n\n\"I know mom, I've just been busy and it slipped my mind. I promise I'll pack quickly\"\n\n\"I know sweetie, I just wish you did it earlier than last minute.\" Sighs, \"I'll be in the kitchen to whip up some breakfast before we head out.\"\n\n\"Ok mom! Love you!\"\n\n\"I love you too baby. Now finish up in there and go get packed.\"\n\nAurora tosses on a loose blue tank top, and a pink ruffled skirt, gives herself one more look over in the morror. \"I hope I can find someone on this trip...\" Another sigh before she heads out back for her room\n\n\"It's amazing! She does own clothes!\" Crystal laughs from the bottom of the stairs on her way to the kitchen.\n\"When I get older I'm gonna live in a nudist colony! Then what mom!\" She giggles.\n\n\"Then, me and your father might have to join you!\"\n\n\"Ew mom! Gross! EW!\" She shudders from the thought of her parents nude and quickly heads into her room. Now with the sun over the horizon, there's more light in the room, illuminating it enough for Aurora to make her way through the piles of dirty clothes and her blanket, which she tosses back on her bed. She pulls out her suitcase from her closet and tosses that on the bed as well. \"Let's see. What should I take...\" After grabbing a few \"cute\" outfits, she does add in a couple personal items. Her laptop goes on top of the messy pile of clothes she hastily tossed into the suitcase, and underneath the clothes she slides in her personal massager. \"It's the only relationship I've had...\" She closes the suitcase, grabs her phone, \"No new messages. Of course.\" She tosses her phone in her purse, grabs her purse, tosses it around her shoulder, and picks up her suitcase. \"Ok mom I'm all packed up!\" She shouts down the hall as she leaves her room.\n\n\"Great! Leave your case by the door, I'll put it in the car while you eat up!\"\n\n\"Ok mom!\" She walks down the stairs with the suitcase, gently placing it by the front door. \"Just be careful with my bag mom, I put my laptop in it.\"\n\n\"Really? Your laptop? Honey, the point of this trip is to meet people, not be a shut in and stay on your computer the whole time. You know, like you do already.\"\n\n\"Mom!\" She blushes again. \"I thought the point was to kick back and relax.\"\n\n\"It is, for me and your father, but for you, you get to have fun mingling with kids your age\" She smiles brightly.\n\n\"No kids my age like me, that's why I stay in on my computer all day.\"\n\n\"Nonsense! You're in a bunch of different sports, boys love that!\"\n\n\"Yeah, boys.\" Rolling her eyes.\n\n\"Anyway, I made eggs and bacon, with a nice cold glass of carrot juice on the side.\"\n\n\"Thanks mom.\" Smiles and kisses her mothers cheek.\n\n\"No problem sweetie.\" Crystal smiles and kisses her cheek in return. \"Hmm.. Strawberries?\"\n\n\"New lip gloss. I thought it smelled good.\"\n\n\"It does. I like it.\" Giggles and lifts up Auroras bag. Aurora heads to the kitchen to eat her breakfast, and Crystal places her bag in the back of the jeep. \"This trip will be good for her, she'll realise that when she finds the right boy.\" She closes the door heading back in the house. \"Oof it's cold out!\"\n\n\"News says it's only 20 out!\"\n\n\"Feels colder\" Crystal shivers as she walks into the kitchen, \"I'm glad we're heading into nice warm weather, it'll be a nice change of pace than this dreary weather.\"\n\n\"Yeah, I'm sick of the cold and the snow. I just want spring to come back.\"\n\n\"It'll get here. It's just taking its time.\" Giggles, sitting across from Aurora. \"So, I was thinking, once we get on this trip, it'd be best, if you went on your own and we'll only meet up for dinner and at night for bed time.\"\n\n\"Aw, you don't want to hang out with me?\" Aurora giggles.\n\n\"Well I figured it would give you more of a chance to meet those cute boys!\" Crystal laughs\n\n\"Ugh mom... Seriously, enough with that.\"\n\n\"What? You don't want a cute little boyfriend?\"\n\n\"No mom, I don't want a boyfriend.\"\n\n\"You say that, but that's just because you haven't found the right boy yet.\"\n\n\"Yeah, keep thinking that.\"\n\n\"Well, all I'm saying is that socializing will do you good.\"\n\n\"Alright, I'll socialize.\" Just wanting to drop the topic all together.\n\nMarc, a tall rabbit in his late 30's, white fur, blue eyes, light brown hair, but his hair is starting to go grey. He doesn't hide it, but it is quite noticeable. \"Whoa, she's gonna socialize? Who is this girl?\" Marc chuckles.\n\n\"Hey dad.\" Aurora smiles and waves over to her father.\n\n\"All set to go?\"\n\n\"Yes hon, just a quick breakfast before heading out, would you like anything?\"\n\n\"No thanks, I'll be fine.\"\n\n\"Alright then, let's head out then.\" Crystal smiles and both her and Aurora stand from the table, and the family heads out to the car. Marc starts the car, and backs out of their driveway.\n\n\"Maybe I can find somebody.\" Aurora thinks to herself as they drive out away from their house and out of their development.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Seven Days in Paradise
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Packers848848

"Wake up sweetie!" A soft, muffled voice called out from behind the bedroom door of the sleeping bunny girl. "Aurora, were gonna be late if you don't get your sleepy butt out of bed!" Crystal Sheppard, a rabbit in her late 30's, average in height, above average in bust, she has deep, almost piercing, green eyes. Her blonde hair in a pony tail, and a simple white floral dress, knocks on her daughters door.

Aurora, a teenaged bunny girl, slowly stirs in her bed. Her shoulder length brown hair covers her face, a severe case of bed head. The sun barely over the horizon, still managing to sneak a ray of light into her room from her window. She rolls out of her bed and plops on the floor.

"Ugh, mom. Can't I get like, another half hour of sleep?" She pleads, her face still hidden behind her hair.
"I'm sorry baby, but you know how long you take in the morning." A slight giggle escapes her lips, "Now come on and get ready, we have to leave by seven, that gives you plenty of time to get up and get ready."

Aurora inchworms her way to her dresser, still refusing to stand up to start the day. "I hate mornings." her voice, almost defeated as she reluctantly stands up to start pulling her clothes out of her dresser. Fortunately for her mother, she won't have to waste time undressing to get into the shower, as Aurora likes to sleep free of clothes. She grabs her clothes out of the dresser and shambles almost like a zombie to her door and she opens it.

"Oh lord Aurora. Can you at least wear a robe?" Crystal turns away from her nude daughter.

"Hey, you're the one that wanted me up this early, deal with it." Aurora laughs to herself as she continues to shamble her way to the bathroom down the hall. Once inside, she turns on the shower and she waits for the water to heat up. After the water heats up enough, she steps in and washed herself, waking up in the process. When she's finally all clean and done standing in the delightfully warm water cascading down upon her body, she turns off the shower and prepares for the blast of cold air outside the curtain.

Aurora shivers slightly as she grabs a towel and dries her soaked fur. She wraps her hair in a towel after toweling off, steps up to the bathroom's sink and wipes away the fog from the mirror. Her green eyes are the first visible thing reflected off the mirror that she can see. Followed by her white fur, and then her long bunny ears. After brushing her teeth and combing her hair, she begins her morning makeup routine, blush, eye liner, plucking her eyebrows/eye lashes, and finishes it off with strawberry flavored lip gloss.

After completing her beauty routine, she steps back from the mirror, with a hand on her hip she poses for herself. Aurora sighs softly "Oh, when will I find someone?" She holds her B cup breasts, "I'm just so much smaller than the rest of the girls in class, no one will ever want me" A little more of a sigh escapes her and she starts getting dressed.

A light knock comes from the bathroom door. "Aurora honey, you have all your stuff packed right?"

Aurora gasps suddenly, almost tripping over herself as she was pulling up her panties, she regains her balance and pulls her panties up. "U-uh... Yeah mom! I'm all packed up!" A light blush on her face.
"Great! I'll go grab your bags then and put them in the car!"

"NO!.... No mom, I'll get them, I still have a couple things to toss in them, a few... personal things..."

"Aurora, you had weeks to get ready for this." A little irritation in her voice.

"I know mom, I've just been busy and it slipped my mind. I promise I'll pack quickly"

"I know sweetie, I just wish you did it earlier than last minute." Sighs, "I'll be in the kitchen to whip up some breakfast before we head out."

"Ok mom! Love you!"

"I love you too baby. Now finish up in there and go get packed."

Aurora tosses on a loose blue tank top, and a pink ruffled skirt, gives herself one more look over in the morror. "I hope I can find someone on this trip..." Another sigh before she heads out back for her room

"It's amazing! She does own clothes!" Crystal laughs from the bottom of the stairs on her way to the kitchen.
"When I get older I'm gonna live in a nudist colony! Then what mom!" She giggles.

"Then, me and your father might have to join you!"

"Ew mom! Gross! EW!" She shudders from the thought of her parents nude and quickly heads into her room. Now with the sun over the horizon, there's more light in the room, illuminating it enough for Aurora to make her way through the piles of dirty clothes and her blanket, which she tosses back on her bed. She pulls out her suitcase from her closet and tosses that on the bed as well. "Let's see. What should I take..." After grabbing a few "cute" outfits, she does add in a couple personal items. Her laptop goes on top of the messy pile of clothes she hastily tossed into the suitcase, and underneath the clothes she slides in her personal massager. "It's the only relationship I've had..." She closes the suitcase, grabs her phone, "No new messages. Of course." She tosses her phone in her purse, grabs her purse, tosses it around her shoulder, and picks up her suitcase. "Ok mom I'm all packed up!" She shouts down the hall as she leaves her room.

"Great! Leave your case by the door, I'll put it in the car while you eat up!"

"Ok mom!" She walks down the stairs with the suitcase, gently placing it by the front door. "Just be careful with my bag mom, I put my laptop in it."

"Really? Your laptop? Honey, the point of this trip is to meet people, not be a shut in and stay on your computer the whole time. You know, like you do already."

"Mom!" She blushes again. "I thought the point was to kick back and relax."

"It is, for me and your father, but for you, you get to have fun mingling with kids your age" She smiles brightly.

"No kids my age like me, that's why I stay in on my computer all day."

"Nonsense! You're in a bunch of different sports, boys love that!"

"Yeah, boys." Rolling her eyes.

"Anyway, I made eggs and bacon, with a nice cold glass of carrot juice on the side."

"Thanks mom." Smiles and kisses her mothers cheek.

"No problem sweetie." Crystal smiles and kisses her cheek in return. "Hmm.. Strawberries?"

"New lip gloss. I thought it smelled good."

"It does. I like it." Giggles and lifts up Auroras bag. Aurora heads to the kitchen to eat her breakfast, and Crystal places her bag in the back of the jeep. "This trip will be good for her, she'll realise that when she finds the right boy." She closes the door heading back in the house. "Oof it's cold out!"

"News says it's only 20 out!"

"Feels colder" Crystal shivers as she walks into the kitchen, "I'm glad we're heading into nice warm weather, it'll be a nice change of pace than this dreary weather."

"Yeah, I'm sick of the cold and the snow. I just want spring to come back."

"It'll get here. It's just taking its time." Giggles, sitting across from Aurora. "So, I was thinking, once we get on this trip, it'd be best, if you went on your own and we'll only meet up for dinner and at night for bed time."

"Aw, you don't want to hang out with me?" Aurora giggles.

"Well I figured it would give you more of a chance to meet those cute boys!" Crystal laughs

"Ugh mom... Seriously, enough with that."

"What? You don't want a cute little boyfriend?"

"No mom, I don't want a boyfriend."

"You say that, but that's just because you haven't found the right boy yet."

"Yeah, keep thinking that."

"Well, all I'm saying is that socializing will do you good."

"Alright, I'll socialize." Just wanting to drop the topic all together.

Marc, a tall rabbit in his late 30's, white fur, blue eyes, light brown hair, but his hair is starting to go grey. He doesn't hide it, but it is quite noticeable. "Whoa, she's gonna socialize? Who is this girl?" Marc chuckles.

"Hey dad." Aurora smiles and waves over to her father.

"All set to go?"

"Yes hon, just a quick breakfast before heading out, would you like anything?"

"No thanks, I'll be fine."

"Alright then, let's head out then." Crystal smiles and both her and Aurora stand from the table, and the family heads out to the car. Marc starts the car, and backs out of their driveway.

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