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Now, I hope he is not disappointed in the result. If given a cliche, I like to try something I not seen done before. This was the result of that kind of thinking. This is the alternate version with the explanation given before the resulting actions. The original is marked as 'punchline before the joke version'.

Once again WARNING: This story contains rape of a chaotic scale. I wonder what this would have been like if not holding back.

Anywho, hope you all enjoy it and remember to get your ideas in. =D
https://inkbunny.net/journalview.php?id=92403", "writing": "It was Home Coming for the school, also known as Spirit Week. It was a week for the student body to come together with school pride. Yellow and black was seen everywhere, with the angry bee mascot taped all over the walls and printed on the students' clothes. But the game of the week was against the state champions, the Blue Devils. The Killer Bees was not even in the top five in the county. The knowledge that the game to lead into the home coming dance was going to be a massacre was a depressing problem for the school's staff. The idea of having their biggest loss on their home court on the biggest and most important week of the school year was going to be a devastating blow to the children who had been worked up full of pride that entire week. The parents and the local booster club had been furious and complaining for weeks about the game scheduling. And they all had now placed the problem on Coach Browning's shoulders.\n\nThe players gathered in the center of the locker room, knowing they were about lose. Also in the room was officer Panders and the EMT crew setting up a corner for any possible accidents during the game. But their coach was not there. They had not seen their head coach all day. Not even at the pep rally. The office door then opened and the horse walked out, followed by a man they never seen before. The stranger was a short and pudgy rodent of gray fur, with a long tail that ended in a puff of pale hair. He was a cross breed of a gerbil and a hamster.\n\n“Team,” began Coach Browning, “this is Doctor Shits.”\n\n“Uhm, its pronounced Sheitz,” corrected the mouse like man, who did not seem to mind that the younger boys around him were laughing about his family name.\n\n“My bad,” chuckled the horse, “Anyway. He is a former graduate of this school, and I bring him here now for he may be able to not just help us stand our ground against the Blue Devils but to beat them.”\n\nThe players looked among each other as Sheitz pulled out a pocket watch and had them all gather into a corner so that they were all facing him.\n\n“Now, all clear your minds as best you can and focus on my watch,” the gerbster instructed.\n\n“Are you kidding me!?” objected the team captain, Donnie. “You are actually going to hypnotize us to win?” \n\n“Shut your mouth, Don, and let him do his job,” ordered Coach Browning. Donnie rolled his eyes but did as he was told.\n\n“Okay,” said Doctor Sheitz, starting over. “Now, clear your minds and look upon my watch.” The man held out the gold trinket before him, no one knowing that it was actually broken and was stuck on the time of 5:27. Sheitz spun the watch upon its axis, which he kept lubed so that it would spin for a long period of time, and started to gently rock it back and forth until it was reaching a peak at every second. He clicked the tip of his tongue to ensure he had the beat right.\n\n“Your mind is clear, and your brain is empty,” the mouse like man spoke with a soothing and calming voice as he recited lines that he had said for years to patients. “Nothing. Darkness. Black. No, not black. A small light is in the room. A big room. A room full of chairs. All the chairs are facing a wall covered in a black sheet. You sit in a chair. It is comfortable and you feel rested. You are relaxed as you are sitting in this chair. Relaxed. Rested. All the light is coming from behind the sheet. You are relaxed and feeling good as you look upon the lighted sheet. You want to know what is behind the sheet. Five, You're relaxed. Four, you are rested. Three, the sheet drops. Two, The light is forming words. One, it reads sleeeep~.”\n\nDoctor Sheitz quietly stepped away as the coach took the place doctor was before.\n\n“Team, we have had our challenges this year. But we now go against our biggest challenge on the most important day of the year. Your love of this school will come out tonight. Your training and practice will come to its fullest. You will play tonight to win. Losing is not an option. We are going to go out there and show not just our school that we are the best. They already know that. We are going to show the entire state and country we are the best! You smell that smell in here, that musk is our pride. When you smell that same smell on the enemy, it is not pride but fear! When I clap my hands, you will go out there and smell for that fear. Now get out there and rape them!”\n\nCoach Browning clapped hard and enthusiastically as the team shook their heads as if startled from dozing off in class. The EMT's and Officer Panders clapped as well in encouragement, yet they shook their heads in confusion as well. But they all felt they were going to win this night. They felt like they had a new goal in life as they all yelled in pride and stormed out the door and onto the basketball court.\n\nThe doctor walked over to the horse, who was laughing and feeling a victory was in his hands. \n\n“You sure that was a good idea to say that last line?” asked the doctor in worry.\n\n“What do you mean?” questioned the coach,” I always end my pre-game pep talks like that.”\n\n\n\n\nIt was a quarter into the basketball game when it the incident began. It was already a shocking and intense game as the home team was staying tied with the state champions, something no one was expecting. \n\nDonnie Wallace, the cheetah starter of the Killer Bees, was the first seen to do what many say initiated the events that followed. The feline was on the defensive against Larry Sullivan, a jack rabbit and star player of the Blue Devils, when Donnie seemed to just stop trying to get the ball away. His arms dropped to his sides, and he his mouth went a gape as he stared at the other player. It was so sudden that even Larry stopped for a second in confusion. However, the teen was not to miss such an opportunity and darted to the left to go around before the rest of the team could surround him.\n\nThat was when Donnie tackled Larry.\n\nWitnesses reported seeing the cat place his face into the struggling rabbit's crotch, seeming pretty ecstatic to do so. Donnie not just removed, but tore Larry's shorts off. To the victim’s horror, other Bees came over and held him down. The fox and bison both had that ecstatic look on their faces as well. Larry called for help, but all he could hear was a loud commotion around him as he felt the cheetah thrust roughly into his rectum.\n\nLarry's team did not abandon their team mate though. They all tried to help break up the supposed fighting, but they had been swarmed by the entire team of yellow and black clad players. There was fighting and struggling among the bigger and stronger players, while others were forced to the ground. To their humiliation, they felt the cold wet noses of the opposing team pressing and smelling their groins and rears. Then their cherries were taken just as swiftly. \n\nThe parents yelled and screamed, and some tried to help. There was only two cops at the game for security. One was requesting for back up as the other was raping the Blue Devils' coach! The parents who ran in to interfere were tackled by some of the players and treated just as badly as those already being violated. A mother raccoon wearing a black and yellow shirt who was trying to control her own son with pepper spray was soon being dragged to the ground as her own crying and pained offspring mounted her. \n\nEven the EMT crew had helped subdue the bigger players, sniffing them, and then fucking them without mercy. If the crowd was not trying to stop the fighting or being raped, they were either running out of the gymnasium in terror or filming the chaos with glee. There was even reports of more than one teenage or adult couple fornicating in the bleachers while watching the others on the floor. \n\nIt all lasted for nearly seven minutes before police stormed in. Six of the officers involved were sent on leave for physiological reasons for the force they had to give on the kids to get them to stop. Most reports read of how the players of the team known as the Killer Bees had an unfocused, glazed look about their eyes, as well as the adults involved. Most of them now say they do not remember doing any of it, and break into tears when seeing pictures and video of what they had done. Others who did recall their actions said it was like they had no control of their actions and felt like they was in a dream. Tests showed most of those involved had no drugs in their system, and those who did was mostly consisted of THC from marijuana. That was immediately dropped as the cause of the incident.\n\nPolice and Federal Bureau of Investigation are now looking for a Coach Ronald Browning, who was last seen running out the fire exit shortly after his team started their attack on the Blue Devils.\n\n\n\n\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It was Home Coming for the school, also known as Spirit Week. It was a week for the student body to come together with school pride. Yellow and black was seen everywhere, with the angry bee mascot taped all over the walls and printed on the students' clothes. But the game of the week was against the state champions, the Blue Devils. The Killer Bees was not even in the top five in the county. The knowledge that the game to lead into the home coming dance was going to be a massacre was a depressing problem for the school's staff. The idea of having their biggest loss on their home court on the biggest and most important week of the school year was going to be a devastating blow to the children who had been worked up full of pride that entire week. The parents and the local booster club had been furious and  complaining for weeks about the game scheduling. And they all had now placed the problem on Coach Browning's shoulders.

The players gathered in the center of the locker room, knowing they were about lose. Also in the room was officer Panders and the EMT crew setting up a corner for any possible accidents during the game. But their coach was not there. They had not seen their head coach all day. Not even at the pep rally. The office door then opened and the horse walked out, followed by a man they never seen before. The stranger was a short and pudgy rodent of gray fur, with a long tail that ended in a puff of pale hair. He was a cross breed of a gerbil and a hamster.

“Team,” began Coach Browning, “this is Doctor Shits.”

“Uhm, its pronounced Sheitz,” corrected the mouse like man, who did not seem to mind that the younger boys around him were laughing about his family name.

“My bad,” chuckled the horse, “Anyway. He is a former graduate of this school, and I bring him here now for he may be able to not just help us stand our ground against the Blue Devils but to beat them.”

The players looked among each other as Sheitz pulled out a pocket watch and had them all gather into a corner so that they were all facing him.

“Now, all clear your minds as best you can and focus on my watch,” the gerbster instructed.

“Are you kidding me!?” objected the team captain, Donnie. “You are actually going to hypnotize us to win?”

“Shut your mouth, Don, and let him do his job,” ordered Coach Browning. Donnie rolled his eyes but did as he was told.

“Okay,” said Doctor Sheitz, starting over. “Now, clear your minds and look upon my watch.” The man held out the gold trinket before him, no one knowing that it was actually broken and was stuck on the time of 5:27. Sheitz spun the watch upon its axis, which he kept lubed so that it would spin for a long period of time, and started to gently rock it back and forth until it was reaching a peak at every second. He clicked the tip of his tongue to ensure he had the beat right.

“Your mind is clear, and your brain is empty,” the mouse like man spoke with a soothing and calming voice as he recited lines that he had said for years to patients. “Nothing. Darkness. Black. No, not black. A small light is in the room. A big room. A room full of chairs. All the chairs are facing a wall covered in a black sheet. You sit in a chair. It is comfortable and you feel rested. You are relaxed as you are sitting in this chair. Relaxed. Rested. All the light is coming from behind the sheet. You are relaxed and feeling good as you look upon the lighted sheet. You want to know what is behind the sheet. Five, You're relaxed. Four, you are rested. Three, the sheet drops. Two, The light is forming words. One, it reads sleeeep~.”

Doctor Sheitz quietly stepped away as the coach took the place doctor was before.

“Team, we have had our challenges this year. But we now go against our biggest challenge on the most important day of the year. Your love of this school will come out tonight. Your training and practice will come to its fullest. You will play tonight to win. Losing is not an option. We are going to go out there and show not just our school that we are the best. They already know that. We are going to show the entire state and country we are the best! You smell that smell in here, that musk is our pride. When you smell that same smell on the enemy, it is not pride but fear! When I clap my hands, you will go out there and smell for that fear. Now get out there and rape them!”

Coach Browning clapped hard and enthusiastically as the team shook their heads as if startled from dozing off in class. The EMT's and Officer Panders clapped as well in encouragement, yet they shook their heads in confusion as well. But they all felt they were going to win this night. They felt like they had a new goal in life as they all yelled in pride and stormed out the door and onto the basketball court.

The doctor walked over to the horse, who was laughing and feeling a victory was in his hands.

“You sure that was a good idea to say that last line?” asked the doctor in worry.

“What do you mean?” questioned the coach,” I always end my pre-game pep talks like that.”




It was a quarter into the basketball game when it the incident began. It was already a shocking and intense game as the home team was staying tied with the state champions, something no one was expecting.

Donnie Wallace, the cheetah starter of the Killer Bees, was the first seen to do what many say initiated the events that followed. The feline was on the defensive against Larry Sullivan, a jack rabbit and star player of the Blue Devils, when Donnie seemed to just stop trying to get the ball away. His arms dropped to his sides, and he his mouth went a gape as he stared at the other player. It was so sudden that even Larry stopped for a second in confusion. However, the teen was not to miss such an opportunity and darted to the left to go around before the rest of the team could surround him.

That was when Donnie tackled Larry.

Witnesses reported seeing the cat place his face into the struggling rabbit's crotch, seeming pretty ecstatic to do so. Donnie not just removed, but tore Larry's shorts off. To the victim’s horror, other Bees came over and held him down. The fox and bison both had that ecstatic look on their faces as well. Larry called for help, but all he could hear was a loud commotion around him as he felt the cheetah thrust roughly into his rectum.

Larry's team did not abandon their team mate though. They all tried to help break up the supposed fighting, but they had been swarmed by the entire team of yellow and black clad players. There was fighting and struggling among the bigger and stronger players, while others were forced to the ground. To their humiliation, they felt the cold wet noses of the opposing team pressing and smelling their groins and rears. Then their cherries were taken just as swiftly.

The parents yelled and screamed, and some tried to help. There was only two cops at the game for security. One was requesting for back up as the other was raping the Blue Devils' coach! The parents who ran in to interfere were tackled by some of the players and treated just as badly as those already being violated. A mother raccoon wearing a black and yellow shirt who was trying to control her own son with pepper spray was soon being dragged to the ground as her own crying and pained offspring mounted her.

Even the EMT crew had helped subdue the bigger players, sniffing them, and then fucking them without mercy. If the crowd was not trying to stop the fighting or being raped, they were either running out of the gymnasium in terror or filming the chaos with glee. There was even reports of more than one teenage or adult couple fornicating in the bleachers while watching the others on the floor.

It all lasted for nearly seven minutes before police stormed in. Six of the officers involved were sent on leave for physiological reasons for the force they had to give on the kids to get them to stop. Most reports read of how the players of the team known as the Killer Bees had an unfocused, glazed look about their eyes, as well as the adults involved. Most of them now say they do not remember doing any of it, and break into tears when seeing pictures and video of what they had done. Others who did recall their actions said it was like they had no control of their actions and felt like they was in a dream. Tests showed most of those involved had no drugs in their system, and those who did was mostly consisted of THC from marijuana. That was immediately dropped as the cause of the incident.

Police and Federal Bureau of Investigation are now looking for a Coach Ronald Browning, who was last seen running out the fire exit shortly after his team started their attack on the Blue Devils.






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