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Thanks man, if it wasn’t for you I’d never be graduating high school.” \n\nThe cheetah wrapped his friend in a big hug. Dave savored the moment as he took a whiff of the cheetah’s fur before letting go. “Yeah, I’m a much better tutor than that panther.”\n\n“No offense, man. But nobody can compare to my Sasha.” Eddy began. “She is the goddess of love incarnate, or should I say the goddess of lust.”\n\nDave rolled his eyes. He hated whenever the cheetah began talking about his girlfriend. One month of dating and every day she would come up in their conversations no matter what they were doing. Dave would love nothing more than to shave all the fur off of her and--”\n\n“Hey, are you thinking of some hair-brained scheme to get rid of my future mate again?” Eddy asked. Dave was silent. “Dude, why don’t you like her?\n\n“Because she stole you from me!” Dave said in his head, but he knew that wasn’t true. He just didn’t act soon enough. “I just don’t want you getting hurt. Sasha is always throwing herself at you. It’s all about sex, which is fine but when was the last time you two just talked. Do you two even know anything about each other?\n\n“What’s to know? I’m on the basketball team, she’s captain of the cheer squad, we both hate history.”\n\n“Does she know your birthday? Does she know your favorite color is blue or your favorite food is Italian?”\n\n“Relax, man.” Eddy said. “We just started getting serious; we don’t have to rush into all of that.” Eddy looked at his watch and noticed it was seven minutes until his curfew. “Look I’ll see you tomorrow, alright. Bye.” And with that the cheetah left out the door.\n\n\t\t\t\t\t****\n\nDave was approaching the steps to school when he saw the cheerleaders practicing. On top of the pyramid he saw Sasha jump into the air and then land gracefully back on top.\n\nDave looked away, just seeing the panther reminded him of how she would wrap her arms around Eddy. Every time they were together she would let out a loud purr just as they kissed. Just like the one he was hearing now. Out of curiosity he turned his head, but when he did it wasn’t Eddy she was kissing.\n\nTrent the quarterback was kissing up Sasha’s neck as she purred loudly. Dave watched as his best friend’s girlfriend made out with the big bull. Dave could feel the fur on his neck bristling. “That bitch…”\n\n\t\t\t\t\t****\n\n“So are you going to the dance tonight?” Eddy asked.\n\n“Yeah, I’ll be there,” Dave said softly. He was still trying to find the words to tell his friend the truth about the panther.\n\n“Hey are you alright? You’ve been pretty quiet.”\n\nDave put on a fake smile. “I’m fine; I just don’t know who I’m going to take to the dance.” Not yet he couldn’t tell him yet.\n\n“I still got a few extra bucks if you need some money.” Eddy said. “I already got tickets for me and Sasha. I’m going to surprise her after lunch.” Now he had to tell him.\n\n“Eddy… what if she’s going with someone else.”\n\n“What?”\n\n“I saw her with Trent, man. I’m sorry but she’s cheating on you.”\n\nThe cheetah was silent for a moment but suddenly he got up from his table. Dave looked up and saw the fur on the feline’s neck standing up.\n\n“What is wrong with you!?” Eddy yelled. “You hate her that much you got to lie about her.”\n\n“I’m not making this up Eddy, I saw her practically leap into that bull’s arm. Trent’s a jerk but not even he sinks that low. I bet he doesn’t even know-”\n\n“Just shut up! Sasha loves me, but you never even took the time to know her. Just stay away from me.” With that Eddy left the cafeteria leaving the brown wolf dumbstruck and heartbroken.\n\n\t\t\t\t\t****\n\n“Can’t believe Dave would even sink that low,” Eddy said under his breath as he headed for Sasha’s locker. “The one girl that actually likes me and he has to lie…” Eddy’s ears lifted up as he heard the familiar purr sounds of his Sasha. 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At first Trent looked dumbstruck but it quickly turned to anger as he turned to the now horrified looking Sasha. “Don’t worry Trent it’s nothing now.” Eddy split the picture right down the middle, separating him and Sasha. The cheetah then turned and walked away.\n\n\t\t\t\t\t****\n\n“Hey, this is Eddy. I can’t come to the phone right now but you know the drill.”\n\n“Hey, Eddy its Dave. I heard what happened… the whole school did. But anyway I’m just calling to see if you’re alright… for the fifth time. Anyway I’m pulling up in your driveway right now so, bye.” Dave hung up the phone.\n\nHe wasn’t sure if it was Trent or some random student but soon the whole school knew that Sasha was dating two… actually four guys at once. She wasn’t getting much sympathy from anyone. But he was really concerned about Eddy. The cheetah hadn’t shown up in any of his other classes, he just disappeared.\n\nDave exited the car and headed up to the front door. 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“Alright and what makes the blood cells turn red?” The brown wolf asked.

“Uhh,” The cheetah scratched his head as he searched for an answer.

“Come on, Eddy, you got this,” Dave said trying to encourage his friend.

“The blood cells turn red… because they get oxygen?” The cheetah said.

“That’s it!” Dave shouted. “And your total score is one hundred percent.”

The cheetah looked up in disbelief. “Are you serious? Thanks man, if it wasn’t for you I’d never be graduating high school.”

The cheetah wrapped his friend in a big hug. Dave savored the moment as he took a whiff of the cheetah’s fur before letting go. “Yeah, I’m a much better tutor than that panther.”

“No offense, man. But nobody can compare to my Sasha.” Eddy began. “She is the goddess of love incarnate, or should I say the goddess of lust.”

Dave rolled his eyes. He hated whenever the cheetah began talking about his girlfriend. One month of dating and every day she would come up in their conversations no matter what they were doing. Dave would love nothing more than to shave all the fur off of her and--”

“Hey, are you thinking of some hair-brained scheme to get rid of my future mate again?” Eddy asked. Dave was silent. “Dude, why don’t you like her?

“Because she stole you from me!” Dave said in his head, but he knew that wasn’t true. He just didn’t act soon enough. “I just don’t want you getting hurt. Sasha is always throwing herself at you. It’s all about sex, which is fine but when was the last time you two just talked. Do you two even know anything about each other?

“What’s to know? I’m on the basketball team, she’s captain of the cheer squad, we both hate history.”

“Does she know your birthday? Does she know your favorite color is blue or your favorite food is Italian?”

“Relax, man.” Eddy said. “We just started getting serious; we don’t have to rush into all of that.” Eddy looked at his watch and noticed it was seven minutes until his curfew. “Look I’ll see you tomorrow, alright. Bye.” And with that the cheetah left out the door.

\t\t\t\t\t****

Dave was approaching the steps to school when he saw the cheerleaders practicing. On top of the pyramid he saw Sasha jump into the air and then land gracefully back on top.

Dave looked away, just seeing the panther reminded him of how she would wrap her arms around Eddy. Every time they were together she would let out a loud purr just as they kissed. Just like the one he was hearing now. Out of curiosity he turned his head, but when he did it wasn’t Eddy she was kissing.

Trent the quarterback was kissing up Sasha’s neck as she purred loudly. Dave watched as his best friend’s girlfriend made out with the big bull. Dave could feel the fur on his neck bristling. “That bitch…”

\t\t\t\t\t****

“So are you going to the dance tonight?” Eddy asked.

“Yeah, I’ll be there,” Dave said softly. He was still trying to find the words to tell his friend the truth about the panther.

“Hey are you alright? You’ve been pretty quiet.”

Dave put on a fake smile. “I’m fine; I just don’t know who I’m going to take to the dance.” Not yet he couldn’t tell him yet.

“I still got a few extra bucks if you need some money.” Eddy said. “I already got tickets for me and Sasha. I’m going to surprise her after lunch.” Now he had to tell him.

“Eddy… what if she’s going with someone else.”

“What?”

“I saw her with Trent, man. I’m sorry but she’s cheating on you.”

The cheetah was silent for a moment but suddenly he got up from his table. Dave looked up and saw the fur on the feline’s neck standing up.

“What is wrong with you!?” Eddy yelled. “You hate her that much you got to lie about her.”

“I’m not making this up Eddy, I saw her practically leap into that bull’s arm. Trent’s a jerk but not even he sinks that low. I bet he doesn’t even know-”

“Just shut up! Sasha loves me, but you never even took the time to know her. Just stay away from me.” With that Eddy left the cafeteria leaving the brown wolf dumbstruck and heartbroken.

\t\t\t\t\t****

“Can’t believe Dave would even sink that low,” Eddy said under his breath as he headed for Sasha’s locker. “The one girl that actually likes me and he has to lie…” Eddy’s ears lifted up as he heard the familiar purr sounds of his Sasha. He turned around the corner and saw the panther massaging Trent’s large chest. “Sasha…”

The panther turned around with a shocked look on her face as she saw the cheetah down the hallway heading for them. “Eddy… I thought we were going to meet up outside?”

“Are you… with him?” Eddy said pointing to the black bull.

“What kind of question is that?” Trent responded. “She’s my girlfriend, why would she even bother with a wimp like you?”

“She’s my girlfriend!” Eddy yelled. “We’ve been going out for the past month.”

A confused look appeared upon the bull’s face. “What’s he talking about kitty cat?”

“Uhh well…” The panther stammered.

“I’m talking about this,” Eddy said as he reached into his jacket and pulled out a photo. On it was him and Sasha kissing. At first Trent looked dumbstruck but it quickly turned to anger as he turned to the now horrified looking Sasha. “Don’t worry Trent it’s nothing now.” Eddy split the picture right down the middle, separating him and Sasha. The cheetah then turned and walked away.

\t\t\t\t\t****

“Hey, this is Eddy. I can’t come to the phone right now but you know the drill.”

“Hey, Eddy its Dave. I heard what happened… the whole school did. But anyway I’m just calling to see if you’re alright… for the fifth time. Anyway I’m pulling up in your driveway right now so, bye.” Dave hung up the phone.

He wasn’t sure if it was Trent or some random student but soon the whole school knew that Sasha was dating two… actually four guys at once. She wasn’t getting much sympathy from anyone. But he was really concerned about Eddy. The cheetah hadn’t shown up in any of his other classes, he just disappeared.

Dave exited the car and headed up to the front door. After ringing the doorbell and knocking a few times he searched for the spare key under the welcome mat.

“Eddy! Are you in here?” Dave yelled. There was no answer from in the house, but he did hear the sound of running water upstairs. The brown wolf followed the sound to the bathroom where the door was wide open and steam was pouring out. Dave slowly entered and was shocked to find the cheetah sitting in the bathtub huddled up. “Eddy?”

The cheetah looked up at the wolf with puffy red eyes. “Dave…?”

“Dude, what happened to you?” Dave turned off the water and helped Eddy to his feet. The cheetah was completely drenched and naked; Dave struggled with his urges for a moment but eventually grabbed a towel and helped the cheetah dry off.

“You were right…” The cheetah croaked.

“What?”

“You were right the whole time. That bitch was only using me, she never cared.”

“Eddy… I’m sorry,” Dave said. “For once I wish I wasn’t right.”

“I’m so pathetic… I’m going to die alone. Nobody loves me.”

“That’s not true, Eddy!” The brown wolf barked. “You have plenty of people who love you.”

“Like who!?” The cheetah demanded.

“I… I love you,”

“…What?”

“I love you, Eddy.” Dave said as he ran his paw over the cheetah’s fur. “I’ve been in love with you since the seventh grade.”

Before it was even a conscious thought Dave pulled the cheetah in and their lips connected. Dave moaned softly, he had dreamed of this moment for so long and now it was coming true. He broke the kiss and just stared at Eddy who stared at him wide eyed. He briefly wondered what the cheetah would do next now that he knew.

This time it was Dave who was pulled in as the cheetah forced their lips together. Their tongues dancing as they held each other close. When they stopped Eddy nestled his head on the wolf’s chest and purred softly.

“Dave,” The cheetah said after a moment of silence.

“Yes, Eddy?” The brown wolf answered.

“Would you be my boyfriend?”

“I’d love to, Eddy,” Dave said as he kissed the cheetah on his forehead. “Do you still want to go to the dance?”

“Nah, I’d rather stay here with you,” Eddy said. “You’ve been there for me, now I want to do something for you.”

Dave was curious now. “Oh, what’s that?”

Eddy chuckled. “You’re still a virgin, aren’t you?”

Dave’s ears turned red as Eddy led him up to his bedroom. The wolf’s cock was already getting hard following the cheetah’s ass upstairs. When they reached the bedroom Eddy pulled him into another kiss. The cheetah then proceeded to remove all of the wolf’s clothes until they were both naked.

“So, who gets to be on top?” Eddy asked.

Dave smiled as he began to rub the cheetah’s sheath. “We’ll figure it out.”

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