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Only mild smut.

Sorry.", "writing": "It wasn't like Saskia was a close friend of Nula's. The only one Nula considered close at all was Ruby, but all the same here she was at Saskia's Birthday bash. She had made her own grand entrance of course, letting everyone know she was there with a quick dash around the room to stir up the already strewn confetti. It wasn't like running was a party trick and she was nowhere near as fast as her Dad, but Nula could make a show of it none the less. It was practically what she was born to do.\n\n\tIt was an important Birthday for the sparrow as she was now turning twenty one and officially becoming business partners with her Mother. Nula couldn't understand the appeal of such responsibility or a job that involved so much oil, but Saskia wasn't exactly the prettiest peach so a grimy job probably suited her. She was dolled up for her big day though, and she had done well with what she had, Nula supposed. \n\n\t“She swears it was him! I wonder what he's like?”\n\n\t“Oh gross, he's like, our parents age.”\n\n\t“No he's not though. I mean...isn't he like, immortal or something?”\n\n\t“I didn't even think he was real.”\n\n\t“She said she's never been fucked better, but he left before she even got her breath back.”\n\n\tNula was struggling to eavesdrop on the conversation going on behind her while she had too many people to focus on ahead of her. Gossip was never a reliable source, but this chat between girls sounded even more confused than usual. Immortal? Older man? Suddenly her secret rendezvous with her dark and handsome stranger didn't seem so exotic. Who among them was sleeping with an older guy anyway? Nula was aware being a virgin at nineteen actually stood her out from the majority of her peers...but their sex lives all seemed pretty dull to her. A one night stand with an immortal? \n\n\t“You going to be at the club later Nula?” one of the guys holding a drink for her asked. Brought back to reality, Nula put her public face back on and shrugged with a wink.\n\n\t“You haven't been on the pole for a while,” another purred.\n\n\t“How about I swing by before the show and help you pick a cost...” another started, when from across the room, one of the girls who was originally behind her squealed loudly. All faces turned toward her.\n\n\t“Hey everyone! Saskia totally slept with Shadow the Hedgehog a few nights ago!”\n\n\tLike a swarm, the sudden news drew everyone in to a tight circle around the Birthday girl. Everyone except for Nula, who remained stood in her spot, with no drink and no reason to keep her game face on. The room filled with a thousand questions and at the centre of it all was a bashful looking bird who was trying to act coy. The curious crowd asked everything, from obscene details to measurements, and Nula stood agape. It was like watching a wallflower become drowned in ivy. Saskia could do little but stutter, throwing one fowl glance over at the girl who had started it all.\n\n\t“Shadow the Hedgehog!?” Nula cried over the din, “I can't believe any of you are buying that. Is it any wonder she's not saying anything? It's not true.”\n\n\tA few members of the crowd glanced her way, but only for a fleeting moment. All Nula could do was stand and stare at the spectacle before her. She caught Saskia's eye only once, before the Birthday girl was buried.\n\n******\n\n\tHe watched her slip silently from the room. For a girl who could persuade a brick wall to look at her, she was exceptionally good at sneaking away when she needed to. For him it was his job to disappear without leaving a trace, but for his sister, he assumed, it was a trick she had learned to get away from the hoards who hung on her every breath. \n\n\tShe didn't need to have been so careful with her exit. Brant crossed the room with barely a creep but he remained unnoticed. He had spent so many years of his life observing and spying on others that he could read just about everyone. The crowd was too focussed in their need for something juicy to bite in to. They couldn't see the upset in Saskia's eyes as she tried to hold their questions at bay. Nula had seen that same fear too, of that he had little doubt. The look in her eye hinted danger. He had yet to assess just what she was capable of, but their Mother's fire must surely burn within her. Nula was certainly more her Dad's daughter than anything, but Brant could see Amy in the quiet moments when she thought nobody was looking at her. That mixture of vulnerability and determination. \n\n\tHe didn't need to see where she had gone. In the few months he had gone from spying on her to being so close to having her...he had realised just how strong their bond was. He really could sense her movements, and if she would only accept that she was his twin, he knew that connection could only grow. Following that sixth sense led him to the open door of a storage cupboard, the sound of shuffling boxes coming from inside.\n\n\tThe door didn't make a sound as he pushed it open. He watched her climb the unstable mountain she had made for herself, lighter in hand, apparently pilfered from one of the boxes she now ascended. Without so much as a moments hesitation she held the lighter above her head, directly under one of the smoke detectors lining the ceiling above them. After a few seconds the scream of the alarms rang out, as did the frustrated cries of the party goers down the hall.\n\n\tThe party ending. The Birthday girl losing her moment in the limelight.\n\n\t“So this is the real you, is it?” he sighed.\n\n******\n\t\n\tEven for a hedgehog who spent her time dancing in mid air with thin hoops for support, the world span too quick for Nula, and her stomach dropped as she started to fall. He had startled her, and in her haste to turn around she had lost her already unsure footing. She was going to break something, or crack her head open, or...\n\n\tIt was not the floor she hit, but a strong pair of arms. He caught her. He could not have run through the chaos of cardboard she had made, but all the same she had landed safely in grasp. The shock of the moment froze the logical portion of her mind. The din of the alarms covered her small cry of confusion.\n\n\t“Someone else is being paid attention to for five minutes, and you find a way to ruin their day for them?”\n\n\tShe shook her head, not taking in the question, “How...you were by the door and....”\n\n\tFor less than a second her world went black, only to then refocus with a different viewpoint. They were still in the stockroom, the musty smell still surrounding them and the siren still deafening her., but they were no longer buried in her destroyed climbing frame. They were on the other side of the room altogether.\n\n\tShe wriggled out of his grip and backed away. Hitting the wall behind her she stayed focused on him, a hand subconsciously twisting the heavy metal collar on her neck. \n\n\t“Chaos control,” she gasped, “you can control chaos without a Chaos Emerald.”\n\n\t“Saskia didn't want to be hounded like that. Did you know that? Or were you really just upset they weren't looking at you?” he asked again, raising his eyebrows slightly. \n\n\t“Even Uncle Knuckles can't do that and he's the Guardian of the Master Emerald,” she muttered, ignoring him again, “who...who are you?”\n\n\tShe watched without flinching as he approached. Standing her ground, trying to hide the confusion in her face as he held on to her chin, she heard him say that same line again.\n\n\t“I am your brother.”\n\n\t“Stop saying that,” she snapped, pulling her face away, “you can't be! Mother wouldn't give up her child! I would remember you! It was funny to begin with Brant but stop lying to me. This is all just to...”\n\n\t“Get close to you?” he spat back, taking the words from her, “you think I'm just one of those guys out there? Inventing any excuse to have you pay special attention to me? Do you think they would see what you just did as a petulant child not getting her own way...or someone using that guise to cover up her true nature?”\n\n\tNula felt her throat tighten. Why had she done it? The annoyance of the mindless mass drowning out her accusations...or the fact that seeing Saskia buried by those she called friends was like seeing herself reflected back at her.\n\n\t“My true nature? And what...'brother'...is that exactly?” she sneered, suddenly angry at his assumptions. \n\n\tHe took her face in his hands. Her arms were limp at her sides, arms usually so quick to push unwanted attention away. She clenched her fists all the same to hide the shaking that was starting to spread through her.\n\n\t“The girl who has the worlds eyes upon her...but wants nothing more than to be seen.”\n\n\tNula parted her lips to retort, but he pressed his own against them. Her arms finally found life again, but the weak push she gave against his chest only seemed to encourage him. The wall behind her stopped her backing away, but as she felt his tongue press to hers she knew it was more than the bricks holding her in place.\n\n\tHow had he won her over? Who was he? If she even dare entertain the notion that they were, in fact, brother and sister...then she would have to accept the sin she was allowing to take over her body. He was a stranger to her, but she had never desired someone to touch her like this before. The sound of the alarms finally died down and she was left with the sound of her heart pounding in her ears.\n\n\tHe pulled away, barely gasping while she gulped in air. She tried to turn away from him but he held her face steady. \n\n\t“I see you Nula,” he whispered, “every minute of every day I see you. I feel you as if you were beside me, even when I'm on the other side of the planet. Even when Father tells me I must not be near to you...to protect you...I feel you. How is it you can't sense me in the same way? How have you believed you were an only child for so long?”\n\n\tShe could no longer speak. There was a crack in her belief, in her faith in her reality, and her mind couldn't begin to comprehend what truth lay below it. When he began to kiss her again he lifted her on to his hips, releasing her face should she wish to pull away, but she did not. If she didn't let her lust quiet her every other thought she might collapse, so with greed she consumed him. Her hips twisted against him, the delicious connection feeling new but natural. For his part, his hands remained carefully on her waist, but the warmth grip felt like fire on her fur.\n\n\tWhen the sprinklers started up and Nula could feel the chill of the water hitting her head, she didn't even pause to open her eyes. She didn't know what she was doing but she didn't want to stop, finding she was now grinding against something much harder than before. She would have stopped, if not for the sensation of him pushing harder against her, catching that button of nerves buried beneath her clothes. Her hands held on to every part of his face and head and spines, until she feared she would pass out of she didn't stop kissing him. With the water from the sprinklers pouring down their faces she finally pulled away to look in to his eyes.\n\n\tThat was when she finally saw the truth.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It wasn't like Saskia was a close friend of Nula's. The only one Nula considered close at all was Ruby, but all the same here she was at Saskia's Birthday bash. She had made her own grand entrance of course, letting everyone know she was there with a quick dash around the room to stir up the already strewn confetti. It wasn't like running was a party trick and she was nowhere near as fast as her Dad, but Nula could make a show of it none the less. It was practically what she was born to do.

\tIt was an important Birthday for the sparrow as she was now turning twenty one and officially becoming business partners with her Mother. Nula couldn't understand the appeal of such responsibility or a job that involved so much oil, but Saskia wasn't exactly the prettiest peach so a grimy job probably suited her. She was dolled up for her big day though, and she had done well with what she had, Nula supposed.

\t“She swears it was him! I wonder what he's like?”

\t“Oh gross, he's like, our parents age.”

\t“No he's not though. I mean...isn't he like, immortal or something?”

\t“I didn't even think he was real.”

\t“She said she's never been fucked better, but he left before she even got her breath back.”

\tNula was struggling to eavesdrop on the conversation going on behind her while she had too many people to focus on ahead of her. Gossip was never a reliable source, but this chat between girls sounded even more confused than usual. Immortal? Older man? Suddenly her secret rendezvous with her dark and handsome stranger didn't seem so exotic. Who among them was sleeping with an older guy anyway? Nula was aware being a virgin at nineteen actually stood her out from the majority of her peers...but their sex lives all seemed pretty dull to her. A one night stand with an immortal?

\t“You going to be at the club later Nula?” one of the guys holding a drink for her asked. Brought back to reality, Nula put her public face back on and shrugged with a wink.

\t“You haven't been on the pole for a while,” another purred.

\t“How about I swing by before the show and help you pick a cost...” another started, when from across the room, one of the girls who was originally behind her squealed loudly. All faces turned toward her.

\t“Hey everyone! Saskia totally slept with Shadow the Hedgehog a few nights ago!”

\tLike a swarm, the sudden news drew everyone in to a tight circle around the Birthday girl. Everyone except for Nula, who remained stood in her spot, with no drink and no reason to keep her game face on. The room filled with a thousand questions and at the centre of it all was a bashful looking bird who was trying to act coy. The curious crowd asked everything, from obscene details to measurements, and Nula stood agape. It was like watching a wallflower become drowned in ivy. Saskia could do little but stutter, throwing one fowl glance over at the girl who had started it all.

\t“Shadow the Hedgehog!?” Nula cried over the din, “I can't believe any of you are buying that. Is it any wonder she's not saying anything? It's not true.”

\tA few members of the crowd glanced her way, but only for a fleeting moment. All Nula could do was stand and stare at the spectacle before her. She caught Saskia's eye only once, before the Birthday girl was buried.

******

\tHe watched her slip silently from the room. For a girl who could persuade a brick wall to look at her, she was exceptionally good at sneaking away when she needed to. For him it was his job to disappear without leaving a trace, but for his sister, he assumed, it was a trick she had learned to get away from the hoards who hung on her every breath.

\tShe didn't need to have been so careful with her exit. Brant crossed the room with barely a creep but he remained unnoticed. He had spent so many years of his life observing and spying on others that he could read just about everyone. The crowd was too focussed in their need for something juicy to bite in to. They couldn't see the upset in Saskia's eyes as she tried to hold their questions at bay. Nula had seen that same fear too, of that he had little doubt. The look in her eye hinted danger. He had yet to assess just what she was capable of, but their Mother's fire must surely burn within her. Nula was certainly more her Dad's daughter than anything, but Brant could see Amy in the quiet moments when she thought nobody was looking at her. That mixture of vulnerability and determination.

\tHe didn't need to see where she had gone. In the few months he had gone from spying on her to being so close to having her...he had realised just how strong their bond was. He really could sense her movements, and if she would only accept that she was his twin, he knew that connection could only grow. Following that sixth sense led him to the open door of a storage cupboard, the sound of shuffling boxes coming from inside.

\tThe door didn't make a sound as he pushed it open. He watched her climb the unstable mountain she had made for herself, lighter in hand, apparently pilfered from one of the boxes she now ascended. Without so much as a moments hesitation she held the lighter above her head, directly under one of the smoke detectors lining the ceiling above them. After a few seconds the scream of the alarms rang out, as did the frustrated cries of the party goers down the hall.

\tThe party ending. The Birthday girl losing her moment in the limelight.

\t“So this is the real you, is it?” he sighed.

******
\t
\tEven for a hedgehog who spent her time dancing in mid air with thin hoops for support, the world span too quick for Nula, and her stomach dropped as she started to fall. He had startled her, and in her haste to turn around she had lost her already unsure footing. She was going to break something, or crack her head open, or...

\tIt was not the floor she hit, but a strong pair of arms. He caught her. He could not have run through the chaos of cardboard she had made, but all the same she had landed safely in grasp. The shock of the moment froze the logical portion of her mind. The din of the alarms covered her small cry of confusion.

\t“Someone else is being paid attention to for five minutes, and you find a way to ruin their day for them?”

\tShe shook her head, not taking in the question, “How...you were by the door and....”

\tFor less than a second her world went black, only to then refocus with a different viewpoint. They were still in the stockroom, the musty smell still surrounding them and the siren still deafening her., but they were no longer buried in her destroyed climbing frame. They were on the other side of the room altogether.

\tShe wriggled out of his grip and backed away. Hitting the wall behind her she stayed focused on him, a hand subconsciously twisting the heavy metal collar on her neck.  

\t“Chaos control,” she gasped, “you can control chaos without a Chaos Emerald.”

\t“Saskia didn't want to be hounded like that. Did you know that? Or were you really just upset they weren't looking at you?” he asked again, raising his eyebrows slightly.

\t“Even Uncle Knuckles can't do that and he's the Guardian of the Master Emerald,” she muttered, ignoring him again, “who...who are you?”

\tShe watched without flinching as he approached. Standing her ground, trying to hide the confusion in her face as he held on to her chin, she heard him say that same line again.

\t“I am your brother.”

\t“Stop saying that,” she snapped, pulling her face away, “you can't be! Mother wouldn't give up her child! I would remember you! It was funny to begin with Brant but stop lying to me. This is all just to...”

\t“Get close to you?” he spat back, taking the words from her, “you think I'm just one of those guys out there? Inventing any excuse to have you pay special attention to me? Do you think they would see what you just did as a petulant child not getting her own way...or someone using that guise to cover up her true nature?”

\tNula felt her throat tighten. Why had she done it? The annoyance of the mindless mass drowning out her accusations...or the fact that seeing Saskia buried by those she called friends was like seeing herself reflected back at her.

\t“My true nature? And what...'brother'...is that exactly?” she sneered, suddenly angry at his assumptions.

\tHe took her face in his hands. Her arms were limp at her sides, arms usually so quick to push unwanted attention away. She clenched her fists all the same to hide the shaking that was starting to spread through her.

\t“The girl who has the worlds eyes upon her...but wants nothing more than to be seen.”

\tNula parted her lips to retort, but he pressed his own against them. Her arms finally found life again, but the weak push she gave against his chest only seemed to encourage him. The wall behind her stopped her backing away, but as she felt his tongue press to hers she knew it was more than the bricks holding her in place.

\tHow had he won her over? Who was he? If she even dare entertain the notion that they were, in fact, brother and sister...then she would have to accept the sin she was allowing to take over her body. He was a stranger to her, but she had never desired someone to touch her like this before. The sound of the alarms finally died down and she was left with the sound of her heart pounding in her ears.

\tHe pulled away, barely gasping while she gulped in air. She tried to turn away from him but he held her face steady.

\t“I see you Nula,” he whispered, “every minute of every day I see you. I feel you as if you were beside me, even when I'm on the other side of the planet. Even when Father tells me I must not be near to you...to protect you...I feel you. How is it you can't sense me in the same way? How have you believed you were an only child for so long?”

\tShe could no longer speak. There was a crack in her belief, in her faith in her reality, and her mind couldn't begin to comprehend what truth lay below it. When he began to kiss her again he lifted her on to his hips, releasing her face should she wish to pull away, but she did not. If she didn't let her lust quiet her every other thought she might collapse, so with greed she consumed him. Her hips twisted against him, the delicious connection feeling new but natural. For his part, his hands remained carefully on her waist, but the warmth grip felt like fire on her fur.

\tWhen the sprinklers started up and Nula could feel the chill of the water hitting her head, she didn't even pause to open her eyes. She didn't know what she was doing but she didn't want to stop, finding she was now grinding against something much harder than before. She would have stopped, if not for the sensation of him pushing harder against her, catching that button of nerves buried beneath her clothes. Her hands held on to every part of his face and head and spines, until she feared she would pass out of she didn't stop kissing him. With the water from the sprinklers pouring down their faces she finally pulled away to look in to his eyes.

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