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Based on the lives, events and places created by Krezz Karavan and company. All characters belong to their respective owners. This story is concepted and written by DC7RedFox.All cubs involved in this story are of complete fiction, those who do not understand fiction, nor the antics the following cubs, or the situations involved, should not be reading this story. This story is not to be reproduced, copied, or otherwise published anywhere, in any way shape or form, without the express permission of the author.\n\nChapter 1\n\nDiary: the price of temptation\n\n-Well...... I had a weird dream a few days ago, I don't know if it means something but it was really clear, \" love temptations are paid with blood\". At this time I told Edna about my dream, she got a little scared at the beginning but at the end she hugged me lovely whispering playfully to my ear\n\" Sometimes this little angel that you're looking right now *winks her eye* also wants to bite you but I resist myself of doing that just because I know other ways to eat you up when we are alone \" after saying that she showed me those \"ways\" she was talking about at her house. I really love when she talks me like that, after all she really knows how to make myself always begging for more.\nI wanted to write my dream here, anyway I need to keep it here so I don't forget such a terrifying but nice experience.-\n\n-there was just a normal day, I woke up early in the morning to have breakfast and get ready for school, the bus arrived just in time and I got up as normal, I saw Edna waiting for me at the back seats\n\"hi cutie, how are you? \" Edna greeted me \n\n\"I'm great now that I'm with you again hehe\" \n\n\"lets make your day a little better so \" she said while kissing me\n\nEveryone in the bus was cheering and piffling us. I don't know what was the best part of everyday in the bus, those daily kisses of her, or the fact that I never get tired if it *sigh*, anyway those things just make me love going on the school bus. When we got to the bus stop everyone left the bus and went straight to their classes, I walked with Edna through \nthe main hall when we heard the principal calling her and Ed by the speakers \n\" good morning students, Edna and Edward Fox please be present at my office at this moment, thanks \"\n\n\nChapter 2\n\nAfter the speaker transmission Edna farewelled me and when to the principal's office with Ed, I wanted to go with her but when I was heading there too the bell rang and I didn't have other option to went directly to my classroom. In the meantime I was thinking about the reason of that call from the principal when someone knocked the class door, it was Ed and Edna asking for permission to get in the class, Edward gave the teacher a note signed by the principal and both got in but also a strange girl entered at that moment with them\n\n\" attention everybody we have a new student, do you want to present yourself sweetie? \" The teacher said, but the new girl just remained in silence with her head a little down\n\n\"well don't be shy just tell us you name so\"\nBut the girl didn't respond she just giggled softly\n\n\" anyway...... For everyone to know this girl is a far cousin from Edna and Ed so please be gentle and kind with her at her first day here, ok take sit at the back in the empty chair please \" the teacher said \n\nI wasn't paying much attention at what he said, I was asking Edna about that when the girl sat down at the back. The classes were really boring but the new girl remained in silent at the back, I couldn't saw her during all that time, she was just at the ending chair of the classroom. When the break bell rang everybody went out, I was with Edna taking our books from the lockers for the subject we had after the break when that girl approached to my back and hugged me \n\n\nChapter 3\n\nI got shocked at that moment but what happened after that was even worse \n\n\" well my little cousin you weren't kidding, your boyfriend seems to be really cute *licks my ear* and he's also really tasty\" \nThe mysterious girl said while giggling \n\nEdna made me step aside while pushing that girl. I didn't realize before but that girl looked just like Edna's twin, she was a black furred vixen with white eyes the same height as Edna, but not only her height were the same but also her face and hair style. I just couldn't believe it, I thought I was imagining that but it was too real to think that \n\n\" you're maybe my cousin but I never gave you permission to ever touch my boyfriend like that, if you even think to do that again I swear that you're gonna lament the day you were born \" Edna said really angry\n\n\" so you mean I can't do this \" she said while kissing me in the cheek\n\n\" you bitch, I warned you about that, now you will see what's really bad\" Edna said while dropping her books and slapping her in the face\n\nEdna's cousin was also about to continue the fight but at that time I manage to separate them, I never saw Edna acting like that before it was the first time I saw her slapping other girl\n\n\" ok is enough!.... I don't want any of you to do that again, specially you.......... \" \n\n\" Deborah, my name is Deborah \" she said \n\n\" anyway I don't want you to do that again Deborah, I'm Edna's boyfriend, so respect me and her because I won't let anyone here to make Edna uncomfortable because of that \"\n\n\" sorry but I just can't resist myself having such a hot fox in front of me \" she said teasingly \n\n\" you know what, I'm not interested! Ok, I don't want anything with you \" I said firmly and clearly for her to understand \n\n\" really sad to hear, I could give you even more than this foolish vixen could ever give to you, but anyway, I'm going to take a look to the school yards, so see you both later.... Specially you my tasty fox \" she said while winking her eye toward me before leaving \n\n\" Just let's go Edna, there is no reason to still here \" I said trying to take Edna away from Deborah \n\n\" I'm too angry to let her get away like that \"\nEdna said furiously trying to follow Deborah \n\n\" * takes her hand and kisses her passionaly * \nI'm just for you and that will never change \"\n\nShe blushed but she still was a little angry with Deborah for doing that. I took Edna to the cafeteria to have lunch and to get some explanations about what happened there\n\n\nChapter 4\n\nWhen we arrive there I offered Edna to bring her lunch to the table so she can calm down a little, she was really happy at that moment, It was just like if all the anger and retaliative feelings gone away from her mind. She sat with Pokeinfo, Cynthia, Laura and Ed at a big table \n\n\" there you are cutie, here is your lunch \" I said kindly \n\n\" thanks David........ I wanted to apologize with you because of what happened at the hall, I'm not like that, you know, but I couldn't stop myself when I saw her teasing you like that \"\nEdna said sorry for what happened before\n\n\" don't worry, I understand that feeling but I don't care if she wants me or not, you can trust me, I will never change you for anyone \"\nI said kindly looking her beautiful eyes\n\n\" I suppose that you would want to know more about that, don't you? \"\n\n\" yeah, that will help me to understand this situation better, but also there is no reason for you to tell me at this moment if you don't want \"\n\n\" It's ok, I was a little messed up with her at this moment, but now I feel better knowing that everything is alright between you and me.......... Well, I don't know much about her, the principal called us in the morning to tell about her arrive to this school, she's a far cousin from my family but I also couldn't believe it when I saw her face, it was really weird to look someone just like my twin \" Edna said a little shocked\n\n\" but you don't have to worry David she's just going to stay until the end of the singing regionals, she's representing her school for that contest, so when it's over she will return there \" Edward said hopefully \n\n\" *sigh* I think this will be a long time having her at our classroom, she's just too annoying with all that teasing, but anyway what's her name? \" I asked a bit interested\n\n\" Deborah, her name is Deborah Black Rose....... Yuk my mouth just becomes bitter when I pronounce that name \" Edna said sicken to repeat Deborah's name \n\n\" lets fix that \" I said briefly while kissing her\n\" *giggle* do you feel better now? \"\n\nEdna was about to answer when Deborah sat on the table next to me \n\n\" please tell me that you're giving away those kisses, because I can't hold myself looking you both like that, if you don't care little cousin I want one from him \" Deborah said teasingly \n\nEdna was about to slap her again but fortunately a short idea came to my mind at that moment \n\n\" do you mean these kisses Deborah? \" I said while kissing Edna again preventing her to stand up and slap Deborah \n\nI didn't give her a chance to answer that I just continue giving her a taste from her own medicine \n\n\" mmmm, I bet that ANY! girl could kiss me like you do Edna....... Ooo sorry I forgot that you still here Deborah ( I said sarcastically ), anyway I think I'm not up to give any more good kisses, the last one was for my dear Edna \" I said smiling sarcastically \n\n\" *giggle* No need to be sorry I can wait until tomorrow, but if you promise to give me two kisses that day \" she said while winking her eye\n\n\" *sarcastic laugh* well well, I see that you're really persistent but let me tell you that I won't give you anything and I won't change my opinion until I die, so I recommend you to wait....... I don't know, like FOREVER to get something from me \" I said sarcastically being tough with Deborah \n\nEdna got my point and she also helped me with the payback, it was really funny, everyone there was giggling about that situation \n\n\" don't worry sweetie I can wait for you forever if it's necessary \" Edna said while caressing my face knowing that Deborah was watching \n\nDeborah was disappointed at that moment But she never stopped to look me with those suggestive eyes of her. \n\n\" what about if you go and get some lunch Deborah, the break is almost over \" Edward said trying to change the conversation\n\n\" I ate something before coming to the cafeteria, but I wouldn't mind if David is my dessert \" she said while giggling \n\nI was about to get things really clear for her to understand, I was tired of all that teasing but at that time a scaring and loud shout was heard......\n\n\nChapter 5\n\n\" HELP PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! \" a girl shouted\n\nEveryone in the cafeteria went out to the school yards to see what happened, we all stood up and ran to see who shouted like that and why, when we got there we saw a horrific scene. There was a bunny girl hugging the dead body of her boyfriend, the one that was dead because a deep bite on his neck, it was just horrible, that girl was crying loudly covered with her boyfriend's blood all over her body\n\n\" *loud cry* please Matt don't leave me!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!! I BEG YOU!!!!! *devastated shout* \" the bunny girl cried\n\nEdna took my hand and got closer to me. if that scene shocked me like that, I couldn't imagine how sad and scared Edna was at that moment. In the meantime the teachers ran to the yards with the nurse, they made everyone to step back while the nurse covered the bunny girl with a blanket and take her to the nursery, that girl didn't stop shouting, she wanted to be with her dead boyfriend but the nurse just took her gave her a sedative to calm her down.\nBy the time the ambulance and the police came, the principal called the students to the main auditorium to take preventive actions about this situation\n\n*whispers and a lot of random talking were heard *\n\n\" silence! \" the principal shouted a bit nervous \n\n\" this school meeting is going to take preventive actions for the safety of all the students, from this day until the problem is solved, all the students from every age must \nreturn to their respective houses in groups of three people, no one will go out of this school without his or her group, in the case the classroom has a number of students that not match with the group assignment, they can make bigger groups but all of them must have at least one boy as the leader member....... We will overcome this situation, please make your best to follow the instructions and care about your group members \" the principal said being insecure of himself but hoping the best from this situation\n\nWhen the meeting ended all the students went back to classes and tried to continue as normal as the things could be at that moment. I thought my day couldn't be even worse at that moment but the day wasn't over yet.......\n\n\nChapter 6\n\nWhen we arrive to our classroom the teacher gave us time to make our groups, sadly we couldn't join all our friends in one so we separate in two groups, I don't know how I accepted Deborah to be in my group, possibly because she was Edna's cousin and she was alone at that moment, anyone wanted to be part of her group. Edna didn't complained because she was my third group member, I was happy because of that, In that way I would spend even more time with her but the bitter part was that Deborah won't make the things easy for us both \n\n\" I know David will be always by my side to protect me of any danger or person who wants to harm me \" Deborah said while hugging me with a big smile \n\nEdna took my arm and get me off that hug, but instead she hugged me also \n\n\" awww I'm sorry to tell you this Deborah but David had been doing that with me since we met, so I doubt that he cares about such a slut like you \" Edna said while smiling sarcastically \n\n\" don't worry I know he will \" Deborah said while pulling again my arm\n\n\" I bet he won't \" Edna said pulling my other arm \n\n\" he will \" Deborah pulled \n\" he won't \" Edna pulled\n\" he will \" Deborah pulled\n\" he won't!! \" Edna pulled while shouting \n\" he will!! \" Deborah pulled while shouting too\n\nBoth where pulling my arms side to side to hug me, I didn't know if I was enjoying it or simply it was some kind of annoying fun\n\n\" OK IT'S ENOUGH!! \" I shouted a bit mad \n\n\" I'm not a toy, please stop this fight....... \"\n\nEdna and Deborah hugged me when I finished\n\n\" you're just too cute, you don't want any fight between us \" Edna said happily while hugging me \n\n\" I can say I agree with my little cousin, I bet there isn't other guy as kind as you are \" Deborah said while hugging me \n\nI was really ashamed, all my classmates where giggling at us, I didn't care but if Edna and Deborah continued like that, I knew I would spend a lot of time stoping fights like those. When the things cooled down between them I got some time to speak Ed and Pokeinfo at the break time \n\n\" guys I don't know how I will survive this days with Edna and Deborah fighting like that \" I said disappointed \n\n\" awww don't worry dude, I know my sister will find something to get you distracted from all this mischief \" Edward said playfully\n\n\" that would help but Deborah won't leave us alone since we made the groups \" I said thinking about some ideas for Edna and me to be alone \n\n\" I don't get you, why are you so annoyed with Deborah and Edna fighting for your attention. I would be really happy knowing I have two girls that do everything I ask for without doubting \" Pokeinfo said teasingly \n\n\" *giggle* let me ask you something Poke, how would you react if you have a girl that looks like Cynthia but she wants to be with you every single second and also she fights all the time with Cynthia for your attention?..... Before you answer, think about Cynthia and tell me how would she felt like? \"\n\n\" well, looking the things like that I know is going to be a hard time for you three \" Pokeinfo said thinking in what I told him\n\n\" I don't care if something happens to me, but I'm playing with fire letting Edna and Deborah fight like that for me, because if I share my attention just with Edna Deborah wouldn't stop teasing me, but if I spend more time with Deborah I'm risking my relationship with Edna and that is what I don't want to do \" I said worried about the situation \n\n\" what about if you make a deal with both? \"\nEdward said thinking in a wonderful plan\n\n\" deal? \" I asked curiously\n\n\" yup, tell my sis and Deborah that you will move to another group if they continue fighting like that, I'm sure Edna and Deborah wouldn't like that so they will try to be patient with each other to make you stay \" \nEdward said cleverly\n\n\" wow Ed, that is a great idea, thanks buddy I will try it to see what happens \" I said happily \n\nBy the time I saw all the girls returning from\nthe cafeteria, so I decided to try Ed's plan to see what happens. Deborah came up first and greeted me \n\n\" I missed you so much David, I'm eager to spend this week just with you \" she said while hugging me\n\nEdna didn't stay like nothing hearing that, she pushed Deborah aside\n\n\" I know you will spend this week with me and with no one else, I'm really happy to be in your group sweetie \" Edna said while kissing me \n\nThat was clearly the beginning of another fight, Deborah was about to push Edna back, so I made both to step back\n\n\" I didn't want to reach this point but if you both don't stop this ridiculous fights I swear I will ask the teacher to change me to another group \"\n\nBoth were shocked with my reaction at that time, Edna was looking me with really sad eyes \n\n\" But David...... I don't want you to leave our group, I was hoping to spend a great time with you \" Edna said sadly \n\n\" neither me, please stay in our group \" Deborah said a bit sadly \n\n\" *sigh* I need to talk with you both \" I took Edna's and Deborah's hands and took them to a quieter place \n\nWe left all the sound of the hall and we get to a bench near the library, I know talking both with the truth wouldn't be easy but it was the best for this moment. We sat on the bench and I took a deep breath before start talking\n\n\" I need you both to listen..... I'm not playing when I told that I would change to another group if you two continue like that. Edna, I don't know why are you so jealous about Deborah.......\" I said softly at the end\n\n\" because I don't want to lose you, I don't know what would I do without your love \" she said about to cry\n\n\" do you remember the promise I made you when we had our first date? \" I said taking her hand kindly\n\n\" you told me that you won't let anybody hurt me again, that you will be always by my side to take care of me........\" she said feeling disappointed with herself\n\n\" I'm keeping that promise and I will until I die, because your love is what I treasure the most in my heart \" I said lovely while caressing her cute face\n\nEdna then hugged me lovely hearing my words, I was really happy to make her understand that she won't lose me but now I have to face Deborah that was hearing all of that conversation\n\n\" Deborah, I'm really sorry to tell you but Edna is the only one for me, I promised her to give everything I have to protect her no matter what, and that includes you and any other people that makes her feel bad \" I said firmly and clearly \n\n\" .........I Promise I would do anything for you, I won't care what happens to me if you are next to me \" she said trying to make myself change of opinion\n\n\" don't make promises that you won't accomplish, I know you won't do anything for me \"\n\n\" If you don't believe me ask for any of those things you think I can't do for you \"\n\n\" what would you do if I ask you to be just friends \" \n\n\" but.....\" she was about to continue until I interrupt her\n\n\" or what would you do if I ask you to understand that I love Edna and anything will never make me change of mind \" I stated my point as polite as I could \n\n\" that's not fair, I bet that you wouldn't do those things for Edna \" she said really sad\n\n\" even if you don't believe me..... I would....... But those two things are just my worst fear, I know I would accept to do both but I would die without Edna's love \" I said trying to make Deborah understand my point \n\nShe was speechless, she looked me with teary eyes that really made me feel bad at that moment, but I should know that she won't give up so easy. When the classes were over I was taking some books from my locker when I found a note written by Deborah\n\n\"- if you don't want to hear my heart reasons, I will tell you what my body wants, be prepared because I know I will catch you all when I finish with this-\"\n\nI threw that note away, hoping that she wasn't meaning what I think she did. But sadly my doubts were bitterly answered the next day\n\n\nChapter 7\n\nI finished to take my books from the locker to take Edna and Deborah home, we walked out of the school directly to Deborah's house so Edna and me have all they way back to hers just for us \n\n\" who could do such an horrible thing to the bunny's boyfriend \" Edna asked a bit scared while walking with us\n\n\" what is really strange is that the fangs that bit his neck weren't as any other fangs I have seen before \" I replied while thinking were had I seen those fangs before \n\nDeborah remained silent and uncomfortable with the conversation, I just started to talk about something else to stop messing with her mood \n\n\" anyway...... Let's talk about the singing regionals \"\n\n\" well........ I hope to give my best to make my school proud of me \" Deborah said distracted\n\n\" I wish you the best, but Edna is also going to sing there so it will be a hard competition for you both \" I said measuring my words to prevent another fight\n\n\" I know I can win this one easily, I just need David to be there and I won't lose \" Edna said happily while taking my hand \n\nBy the time we got to Deborah's house I realized that all the way there she was kind of distracted and quite, like if something was making her feel puzzled for some reason\n\n\" I think this is farewell, see you two tomorrow \" she said as she returned to her normal mood\n\nDeborah gave me a kind hug, I thought she desisted about her idea of the note she sent me earlier in the morning but I was badly mistaken\n\n\" be ready for your surprise tomorrow in the morning, my cute tasty fox \" she whispered to my ear\n\nI tried to not react at the words she whispered to my ear, I didn't want Edna to know about Deborah's plans for tomorrow \n\n\" see you tomorrow, I hope you get the things I told you today in the morning \" I said trying to make her desist of what she was planing to do \n\n\" don't worry I got you perfectly, but you already know my response don't you? \" she said teasingly\n\n\" ok, it's getting dark in here, let's go Edna, I don't want you to be late for dinner \" I said while taking her hand and walking faster to get far of Deborah's house \n\n\" tsk tsk tsk, oohh my tasty fox, I better get ready for tomorrow, I want you to be mine and I don't care what do I have to do for that, and I really mean that I don't care what *giggle* \" she said for herself as I walked to Edna's house \n\nIf I had heard those words I wouldn't let her get close to me and Edna never again.\n\n\nChapter 8\n\nAs we walked to her house she noticed me nervous as well as worried too\n\n\" what happen David? \" Edna asked worried while pulling my hand back to slow me down \n\n\" the murder thing gets me worried for your brother as well as Poke, that's all, nothing to worry sweetie \" I said as I tasted the rotten flavor of lying Edna for the sake of our relationship\n\nWe were close to her house and she took my hand taking me inside. She sat me on a couch of her living room and asked me to wait there\n\n\" be right back cutie, I know something that will make all your worries disappear, But first I need to check upstairs \" she said while kissing me \n\n\" ok sweetie take your time \" I said happily \n\nAs Edna went upstairs I went to her kitchen for a glass of water, I needed to clear my mind so she doesn't suspect anything about Deborah's note\n\n\" I don't know how but I will fix that obsession that Deborah has with me \" I said for my insides \n\nHoping the best I washed my face with some water to cool myself down but that didn't help me when I got back to the living room\n\n\" *sigh* don't worry just make yourself comfortable and enjoy this moment with \nEdna \" I said lowly for myself as I sat down on the couch \n\nBut at that moment I smelled a sweet and delicious scent that easily erased all my problems and worries. Was Edna coming downstairs wearing a nice baby doll with all her cute body perfumed with a charming strawberry scent\n\n\" *giggle* my parents left a note at my room saying that they are going to be late for dinner because they have an important work meeting, and also my bro isn't home so we have a lot of time for us to be alone and have some fun \" Edna said while licking my ear\n\n\" I waited all day long for you to tell me that \"\nI said really horny\n\n\" I don't want you to keep waiting so \" she said while kissing me passionately\n\nEdna sat on my legs and started to take off my shirt. She licked me all way down, when she got to my pants, she took out my cock and started to work me out\n\n\" *moaning* you were always really skilled doing this \" I said enjoying Edna's blowjob\n\n\" I have a cute boyfriend that loves me to practice with him *smiles* \" Edna said while playing deeper with her muzzle \n\n\" *loud moaning* I can't take it anymore!..... I'm cumming!! \" I said while feeling Edna enjoying my cum in her mouth \n\n\" *smiles tasting her lips* I love when you shot your cum like that, it's just too sweet \" Edna said while giving me a seductive and lovely look\n\n\" mind if I return the favor? \" I asked playfully while taking off her baby doll \n\n\" of course not, but I think is too hot in here, it must be you that make me feel this way \" \n\n\" let me get more comfortable \" she said while pulling down her panties and putting them in my school bag \n\n\" just a little present for you when you get home \" she said while winking her eye to me \n\n\" I know exactly what to give you back for such a nice present \" I said while making Edna to lay on her back \n\nI kissed her neck and licked her cute nipples going my way down to get to her wet pussy. I used my fingers while licking her, she was moaning pleasantly \n\n\" don't stop *moaning* this is incredible..... Awww I'm almost there \" Edna said really pleased and horny\n\n\" I guess is my time to get a bit deeper \" I said rubbing her G-spot \n\n\" *loud moaning* awww!!! I'm cumming!!!! \" she said ecstatic \n\nI licked all her cum and let her pussy cleaned as she moaned a bit after the pleasant orgasm she had\n\n\" I love when you cum like that when I play with your erogenous zones \" I said looking her cute body \n\n\" you get all my body heated when you do that, it's delicious..... Give me more please, that was incredible \" she said lustfully getting close to me\n\n\" never mind to let you that horny \"\n\nThen I drilled her tight pussy in doggy style just like she loved as well I played with her nipples when she cummed again. She was really horny when I touched her G-spot, she's really energetic and tight when I do that. When we finished we were laid at a fluffy carpet in her living room, she got close to me and hugged me by the chest \n \n\" You're always so warm, so lovely \" she said relaying her head on my chest \n\n\" I'm really sorry for doubting about the love that you have for me \" she continued\n\n\" *kisses Edna* my love..... My dear and lovely Edna, I trust you but better than that I love you, and that will never change, no matter what you will always be my best, the only one for me..... My true love \" I said looking kindly to those beautiful black eyes of her \n\nSome tears rolled of her eyes, she was happy at that moment, being honest both of us were, for her I was determined to make Deborah understand that my love for Edna won't change, that she won't have any chance to make myself change of mind\n\n\nChapter 9\n\nWe talked there, laid at the living room\n,completely naked, enjoying everything that our eyes were looking from each other. It was just incredible, but some time later we heard Ed's voice getting close through the main door, he was talking Poke after carrying Cynthia and Laura home. Edna and me rushed like any other time, our clothes were all over the living room, we made a mess yiffing on the couch as well in the carpet, but even worse is that we were completely naked\n\n\" *worried giggle* I think there's no way out of this one \" I said rushing to clean some of the mess we did there\n\n\" I have an idea \" she said while dressing up with her uniform again\n\n\" I'm going to distract Ed and Poke, by the way get dressed as well and hide my other clothes in the closet near the stairs \" she said cleverly \n\n\" ok, great \" I said briefly while dressing up too\n\nIn the time I cleaned up the mess at the living room and get myself dressed with my uniform, Edna opened the main door before Ed and Poke knocked it to distract them giving me more time\n\n\" hi Poke \" Edna said hugging him\n\" hi bro \" Edna also hugged his brother \n\n\" hi sis \" Ed replied hugging Edna back\n\nEd started to get a little uncomfortable with Edna's hug, it was taking more time than a single greeting hug\n\n\" ok, it's something wrong Edna? \" Ed asked curiously \n\n\" nope \" she said briefly continuing hugging Ed\n\n\" so why is this hug taking so long? \" Ed kept asking\n\n\" well..... Mmmm..... Aaa, because..... This day I feel huggable with everybody, that's all \" Edna said playfully continuing hugging Ed \n\n\" ok...... Do you mind if we finish this hug for now? \" Ed asked to make Edna stop the hug him\n\n\" nope, I don't mind \" Edna said but still hugging Ed \n\n\" *sigh* can you stop hugging me please? \" Ed asked a little teased\n\n\" ok ok.....\" Edna said stepping back\n\" now is Poke's turn \" she said jumping toward Poke to hug him\n\n\" awww Edna we aren't going to be here all night \" Ed said going straight to the door \n\n\" well I don't mind you know \" Pokeinfo said giggling teasingly \n\n\" never mind, I'm going to have dinner now \" Edward said about to open the main door\n\nEdna run and got into her brother's path, she didn't let him to open the door\n\n\" ok Edna, I know that you're hiding something, tell me what is it right now \" Edward said mad and impatient with Edna \n\n\" hiding something?..... What something do you mean exactly? \" Edna said trying to fool her brother and Poke\n\n\" *sigh*...... I don't know, you tell me \" \n\n\" well..... Aaa..... Is a beautiful night don't you think?, what about If we see this beautiful night sky for a while? \" \n\n\" Edna, is windy in here and the sky is really cloudy, there's nothing to see this night \"\n\n\" but anyway, we can stay here and wait, who knows if the weather change suddenly \" \n\n\" enough ok, please let me go inside \" \n\n\" but why? We are having a great time talking here \" \n\n\" Edna, if you don't move I'm going to tell our patents you make me and Pokeinfo to stay outside the house with this windy weather for who knows what \" Edward advertised Edna\n\n\" ......... Ok bro......\" Edna said while stepping aside to let Ed and Poke to go in \n\nEdna didn't know how to make them both to not enter the house, she hoped me to get everything ready for them when they enter. When they did they found me sat on the clean living room with Edna's math book on my hand \n\n\" hey guys what's up \" I greeted both\n\n\" *laugh* I don't know how I didn't realize of this \" Pokeinfo said playfully\n\n\" well well Edna, I know why you were that nervous now \" Ed said as he giggled playfully\n\n\" wow wow, we were just doing the math homework Edna couldn't solve yesterday, that's all \" I said nervous too\n\n\" tsk tsk tsk don't try to lie you both, I know you very well and I know that you can't resist yourselves when you're alone anywhere \" Ed said winking his eye to me\n\n\" we'll if you mean we both use our free time for the best you're right, we were doing the math homework before you arrive \" Edna said helping me\n\n\" Awww don't try to fool me with that, who does her or his homework when it's alone with his couple? Answer that \" Pokeinfo said almost knowing what happened\n\n\" You know what, now that I realize of another thing why is the living room smelling to strawberry? \" Pokeinfo said while sniffing somewhere close to the stair closet \n\n\" yeah, close to Edna is also smelling like that \"\nEdward said also sniffing next Edna \n\nIt was the break point, both realized about the only thing I couldn't hide from them when they entered. At the same time Poke opened the stair closet taking out Edna's clothes and Ed realized that Edna was the one that was using the strawberry perfume \n\n*laugh* Ed and Poke laughed in unison \n\" I knew you both can't resist being alone here without yiffing \" Edward said teasingly\n\nEdna came to hug and kiss me, she was happy and a bit ashamed but when she got close to me she said\n\n\" at least we tried but it was really funny anyway \" she said smiling lovely\n\n\" ok you both got us, but tell me how would I resist to not yiff her when I have the opportunity, she's just too beautiful \" I said hugging Edna back\n\n\" hehehe, you two really love each other \"\nPokeinfo said \n\n\" let's have dinner, I know you must be hungry after all that fun you had earlier \" \n\n\" true \" Edna and me said in unison\n\n\nChapter 10\n\nAfter having a great dinner we played some video games until all the adults arrived home. They took Poke to his house as well mine took me some time later. After farewelling everybody I got in the car and my parents drive me home. I didn't noticed but I was still smelling to Edna's sweet perfume, but the one that did was my mother\n\n\" mmmm, I think Edna loves to hug you \" my mom said playfully while giggling\n\n\" how do you know? \" I asked intrigated\n\n \" all your body is smelling to a strawberry \nperfume \" my mom said looking at me \n\n\" *gasp* well she's really lovely and kind with me hehe \" I said ashamed but happy\n\n\" take care of her, girls like those are really hard to find nowadays \" my dad said while taking my moms hand kindly\n\n\" you don't need to tell me \" I said smiling confidently \n\nWhen we got home I went to my room and laid on my bed to think, this day was like any other, my head thought a million of things at the same time about today but at the time I was about to make my own mood turn a mad and bitter one thinking about Deborah I smelled a sweet scent coming from my backpack, then I remembered Edna's little gift, I got really horny sniffing that mix of smells coming from Edna's panty, it was like smelling her wet privates once she used that perfume all over her body\n\n\" *deep sniff*......... *sigh* when she smells like that I just want to taste her cute body again and again....... How lucky I am for finding such a nice angel fallen from the sky \" \n\nAfter smelling it a bit more I hid the panty in a secret place in my room, knowing I would dream with Edna after enjoying her gift before sleeping.\n\nThe next day at school things started from bad to worse, when I arrive Edna greeted me as normal but at the time we got to the main hall things started to change to bad, Deborah ran and hugged me tightly greeting me\n\n\" David!, I missed you so much my tasty fox \" Deborah said playfully\n\n\" hi Deborah \" I said coldly \n\nEdna was trying her best to be patient with Deborah but sadly Deborah always knows what to say to make Edna explode in anger at that time\n\n\" yesterday I slept reaaaally good \" Deborah said happily \n\n\" why do you say that? \" I asked knowing that I couldn't just ignore her\n\n\" I had a delicious wet dream with you \" she said looking me with those suggestive eyes of her\n\nEdna answered Deborah's comment in a sarcastic way trying to not slap her again with all the anger she had inside\n\n\" I'm happy to know but I'm more happy because I didn't had just a wet dream about him last night, instead of that I yiffed with David at my house and let me tell you that we had A LOT of fun, more than the one you could have in your poor little dream \" Edna said sarcastically \n\n\" awww, that really make me feel sad, but you know what, the kisses David own me from yesterday will cheer up my day \" Deborah said while getting closer to kiss me \n\n\" what??!!, I never accepted to give you those kisses \" I said stepping aside\n\n\" but I know you really wanted to, don't worry about Edna, she will understand the love that we have \" \n\n\" OK, THIS HAVE GONE TOO FAR!!!!! \" Edna said really mad while slapping Deborah in the face \n\n\" I'm tired of you too!!! \" Deborah said pulling Edna's hair hardly \n\nBoth started to fight in the main hall, they were pulling her hair, scratching each other and even kicking between them. I got myself in the middle of them to stop the fight, but I really got hurt doing that, they scratched me a lot of times and also I got slapped, when I manage to get Edna off that thing, the principal came to see what was happening, because there were a lot of students gathering around to see the fight \n\n\" ok ladies you two are coming to my office to talk about this, I hope my patience lasts enough to not give you detention when we get there, so move on! \" the principal shouted stressed \n\n\" but she started! \" Deborah said mad\n\n\" you have started this since you messed with me and David, so don't tell me that I started because I can finish it at this time right now \" Edna said really mad with Deborah \n\n\" enough ladies, I don't care who started, if you don't behave well I would need to take drastic actions with you both \"\n\nAt that time the principal took Edna and Deborah to his office, I waited for Edna a couple of minutes to speak her trying to calm her down. When she went out Deborah was still inside\n\n\" are you ok sweetie? \" I asked worried for the fight injuries she had\n\n\" well yeah, the nurse took care of those wounds while the principal was talking with us \" she said looking at me a bit sad\n\n\" hey why are you giving that look sweetie? \"\nI asked looking to her teary eyes \n\n\" .......... Those scratches........ I did that to you.....? \"\n\n\" .........\" I was speechless, I thought my fur covered those ones, but I also didn't want to lie her again, because she would be even more angry with Deborah if I tell her that she did those scratches to me\n\n\" ......... Sorry..........\" she said while running crying sadly \n\nI tried to follow her, but the bell rang at that moment and a lot of students went off her classrooms making me impossible to follow Edna. I went to the nursery to take some alcohol or bandages for those scratches, so at least she would see that I'm ok and it was just an accident. But I felt a little suspicious when I got in the nursery \n\n\" hi, excuse me, I came to take some alcohol and bandages, can go in? \" I asked but I get no response \n\n\" well, I think the nurse must be at the teacher's lounge taking some coffee, i hope she doesn't care if i take what i need from here \" I said for myself opening the medical supplies locker \n\nAt that time I felt someone in my back, and to make it worse when I turned myself back I saw Deborah wearing a nurse outfit with a small skirt \n\n\" not again!..... You're making me sick!!!! \" I said jaded from all that teasing \n\n\" awww don't worry I'm here to make you feel better so don't be shy and let me check you \" she said teasingly \n\n\" I'm off!!!! I don't want anymore problems since the others you caused this morning \" I said trying to open the door realizing it was locked\n\n\" are you looking for this keys \" she said showing the door keys playfully \n\n\" if you want them I hope you don't mind helping this naughty nurse with her full body check exam \" She said handing a rectal thermometer in her hand hoping me to measure her temperature with that\n\n\" things aren't so easy with me, I'm leaving right now \" I said breaking the door handlers with a kick \n\nThe door opened with any problem, then I just went out carelessly about the door being really mad with Deborah. But that was just the beginning.......\n\n\nChapter 11\n\nDeborah was really mad, she broke the thermometer with her own hands, but she had an evil grin while leaving the nursery. I got even more worried looking that Edna wasn't anywhere I looked for her, but I didn't give up and start looking in more places. I should realize that someone was following me. Looking at the library to find Edna, I found a bitter surprise, I saw a girl dropping some books in front of me and I stopped for a moment to go and pic them up\n\n\" hey, you dropped this \" I said while calling that girl that was reading \n\nI managed to read the title of one of them, I got shocked when I gave back those books to the girl that was reading there \n\n\" what a nice and polite fox we have here \" Deborah said standing of that table \n\nShe was dressed like a naughty schoolgirl using a little skirt \n\n\" *gasp*......... How did she change so fast her clothes?! \" I thought while turning myself back and continue looking for Edna in other place \n\n\" please don't leave me, I have an important anatomy test and I need to study \" Deborah said winking her eye to me\n\nI continued my way out of the library knowing where she wanted to get with that explanation of the \" anatomy test \". I walked looking for Edna in a lot of places more but I always found Deborah in another of her suggestive outfits. Looking for Edna in the gym I found Deborah in a cheerleading suit, when I went to the auditorium I saw Deborah wearing a devil outfit from the theatrical clothes, when I went to the pool side I saw Deborah in a tight bathing suit. I was getting crazy, I couldn't find Edna and also Deborah teased me all day long with her outfits. And now Is were my day came from bad to worst. When I was taking my books from the locker to go home, another scream was heard in the boys locker room. That thing that was killing the boys here in the school struck again but this time it killed two boys in an horrible way, the first one was bit in the neck and died because of a massive lose of blood, but this two others had a lot of scratches and signs of fight in their body but also that mortal bite in their necks. This time the cops carried both of the bodies to make a detailed autopsy to know what was happening, as the principal made all the students to step back with the help of the teachers I heard him talking to a cop in there\n\n\" not again!!, this murders have to stop right now! \" the principal shouted to the cop \n\n\" calm down, we're working on it \" the cop said a bit shocked also\n\n\" calm down?!, how the hell do you expect me to do that?!!, all the patents of this students are afraid to send their child to school because of this things, now how I'm going to tell them two more students died like that again? \" the principal said really worried and nervous\n\n\" we need time to find the murderer but for now I need you to stay calm and continue as always just for some time more \" the cop said looking to the crime scene\n\n\" *sigh* what about today's singing contest?, I don't think anyone here would come after this \" the principal said worried\n\n\" mmmm, try to not cancel it for any reason, at this time the murderer is looking for someone specific to kill, this kind of people act by some kind of impulse that made them do this. I'm pretty sure that he or she will come to the contest to strike again \" the cop said firmly\n\n\" do you think is a student from this school?! \" \n\n\" at this time we don't have any proves, but this could go even worst if we don't stop it right now. About the patents of the students, don't worry about them, I'll take care of it, but I need you to make the students to change of mind and make them come for that contest, this could be the only chance we have to catch the the killer \"\n\n\" ok I'll do my best, call to my office if anything comes out to light \"\n\n\" You will be the first to be informed \" the cop said leaving with their partners \n\n\nChapter 12\n\nBy the time they all gone and the situation was a bit cooled, the principal called us for another meeting at the auditorium. As i was going there I felt strangely alone, I didn't even know where Edna was and what was worse is that I also got a bit worried for Deborah\n\n*whispers and some shouts at the back*\n\n\" silence please, I want to let you know that the singing contest will be this night as it was planned........ \" the principal was saying when a chipmunk boy interrupted him\n\n\" do you think we'd planned to return here after what happened?! \" the chipmunk guy said shocked\n\n\" anyway how do we know that we aren't going to be in danger for that thing of the serial murders \" the chipmunk guy continued \n\n\" well, the point of continuing this contest is to make everybody a bit more calm and relaxed with this situation, but if no one is going to come I can understand that you don't want the extra credits for assisting tonight \" \n\n\" Extra credits? \" a lot of students whispered and talked about that\n\n\" that's the gift if you come today in the night. It is just a way to make you all feel more comfortable and positive during this bad times we're facing \" the principal concluded \n\nAll the students stood up and clapped really loud hearing those good news, with that, the principal knew they would come without forcing them. Taking my backpack from the classroom I saw Ed and Poke doing the same \n\n\" hey David how are you? \" Ed asked kind of worried \n\n\" why do you ask? \" I asked back\n\n\" it's because of the fight between Edna and Deborah today in the morning \" \n\n\" well, it went worst than I expected, your sis is know really sad because of the scratches she did to me while I was stoping the fight but also because of Deborah's attitudes toward \nme \" \n\n\" she's just sorry for that, give her time and she will find a way to apologize with you \" Ed said happily \n\n\" do you mean like dedicating a song to \nDavid? \" Pokeinfo added to Ed's advise \n\n\" what do you mean Poke? \" I asked curiously\n\n\" *giggle* Edna asked for permission to arrive home earlier to get ready for the big show tonight \" Pokeinfo said cheerfully \n\n\" do you think she will do that? \" I kept asking \n\n\" you can bet it, Cynthia told me that she was really sorry for what happened today so she wanted that her as well as Laura to be with her practicing and getting ready for the show tonight \" \n\n\" *sigh* you don't know how relieved I feel knowing that, she cried really sadly today that i thought she didn't want to talk to me for a long time \" \n\n\" well buddy, I hope you're feeling better now, let's try to have a great time today in the night \" Ed said happily \n\nWhen we all arrived to Ed's house we started to get ready for tonight's show, fortunately my mom as well as Poke's brought us some clothes to get dressed. After some time we looked really good and ready to spend a great time there at school show, by the way, Mr Fox and Miss Fox were also ready so they drove us to the school really fast to get good sits. We arrive just in time, there were some good sits in the first row\n\n\" where is Edna, I thought she would come with us? \" I asked eager to hear her beautiful voice singing at the stage \n\n\" she stills at Cynthia's house getting dressed as well as practicing the song she's going to sing \" \n\n\" great, I know she will beat Deborah easily \" I said really confident\n\nBy that time the principal came and greeted everyone in the auditorium and made the show to start. A lot of students and people from other schools sang but just the ones that make myself really impatient to hear were Edna and Deborah. I got worried because Edna wasn't there with me since the show started but then Laura and Cynthia arrived\n\n\" hi everybody \" Both greeted\n\n\" hi Cynthia, isn't Edna with you? \" I asked directly\n\n\" we left her at the entrance of the school, some cops wanted to ask her something \" \n\nI was about to ask why but at that time the principal introduced Deborah to the public in the auditorium. I knew something wasn't going right at that moment \n\n\" we need to take you to the police station, there are some questions about the murders that happened here that we want to ask \nyou \" one of those cops said to Edna \n\n\" I'm going to sing at today's contest, I need to go now, mind if we let those questions for tomorrow? \" Edna said turning back to head to the auditorium \n\n\" no, you need to stay here \" the cop said while taking Edna's arm roughly \n\n\" hey! Keep your hands off me, that hurts, stop! \" Edna said trying to get off his hand \n\n\" does it hurts?! \" the other cops say laughing while the one that was taking Edna's arm did it even stronger \n\nI was about to leave my chair and look for Edna personally but at that time Deborah start singing. A cold shiver ran throughout my whole body at the time I heard her voice, it was just hypnotizing, so strong that forced me to go back to my sit against my will\n\n\" please leave me now! \" Edna shouted\n\n\" look at this, isn't it cute \" the cops said sarcastically while changing themselves into some kind of evil shadows\n\n\" you're gonna die here!! \" all the shadows shouted in unison with a demoniacal voice\n\n\" I will say it one more time, leave me now \" Edna said firmly \n\n\" *evil laugh* or what?!, do you even know who are you you talking with? \" the evil shadow said with an evil voice tone\n\n\" I'm talking to a stupid shadow spirit that doesn't knows who is he facing \" Edna said summoning a pair of white wings from its back \n\nA white brightly aura surrounded her body and a warm but deadly light started to light the shadows burning them \n\n\" *extremely pain scream* who are you??!! \" \n\n\" remember my name and fear it, I'm Edna Fox and I'm a light angel \"\n\n\nChapter 13\n\nI was unable to move, my whole body was hypnotized hearing that song. I was screaming from my insides to freed myself from that voice that was causing me to be like that, but it was useless, my body was a puppet that the song controlled\n\n\" *takes the shadow's neck strongly* tell me, who are you working for!? \" Edna said burning the neck of the shadow with its light aura \n\n\" it's gonna be too late to save your boyfriend \n*evil laugh*..... you have lost \" the shadow laughed ignoring the pain Edna was producing to him and the other shadows that were in the floor shouting in pain \n\nEdna destroyed those shadows with even a more powerful light that came from her wings. When she was rushing to the auditorium to save me, small pieces of the shadows she had destroyed gather towered creating another shadow with a big needled whip on its hand. The shadow whipped Edna in the back making her to fell in the ground, she screamed in great pain but then she stood up and created a whip made from pure light, the one she used to disintegrate the shadow whipping it just one time. She wanted to fly to get faster to the auditorium but she couldn't, the wound at her back was bleeding and losing a lot of blood. She ran to get the auditorium from the main door, it's was a great pain for her, she was losing a lot if blood from her injury but she was still running carelessly. I was hearing Deborah's song without moving my body but when she made a slow solo in her song my body stood up by itself and walked to directly to the stage, all the people there thought it was part of the presentation but I couldn't even shout for help. When my body stop moving Deborah took my hands and kissed me passionaly in my mouth, Edna reach the main door and opened it at the same time Deborah kissed me, Edna just kneeled shouting my name while crying. I recovered control of my body hearing her sweet voice calling me but it was too late, I just stepped back after that kiss\n\n\" awwww sorry little cousin but I think I got that kiss I wanted for so long \" Deborah said evilly \n\n\" now that i taste him like that, I want to go to the main course \" she said jumping to my neck biting me hardly while sucking my blood \n\nIt was the worst pain I have felt until that day. In the floor of the scenery I just saw everybody running to escape and Edna with a pair of white wings in her back that lighted all the place with a warm light, Deborah was also with a pair of black wings and her eyes turned red blood when she opened them, Edna's light burned Deborah so she escaped disappearing in a black aura that covered her body. I was in the brink of dead, I could felt how my life was leaving my body, but at that exact moment Edna kissed me and her wings started to shine with a healing light, I touched Edna's back and realized about her wound before the light made me black out for that moment.\n\n\nChapter 14\n\nI woke up in a hospital and the first thing I saw was Edna in front of me, she was caressing my face kindly, I couldn't remember what happened exactly but the first thing I did was to hug Edna lovely\n\n\" I love you.... \" she whispered to my ear softly\n\nI was about to tell the same but I felt something strange in Edna's back so I move my hand under her upper clothes and I felt a large scar, she jumped back really scared\n\n\" it wasn't a dream, you were the angel that saved me last night!! \" I said really surprised \n\n\" what are you talking about sweetie \" she said smiling a bit nervous \n\n\" don't try to fool me, I remember everything, you were the angel that healed my neck wound when I was about to die! \" I said loudly\n\n\" I think your medicines are making you to have this kind of illusions \" she said nervously \n\nI stood up from my bed and walked directly to Edna \n\n\" sweetie you mustn't get up, you're still \nweak \" Edna said while walking backwards seeing me walking firmly toward her\n\n\" *stops suddenly really close to Edna's face* look at my eyes.......you know everything about me, I share with you the purest love in this world, so my question is...... Why you haven't being truth to me all this time? \" I said a bit loudly \n\n\" you can't know it! \" Edna shouted with teary eyes \n\n\" so it's useless for me to keep living a lie, I thought you really loved me \" I said about to leave my room \n\n\" WAIT!!! DON'T LEAVE ME AGAIN!!!! \" Edna shouted while crying sadly \n\n\" I won't lose you another time!!!....... If you want the truth ok...... I'm an angel!!!........ I hope you're happy now knowing that you have such a freak as girlfriend *cries* \" she said sarcastically at the end \n\nI felt shocked but happy at that time, now I knew she had the strength to tell me the truth\n\n\" *goes back hugging her lovely* I LOVE YOU \" I said firmly to Edna \n\n\" no you don't!, you said it, it is useless to live such a lie with the person you really loved \" Edna said really sad\n\n\" what do you think, that made me wake up this morning? \" I said softly being sorry about those words I should never pronounce \n\n\" *sniff*........ I don't know, maybe you're ok now \" \n\n\" sorry but that isn't the answer I want you to tell me \" \n\n\" *she looks at me with teary eyes* is true that thing you tell me when we first met?........ Those sweet words, that your heart just beats for me \" \n\n\" I thought you forgot about it....... Now do you get me?, if I haven't your love with me I would die because simply I lost everything I have \" \n\n\" ............\" Edna remained silent \n\n\" if you think those are just hopeless and lying \nwords....... Leave me her and now........ I can't take looking you so sad like that, but please forgive me \" I said sadly with teary eyes kneeling on the floor\n\nEdna was with her head down, all that I saw was a single tear falling from her face \n\n\" all this time I thought you were just the same as the others....... They just loved me because I pleased them whenever they \nwanted......... \" Edna said with her head down\n\n\" but now I know I was badly wrong......... I LOVE YOU DAVID \" she said kissing me passionaly \n\nIt's hard to describe......... The only thing I felt at that moment was a pure and intense feeling of love....... I stop hearing my own heart for a moment. When she stopped I looked kindly to those black eyes of her \n\n\" watching you cry just destroys my heart, I can't take it to see you like that \" I said seeing Edna crying softly again\n\n\" these tears aren't sadness ones, they are my heart shouting that it feels the same for you \"\nEdna said looking at me \n\n\" I promise to love you until the end of time, even until my own soul stops existing but please never leave me \" I said while taking Edna's hand lovely\n\n\" awww cutie, I promise you to be there just for you, to spend all my life with you and to love you until the end of time \"\n\nWe talked for hours that seemed like seconds for me, she told me everything about her, and I felt so happy to know she wasn't hiding anything from me, because everything that she told me I imagined long time ago the first time I saw her\n\n\" know I can truly said that I'm the luckiest guy in the world for finding such a beautiful and lovely fallen angel just for me \" I said happily \n\n\" can I ask you something?........ The first time I met you I had a great dream of you entering to my room from the window I have \nthere...... \" I was saying until Edna continued\n\n\" *giggle* do you want to know if I was that angel you saw that night? \" Edna said happily\n\n\" yes...... \" \n\n\" hehehe, yes I was........ Please close your eyes, I think I can do something for you to live that dream you had \" \n\nWhen I closed my eyes I felt that warm light for some moments and then Edna told me to open them. I couldn't believe what I was seeing, Edna was completely naked with that pair of white wings on her back\n\n\" what do you think? \" Edna asked playfully and happily too\n\nI was speechless, I couldn't believe it, she looked like the angel that came to my room that night. I saw her so beautiful, like the pure expression of love and beauty in front of me \n\n\" *giggle*....... Let me guess, do you think I'm the pure expression of love and beauty don't you? \" she said smiling to me\n\n\" how did you know?! \" I asked impressed for her accuracy to read my thoughts \n\n\" well, it's just a little ability I have when I use my wings *smiles* but I didn't have to use it, I know you more than perfect to read your mind without any problems \" Edna said giggling happily \n\n\" hehehe, ok my little angel *walks and gets really close to Edna* what I'm about to do right now? \" I asked playfully \n\n\" your suggestive eyes are just enough to tell you what \" Edna said kissing me while making me laid on the bed \n\nI knew something special about her since the first time I talked to her, now I can say that it wasn't her wings, it was her lovely heart that is full of love to give everyone but specially to me.........-\n\n\nChapter 15\n\n- that was the end of my dream, and is how my heart feels looking Edna everyday. The dreams are the representations of our deepest wishes and thoughts and I think my heart gave me a lot to think when I dreamt this. Its maybe too fantastic but everytime I think that I read my story again and repeat to myself: \" what is the point of dreaming if you don't let your imagination run free \". -\n\n\n\nLove can be expressed in so many ways but who are you dedicating your love is the important thing. For me, the phrase \"love temptations are paid with blood \" is more than a single way to tell how does love means for people that feel it in its pure form. Don't change your love for anything you could buy or get in exchange, because living without love is worst than leaving without soul \n\n\nTHE END\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "ONE NIGHT DREAM


DISCLAIMER: "School Days" is a Palcomix production. Based on the lives, events and places created by Krezz Karavan and company. All characters belong to their respective owners. This story is concepted and written by DC7RedFox.All cubs involved in this story are of complete fiction, those who do not understand fiction, nor the antics the following cubs, or the situations involved, should not be reading this story. This story is not to be reproduced, copied, or otherwise published anywhere, in any way shape or form, without the express permission of the author.

Chapter 1

Diary: the price of temptation

-Well...... I had a weird dream a few days ago, I don't know if it means something but it was really clear, " love temptations are paid with blood". At this time I told Edna about my dream, she got a little scared at the beginning but at the end she hugged me lovely whispering playfully to my ear
" Sometimes this little angel that you're looking right now  *winks her eye* also wants to bite you but I resist myself of doing that just because I know other ways to eat you up when we are alone " after saying that she showed me those "ways" she was talking about at her house. I really love when she talks me like that, after all she really knows how to make myself always begging for more.
I wanted to write my dream here, anyway I need to keep it here so I don't forget such a terrifying but nice experience.-

-there was just a normal day, I woke up early in the morning to have breakfast and get ready for school, the bus arrived just in time and I got up as normal, I saw Edna waiting for me at the back seats
"hi cutie, how are you? " Edna greeted me

"I'm great now that I'm with you again hehe"

"lets make your day a little better so " she said while kissing me

Everyone in the bus was cheering and piffling us. I don't know what was the best part of everyday in the bus, those daily kisses of her, or the fact that I never get tired if it *sigh*, anyway those things just make me love going on the school bus. When we got to the bus stop everyone left the bus and went straight to their classes, I walked with Edna through
the main hall when we heard the principal calling her and Ed by the speakers
" good morning students, Edna and Edward Fox please be present at my office at this moment, thanks "


Chapter 2

After the speaker transmission Edna farewelled me and when to the principal's office with Ed, I wanted to go with her but when I was heading there too the bell rang and I didn't have other option to went directly to my classroom. In the meantime I was thinking about the reason of that call from the principal when someone knocked the class door, it was Ed and Edna asking for permission to get in the class, Edward gave the teacher a note signed by the principal and both got in but also a strange girl entered at that moment with them

" attention everybody we have a new student, do you want to present yourself sweetie? " The teacher said, but the new girl just remained in silence with her head a little down

"well don't be shy just tell us you name so"
But the girl didn't respond she just giggled softly

" anyway...... For everyone to know this girl is a far cousin from Edna and Ed so please be gentle and kind with her at her first day here, ok take sit at the back in the empty chair please " the teacher said

I wasn't paying much attention at what he said,  I was asking Edna about that when the girl sat down at the back. The classes were really boring but the new girl remained in silent at the back, I couldn't saw her during all that time, she was just at the ending chair of the classroom. When the break bell rang everybody went out, I was with Edna taking our books from the lockers for the subject we had after the break when that girl approached to my back and hugged me


Chapter 3

I got shocked at that moment but what happened after that was even worse

" well my little cousin you weren't kidding, your boyfriend seems to be really cute *licks my ear* and he's also really tasty"
The mysterious girl said while giggling

Edna made me step aside while pushing that girl. I didn't realize before but that girl looked just like Edna's twin, she was a black furred vixen with white eyes the same height as Edna, but not only her height were the same but also her face and hair style. I just couldn't believe it, I thought I was imagining that but it was too real to think that

" you're maybe my cousin but I never gave you permission to ever touch my boyfriend like that, if you even think to do that again I swear that you're gonna lament the day you were born " Edna said really angry

" so you mean I can't do this " she said while kissing me in the cheek

" you bitch, I warned you about that, now you will see what's really bad" Edna said while dropping her books and slapping her in the face

Edna's cousin was also about to continue the fight but at that time I manage to separate them, I never saw Edna acting like that before it was the first time I saw her slapping other girl

" ok is enough!.... I don't want any of you to do that again, specially you.......... "

" Deborah, my name is Deborah " she said

" anyway I don't want you to do that again Deborah, I'm Edna's boyfriend, so respect me and her because I won't let anyone here to make Edna uncomfortable because of that "

" sorry but I just can't resist myself having such a hot fox in front of me " she said teasingly

" you know what, I'm not interested! Ok, I don't want anything with you " I said firmly and clearly for her to understand

" really sad to hear, I could give you even more than this foolish vixen could ever give to you, but anyway, I'm going to take a look to the school yards, so see you both later.... Specially you my tasty fox " she said while winking her eye toward me before leaving

" Just let's go Edna, there is no reason to still here " I said trying to take Edna away from Deborah

" I'm too angry to let her get away like that "
Edna said furiously trying to follow Deborah

" * takes her hand and kisses her passionaly  *
I'm just for you and that will never change "

She blushed but she still was a little angry with Deborah for doing that. I took Edna to the cafeteria to have lunch and to get some explanations about what happened there


Chapter 4

When we arrive there I offered Edna to bring her lunch to the table so she can calm down a little, she was really happy at that moment, It was just like if all the anger and retaliative feelings gone away from her mind. She sat with Pokeinfo, Cynthia, Laura and Ed at a big table

" there you are cutie, here is your lunch " I said kindly

" thanks David........ I wanted to apologize with you because of what happened at the hall, I'm not like that, you know, but I couldn't stop myself when I saw her teasing you like that "
Edna said sorry for what happened before

" don't worry, I understand that feeling but I don't care if she wants me or not, you can trust me, I will never change you for anyone "
I said kindly looking her beautiful eyes

" I suppose that you would want to know more about that, don't you? "

" yeah, that will help me to understand this situation better, but also there is no reason for you to tell me at this moment if you don't want "

" It's ok, I was a little messed up with her at this moment, but now I feel better knowing that everything is alright between you and me.......... Well, I don't know much about her, the principal called us in the morning to tell about her arrive to this school, she's a far cousin from my family but I also couldn't believe it when I saw her face, it was really weird to look someone just like my twin " Edna said a little shocked

" but you don't have to worry David she's just going to stay until the end of the singing regionals, she's representing her school for that contest, so when it's over she will return there " Edward said hopefully

" *sigh* I think this will be a long time having her at our classroom, she's just too annoying with all that teasing, but anyway what's her name? " I asked a bit interested

" Deborah, her name is Deborah Black Rose....... Yuk my mouth just becomes bitter when I pronounce that name " Edna said sicken to repeat Deborah's name

" lets fix that " I said briefly while kissing her
" *giggle* do you feel better now? "

Edna was about to answer when Deborah sat on the table next to me

" please tell me that you're giving away those kisses, because I can't hold myself looking you both like that, if you don't care little cousin I want one from him " Deborah said teasingly

Edna was about to slap her again but fortunately a short idea came to my mind at that moment

" do you mean these kisses Deborah? " I said while kissing Edna again preventing her to stand up and slap Deborah

I didn't give her a chance to answer that I just continue giving her a taste from her own medicine

" mmmm,  I bet that ANY! girl could kiss me like you do Edna....... Ooo sorry I forgot that you still here Deborah ( I said sarcastically ), anyway I think I'm not up to give any more good kisses, the last one was for my dear Edna " I said smiling sarcastically

" *giggle* No need to be sorry I can wait until tomorrow, but if you promise to give me two kisses that day " she said while winking her eye

" *sarcastic laugh* well well, I see that you're really persistent but let me tell you that I won't give you anything and I won't change my opinion until I die, so I recommend you to wait....... I don't know, like FOREVER to get something from me " I said sarcastically being tough with Deborah

Edna got my point and she also helped me with the payback, it was really funny, everyone there was giggling about that situation

" don't worry sweetie I can wait for you forever if it's necessary " Edna said while caressing my face knowing that Deborah was watching

Deborah was disappointed at that moment But she never stopped to look me with those suggestive eyes of her.

" what about if you go and get some lunch Deborah, the break is almost over " Edward said trying to change the conversation

" I ate something before coming to the cafeteria, but I wouldn't mind if David is my dessert "  she said while giggling

I was about to get things really clear for her to understand, I was tired of all that teasing but at that time a scaring and loud shout was heard......


Chapter 5

" HELP PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! " a girl shouted

Everyone in the cafeteria went out to the school yards to see what happened, we all stood up and ran to see who shouted like that and why, when we got there we saw a horrific scene. There was a bunny girl hugging the dead body of her boyfriend, the one that was dead because a deep bite on his neck, it was just horrible, that girl was crying loudly covered with her boyfriend's blood all over her body

" *loud cry* please Matt don't leave me!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!! I BEG YOU!!!!! *devastated shout* " the bunny girl cried

Edna took my hand and got closer to me.  if that scene shocked me like that, I couldn't imagine how sad and scared Edna was at that moment. In the meantime the teachers ran to the yards with the nurse, they made everyone to step back while the nurse covered the bunny girl with a blanket and take her to the nursery, that girl didn't stop shouting, she wanted to be with her dead boyfriend but the nurse just took her gave her a sedative to calm her down.
By the time the ambulance and the police came, the principal called the students to the main auditorium to take preventive actions about this situation

*whispers and a lot of random talking were heard *

" silence! " the principal shouted a bit nervous

" this school meeting is going to take preventive actions for the safety of all the students, from this day until the problem is solved, all the students from every age must  
return to their respective houses in groups of three people, no one will go out of this school without his or her group, in the case the classroom has a number of students that not match with the group assignment, they can make bigger groups but all of them must have at least one boy as the leader member....... We will overcome this situation, please make your best to follow the instructions and care about your group members " the principal said being insecure of himself but hoping the best from this situation

When the meeting ended all the students went back to classes and tried to continue as normal as the things could be at that moment. I thought my day couldn't be even worse at that moment but the day wasn't over yet.......


Chapter 6

When we arrive to our classroom the teacher gave us time to make our groups, sadly we couldn't join all our friends in one so we separate in two groups, I don't know how I accepted Deborah to be in my group, possibly because she was Edna's cousin and she was alone at that moment, anyone wanted to be part of her group. Edna didn't complained because she was my third group member, I was happy because of that, In that way I would spend even more time with her but the bitter part was that Deborah won't make the things easy for us both

" I know David will be always by my side to protect me of any danger or person who wants to harm me " Deborah said while hugging me with a big smile

Edna took my arm and get me off that hug, but instead she hugged me also

" awww I'm sorry to tell you this Deborah but David had been doing that with me since we met, so I doubt that he cares about such a slut like you " Edna said while smiling sarcastically

" don't worry I know he will " Deborah said while pulling again my arm

" I bet he won't " Edna said pulling my other arm

" he will " Deborah pulled  
" he won't " Edna pulled
" he will " Deborah pulled
" he won't!! " Edna pulled while shouting
" he will!! " Deborah pulled while shouting too

Both where pulling my arms side to side to hug me, I didn't know if I was enjoying it or simply it was some kind of annoying fun

" OK IT'S ENOUGH!! " I shouted a bit mad

" I'm not a toy, please stop this fight....... "

Edna and Deborah hugged me when I finished

" you're just too cute, you don't want any fight between us " Edna said happily while hugging me

" I can say I agree with my little cousin, I bet there isn't other guy as kind as you are " Deborah said while hugging me

I was really ashamed, all my classmates where giggling at us, I didn't care but if Edna and Deborah continued like that, I knew I would spend a lot of time stoping fights like those. When the things cooled down between them I got some time to speak Ed and Pokeinfo at the break time

" guys I don't know how I will survive this days with Edna and Deborah fighting like that " I said disappointed

" awww don't worry dude, I know my sister will find something to get you distracted from all this mischief " Edward said playfully

" that would help but Deborah won't leave us alone since we made the groups " I said thinking about some ideas for Edna and me to be alone

" I don't get you, why are you so annoyed with Deborah and Edna fighting for your attention. I would be really happy knowing I have two girls that do everything I ask for without doubting " Pokeinfo said teasingly

" *giggle* let me ask you something Poke, how would you react if you have a girl that looks like Cynthia but she wants to be with you every single second and also she fights all the time with Cynthia for your attention?..... Before you answer, think about Cynthia and tell me how would she felt like? "

" well, looking the things like that I know is going to be a hard time for you three " Pokeinfo said thinking in what I told him

" I don't care if something happens to me, but I'm playing with fire letting Edna and Deborah fight like that for me, because if I share my attention just with Edna Deborah wouldn't stop teasing me, but if I spend more time with Deborah I'm risking my relationship with Edna and that is what I don't want to do " I said worried about the situation

" what about if you make a deal with both? "
Edward said thinking in a wonderful plan

" deal? " I asked curiously

" yup, tell my sis and Deborah that you will move to another group if they continue fighting like that, I'm sure Edna and Deborah wouldn't like that so they will try to be patient with each other to make you stay "
Edward said cleverly

" wow Ed, that is a great idea, thanks buddy I will try it to see what happens " I said happily

By the time I saw all the girls returning from
the cafeteria, so I decided to try Ed's plan to see what happens. Deborah came up first and greeted me

" I missed you so much David, I'm eager to spend this week just with you " she said while hugging me

Edna didn't stay like nothing hearing that, she pushed Deborah aside

" I know you will spend this week with me and with no one else, I'm really happy to be in your group sweetie " Edna said while kissing me

That was clearly the beginning of another fight, Deborah was about to push Edna back, so I made both to step back

" I didn't want to reach this point but if you both don't stop this ridiculous fights I swear I will ask the teacher to change me to another group "

Both were shocked with my reaction at that time, Edna was looking me with really sad eyes

" But David...... I don't want you to leave our group, I was hoping to spend a great time with you " Edna said sadly

" neither me, please stay in our group " Deborah said a bit sadly

" *sigh* I need to talk with you both " I took Edna's and Deborah's hands and took them to a quieter place

We left all the sound of the hall and we get to a bench near the library, I know talking both with the truth wouldn't be easy but it was the best for this moment. We sat on the bench and I took a deep breath before start talking

" I need you both to listen..... I'm not playing when I told that I would change to another group if you two continue like that. Edna, I don't know why are you so jealous about Deborah......." I said softly at the end

" because I don't want to lose you, I don't know what would I do without your love " she said about to cry

" do you remember the promise I made you when we had our first date? " I said taking her hand kindly

" you told me that you won't let anybody hurt me again, that you will be always by my side to take care of me........" she said feeling disappointed with herself

" I'm keeping that promise and I will until I die, because your love is what I treasure the most in my heart " I said lovely while caressing her cute face

Edna then hugged me lovely hearing my words, I was really happy to make her understand that she won't lose me but now I have to face Deborah that was hearing all of that conversation

" Deborah, I'm really sorry to tell you but Edna is the only one for me, I promised her to give everything I have to protect her no matter what, and that includes you and any other people that makes her feel bad " I said firmly and clearly  

" .........I Promise I would do anything for you, I won't care what happens to me if you are next to me " she said trying to make myself change of opinion

" don't make promises that you won't accomplish, I know you won't do anything for me "

" If you don't believe me ask for any of those things you think I can't do for you "

" what would you do if I ask you to be just friends "

" but....." she was about to continue until I interrupt her

" or what would you do if I ask you to understand that I love Edna and anything will never make me change of mind " I stated my point as polite as I could

" that's not fair, I bet that you wouldn't do those things for Edna " she said really sad

" even if you don't believe me..... I would....... But those two things are just my worst fear, I know I would accept to do both but I would die without Edna's love " I said trying to make Deborah understand my point

She was speechless, she looked me with teary eyes that really made me feel bad at that moment, but I should know that she won't give up so easy. When the classes were over I was taking some books from my locker when I found a note written by Deborah

"- if you don't want to hear my heart reasons, I will tell you what my body wants, be prepared because I know I will catch you all when I finish with this-"

I threw that note away, hoping that she wasn't meaning what I think she did. But sadly my doubts were bitterly answered the next day


Chapter 7

I finished to take my books from the locker to take Edna and Deborah home, we walked out of the school directly to Deborah's house so Edna and me have all they way back to hers just for us

" who could do such an horrible thing to the bunny's boyfriend " Edna asked a bit scared while walking with us

" what is really strange is that the fangs that bit his neck weren't as any other fangs I have seen before " I replied while thinking were had I seen those fangs before

Deborah remained silent and uncomfortable with the conversation, I just started to talk about something else to stop messing with her mood

" anyway...... Let's talk about the singing regionals "

" well........ I hope to give my best to make my school proud of me " Deborah said distracted

" I wish you the best, but Edna is also going to sing there so it will be a hard competition for you both " I said measuring my words to prevent another fight

" I know I can win this one easily, I just need David to be there and I won't lose " Edna said happily while taking my hand

By the time we got to Deborah's house I realized that all the way there she was kind of distracted and quite, like if something was making her feel puzzled for some reason

" I think this is farewell, see you two tomorrow " she said as she returned to her normal mood

Deborah gave me a kind hug, I thought she desisted about her idea of the note she sent me earlier in the morning but I was badly mistaken

" be ready for your surprise tomorrow in the morning, my cute tasty fox " she whispered to my ear

I tried to not react at the words she whispered to my ear, I didn't want Edna to know about Deborah's plans for tomorrow

" see you tomorrow, I hope you get the things I told you today in the morning " I said trying to make her desist of what she was planing to do

" don't worry I got you perfectly, but you already know my response don't you? " she said teasingly

" ok, it's getting dark in here, let's go Edna, I don't want you to be late for dinner " I said while taking her hand and walking faster to get far of Deborah's house

" tsk tsk tsk, oohh my tasty fox, I better get ready for tomorrow, I want you to be mine and I don't care what do I have to do for that,  and I really mean that I don't care what *giggle* " she said for herself as I walked to Edna's house

If I had heard those words I wouldn't let her get close to me and Edna never again.


Chapter 8

As we walked to her house she noticed me nervous as well as worried too

" what happen David? " Edna asked worried while pulling my hand back to slow me down

" the murder thing gets me worried for your brother as well as Poke, that's all, nothing to worry sweetie " I said as I tasted the rotten flavor of lying Edna for the sake of our relationship

We were close to her house and she took my hand taking me inside. She sat me on a couch of her living room and asked me to wait there

" be right back cutie, I know something that will make all your worries disappear, But first I need to check upstairs " she said while kissing me

" ok sweetie take your time " I said happily

As Edna went upstairs I went to her kitchen for a glass of water, I needed to clear my mind so she doesn't suspect anything about Deborah's note

" I don't know how but I will fix that obsession that Deborah has with me " I said for my insides

Hoping the best I washed my face with some water to cool myself down but that didn't help me when I got back to the living room

" *sigh* don't worry just make yourself comfortable and enjoy this moment with
Edna " I said lowly for myself as I sat down on the couch

But at that moment I smelled a sweet and delicious scent that easily erased all my problems and worries. Was Edna coming downstairs wearing a nice baby doll with all her cute body perfumed with a charming strawberry scent

" *giggle* my parents left a note at my room saying that they are going to be late for dinner because they have an important work meeting, and also my bro isn't home so we have a lot of time for us to be alone and have some fun " Edna said while licking my ear

" I waited all day long for you to tell me that "
I said really horny

" I don't want you to keep waiting so " she said while kissing me passionately

Edna sat on my legs and started to take off my shirt. She licked me all way down, when she got to my pants, she took out my cock and started to work me out

" *moaning* you were always really skilled doing this " I said enjoying Edna's blowjob

" I have a cute boyfriend that loves me to practice with him *smiles* " Edna said while playing deeper with her muzzle

" *loud moaning* I can't take it anymore!..... I'm cumming!! " I said while feeling Edna enjoying my cum in her mouth

" *smiles tasting her lips* I love when you shot your cum like that, it's just too sweet " Edna said while giving me a seductive and lovely look

" mind if I return the favor? " I asked playfully while taking off her baby doll

" of course not, but I think is too hot in here, it must be you that make me feel this way "

" let me get more comfortable " she said while pulling down her panties and putting them in my school bag

" just a little present for you when you get home " she said while winking her eye to me

" I know exactly what to give you back for such a nice present " I said while making Edna to lay on her back

I kissed her neck and licked her cute nipples going my way down to get to her wet pussy. I used my fingers while licking her, she was moaning pleasantly

" don't stop *moaning*  this is incredible..... Awww I'm almost there " Edna said really pleased and horny

" I guess is my time to get a bit deeper " I said rubbing her G-spot

" *loud moaning* awww!!! I'm cumming!!!! " she said ecstatic

I licked all her cum and let her pussy cleaned as she moaned a bit after the pleasant orgasm she had

" I love when you cum like that when I play with your erogenous zones " I said looking her cute body  

" you get all my body heated when you do that, it's delicious..... Give me more please, that was incredible " she said lustfully getting close to me

" never mind to let you that horny "

Then I drilled her tight pussy in doggy style just like she loved as well I played with her nipples when she cummed again. She was really horny when I touched her G-spot, she's really energetic and tight when I do that. When we finished we were laid at a fluffy carpet in her living room, she got close to me and hugged me by the chest
 
" You're always so warm, so lovely " she said relaying her head on my chest

" I'm really sorry for doubting about the love that you have for me " she continued

" *kisses Edna* my love..... My dear and lovely Edna, I trust you but better than that I love you, and that will never change, no matter what you will always be my best, the only one for me..... My true love " I said looking kindly to those beautiful black eyes of her

Some tears rolled of her eyes, she was happy at that moment, being honest both of us were, for her I was determined to make Deborah understand that my love for Edna won't change, that she won't have any chance to make myself change of mind


Chapter 9

We talked there, laid at the living room
,completely naked, enjoying everything that our eyes were looking from each other. It was just incredible, but some time later we heard Ed's voice getting close through the main door, he was talking Poke after carrying Cynthia and Laura home. Edna and me rushed like any other time, our clothes were all over the living room, we made a mess yiffing on the couch as well in the carpet, but even worse is that we were completely naked

" *worried giggle* I think there's no way out of this one " I said rushing to clean some of the mess we did there

" I have an idea " she said while dressing up with her uniform again

" I'm going to distract Ed and Poke, by the way get dressed as well and hide my other clothes in the closet near the stairs " she said cleverly

" ok, great " I said briefly while dressing up too

In the time I cleaned up the mess at the living room and get myself dressed with my uniform, Edna opened the main door before Ed and Poke knocked it to distract them giving me more time

" hi Poke " Edna said hugging him
" hi bro " Edna also hugged his brother

" hi sis " Ed replied hugging Edna back

Ed started to get a little uncomfortable with Edna's hug, it was taking more time than a single greeting hug

" ok, it's something wrong Edna? " Ed asked curiously

" nope " she said briefly continuing hugging Ed

" so why is this hug taking so long? " Ed kept asking

" well..... Mmmm..... Aaa, because..... This day I feel huggable with everybody, that's all " Edna said playfully continuing hugging Ed

" ok...... Do you mind if we finish this hug for now? " Ed asked to make Edna stop the hug him

" nope, I don't mind " Edna said but still hugging Ed

" *sigh* can you stop hugging me please? " Ed asked a little teased

" ok ok....." Edna said stepping back
" now is Poke's turn " she said jumping toward Poke to hug him

" awww Edna we aren't going to be here all night " Ed said going straight to the door

" well I don't mind you know " Pokeinfo said giggling teasingly

" never mind, I'm going to have dinner now " Edward said about to open the main door

Edna run and got into her brother's path, she didn't let him to open the door

" ok Edna, I know that you're hiding something, tell me what is it right now " Edward said mad and impatient with Edna

" hiding something?..... What something do you mean exactly? " Edna said trying to fool her brother and Poke

" *sigh*...... I don't know, you tell me "

" well..... Aaa..... Is a beautiful night don't you think?, what about If we see this beautiful night sky for a while? "

" Edna, is windy in here and the sky is really cloudy, there's nothing to see this night "

" but anyway, we can stay here and wait, who knows if the weather change suddenly "

" enough ok, please let me go inside "

" but why? We are having a great time talking here "

" Edna, if you don't move I'm going to tell our patents you make me and Pokeinfo to stay outside the house with this windy weather for who knows what " Edward advertised Edna

" ......... Ok bro......" Edna said while stepping aside to let Ed and Poke to go in

Edna didn't know how to make them both to not enter the house, she hoped me to get everything ready for them when they enter. When they did they found me sat on the clean living room with Edna's math book on my hand

" hey guys what's up " I greeted both

" *laugh* I don't know how I didn't realize of this " Pokeinfo said playfully

" well well Edna, I know why you were that nervous now " Ed said as he giggled playfully

" wow wow, we were just doing the math homework Edna couldn't solve yesterday, that's all " I said nervous too

" tsk tsk tsk don't try to lie you both, I know you very well and I know that you can't resist yourselves when you're alone anywhere " Ed said winking his eye to me

" we'll if you mean we both use our free time for the best you're right, we were doing the math homework before you arrive " Edna said helping me

" Awww don't try to fool me with that, who does her or his homework when it's alone with his couple? Answer that " Pokeinfo said almost knowing what happened

" You know what, now that I realize of another thing why is the living room smelling to strawberry? " Pokeinfo said while sniffing somewhere close to the stair closet

" yeah, close to Edna is also smelling like that "
Edward said also sniffing next Edna

It was the break point, both realized about the only thing I couldn't hide from them when they entered. At the same time Poke opened the stair closet taking out Edna's clothes and Ed realized that Edna was the one that was using the strawberry perfume

*laugh* Ed and Poke laughed in unison
" I knew you both can't resist being alone here without yiffing " Edward said teasingly

Edna came to hug and kiss me, she was happy and a bit ashamed but when she got close to me she said

" at least we tried but it was really funny anyway " she said smiling lovely

" ok you both got us, but tell me how would I resist to not yiff her when I have the opportunity, she's just too beautiful " I said hugging Edna back

" hehehe, you two really love each other "
Pokeinfo said

" let's have dinner, I know you must be hungry after all that fun you had earlier "

" true " Edna and me said in unison


Chapter 10

After having a great dinner we played some video games until all the adults arrived home. They took Poke to his house as well mine took me some time later. After farewelling everybody I got in the car and my parents drive me home. I didn't noticed but I was still smelling to Edna's sweet perfume, but the one that did was my mother

" mmmm, I think Edna loves to hug you  " my mom said playfully while giggling

" how do you know? " I asked intrigated

 " all your body is smelling to a strawberry
perfume " my mom said looking at me

" *gasp* well she's really lovely and kind with me hehe " I said ashamed but happy

" take care of her, girls like those are really hard to find nowadays " my dad said while taking my moms hand kindly

" you don't need to tell me " I said smiling confidently  

When we got home I went to my room and laid on my bed to think, this day was like any other, my head thought a million of things at the same time about today but at the time I was about to make my own mood turn a mad and bitter one thinking about Deborah I smelled a sweet scent coming from my backpack, then I remembered Edna's little gift, I got really horny sniffing that mix of smells coming from Edna's panty, it was like smelling her wet privates once she used that perfume all over her body

" *deep sniff*......... *sigh* when she smells like that I just want to taste her cute body again and again....... How lucky I am for finding such a nice angel fallen from the sky "

After smelling it a bit more I hid the panty in a secret place in my room, knowing I would dream with Edna after enjoying her gift before sleeping.

The next day at school things started from bad to worse, when I arrive Edna greeted me as normal but at the time we got to the main hall things started to change to bad, Deborah ran and hugged me tightly greeting me

" David!, I missed you so much my tasty fox " Deborah said playfully

" hi Deborah " I said coldly

Edna was trying her best to be patient with Deborah but sadly Deborah always knows what to say to make Edna explode in anger at that time

" yesterday I slept reaaaally good " Deborah said happily

" why do you say that? " I asked knowing that I couldn't just ignore her

" I had a delicious wet dream with you " she said looking me with those suggestive eyes of her

Edna answered Deborah's comment in a sarcastic way trying to not slap her again with all the anger she had inside

" I'm happy to know but I'm more happy because I didn't had just a wet dream about him last night, instead of that I yiffed with David at my house and let me tell you that we had A LOT of fun, more than the one you could have in your poor little dream " Edna said sarcastically

" awww, that really make me feel sad, but you know what, the kisses David own me from yesterday will cheer up my day " Deborah said while getting closer to kiss me

" what??!!, I never accepted to give you those kisses " I said stepping aside

" but I know you really wanted to, don't worry about Edna, she will understand the love that we have "

" OK, THIS HAVE GONE TOO FAR!!!!! " Edna said really mad while slapping Deborah in the face

" I'm tired of you too!!! " Deborah said pulling Edna's hair hardly

Both started to fight in the main hall, they were pulling her hair, scratching each other and even kicking between them. I got myself in the middle of them to stop the fight, but I really got hurt doing that, they scratched me a lot of times and also I got slapped, when I manage to get Edna off that thing, the principal came to see what was happening, because there were a lot of students gathering around to see the fight

" ok ladies you two are coming to my office to talk about this, I hope my patience lasts enough to not give you detention when we get there, so move on! " the principal shouted stressed

" but she started! " Deborah said mad

" you have started this since you messed with me and David, so don't tell me that I started because I can finish it at this time right now " Edna said really mad with Deborah

" enough ladies, I don't care who started, if you don't behave well I would need to take drastic actions with you both "

At that time the principal took Edna and Deborah to his office, I waited for Edna a couple of minutes to speak her trying to calm her down. When she went out Deborah was still inside

" are you ok sweetie? " I asked worried for the fight injuries she had

" well yeah, the nurse took care of those wounds while the principal was talking with us " she said looking at me a bit sad

" hey why are you giving that look sweetie? "
I asked looking to her teary eyes

" .......... Those scratches........ I did that to you.....? "

" ........." I was speechless, I thought my fur covered those ones, but I also didn't want to lie her again, because she would be even more angry with Deborah if I tell her that she did those scratches to me

" ......... Sorry.........." she said while running crying sadly

I tried to follow her, but the bell rang at that moment and a lot of students went off her classrooms making me impossible to follow Edna. I went to the nursery to take some alcohol or bandages for those scratches, so at least she would see that I'm ok and it was just an accident. But I felt a little suspicious when I got in the nursery

" hi, excuse me, I came to take some alcohol and bandages, can go in? " I asked but I get no response

" well, I think the nurse must be at the teacher's lounge taking some coffee, i hope she doesn't care if i take what i need from here " I said for myself opening the medical supplies locker

At that time I felt someone in my back, and to make it worse when I turned myself back I saw Deborah wearing a nurse outfit with a small skirt

" not again!..... You're making me sick!!!! " I said jaded from all that teasing

" awww don't worry I'm here to make you feel better so don't be shy and let me check you " she said teasingly

" I'm off!!!! I don't want anymore problems since the others you caused this morning " I said trying to open the door realizing it was locked

" are you looking for this keys " she said showing the door keys playfully

" if you want them I hope you don't mind helping this naughty nurse with her full body check exam " She said handing a rectal thermometer in her hand hoping me to measure her temperature with that

" things aren't so easy with me, I'm leaving right now " I said breaking the door handlers with a kick

The door opened with any problem, then I just went out carelessly about the door being really mad with Deborah. But that was just the beginning.......


Chapter 11

Deborah was really mad, she broke the thermometer with her own hands, but she had an evil grin while leaving the nursery. I got even more worried looking that Edna wasn't anywhere I looked for her, but I didn't give up and start looking in more places. I should realize that someone was following me. Looking at the library to find Edna, I found a bitter surprise, I saw a girl dropping some books in front of me and I stopped for a moment to go and pic them up

" hey, you dropped this " I said while calling that girl that was reading

I managed to read the title of one of them, I got shocked when I gave back those books to the girl that was reading there

" what a nice and polite fox we have here " Deborah said standing of that table

She was dressed like a naughty schoolgirl using a little skirt

" *gasp*......... How did she change so fast her clothes?! " I thought while turning myself back and continue looking for Edna in other place

" please don't leave me, I have an important anatomy test and I need to study " Deborah said winking her eye to me

I continued my way out of the library knowing where she wanted to get with that explanation of the " anatomy test ". I walked looking for Edna in a lot of places more but I always found Deborah in another of her suggestive outfits. Looking for Edna in the gym I found Deborah in a cheerleading suit, when I went to the auditorium I saw Deborah wearing a devil outfit from the theatrical clothes, when I went to the pool side I saw Deborah in a tight bathing suit. I was getting crazy, I couldn't find Edna and also Deborah teased me all day long with her outfits. And now Is were my day came from bad to worst. When I was taking my books from the locker to go home, another scream was heard in the boys locker room. That thing that was killing the boys here in the school struck again but this time it killed two boys in an horrible way, the first one was bit in the neck and died because of a massive lose of blood, but this two others had  a lot of scratches and signs of fight in their body but also that mortal bite in their necks. This time the cops carried both of the bodies to make a detailed autopsy to know what was happening, as the principal made all the students to step back with the help of the teachers I heard him talking to a cop in there

" not again!!, this murders have to stop right now! " the principal shouted to the cop

" calm down, we're working on it " the cop said a bit shocked also

" calm down?!, how the hell do you expect me to do that?!!, all the patents of this students are afraid to send their child to school because of this things, now how I'm going to tell them two more students died like that again? " the principal said really worried and nervous

" we need time to find the murderer but for now I need you to stay calm and continue as always just for some time more " the cop said looking to the crime scene

" *sigh* what about today's singing contest?, I don't think anyone here would come after this " the principal said worried

" mmmm, try to not cancel it for any reason, at this time the murderer is looking for someone specific to kill, this kind of people act by some kind of impulse that made them do this. I'm pretty sure that he or she will come to the contest to strike again " the cop said firmly

" do you think is a student from this school?! "

" at this time we don't have any proves, but this could go even worst if we don't stop it right now. About the patents of the students, don't worry about them, I'll take care of it, but I need you to make the students to change of mind and make them come for that contest, this could be the only chance we have to catch the the killer "

" ok I'll do my best, call to my office if anything comes out to light "

" You will be the first to be informed " the cop said leaving with their partners


Chapter 12

By the time they all gone and the situation was a bit cooled, the principal called us for another meeting at the auditorium. As i was going there I felt strangely alone, I didn't even know where Edna was and what was worse is that I also got a bit worried for Deborah

*whispers and some shouts at the back*

" silence please, I want to let you know that the singing contest will be this night as it was planned........ " the principal was saying when a chipmunk boy interrupted him

" do you think we'd planned to return here after what happened?! " the chipmunk guy said shocked

" anyway how do we know that we aren't going to be in danger for that thing of the serial murders " the chipmunk guy continued

" well, the point of continuing this contest is to make everybody a bit more calm and relaxed with this situation, but if no one is going to come I can understand that you don't want the extra credits for assisting tonight "

" Extra credits? " a lot of students whispered and talked about that

" that's the gift if you come today in the night. It is just a way to make you all feel more comfortable and positive during this bad times we're facing " the principal concluded

All the students stood up and clapped really loud hearing those good news, with that, the principal knew they would come without forcing them. Taking my backpack from the classroom I saw Ed and Poke doing the same

" hey David how are you? " Ed asked kind of worried

" why do you ask? " I asked back

" it's because of the fight between Edna and Deborah today in the morning "

" well, it went worst than I expected, your sis is know really sad because of the scratches she did to me while I was stoping the fight but also because of Deborah's attitudes toward
me "  

" she's just sorry for that, give her time and she will find a way to apologize with you " Ed said happily

" do you mean like dedicating a song to
David? " Pokeinfo added to Ed's advise

" what do you mean Poke? " I asked curiously

" *giggle* Edna asked for permission to arrive home earlier to get ready for the big show tonight " Pokeinfo said cheerfully

" do you think she will do that? " I kept asking

" you can bet it, Cynthia told me that she was really sorry for what happened today so she wanted that her as well as Laura to be with her practicing and getting ready for the show tonight "

" *sigh* you don't know how relieved I feel knowing that, she cried really sadly today that i thought she didn't want to talk to me for a long time "

" well buddy, I hope you're feeling better now, let's try to have a great time today in the night " Ed said happily

When we all arrived to Ed's house we started to get ready for tonight's show, fortunately my mom as well as Poke's brought us some clothes to get dressed. After some time we looked really good and ready to spend a great time there at school show, by the way, Mr Fox and Miss Fox were also ready so they drove us to the school really fast to get good sits. We arrive just in time, there were some good sits in the first row

" where is Edna, I thought she would come with us? " I asked eager to hear her beautiful voice singing at the stage

" she stills at Cynthia's house getting dressed as well as practicing the song she's going to sing "

" great, I know she will beat Deborah easily " I said really confident

By that time the principal came and greeted everyone in the auditorium and made the show to start. A lot of students and people from other schools sang but just the ones that make myself really impatient to hear were Edna and Deborah. I got worried because Edna wasn't there with me since the show started but then Laura and Cynthia arrived

" hi everybody " Both greeted

" hi Cynthia, isn't Edna with you? " I asked directly

" we left her at the entrance of the school, some cops wanted to ask her something "

I was about to ask why but at that time the principal introduced Deborah to the public in the auditorium. I knew something wasn't going right at that moment

" we need to take you to the police station, there are some questions about the murders that happened here that we want to ask
you " one of those cops said to Edna

" I'm going to sing at today's contest, I need to go now, mind if we let those questions for tomorrow? " Edna said turning back to head to the auditorium

" no, you need to stay here " the cop said while taking Edna's arm roughly

" hey! Keep your hands off me, that hurts, stop! " Edna said trying to get off  his hand

" does it hurts?! " the other cops say laughing while the one that was taking Edna's arm did it even stronger

I was about to leave my chair and look for Edna personally but at that time Deborah start singing. A cold shiver ran throughout my whole body at the time I heard her voice, it was just hypnotizing, so strong that forced me to go back to my sit against my will

" please leave me now! " Edna shouted

" look at this, isn't it cute " the cops said sarcastically while changing themselves into some kind of evil shadows

" you're gonna die here!! " all the shadows shouted in unison with a demoniacal voice

" I will say it one more time, leave me now " Edna said firmly

" *evil laugh* or what?!, do you even know who are you you talking with? " the evil shadow said with an evil voice tone

" I'm talking to a stupid shadow spirit that doesn't knows who is he facing " Edna said summoning a pair of white wings from its back

A white brightly aura surrounded her body and a warm but deadly light started to light the shadows burning them

" *extremely pain scream* who are you??!! "

" remember my name and fear it, I'm Edna Fox and I'm a light angel "


Chapter 13

I was unable to move, my whole body was hypnotized hearing that song. I was screaming from my insides to freed myself from that voice that was causing me to be like that, but it was useless, my body was a puppet that the song controlled

" *takes the shadow's neck strongly* tell me, who are you working for!? " Edna said burning the neck of the shadow with its light aura

" it's gonna be too late to save your boyfriend
*evil laugh*..... you have lost " the shadow laughed ignoring the pain Edna was producing to him and the other shadows that were in the floor shouting in pain

Edna destroyed those shadows with even a more powerful light that came from her wings. When she was rushing to the auditorium to save me, small pieces of the shadows she had destroyed gather towered creating another shadow with a big needled whip on its hand. The shadow whipped Edna in the back making her to fell in the ground, she screamed in great pain but then she stood up and created a whip made from pure light, the one she used to disintegrate the shadow whipping it just one time. She wanted to fly to get faster to the auditorium but she couldn't, the wound at her back was bleeding and losing a lot of blood. She ran to get the auditorium from the main door, it's was a great pain for her, she was losing a lot if blood from her injury but she was still running  carelessly. I was hearing Deborah's song without moving my body but when she made a slow solo in her song my body stood up by itself and walked to directly to the stage, all the people there thought it was part of the presentation but I couldn't even shout for help. When my body stop moving Deborah took my hands and kissed me passionaly in my mouth, Edna reach the main door and opened it at the same time Deborah kissed me, Edna just kneeled shouting my name while crying. I recovered control of my body hearing her sweet voice calling me but it was too late, I just stepped back after that kiss

" awwww sorry little cousin but I think I got that kiss I wanted for so long " Deborah said evilly

" now that i taste him like that, I want to go to the main course " she said jumping to my neck biting me hardly while sucking my blood

It was the worst pain I have felt until that day. In the floor of the scenery I just saw everybody running to escape and Edna with a pair of white wings in her back that lighted all the place with a warm light, Deborah was also with a pair of black wings and her eyes turned red blood when she opened them, Edna's light burned Deborah so she escaped disappearing in a black aura that covered her body. I was in the brink of dead, I could felt how my life was leaving my body, but at that exact moment Edna kissed me and her wings started to shine with a healing light, I touched Edna's back and realized about her wound before the light made me black out for that moment.


Chapter 14

I woke up in a hospital and the first thing I saw was Edna in front of me, she was caressing my face kindly, I couldn't remember what happened exactly but the first thing I did was to hug Edna lovely

" I love you.... " she whispered to my ear softly

I was about to tell the same but I felt something strange in Edna's back so I move my hand under her upper clothes and I felt a large scar, she jumped back really scared

" it wasn't a dream, you were the angel that saved me last night!! " I said really surprised

" what are you talking about sweetie " she said smiling a bit nervous

" don't try to fool me, I remember everything, you were the angel that healed my neck wound when I was about to die! " I said loudly

" I think your medicines are making you to have this kind of illusions " she said nervously

I stood up from my bed and walked directly to Edna

" sweetie you mustn't get up, you're still
weak " Edna said while walking backwards seeing me walking firmly toward her

" *stops suddenly really close to Edna's face* look at my eyes.......you know everything about me, I share with you the purest love in this world, so my question is...... Why you haven't being truth to me all this time? " I said a bit loudly

" you can't know it! " Edna shouted with teary eyes

" so it's useless for me to keep living a lie, I thought you really loved me " I said about to leave my room

" WAIT!!! DON'T LEAVE ME AGAIN!!!! " Edna shouted while crying sadly

" I won't lose you another time!!!....... If you want the truth ok...... I'm an angel!!!........ I hope you're happy now knowing that you have such a freak as girlfriend *cries* " she said sarcastically at the end

I felt shocked but happy at that time, now I knew she had the strength to tell me the truth

" *goes back hugging her lovely* I LOVE YOU " I said firmly to Edna

" no you don't!, you said it, it is useless to live such a lie with the person you really loved " Edna said really sad

" what do you think, that made me wake up this morning? " I said softly being sorry about those words I should never pronounce

" *sniff*........ I don't know, maybe you're ok now "

" sorry but that isn't the answer I want you to tell me "

" *she looks at me with teary eyes* is true that thing you tell me when we first met?........ Those sweet words, that your heart just beats for me "

" I thought you forgot about it....... Now do you get me?, if I haven't your love with me I would die because simply I lost everything I have "

" ............" Edna remained silent

" if you think those are just hopeless and lying
words....... Leave me her and now........ I can't take looking you so sad like that, but please forgive me " I said sadly with teary eyes kneeling on the floor

Edna was with her head down, all that I saw was a single tear falling from her face

" all this time I thought you were just the same as the others....... They just loved me because I pleased them whenever they
wanted......... " Edna said with her head down

" but now I know I was badly wrong......... I LOVE YOU DAVID " she said kissing me passionaly

It's hard to describe......... The only thing I felt at that moment was a pure and intense feeling of love....... I stop hearing my own heart for a moment. When she stopped I looked kindly to those black eyes of her

" watching you cry just destroys my heart, I can't take it to see you like that " I said seeing Edna crying softly again

" these tears aren't sadness ones, they are my heart shouting that it feels the same for you "
Edna said looking at me

" I promise to love you until the end of time, even until my own soul stops existing but please never leave me " I said while taking Edna's hand lovely

" awww cutie, I promise you to be there just for you, to spend all my life with you and to love you until the end of time "

We talked for hours that seemed like seconds for me, she told me everything about her, and I felt so happy to know she wasn't hiding anything from me, because everything that she told me I imagined long time ago the first time I saw her

" know I can truly said that I'm the luckiest guy in the world for finding such a beautiful and lovely fallen angel just for me " I said happily

" can I ask you something?........ The first time I met you I had a great dream of you entering to my room from the window I have
there...... " I was saying until Edna continued

" *giggle* do you want to know if I was that angel you saw that night? " Edna said happily

" yes...... "

" hehehe, yes I was........ Please close your eyes, I think I can do something for you to live that dream you had "

When I closed my eyes I felt that warm light for some moments and then Edna told me to open them. I couldn't believe what I was seeing, Edna was completely naked with that pair of white wings on her back

" what do you think? " Edna asked playfully and happily too

I was speechless, I couldn't believe it, she looked like the angel that came to my room that night. I saw her so beautiful, like the pure expression of love and beauty in front of me

" *giggle*....... Let me guess, do you think I'm the pure expression of love and beauty don't you? " she said smiling to me

" how did you know?! " I asked impressed for her accuracy to read my thoughts

" well, it's just a little ability I have when I use my wings *smiles* but I didn't have to use it, I know you more than perfect to read your mind without any problems " Edna said giggling happily

" hehehe, ok my little angel *walks and gets really close to Edna* what I'm about to do right now? " I asked playfully

" your suggestive eyes are just enough to tell you what " Edna said kissing me while making me laid on the bed

I knew something special about her since the first time I talked to her, now I can say that it wasn't her wings, it was her lovely heart that is full of love to give everyone but specially to me.........-


Chapter 15

- that was the end of my dream, and is how my heart feels looking Edna everyday. The dreams are the representations of our deepest wishes and thoughts and I think my heart gave me a lot to think when I dreamt this. Its maybe too fantastic but everytime I think that I read my story again and repeat to myself: " what is the point of dreaming if you don't let your imagination run free ". -



Love can be expressed in so many ways but who are you dedicating your love is the important thing. For me, the phrase "love temptations are paid with blood " is more than a single way to tell how does love means for people that feel it in its pure form. Don't change your love for anything you could buy or get in exchange, because living without love is worst than leaving without soul


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