Fox, [2023-06-14 3:39 PM]
Which scene would you like me to work on first?

Scarf, [2023-06-15 7:14 AM]
I've gotta think on this one, and maybe divide the overall story Intl segments

Fox, [2023-06-15 11:08 AM]
Well, its just a sketch and the first of many so don't think too hard. :p

Scarf, [2023-06-15 10:02 PM]
how about lets go first with the first time the farmer gets to fuck her? so she's already gotten mounted a few times by the farmer's boar, but last time she had a very rough experience getting her womb penetrated for the first time ever, so the farmer's gonna do it himself to gradually train her up

Fox, [2023-06-18 7:27 PM]
Hell yeah!

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:04 PM]
Wait.

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:04 PM]
I am doing some research.

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:04 PM]
Do pigs have mating plugs?

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:07 PM]
So since boars get female in heat after touching their saliva, I like the idea of the same happening to her.

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:07 PM]
Is she a pig?

Fox, [2023-06-18 8:53 PM]
I think you are gonna really like what I've written so far. Its not finished but I will finish it some time later.

Scarf, [2023-06-19 2:31 AM]
hey fox, sorry i was out all day, im gonna crash but will take a peek first thing in the morning!

Fox, [2023-06-19 9:03 AM]
Yeah and if you wanna wait no worries cause I still gotta fill out the scene. Its mostly a haphazard collection of notes right now.

Scarf, [2023-06-20 7:54 AM]
hey sorry I never got back to you, I did volunteering for juneteenth and basically died yesterday, I'll ping you later today after work!

Fox, [2023-06-20 9:20 AM]
No worries. Same I ended up doing stuff and not working on the scene. I still gotta finish it.

Fox, [2023-06-20 4:44 PM]
In a previous scene the girl has mated with the boar again and during mating the boar penetrated her cervex for the first time, causing her intense pain but also a strange please she didn't understand. After the mating plug is inserted she runs off thinking about things. This scene takes place with her returning to the house after a breather just wandering around the farm with a full tummy of cum. She sort of looks like she is pregnant and wonders during the previous scene what it would be like to be pregnant, if she had a kid she would be better to it than her own parents.

When she returns to the farmer's house she is super nervous and embarrassed that she ran off. She finds him smoking on a pipe on the porch and to her relief he greets her warmly. She apologizes for running out like that. He grins.

"I knew you'd be back." But its a sort of smirk grin. He's a real creep but she is too naive to see it yet. They start talking and she assumes she did something wrong but he claims he just wants to make sure she is comfortable here. He asks if she is happy and she sort of tip toes around the question. She says the work is hard but fullfilling and she's growing a lot just like he said she would.

Her ears perk when he says she's doing really well with the boar. He asks how her family is and she admits she doesn't really talk to them much and implies that she doesn't really like them, she wants to make them proud so they pay attention to her, though she doesn't seem to realize this herself. He does this sort of manipulative thing where he says maybe she can, and also tells her she's free to go see them whenever she wants. He knows she's been working hard so he can breed the pig, and his whole farm depends on it, but that is no excuse for her not to live her life. But she assures him, no, of course she wants the farm to thrive. See what he's doing? He's offering her no real choice at all, guilting her into staying, but he's very subtle about it.

After a while he asks if she's ready for today's collection yet. She outs her paws on her stomach like she's pregnant and stares at her feet nervously. She nods her head and says she hopes it isn't too late.

"Only one way to find out." he says with that knowing crooked smile.

We cut to her and him in a barn. He's sitting on a stack of hay and still smoking, watching her stand nervously in front of an empty bucket. He gently asks what she's waiting for. She curses herself internally for being so childishly modest, after all, this is a farm, she thinks as she starts to unbuckle her overalls, yet its hard to mark her arms move and her paws struggle with the loops.

Naked except for a shirt, she is now covering up her privates, nodding as he chuckles and tells her its nothing to be embarrassed about, he's helped many mothers give birth, feral and anthro, nothing he hasn't seen before. With a deep breath she squats over the bucket and begins to push.

She's holding on to the side of it, trying to not make eye contact with the farmer as she concentrates on unlodging the mating plug. After a minute she gets frustrated and starts quietly choking up. The farmer asks with a measured concerned voice if everything is okay. She admits she can't get the plug out. She is relived when he tells her not to worry and gives her a hug when she stands. (Her own parents never hug her and she is desperate for affection.) Wiping a tear from her cheek he tells her "let's take a look."

We cut to her still standing over the bucket as the farmer crouches behind her, looking up at her pussy. Her ears are burning and she has butterflies so bad in her tummy she thinks she might throw up. The farmer plucks at the plug, confirming that yes, it really is lodged in there. She stiffens a bit as she feels the plucking pushing the thing deeper into her. The man says let me see if he can get it out. His voice is calm but his paws are shaking, he must be as embarrassed as her, she thinks, which makes her feel a bit better.

Fox, [2023-06-20 4:44 PM]
She squirms as she feels his paws fool around between her folds, working there way slowly around the plug. She can feel the skin slowly raise and loosen around it, he pulls it out a centemeter and she gasps, a little bit of semen running out. She makes a loud like a bit of a high pitched chip and bites her lips in embarrassment, saying she thinks it is coming out now.

The man agrees but says his fingers are slipping off it now. They need something with better grip... The girl gasps as she feels his wet nose at her taint. He's using his teeth to pull it out. The sensation makes her tremble as she feels it slide out of her and heat is radiating from her vulva again in that weird way. She says yes its almost out and then it comes out with a pop and its this big release at once as she feels the cum flood out of her stomach and into the pan, she can hear it against the metal and she's just panting as she stands there with the embarrassing knowledge that he's got a front row view to watch.

After a few minutes she just turns around really blushing and asks if that's good, looking at the pail of cum below her. It seems like enough, does the farmer think so? The farmer nods his head which makes her happy but says he thinks there might be some left. He then says he has a way of relaxing her so it comes out. He then leans in and begins putting his tongue up her pussy. Maybe it is really long because it'd a canine, but he's eating her out and as he does some of the pig cum dribbles down his mouth.

She wants to tell him to stop but she's scared and confused and those feelings of waves of warmth are coming back again and mixing with her anxiety and she doesn't know what to do. But the feeling of his hot tongue over he walls is too much and before long she quakes as she feels her very first orgasm. This part is told from the farmers perspective as he watches it happen, knowing its going to happen, he enjoys corrupting her and savioring her innocence, he really is an asshole, this is a story about grooming and her parents not noticing because they are too preoccupied with their lives.

Her orgasm causes her to ejaculate and as the man pulls pack her pussy juices and a sizable amount of leftover pig cum splatter into the bucket, the farmer just wipes his muzzle with a smirk as he watches his handiwork. He asks if she feels more relaxed now. She's just trembling there not sure what happened but widely embarrassed and uncomfortable and can't make a complete sentence.

The farmer seems amused and says oh that's normal, sorry he must have tickled her too much, she's a little too overstimulated. The farmer goes on to explain he thinks he knows a way to make her feel less pain next time. She just needs to work up to it. She nods as if she knows what he's talking about and tries to smile, he's always thinking about her. What can she do she asks.

When she turns around to face him she sees his dick is in his paws. She freezes. She has no idea what to do or why he's doing that. She blinks, thinking maybe it goes away but it doesn't. All she knows is that for some reason this there is something wrong with this and she wants it to go away, but she can't quite articulate it like that, its just this uneasy feeling.

The man explains that boars have long penises, but if she practices the collection with someone smaller, it will likely help. But she doesn't think he looks that much smaller. He encourages her to practice with him, don't worry, he'll be gentle, its just practice. She starts to protest but he warns her somewhat sternly that its important they do this now before she has a chance to tigthten again, and tells her not to worry so much. She asks him, he's not gonna shoot more of that stuff into her, like the boar, is he? She doesn't know much about sex but she knows another anthro could make her pregnant. He says no, of course not.

Fox, [2023-06-20 4:44 PM]
She gets into her usual position in the hay and just wants to get it over with so she can go to bed. But to her annoyance he crouches next to her and starts stroking her all over, she doesn't like it. He mounts her and she can feel his dick sliding against her folds. She's really sore but can't deny the waves of warmth eminating from her special place. She gasps and groans a bit as she feels his tip start to penetrate her. Its too big. It may be less long but its too thick.

"Wait." she says, but he just keeps going, putting a few inches in, pulling out, and then a few more inches.

"Its too big let's do this later!" But she's being pinned down. The farmer explains its okay to be nervous, but it will get better in a second. But he seems to be starting to lose his calm a bit, he keeps repeating how tight she is, explaining between huffs this isn't easy for him either, its a lot of work it is important to loosen her, but he seems to be getting off on her tightenness, she thinks he is just strained.

It never gets easier and before she knows it he his up to the hilt, his balls slapping against her in a lewd way. The leftover pig spunk does make it easier though, acting as lubricant. And he keeps repeating that point, talking about how slippery she is inside. He seems esctactic, bit she's not having fun. She is grabbing at the hay on the ground grinding her teeth as he penetrates her. But to her surprise the dirt and has fall out of her fingers and she is being lifted up, impaled by his cock as he carries her, still humping into her, on to a stack of hay.

"Just....trying to get more comfortable..." he wheezes as he slips out of her and places her on it, turning her around. The lack of fullness is a big relief, but it is short lived as he rams into her again, making her cry out. She can see him now, now, his fat belly out of his shirt and his trousers at his overalls as he smashes into her, his sweat and saliva falling on her body, its disgusting to her and in the back of her mind she feels it is not unlike the pig. He can see her staring at him, and smugly asks she isn't upset about this, is she? When she opens her mouth to respond he leads down and holds her in a deep French kiss. Internally we see a few thoughts of his. How it feels so good for him to fuck her like this, how he enjoys savoring her innocence as he molests this little niave cub. He wants to be the first anthro to fucj her. He wants to be the one to take her virginity for hinself. The realization he is getting close, the knowledge she may become pregnant, but not caring anymore.

She is getting close too, but she doesn't really know what that means, all she knows is that something is happening and she feels like she's losing control as her body trembles and breath starts to hitch. She leans her head back, panting as he kisses her neck and plays with her nipples, but she's reaching away. Trying to grab anything to pull herself out of his reach, but she can't. She can only hold on as her entire body shutters under the weight of the second orgasm of her life.

He notices this, egging her on as he humps, saying he is glad that she likes it. And she hates that, she hates that he's right, that her body is betraying her. "No. Stop. I wanna go to my room." she realizes she is saying. And she realizes that she's been saying this the entire time.

/But you ARE home/ she thinks to herself. She tells herself this is what she wanted. She wanted to help the farm, she wanted to prove she is a big girl, so why is she crying? (Her parents always chastised her about being a crybaby.) She's going to /prove/ to herself and the world that she's a big girl. And after a while the pain starts to fade. It feels like she's just laying beside herself, watching this all happen to a different person. It feels numb and nice.

"I-I" the farmer is mumbling something in her face and she finds herself being mad at his bad breath. "Ready-get ready for it--" She doesn't understand, she's confused and strangely annoyed at him for bringing her back to her body.

"Ready for what?" she demands.

Fox, [2023-06-20 4:44 PM]
He huffs. "My--sperm!" He huffs and bucks into her again, biting down on her neck. He gasps and goes limp and then she can feel it. Him pumping into her, filling her just like the pig. She can see her tummy start to expand again as the farmer adds to the fluids that are already there as his warmth expands to fill her deepest secret spaces, his seed joining the pig's and desperately searching for her eggs.

He collapses on too of her, still huffing, giving little unconscious thrusts as he continues to jet into her. She can't do anything but just lie there on the hay. She has to push his head off her just to breath.

Eventually his huffing slows down, replace by happy little sighs. And his penis stops jumping around as much as well, just giving rhythmic occasional squirts. Finally the man groans and stands up, unbuckling with her, his seed floods out of her, soaking into the hay. She watches it as it leaves her, collecting in a sickly puddle next to his limp dick. She sits on her elbows and swallows.

"I want to go back to my room." she hears herself say.

"Of course." The farmer says calmly with that perfectly rehearsed smile. He says she must be tired and worn out, he's tired himself. She did very well and now deserves some rest. She doesn't need to worry about breakfast tomorrow, he'll make it, she can sleep in.

She nods and slowly gets to her feet, its hard since she's so sore and he has to help her a bit but she staggers in front of him so he can't touch her. She grabs her discarded clothes and hurried to the barn door, not looking back, not wanting him to see her tears.

Fox, [2023-06-20 4:45 PM]
^ So I'm not really into non-con myself and I don't have a lot of experience writing it. But hopefully I 'get it'. Here's your scene sketch. Let me know what you think!

Scarf, [2023-06-21 12:42 AM]
Wow that is AMAZING!!

Scarf, [2023-06-21 12:45 AM]
That entire framework is awesome! There's only two or three small tweaks that I can spot, so lemme give you some more detailed feedback in the morning for sure!

Scarf, [2023-06-21 2:30 PM]
So I absolutely love how you portrayed the farmer, kind of as a creep but not overly so. Just his overall demeanor is perfect in the way he emotionally manipulates her by taking advantage of and exploiting her own goal of trying to prove something.

Scarf, [2023-06-21 2:31 PM]
"All she knows is that for some reason this there is something wrong with this and she wants it to go away, but she can't quite articulate it like that, its just this uneasy feeling." <— I think this is a perfect way to capture the dynamic between him and her

Fox, [2023-06-21 3:22 PM]
Great!