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Although the incident has left the young fox feeling like he'll be kicked out since he has a relative, what oh? whats this? big strong Ravage is showing concern well lets hope that talk will sooth the nervous fox", "writing": "As the truck pulled up in front of the house, Ryuki quickly unbuckled his seat, taking the burgers and hurried to the front door, Bruno just sighed knowing the fox was trying to avoid the inevitable talk was going to happen no matter what.\n\nHe quickly followed the fox to the front door before placing a hand on his shoulder “Hold up kid” He said, gently pulling Ryuki away from the door “I think we need to have a chat about what happened”\n\n“If it’s okay with you, could we just skip the talk and head inside?” Ryuki asked while lowering his head as he was turned around.\n\nBruno sighed as he knelt down so he could get the fox to look at him in the eye “C’mon kid it’s me you’re talking to here” He said in a soft tone\n\n“I know, but I just don’t want to talk about it” Ryuki sighed as he leant against the wall.\n\n“Well, how about I ease the tension, would you like to explain what happened?” Bruno asked.\n\nRyuki just shifted his feet on the welcome mat before giving a slow nod while rubbing his left arm and sighing “Alright” He replied.\n\n“You have my full attention” Bruno said as he remained crouched.\n\n“That guy was my uncle from Dad’s side of the family, unlike my Pot-head of a father, he’s a raging alcoholic and he gets pretty violent when he’s drunk” Ryuki said as he sat down, setting the bags aside.\n\nBruno nodded before sitting down also “Alright that answers my question on why you didn’t go live with him, but what was he raging on about before?” the bear asked.\n\n“He’s got this idea that if my parents get baked or drunk or leave me at the bar, I go straight to his place and stay with him for however long until he either gets sick of me or my parents pick me up, the former usually comes first with him booting my ass out of his caravan” Ryuki replied, pulling his knees up to his chest.\n\nBruno could only chuckle at how the fox teen was acting, though his chuckle soon turned into a full blown laugh when he soon realised why he was acting this way, Ryuki waited for the bear to finish his laughter before grabbing the bag of burgers and standing up.\n\n“Kid, hold on a sec, I’m not mad at you okay, why I be?” Bruno asked as he grabbed Ryuki’s wrist gently.\n\n“I just thought you would have been since I didn’t even tell you about him” Ryuki Answered softly while leaning against the wall.\n\nBruno stood up, wrapping an arm around the fox and rubbed his arm softly “Well, I can respect your reasons for not telling me; hell if you’d have introduce me to him I would’ve punched him in the chin. But not matter what he says Ryuki, you’re staying here with me and Ravage, I promise you will do much better with us than if you went to live with your uncle” He chuckled before giving a light smile as he pulled Ryuki into a half-hug, patting his back before pulling away and opening the door.\n\n\nRyuki gave a small smile after the hug ended and watched the bear vanish inside before turning to see the mist shimmer in the afternoon light before walking inside and shutting the door, immediately greeted by a now semi-clothed Ravage whom was wearing a pair of loose fitting boxers which did nothing to hide the noticeable bulge of the panthers endowment “Where did you guys disappear too?” The panther asked as he sat down on the couch.\n\n“We went out for burgers but, we had an incident that changed our plans” Bruno replied as he joined Ravage on the couch while Ryuki sat down in front of the coffee table and placed the two burger bags in the centre.\n\n“Then why come back here? Thought you’d stick around and maybe eat at the local parks?” Ravaged asked as he turned to face the bear while scratching his thigh.\n\n“Plans where changed when my uncle showed up and man handled my in front the entire district” Ryuki spoke up before sighing as he stood up “Hey Bruno, mind if I head upstairs and eat on the balcony?”\n\nThe bear blinked as he watched the young teen fox take three burgers and nodded “Sure kid, just let me know if you need some company” He said while watching Ryuki walk up the stairs and gives a low growl.\n\n“You want to tell me the whole story now instead of leaving me to figure it out?” Ravage asked, jabbing Bruno’s side with his elbow.\n\n“Okay, basically I wanted to treat the boy to celebrate him breaking free from school, so I took him down to a local burger joint and order roughly a dozen of them and a bag of onion rings, next thing I know Ryuki is being threatened by an old guy who turns out to be his uncle” Bruno began huffing in annoyance.\n\n“Alright so why is the kid dragging his tail between his legs?” \n\n“He thinks I’m mad that he didn’t tell me about him having an uncle”\n\n“Just how bad can this guy be if the kid wouldn’t tell you of all people?” Ravage asked as he rubbed his head in confusion, knowing full well that his roommate was indeed quite close to the fox.\n\nA low sigh was emitted from the bear as he rubbed his brow before leaning forward and exhaling deeply “Okay, you remember that badger across the street when you first moved in? How he instantly made you hate him after you saw how he treated young kids who walked past his home?” He asked.\n\n“Yeah, throwing mace bombs at them as well as running out with a butcher knife because he was drunk and loved terrorizing kids” Ravage replied while growling at the memories.\n\n“Well Ryuki’s uncle is like that except he thinks he owns the kid whenever the folks get drunk or stoned, poor kid must’ve been scared as hell whenever they failed to pick him up from school” Bruno said, thumping his fist on the arm of the chair.\n\n“Alright, how about I go and talk with the kid, just to put him at ease and ensure that no-one’s kicking anyone out?” Ravage suggested as he stood up, making his way to the stairs.\n\n“Uh…that would be, almost kind of you” Bruno smirked in reply before chuckling “Already going soft on Ryuki after a short while”\n\n“Oh shut up” The panther shot back as he vanished upstairs.\n\nUp on the balcony, Ryuki was sitting in one of the deck chairs, staring at the forest view, watching the mist cast shadows of the thick redwood trees as it wisp between each and every trunk and branch, watching the sun slowly set, making the shadows stretch and become taller before he sighed and fiddled around with his have eating cheese burger “Why can’t things just stay like they are for one day without something else ruining it?” He mumbled aloud\n\n“Cus life can be a bitch” Ravage stated bluntly as he stood next to where Ryuki sat “But it can also give some unexpected gifts and surprises” Turns to give the fox a light smirk before kneeling down only to adjust his boxers to keep his member from slipping out.\n\n“Guess you’ve come out here to tell I should get packing and hit the road?” Ryuki asked, not even bothering to give the panther eye contact.\n\n“Actually I came here to say the exact opposite kid” Ravage replied\n\nRyuki’s ears perked at the change of tone in the older panther’s voice and turned to see a soft smile curl on the others face “Huh?” Was all that he could say.\n\n“Listen, you’re nice kid and you don’t rub my fur the wrong way like so many others have, between you and me, Bruno and you are the only ones in this street that I actually like, and no before you even asked I liked you before you saw my junk” Ravage explained before chuckling as he patted Ryuki’s head, his smile become more broader.\n\n“Can we keep that between us and Bruno?” Ryuki pleaded as a light tinged of pink streaked across his face\n\nRavage nodded while ruffling the fox’s hair “Nothing will leave this house” He answered with chuckle.\n\nRyuki gave a soft grin as he sat up, feeling much more at ease knowing he was still welcomed to live with the two older men, although Ravages smile soon curled into a playful smirk while standing up, gesturing to Ryuki to do the same which fox did so in a nervous manner “You gotta do me a favour” He said.\n\n“What sort of favour?” Ryuki asked, becoming a little nervous to hear the answer.\n\n“Well if you’re going to live here with us, you gotta relax okay? I may be big, strong and scary looking but that don’t mean I can’t tolerate a guest in my home, I mean if Bruno thinks you’re okay than that’s good enough for me” Ravage replied and chuckled when he heard the teen fox utter a sigh of relief.\n\n“Okay, I may take a while, but I’ll try” Ryuki said\n\n“And another thing too” Ravage added as he lead Ryuki back indoors just as the sun began touching down over the trees\n\nRyuki nodded giving the panther his full attention “If anything’s bothering your or if your uncle has shown up again, let me or Bruno know so we can help out okay?” The panther offered before crouching down again\n\nRyuki gave a slow nod before rubbing his eyes as the familiar prickly feeling of approaching tears rose up, the only person he knew that showed him any care were either Bruno or his lifelong falcon friend but she had to move to a different state due to family finances and he hasn’t heard back from her since which lead the fox to rely on the bear for support, but never had some he just met shown him this much care before and even offering to listen to his problems just made his inside burst with warm blossoms.\n\nRavage caught the fox rubbing his eyes and softened his expressions “Kid, you—“ He was cut off in mid-sentence as Ryuki threw his arms around him, burying his face into the panthers chest letting the tears fall and whimpered softly to avoid the impending sobs that were sure to follow.\n\nEach whimper shook his body, alerting Ravage to take a quick look around before he held the fox close to him, patting his quivering back as his smile softened before resting his chin on Ryuki’s head whispering\n\n“Don’t worry kid, we’ll look after you”\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "As the truck pulled up in front of the house, Ryuki quickly unbuckled his seat, taking the burgers and hurried to the front door, Bruno just sighed knowing the fox was trying to avoid the inevitable talk was going to happen no matter what.

He quickly followed the fox to the front door before placing a hand on his shoulder “Hold up kid” He said, gently pulling Ryuki away from the door “I think we need to have a chat about what happened”

“If it’s okay with you, could we just skip the talk and head inside?” Ryuki asked while lowering his head as he was turned around.

Bruno sighed as he knelt down so he could get the fox to look at him in the eye “C’mon kid it’s me you’re talking to here” He said in a soft tone

“I know, but I just don’t want to talk about it” Ryuki sighed as he leant against the wall.

“Well, how about I ease the tension, would you like to explain what happened?” Bruno asked.

Ryuki just shifted his feet on the welcome mat before giving a slow nod while rubbing his left arm and sighing “Alright” He replied.

“You have my full attention” Bruno said as he remained crouched.

“That guy was my uncle from Dad’s side of the family, unlike my Pot-head of a father, he’s a raging alcoholic and he gets pretty violent when he’s drunk” Ryuki said as he sat down, setting the bags aside.

Bruno nodded before sitting down also “Alright that answers my question on why you didn’t go live with him, but what was he raging on about before?” the bear asked.

“He’s got this idea that if my parents get baked or drunk or leave me at the bar, I go straight to his place and stay with him for however long until he either gets sick of me or my parents pick me up, the former usually comes first with him booting my ass out of his caravan” Ryuki replied, pulling his knees up to his chest.

Bruno could only chuckle at how the fox teen was acting, though his chuckle soon turned into a full blown laugh when he soon realised why he was acting this way, Ryuki waited for the bear to finish his laughter before grabbing the bag of burgers and standing up.

“Kid, hold on a sec, I’m not mad at you okay, why I be?” Bruno asked as he grabbed Ryuki’s wrist gently.

“I just thought you would have been since I didn’t even tell you about him” Ryuki Answered softly while leaning against the wall.

Bruno stood up, wrapping an arm around the fox and rubbed his arm softly “Well, I can respect your reasons for not telling me; hell if you’d have introduce me to him I would’ve punched him in the chin. But not matter what he says Ryuki, you’re staying here with me and Ravage, I promise you will do much better with us than if you went to live with your uncle” He chuckled before giving a light smile as he pulled Ryuki into a half-hug, patting his back before pulling away and opening the door.


Ryuki gave a small smile after the hug ended and watched the bear vanish inside before turning to see the mist shimmer in the afternoon light before walking inside and shutting the door, immediately greeted by a now semi-clothed Ravage whom was wearing a pair of loose fitting boxers which did nothing to hide the noticeable bulge of the panthers endowment “Where did you guys disappear too?” The panther asked as he sat down on the couch.

“We went out for burgers but, we had an incident that changed our plans” Bruno replied as he joined Ravage on the couch while Ryuki sat down in front of the coffee table and placed the two burger bags in the centre.

“Then why come back here? Thought you’d stick around and maybe eat at the local parks?” Ravaged asked as he turned to face the bear while scratching his thigh.

“Plans where changed when my uncle showed up and man handled my in front the entire district” Ryuki spoke up before sighing as he stood up “Hey Bruno, mind if I head upstairs and eat on the balcony?”

The bear blinked as he watched the young teen fox take three burgers and nodded “Sure kid, just let me know if you need some company” He said while watching Ryuki walk up the stairs and gives a low growl.

“You want to tell me the whole story now instead of leaving me to figure it out?” Ravage asked, jabbing Bruno’s side with his elbow.

“Okay, basically I wanted to treat the boy to celebrate him breaking free from school, so I took him down to a local burger joint and order roughly a dozen of them and a bag of onion rings, next thing I know Ryuki is being threatened by an old guy who turns out to be his uncle” Bruno began huffing in annoyance.

“Alright so why is the kid dragging his tail between his legs?”

“He thinks I’m mad that he didn’t tell me about him having an uncle”

“Just how bad can this guy be if the kid wouldn’t tell you of all people?” Ravage asked as he rubbed his head in confusion, knowing full well that his roommate was indeed quite close to the fox.

A low sigh was emitted from the bear as he rubbed his brow before leaning forward and exhaling deeply “Okay, you remember that badger across the street when you first moved in? How he instantly made you hate him after you saw how he treated young kids who walked past his home?” He asked.

“Yeah, throwing mace bombs at them as well as running out with a butcher knife because he was drunk and loved terrorizing kids” Ravage replied while growling at the memories.

“Well Ryuki’s uncle is like that except he thinks he owns the kid whenever the folks get drunk or stoned, poor kid must’ve been scared as hell whenever they failed to pick him up from school” Bruno said, thumping his fist on the arm of the chair.

“Alright, how about I go and talk with the kid, just to put him at ease and ensure that no-one’s kicking anyone out?” Ravage suggested as he stood up, making his way to the stairs.

“Uh…that would be, almost kind of you” Bruno smirked in reply before chuckling “Already going soft on Ryuki after a short while”

“Oh shut up” The panther shot back as he vanished upstairs.

Up on the balcony, Ryuki was sitting in one of the deck chairs, staring at the forest view, watching the mist cast shadows of the thick redwood trees as it wisp between each and every trunk and branch, watching the sun slowly set, making the shadows stretch and become taller before he sighed and fiddled around with his have eating cheese burger “Why can’t things just stay like they are for one day without something else ruining it?” He mumbled aloud

“Cus life can be a bitch” Ravage stated bluntly as he stood next to where Ryuki sat “But it can also give some unexpected gifts and surprises” Turns to give the fox a light smirk before kneeling down only to adjust his boxers to keep his member from slipping out.

“Guess you’ve come out here to tell I should get packing and hit the road?” Ryuki asked, not even bothering to give the panther eye contact.

“Actually I came here to say the exact opposite kid” Ravage replied

Ryuki’s ears perked at the change of tone in the older panther’s voice and turned to see a soft smile curl on the others face “Huh?” Was all that he could say.

“Listen, you’re nice kid and you don’t rub my fur the wrong way like so many others have, between you and me, Bruno and you are the only ones in this street that I actually like, and no before you even asked I liked you before you saw my junk” Ravage explained before chuckling as he patted Ryuki’s head, his smile become more broader.

“Can we keep that between us and Bruno?” Ryuki pleaded as a light tinged of pink streaked across his face

Ravage nodded while ruffling the fox’s hair “Nothing will leave this house” He answered with chuckle.

Ryuki gave a soft grin as he sat up, feeling much more at ease knowing he was still welcomed to live with the two older men, although Ravages smile soon curled into a playful smirk while standing up, gesturing to Ryuki to do the same which fox did so in a nervous manner “You gotta do me a favour” He said.

“What sort of favour?” Ryuki asked, becoming a little nervous to hear the answer.

“Well if you’re going to live here with us, you gotta relax okay? I may be big, strong and scary looking but that don’t mean I can’t tolerate a guest in my home, I mean if Bruno thinks you’re okay than that’s good enough for me” Ravage replied and chuckled when he heard the teen fox utter a sigh of relief.

“Okay, I may take a while, but I’ll try” Ryuki said

“And another thing too” Ravage added as he lead Ryuki back indoors just as the sun began touching down over the trees

Ryuki nodded giving the panther his full attention “If anything’s bothering your or if your uncle has shown up again, let me or Bruno know so we can help out okay?” The panther offered before crouching down again

Ryuki gave a slow nod before rubbing his eyes as the familiar prickly feeling of approaching tears rose up, the only person he knew that showed him any care were either Bruno or his lifelong falcon friend but she had to move to a different state due to family finances and he hasn’t heard back from her since which lead the fox to rely on the bear for support, but never had some he just met shown him this much care before and even offering to listen to his problems just made his inside burst with warm blossoms.

Ravage caught the fox rubbing his eyes and softened his expressions “Kid, you—“ He was cut off in mid-sentence as Ryuki threw his arms around him, burying his face into the panthers chest letting the tears fall and whimpered softly to avoid the impending sobs that were sure to follow.

Each whimper shook his body, alerting Ravage to take a quick look around before he held the fox close to him, patting his quivering back as his smile softened before resting his chin on Ryuki’s head whispering

“Don’t worry kid, we’ll look after you”

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