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There may be some spelling mistakes... maybe. And it was a little bit hard to describe what Dreadfang was doing to Starscream, but I hope it's okay.

This is also the version2 I spoke about in the description in "Love and Pain" fanfic. Non-Yaoi, how Dreadfang would really punish Starscream.
Aaaand now for the deleted scene of "Love and Pain"...hehe >:)

I hope you like this!
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Dreadfang (c) TeleaTheHedgehawk

Starscream (c) Hasbro
","writing":"Starscream slowly walked through the halls of the battle ship, the Quite Terror. Quietly making his way to his personal quarters, he didn't want to be found. He just wants to hide from his brother, who was Dreadfang. Dreadfang wasn't really happy at the moment. He was very, very mad at Starscream for failing one of his missions. It was just a simple mission, he couldn't believe that his brother failed. Starscream was given the task to look for Autobots, but he had found nothing. And plus, that was the fourth which he didn't complete. So Dreadfang has got really angry at him. He also had seen that Starscream wasn't alright. Since weeks he could feel it now, but Starscream didn't tell him, what was wrong with him. So he decided to not bother Starscream with it anymore. But he was sick that Starscream failed the four missions he gave him. Now Dreadfang can't take it anymore and has to find him and punish him.\n\nComing around the corner, Starscream realized that it was a dead end. As the silver Seeker prepared to turn around and find another way, he jolted as a dark voice called out his name behind him. It couldn't be Knockout's voice nor Megatron's or even Vehicon's. \n\nIt sound like...\n\nLowering his wings, Starscream slowly turned around. Optics widening in fear, he saw red and grey Seeker standing several steps from him.\n\nDreadfang.\n\nStarscream began to walk backwards as Dreadfang slowly walked toward him. The silver Seeker shivered even more as he hit the wall behind him. \n\nNo...\n\nWatching in fear as Dreadfang slowly approached him, Starscream's wings lowered even more. He looked in his brother's purple optics, which blazed with pure anger. \n\nWhat now?!\n\n\"Where do you think you're going, my little brother?\" Dreadfang spoke in a soft tone, looking down at the trembling Seeker. Starscream gulped in anxiousness. He looked like he was about to flee and hide again. But that will not be that easy. Dreadfang is known as the Bloody Assassin, the most fearful Decepticon in the universe. Worse than the mighty Lord Megatron. His battle skills prove it. Dreadfang is a weapon specialist and knows how to use all weapons of any kind. He had killed millions of Cybertronians, cutting off their body limbs and heads. Anyone that got in his way, was brutally killed. Anyone that got Dreadfang angry, was in a very bad sitation. And now Dreadfang is here with Starscream. Alone. He can do whatever he wants with him.\n\n\"N-Nowhere, Dreadfang! I am just on the way to my... umm... quarters, that's all. Can-Can I go now, please? I still have much to do and...\"\n\n\"Why so hasty to leave, Screamer?\" Dreadfang cut in, chuckling deeply. \"Don't tell me that you are afraid of your own brother, little Seeker.\"\n\nNow Starscream was trembling like aspen. He kept looking around for a way to escape from the fearful Decepticon. He clawed at the wall behind him, Dreadfang's optics still ablaze with anger and now with desire. \n\n\"Dreadfang.\" Starscream hissed. \"What do you even want...\" He tried to bring up his courage.\n\n\"Oh, what I want? Why asking? You already know very good what I am planning to do to you, Screamer.\" Dreadfang smirked behind his mask, running a sharp claw over Starscream's left wing and scrapping the metal. Starscream growled at the slight pain.\"Your punishment which I promised you.\" Dreadfang chuckled darkly, tightening his grip on the sensitive wing.\nStarscream's optics widened as the Bloody Assassin grabbed his throat and threw him across the hall. He tried to quickly stand up but Dreadfang was too quick by seizing the silver Seeker's face with his left hand. Starscream whimpered in pain as the Bloody Assassin began to drag him towards a big metal door that led to cells. The cells where he was going to be punished.\n\"N-No, Dreadfang! Please! NOOO!!\" The trembling Seeker cried, struggling to get the hand off his face. But Dreadfang's grip was too much for him.\n\nOnce inside, Dreadfang flung the frightened Seeker across the room into the far wall. Before Starscream could react, Dreadfang harshly pulled him up again and slammed him into the ground, his head hit badly. Starscream's vision became blurry from the impact as he tried to get up on his hands and knees, trying to adjust his optics to normal. Bringing both of Starscream's arms up above his head, the silver Seeker yelped as Dreadfang clamped the cuffs in place. Starscream shook his head and blinked to clear his vision, and looked up as he was dangling from the ceiling by his cuffed wrists.\n\nThis cell...\n\nStarscream never liked to be here. There was energon blood on the walls, the ceiling, everywhere. The blood of prisoners which Dreadfang brought here and killed them. Fast, harsh, cruel beating, sometimes claws dragging and scraping across the trembling frames, leaving energon streaks in the wounds. Or torturing the victims with horrible tools that brought intense pain.\n\nStarscream sighed heavily as Dreadfang walked around him, looking at him eagerly. \"Ah, you look so lovely, Starscream. Chained in cuffs, in your place, just where you belong.\" Dreadfang smirked behind his mask and bent down, pulling Starscream's chin up to look in his ruby optics. The silver Seeker growled in warning. \"And what shall I do with you that I have you here, Starscream? What pain would you desire?\" The Bloody Assassin whispered in Starscream's audios. \nThe silver Seeker hissed angrily \"Go to hell, you spawned-glitch.\" \nDreadfang raised one eyebrow, before he shook his head and chuckled. He pulled away from him and reached up to those sensitive wings, setting his hand dangerously on the left one, the tips of his claws lightly rubbing, menacingly. Starscream began to thrash and try to get away from his brother's reach, but no. The chains from the ceiling and the cuffs kept him still, and he could barely move at all.. \"I guess there's no helping it.\" Dreadfang said, tapping his claws on the sensitive wing. \"We have to do this the hard way then.\" Dreadfang dragged his sharp claws along the left wing gently at first, making Starscream jolt. \"Don't touch my wings!\" He hissed. But Dreadfang completely ignored Starscream and this time, dig his claws in the seams, leaking energon. The silver Seeker cried out in pain as Dreadfang took hold of the right wing's tip and pulled on it. Starscream made another scream, much louder than before as half of the tip got teared apart. Dreadfang threw the metal to the other side of the room, to a spot where hundreds of torn limbs were laying, creating a mountain 'of death'.\n\nTears forming in the silver Seeker's optics, he begged \"No! Please, stop! It hurts!\"\n\n\"Ah, I know it hurts, Starscream. So badly.\" Dreadfang continued to scrap the left wing, making long, deep, gleaming scratches, and earning another scream from the crying Seeker. The whole time the red and grey Seeker played with the wing,, he had an evil grin shining behind his mask, eyebrows narrowed and was drowning in the noices Starscream was making. He continued to abuse Starscream's wings, digging his talons so deep they cut through to the other side.\n\n\"Oh Primus, stop! Stop!\"\n\nBut Dreadfang ignored again, his claws roaming violently over the silver Seeker's frame and harshly scratching every inch of his plating. He amusingly looked as the blue trail pooled from Starcream's wounds to his back and trickled down to the ground. Then, there was a click of a mask snapping open and Dreadfang smirked. He moved his head toward the leaking blood from the wing's injuries and slowly opened his mouth, sliding his tongue out and licked at them. Starscream didn't like this at all and he wanted to scream at his brother, but couldn't find himself to. He just shivered from the contact and did nothing, praying that Dreadfang will stop and let him fragging go. But that will not happen at all it seemed.\n\nDreadfang licked the blood last time before stopping. He walked around the silver Seeker so he was infront of him, and he kneeled down on one leg so he was to optic contact with his brother. Starscream was looking down to the ground, not daring to look to into the darkness of his brother's, but Dreadfang lifted his chin up and made him do so. There were tears sliding down the silver Seeker's face, and his breath was shallow and fast. Dreadfang licked the small drop on his own lips and chuckled. \"Who knew your blood tasted so good, Starscream? To be honest, I'm not truly surprised you endured this little play for 10 minutes.\" It was only ten minutes? It felt like endless hours to Starscream! As Dreadfang got no answer or comment from Starscream, he smirked again and placed his claws on Starscream's upper arm. He was going to continue.\n\nHe started from the arms, going down to his chest and waist and finally those beautiful legs, looking up to Starscream's face from time to time to see his expression. And what he saw just couldn't make things better. Starscream tried to hold back the screams, but they always found their way out of his mouth. These claws were sharp as a needle, just right for killing something. But Starscream knew that Dreadfang wouldn't kill him. He could do worse with these claws. He was only playing with him. Dreadfang... he just loved hearing the screams from his brother and his victims, it only encouraged him to continue his bloody job and be deadly as he always is. Even now, as he clawed Starscream's frame, he felt so proud of what his sharp claws could do. Something... from which he was so known and popular.\n\n\"Quit screaming, will you?\" Dreadfang snarled, punching the crying Seeker across his face, leaving a long scar through the left optic. The red and grey Seeker only laughed and straightened himself up.\n\nLooking down at the ground, more tears rolled down from Starscream's optics. He couldn't take more of this. \"P-Please, please, Dreadfang... I-I am sorry... Please, stop. Just stop.\" \n\n\"Yes, keep begging, Starscream. You beg so beautifully...\" The Bloody Assassin narrowed his optics at the sight before him. Starscream kneeling at his feet, begging so beautifully and whimpering in pain. He loved it. Seeing that he was only making Dreadfang more aroused with his pleading, Starscream shut his mouth immediately. There was no way he could escape. He felt like he was degraded into a toy, a whore, a useless slave.\n\nA loser.\n\nDreadfang pulled Starscream's chin back up forcefully and he looked in the ruby optics, tears flowing down Starscream's cheeks. \"What a cry baby you are. Take your punishment as a Decepticon!\" He punched him again and licked the blood from his hand, then he went behind Starscream toward a desk to pick something up. Starscream did all he could with his strenght to turn his head back enough to look what Dreadfang was doing. And then saw what he was holding.\n\nA electrowhip.\n\nWhen that rope turned to bright purple as it was activated, he should have to fear its sting. Running with bolts of electricity, it would create the worst pain. \n\nStarscream's optics widen as Dreadfang activated the whip. \"N-no... please! Don't do it! I beg you, Dreadfang! Have mercy!\" The begging of Starscream returned, he couldn't stop himself.\n\n\"Silence, pet. You're only making it worse for yourself.\" Dreadfang warned and got ready the whip. He then smacked it on Starscream's back, earning a very loud scream from the silver Seeker.\n\nIt hurt!\n\nThe whip was brought down on Starscream's back once more and this time with enough force to break the skin, sending unbelieveable pain of bolt energy through Starscream's frame. The whiplash was followed by one after another and the loud screaming echoed through the halls of Quite Terror.\n\nMinutes passed and finally Dreadfang deactivated the whip, tossing it aside. He stepped infront of Starscream and knelt down, pulling Starscream's chin up. \"Let it be a lesson, Starscream. I hope, this time, you'll remember your place.\" Starscream didn't say anything. He kept silent and he couldn't even move, his optics closed now. He was beaten, battered, bruised, scratched, wounded.\nDreadfang then stood up and freed Starscream from the cuffs. The silver Seeker fell down, unconscious. Dreadfang looked at the sight infront of him and he smirked. He comm.linked Knockout to come to the cells immediately. When Knockout got there, Dreadfang commanded him to take Starscream to the Med.Bay and take care of him.\n\"Y-Yes, Lord Dreadfang.\" He said nervously. \"I shall see to him right away.\"\n\nDreadfang nodded and walked out of the cells, making his way to his quarters. He surely teached a lesson to Starscream. And this time he knew that Starscream will not dare to fail him again.\n\nNever again.","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Starscream slowly walked through the halls of the battle ship, the Quite Terror. Quietly making his way to his personal quarters, he didn't want to be found. He just wants to hide from his brother, who was Dreadfang. Dreadfang wasn't really happy at the moment. He was very, very mad at Starscream for failing one of his missions. It was just a simple mission, he couldn't believe that his brother failed. Starscream was given the task to look for Autobots, but he had found nothing. And plus, that was the fourth which he didn't complete. So Dreadfang has got really angry at him. He also had seen that Starscream wasn't alright. Since weeks he could feel it now, but Starscream didn't tell him, what was wrong with him. So he decided to not bother Starscream with it anymore. But he was sick that Starscream failed the four missions he gave him. Now Dreadfang can't take it anymore and has to find him and punish him.

Coming around the corner, Starscream realized that it was a dead end. As the silver Seeker prepared to turn around and find another way, he jolted as a dark voice called out his name behind him. It couldn't be Knockout's voice nor Megatron's or even Vehicon's.

It sound like...

Lowering his wings, Starscream slowly turned around. Optics widening in fear, he saw red and grey Seeker standing several steps from him.

Dreadfang.

Starscream began to walk backwards as Dreadfang slowly walked toward him. The silver Seeker shivered even more as he hit the wall behind him.

No...

Watching in fear as Dreadfang slowly approached him, Starscream's wings lowered even more. He looked in his brother's purple optics, which blazed with pure anger.

What now?!

"Where do you think you're going, my little brother?" Dreadfang spoke in a soft tone, looking down at the trembling Seeker. Starscream gulped in anxiousness. He looked like he was about to flee and hide again. But that will not be that easy. Dreadfang is known as the Bloody Assassin, the most fearful Decepticon in the universe. Worse than the mighty Lord Megatron. His battle skills prove it. Dreadfang is a weapon specialist and knows how to use all weapons of any kind. He had killed millions of Cybertronians, cutting off their body limbs and heads. Anyone that got in his way, was brutally killed. Anyone that got Dreadfang angry, was in a very bad sitation. And now Dreadfang is here with Starscream. Alone. He can do whatever he wants with him.

"N-Nowhere, Dreadfang! I am just on the way to my... umm... quarters, that's all. Can-Can I go now, please? I still have much to do and..."

"Why so hasty to leave, Screamer?" Dreadfang cut in, chuckling deeply. "Don't tell me that you are afraid of your own brother, little Seeker."

Now Starscream was trembling like aspen. He kept looking around for a way to escape from the fearful Decepticon. He clawed at the wall behind him, Dreadfang's optics still ablaze with anger and now with desire.

"Dreadfang." Starscream hissed. "What do you even want..." He tried to bring up his courage.

"Oh, what I want? Why asking? You already know very good what I am planning to do to you, Screamer." Dreadfang smirked behind his mask, running a sharp claw over Starscream's left wing and scrapping the metal. Starscream growled at the slight pain."Your punishment which I promised you." Dreadfang chuckled darkly, tightening his grip on the sensitive wing.
Starscream's optics widened as the Bloody Assassin grabbed his throat and threw him across the hall. He tried to quickly stand up but Dreadfang was too quick by seizing the silver Seeker's face with his left hand. Starscream whimpered in pain as the Bloody Assassin began to drag him towards a big metal door that led to cells. The cells where he was going to be punished.
"N-No, Dreadfang! Please! NOOO!!" The trembling Seeker cried, struggling to get the hand off his face. But Dreadfang's grip was too much for him.

Once inside, Dreadfang flung the frightened Seeker across the room into the far wall. Before Starscream could react, Dreadfang harshly pulled him up again and slammed him into the ground, his head hit badly. Starscream's vision became blurry from the impact as he tried to get up on his hands and knees, trying to adjust his optics to normal. Bringing both of Starscream's arms up above his head, the silver Seeker yelped as Dreadfang clamped the cuffs in place. Starscream shook his head and blinked to clear his vision, and looked up as he was dangling from the ceiling by his cuffed wrists.

This cell...

Starscream never liked to be here. There was energon blood on the walls, the ceiling, everywhere. The blood of prisoners which Dreadfang brought here and killed them. Fast, harsh, cruel beating, sometimes claws dragging and scraping across the trembling frames, leaving energon streaks in the wounds. Or torturing the victims with horrible tools that brought intense pain.

Starscream sighed heavily as Dreadfang walked around him, looking at him eagerly. "Ah, you look so lovely, Starscream. Chained in cuffs, in your place, just where you belong." Dreadfang smirked behind his mask and bent down, pulling Starscream's chin up to look in his ruby optics. The silver Seeker growled in warning. "And what shall I do with you that I have you here, Starscream? What pain would you desire?" The Bloody Assassin whispered in Starscream's audios.
The silver Seeker hissed angrily "Go to hell, you spawned-glitch."
Dreadfang raised one eyebrow, before he shook his head and chuckled. He pulled away from him and reached up to those sensitive wings, setting his hand dangerously on the left one, the tips of his claws lightly rubbing, menacingly. Starscream began to thrash and try to get away from his brother's reach, but no. The chains from the ceiling and the cuffs kept him still, and he could barely move at all.. "I guess there's no helping it." Dreadfang said, tapping his claws on the sensitive wing. "We have to do this the hard way then." Dreadfang dragged his sharp claws along the left wing gently at first, making Starscream jolt. "Don't touch my wings!" He hissed. But Dreadfang completely ignored Starscream and this time, dig his claws in the seams, leaking energon. The silver Seeker cried out in pain as Dreadfang took hold of the right wing's tip and pulled on it. Starscream made another scream, much louder than before as half of the tip got teared apart. Dreadfang threw the metal to the other side of the room, to a spot where hundreds of torn limbs were laying, creating a mountain 'of death'.

Tears forming in the silver Seeker's optics, he begged "No! Please, stop! It hurts!"

"Ah, I know it hurts, Starscream. So badly." Dreadfang continued to scrap the left wing, making long, deep, gleaming scratches, and earning another scream from the crying Seeker. The whole time the red and grey Seeker played with the wing,, he had an evil grin shining behind his mask, eyebrows narrowed and was drowning in the noices Starscream was making. He continued to abuse Starscream's wings, digging his talons so deep they cut through to the other side.

"Oh Primus, stop! Stop!"

But Dreadfang ignored again, his claws roaming violently over the silver Seeker's frame and harshly scratching every inch of his plating. He amusingly looked as the blue trail pooled from Starcream's wounds to his back and trickled down to the ground. Then, there was a click of a mask snapping open and Dreadfang smirked. He moved his head toward the leaking blood from the wing's injuries and slowly opened his mouth, sliding his tongue out and licked at them. Starscream didn't like this at all and he wanted to scream at his brother, but couldn't find himself to. He just shivered from the contact and did nothing, praying that Dreadfang will stop and let him fragging go. But that will not happen at all it seemed.

Dreadfang licked the blood last time before stopping. He walked around the silver Seeker so he was infront of him, and he kneeled down on one leg so he was to optic contact with his brother. Starscream was looking down to the ground, not daring to look to into the darkness of his brother's, but Dreadfang lifted his chin up and made him do so. There were tears sliding down the silver Seeker's face, and his breath was shallow and fast. Dreadfang licked the small drop on his own lips and chuckled. "Who knew your blood tasted so good, Starscream? To be honest, I'm not truly surprised you endured this little play for 10 minutes." It was only ten minutes? It felt like endless hours to Starscream! As Dreadfang got no answer or comment from Starscream, he smirked again and placed his claws on Starscream's upper arm. He was going to continue.

He started from the arms, going down to his chest and waist and finally those beautiful legs, looking up to Starscream's face from time to time to see his expression. And what he saw just couldn't make things better. Starscream tried to hold back the screams, but they always found their way out of his mouth. These claws were sharp as a needle, just right for killing something. But Starscream knew that Dreadfang wouldn't kill him. He could do worse with these claws. He was only playing with him. Dreadfang... he just loved hearing the screams from his brother and his victims, it only encouraged him to continue his bloody job and be deadly as he always is. Even now, as he clawed Starscream's frame, he felt so proud of what his sharp claws could do. Something... from which he was so known and popular.

"Quit screaming, will you?" Dreadfang snarled, punching the crying Seeker across his face, leaving a long scar through the left optic. The red and grey Seeker only laughed and straightened himself up.

Looking down at the ground, more tears rolled down from Starscream's optics. He couldn't take more of this. "P-Please, please, Dreadfang... I-I am sorry... Please, stop. Just stop."

"Yes, keep begging, Starscream. You beg so beautifully..." The Bloody Assassin narrowed his optics at the sight before him. Starscream kneeling at his feet, begging so beautifully and whimpering in pain. He loved it. Seeing that he was only making Dreadfang more aroused with his pleading, Starscream shut his mouth immediately. There was no way he could escape. He felt like he was degraded into a toy, a whore, a useless slave.

A loser.

Dreadfang pulled Starscream's chin back up forcefully and he looked in the ruby optics, tears flowing down Starscream's cheeks. "What a cry baby you are. Take your punishment as a Decepticon!"  He punched him again and licked the blood from his hand, then he went behind Starscream toward a desk to pick something up. Starscream did all he could with his strenght to turn his head back enough to look what Dreadfang was doing. And then saw what he was holding.

A electrowhip.

When that rope turned to bright purple as it was activated, he should have to fear its sting. Running with bolts of electricity, it would create the worst pain.

Starscream's optics widen as Dreadfang activated the whip. "N-no... please! Don't do it! I beg you, Dreadfang! Have mercy!" The begging of Starscream returned, he couldn't stop himself.

"Silence, pet. You're only making it worse for yourself." Dreadfang warned and got ready the whip. He then smacked it on Starscream's back, earning a very loud scream from the silver Seeker.

It hurt!

The whip was brought down on Starscream's back once more and this time with enough force to break the skin, sending unbelieveable pain of bolt energy through Starscream's frame. The whiplash was followed by one after another and the loud screaming echoed through the halls of Quite Terror.

Minutes passed and finally Dreadfang deactivated the whip, tossing it aside. He stepped infront of Starscream and knelt down, pulling Starscream's chin up. "Let it be a lesson, Starscream. I hope, this time, you'll remember your place." Starscream didn't say anything. He kept silent and he couldn't even move, his optics closed now. He was beaten, battered, bruised, scratched, wounded.
Dreadfang then stood up and freed Starscream from the cuffs. The silver Seeker fell down, unconscious. Dreadfang looked at the sight infront of him and he smirked. He comm.linked Knockout to come to the cells immediately. When Knockout got there, Dreadfang commanded him to take Starscream to the Med.Bay and take care of him.
"Y-Yes, Lord Dreadfang." He said nervously. "I shall see to him right away."

Dreadfang nodded and walked out of the cells, making his way to his quarters. He surely teached a lesson to Starscream. And this time he knew that Starscream will not dare to fail him again.

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