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As always, should be a self contained work. Set a few weeks after "The cult's lair" ", "writing": "Kyle Blackpaw lay in a bed in the motel room. His school bus turned camper was fine and all, but it made going into city hard so he was once again animating the dead wreck of a car picked up from the local junkyard. No engine, but the wheels still turned and using magic to turn the drive shaft was hardly a complicated feat. However it did leave him and his companions without a place to sleep. Well, the one companion that slept anyway.\n\nSaid companion currently had his head between the canine legs. It had been a few weeks since Rick’s big epiphany that he was, against all odds, happier being the canines magically enforced slave than he ever had been in his regular life. And right now the green and red lizard was happily breathing his masters scent as Kyle rubbed his crest absently as the news played in the background. \n\nHe just wished the canine would actually do something with it. No matter how many times rick assured him that there was no issue the canine still treated him as something like a companion. Maybe not an equal since he was not also a 200 year old immortal wizard, but still as a fellow adult and person.\n\nRick got it, Kyle wasn’t comfortable with his side of the relationship. But it would be nice if the canine would order him to suck his dick without being gently reminded that Rick was here to serve him, or to torture him without periodically stopping to ask him if he was doing OK. \n\nKyle flicked through the news channels. He knew what Rick wanted him to do. But every time he went to give an order something inside stopped him. An anxiety. Whatever else he may have been, he was also a massive worrywart.\n\nAnd so it was that he lay here with Ricks face in his lap and both of them wondering why he couldn’t even say “suck my dick”. His most recent conversation with Danielle replayed in his head.\n\n-----\n\n“I really don’t get you Kyle.” The spirit of a deer who was currently the canines familiar, shook her head at him “You serve a pain god, you have a happy slave and willing pain slut. Two willing pain sluts when you make one of those temporary bodies for me. And you can literally use pain to fuel your magic. Why do you need like ten assurances somebody is OK these days. Its only gotten worse since you got Rick.”\n\n“Yeah, I don’t get me either. It seems like it should be so easy.”\n\n“Or even if you don’t wanna order him around directly, just grab him and use him.”\n\n“Yeah”\n\n“What are you so afraid of.”\n\nKyle sighed. He knew this one. The root cause of it all “Becoming the kind of person who hurts people for their own gain.”\n\n“That’s not gonna happen, and not what you’d be doing. He’s literally begging for it. I am too.”\n\n“This is true, and yet here we are. Just talking in the same circles that we have been for the past few weeks.”\n\n“You are impossible”\n\n-----\n\nHis heart was racing. He was so fucking nervous. His breathing trembled. If Rick noticed he did a good job at hiding it. Shakily he tightened his grip on the lizards crest and dragged the lizards head into position. His arm felt like it was made of lead.\n\nHis tip was already poking out of his sheathe from the previous attention. He guided his slave’s head to his tip, and obediently Rick latched onto the tip, his long tongue snaking down into the canines sheathe. The canine’s arousal quickly grew, more of his member emerging for rick to taste. And gulp down. He let go of Ricks crest, moving both his hands to behind Rick’s head. He began to buck his hips, pulling down the lizard’s head to meet each thrust. Slowly he got bolder, using force to move Rick’s head to meet his thrusts instead of merely guiding the lizards movement’s. \n\nHe pushed deeper, forcing the lizard to gag with each shove. The lizards shoulders heaved and he swallowed repeatedly swallowed hard. His eyes were watering. His dick was leaking. Finally his master was giving him some of the rough use he craved. \n\nThe gags grew harder as Kyle started to force his knot in and out with each thrust as well, Rick fighting to keep his teeth back as his jaw began to immediately ache. Then he was pushed down hard and held there, the intruding member cutting off his air. His body repeatedly heaved as he gagged. His lungs started to burn as the canine kept him down. Was Kyle going to keep going until he passed out? Until he died? If he did, would the canine revive him? Or would he just be thrown away, used up for his master’s pleasure. His lungs were screaming at him now. He lost his control and started to struggle, trying to lift his head, trying to pull from the canines grip. \n\nKyle saw Rick start to struggle and was filled with doubt. He let go of the lizards head, which shot up and took a deep breath of air. Rick obediently went back down on him sucking him to completion, swallowing the full load. \n\n“Thank you master.” \n\nKyle could see the disappointment in his face though.\n\n-----\n\nA bit later\n\n“Hey Rick, I’m sorry.” \n\n“For what master?” \n\n“For not being up to the task.”\n\n“You know all I ask is to serve you master.”\n\n“Yeah…”\n\n-----\n\n“We have to get him over this.” Danielle told Rick as he jerked off. Modesty between the two was long dead at this point.\n\nRick and Danielle didn’t get too much time without Kyle, but it just didn’t do to bring your servants to certain meetings. Kyle was getting the details on the next ‘bounty’ they were going after and was in a private meeting with some demon prince of knowledge or something. It didn’t really matter. \n\n“Why? Yeah I’d like it if he could get rough with me more and had better carry through, but that’s not who he is.” Rick picked up the pace a bit, seemingly frustrated.\n\n“Well aside from how pent up you’re getting again.”\n\n“Shut up, I am not”\n\n“Whatever you say. But isn’t that why we’re here? ‘training aids’ I’m pretty sure I remember being called.”\n\nRick gave up on it. The last few times he’d had to resort to choking himself and he didn’t particularly feel like putting in the effort right now. “Yeah that what she called us.”\n\n“She concocted that whole thing to get us to hurt each other to show Kyle its OK to hurt us. She got you in touch with your masochism, showed me I can be a bit of a sadist. This whole things been geared at showing Kyle there’s good pain. Right?”\n\n“I see what you’re saying but why would she do that?”\n\n“I think she genuinely likes him, wants him to be successful at this avatar stuff. He’s never gonna go become the next Vlad the Impaler or anything despite what he seems to think, so this is her alternative.”\n\nRick looked thoughtful “But why do we want to help her?”\n\n“We want to help HIM. I’m fairly certain she could just kill him outright if it came to it. How long do you think she’ll wait before deciding its not worth quote unquote training him any more. Besides, you’ve seen it. He’s blaming himself like he always does.”\n\n“You know Danielle, it always surprises me just how sharp you are sometimes. OK, what’s the plan.”\n\n“Right now? Simple. We create opportunity whenever we can. Kinda hard for me most of the time, but try to leave yourself exposed and vulnerable. It’s hard for him but he’s already trying. We just need to make sure he has the chance to practice.” \n\n-----\n\n\nKyle drove the animated wreck through the city to their next stop. Apparently some amateur fortune teller downtown had sold her soul for enough insight to actually become somewhat legit. And to also occasionally steal souls when the cards fell wrong. Now that her time was up she was using that insight to be just enough of a pain in the ass that they’d asked Kyle to go get her. It was pretty low key even by his standards for such things. But the entity she made a deal with wanted her dealt with on principle, couldn’t let people think they could get away with breaking a pact. He had given Kyle free reign to deal with the matter as he pleased and left to his discretion everything else of hers, from possessions to body to whatever souls she had collected. An easy job to keep him preoccupied for a bit.\n\nRick sat quietly in the passenger seat, gazing blankly out the window. He’d gotten more and more into the whole servant thing, these days mostly not speaking until spoken to and yes-manning everything the canine said. It was really starting to grind on Kyle. \n\n“What’s got you all quiet over there?”\n\n“Apologies master, did you wish to discuss something?”\n\nKyle sighed. It wasn’t Rick’s fault, wasn’t right to be irritated with him. “You don’t have to do that. You’re still your own person as much as possible.”\n\n“I’m apologize if my behavior upsets you master. Is there a way you would like me to act instead.”\n\n“I want you to be you. You’ve been going harder and harder on this whole ‘anything you want master’ shtick. I can’t remember the last time you even said my name instead of master.”\n\nRick snapped angrily “Well maybe if you’d use me every once in a while I wouldn’t need to.” His hand shot up over his mouth “My sincerest apologies master, I don’t know where that outburst came from. Please disregard what I said, I am happy just to meet your needs.”\nKyle nodded. Now it made sense. “Of course.”\n\n-----\n\nKyle swiped the key card He’d gotten a couple funny looks from the desk during check in, but frankly he had something else on his mind. Something he’d been mentally working himself up to since Rick’s fit of honesty in the car. It was small, but it would be something. \n\nHe probably didn’t need to worry about sliding into becoming a history changing despot of cruelty quite yet. \n\nThe reader beeped and flashed red at him. He checked the room number on the cardboard sleeve the card had been given in, then glanced at the door. He then took two steps to his right and swiped the card in the reader of the correct door. It flashed green. He went to open it, but paused. Now or never he thought. \n\nHe tossed cardboard sleeve, which still held the second key card, at Rick. \n\n“Go get” he wheezed, stopping to clear his throat. “Go get the bags and gear from the car.” He ordered. It was pathetic that he’d had to psych himself up for this.\n\n“Yes master.” Rick immediately turned to complete his task, but not before Kyle caught the slight hint of a grin.\n\nHe turned back to the door and tried to turn the handle, but it had re-locked. Swiping the card again, he practically collapsed through the door. \n\n\n-----\n\nHe hadn’t actually stayed. They’d dropped their stuff in the room and he’d thrown up the usual spells he used to make sure he get lice or bedbugs. They’d clean the room to a livable standard, but it would take a couple hours. In the meantime he wanted to run some recon.\n\nUncharacteristically, Rick had requested to go run some errands of his own instead of sticking to his master, something Kyle had been only to happy to OK. \n\nHe strolled down the strip, red sleeveless duster coat gently rippling as he chatted with Danielle. To most people he just appeared to be talking to himself, but given that this was the red light district that hardly made him the biggest weirdo on the street.\n\n“I’m proud of you.” The deer told him.\n\n“He would have done it anyway.”\n\n“Yeah but its a big step away from this whole,” Danielle turned her face into a caricature of his and put on a mocking voice “I’m gonna become an irredeemable monster with no self control” her face returned to the normal projection of her former body “anxiety you’ve got going on.”\n\n“OK first, wow, you’re getting good at changing what appearance. Second, rude. It’s a legitimate concern. If somebody spent a hundred years trying to brainwash you to torture families and raze towns you’d worried too.”\n\n“I know you, that’s not who you are. You’d never do that.” she reassured the dog. He’d not mentioned that before.\n\n“I wish that were true. Best I can hope for is I’ll never do it again.”\n\nDanielle stopped “What” \n\nKyle kept walking.\n\nZipping back to to fly along side the canine “We can talk about that later I guess. Whatever is in your past, its not who you are right now. Somebody who got splatted for yelling at the god of pain to protect their companions isn’t going to just slip up and accidentally subjugate a country.\n\n“I hope you are right.”\n\n-----\n“You should get your fortune told.”\n\n“I really shouldn’t, that’s the target.”\n\n“So? Can she actually do anything to you?”\n\n“No but if she runs its going to be a pain.”\n\n“Shouldn’t she already know you’re coming.”\n\n“Generally, but not in any great detail.”\n\n“So she’s not going to know who you are.”\n\n“We’re only scoping it out.”\n\n“So scope it out up close by getting a reading, she’ll think you’re a customer.”\n\n“Doubtful, but I can see I’m not getting out of this.\n\nHe stood from the trashcan he’d been half leaning half sitting on and crossed the street. The booth was made up to look like a stereotypical fortunetellers wagon, wooden wagon wheels attached to the side facing the street. It also bore a neon sign up top that depicted several tarot cards.\n\nAs he approached he saw an elderly gray rabbit push aside the black curtain that hid the rear of the booth. “I’ve been expecting you dear. Both of you. In fact should there not be a third?”\n\n“He’s busy unfortunately.”\n\n“I seeeeee, well, shall I read your cards anyway?” \n\n“You are awfully calm about this.”\n\n“My dear, you are my best option. With you I simply end, while all other roads I see lead to great suffering.” The elderly bunny let out a cackle. “How one with your disposition ends up serving the power you do, well life is strange I suppose.”\n\n“I suppose that a quick reading won’t hurt.”\n\n“EXCELLENT!”\n\nThe elderly rabbit gave a dexterous and showy shuffle of the cards, dancing them between her fingers before reforming the deck and closing her eyes.\n\n“We shall keep this brief. A three card spread. The past.”\n\nThe first card from the deck was laid. It depicted an individual being hanged from a gnarled old tree. \n\n“The hanged man. Sacrifice”\n\n“The present”\n\nThis card simply showed a skull. “Death. Change. The end of the old and beginning of the new”\n\n“The future.” In spite of himself Kyle held his breath.\n\n“Temperance. Moderation. Balance.”\n\nThe rabbit opened her eyes again. “You walk the border of two worlds. Keep them in balance and you will prosper.” She yawned. “Come, my hour grows late, and it would not do for us to conduct business on the street.\n\nA short time later the canine stepped out of the back of the tent.\n\n“That’s it?” Danielle asked\n\n“That’s it.” Kyle answered.\n\n“She really didn’t try anything?”\n\n“I guess there’s just not much point if you already know the outcome.”\n\n-----\n\nIt had been a nice find, the room they were staying in. It was cheap but well equipped. Although once he saw the mirror on the ceiling over the bed and the significant number of tie points on all the furniture he understood the look the desk clerk had given him over asking about multiple nights. To be fair, he hadn’t known that the fortune teller had set up in the red light district.\n\nHe’d run a second set of cleaning and disinfecting type spells over the room, just in case.\n\nWhen Kyle returned to the bedroom he found Rick asleep. The mostly green lizard was sprawled out over the bed, red belly exposed. He breathed softly and didn’t stir as Kyle entered the room. Danielle was nowhere to be seen. He could do anything he wanted to Rick, to his slave, right now. Rick would almost certainly thank him for it, his newfound masochism and desire to serve both desperately starving. \n\nThe canine considered what the fortune teller had said. Sacrifice in the past, change in the present, balance in the future.\n\n“Lets try this again.” He muttered to nobody in particular. He took a few moments, rehearsing what he was about to do in his head. Then he grabbed the lizards arms and used them to drag the lizard around so that his head was hanging off the edge of the bed. As Rick blinked awake at the sudden disturbance, he found a familiar sent filling his nose.\n\n“Open”\n\nRick was having trouble putting his situation together, brain skipping like a phonograph playing a warped record. The order cut through his confusion and he dutifully opened his mouth. He didn’t need to think about the rest.\n\nPositioned like this Kyle pushed forward until his sheathe was pressed to Rick’s nostrils, skipping any sort of warm up. Rick gagged, retching at the unexpected deep throating. Kyle wasted no time, holding the lizards head he began to thrust into the lizards face as if it were a sex toy, Rick once again retching and squirming. Every thrust seemed to drag out another strand of throat slime, all of which dropped onto the lizards face, rapidly turning his visage into a giant mess. The tears from his watering eyes ran up his head and dripped from one of the points on his crest.\n\nKyle repositioned his grip, grabbing the lizard by the throat as his knot popped free of his sheath. He slammed it into his slave, whose body heaved and twitched as it fought to expel the intruder. This time he didn’t pull out, holding himself locked in place as he felt Rick weaken. As Ricks eye’s rolled back in his head and he was on the verge of blacking out he was vaguely aware of his throat being filled with cum, which some reflex swallowed over and over as his master came. The world was a scant pinprick of light when suddenly air filled his lungs.\n\nRick gasped, taking in as much as as quickly as he could. His own dick was rock hard and twitching like crazy. As the lizard breathed in sweet air Kyle climbed up onto him and wrapped his muzzle around the slick tapered lizard shaft. It didn’t taste much before Rick blew, pent up see filling his master’s maw. \n\n-----\n\n“Thank you master” \n\n“No, thank you. You did a good job.”\n\nRick lay on his back on the bed, breathing deeply while Kyle clung to his side.\n\n“Seriously though Kyle, that was incredible.”\n\n“Ayy, you’re using my name again.”\n\nIt was at this point Danielle coasted through the wall, back from spying on other rooms. “Aww don’t tell me I missed the fun.”\n\n-----\n\n“So let me get this straight, you have me spend hours making you a temporary body, and what you want to do with the very short time it lasts is take a bath?”\n\n“Um, its a hot tub. They’re amazing and I haven’t done anything in water in ages. I figured it could be romantic. That’s why I asked Rick to pull this together.” She waved at the dinner, candles and radio playing soft music. “You seem stressed so I figure a change of pace could be nice.”\n‘\n“Thanks Danielle.” Kyle disrobed as they both climbed into the hot tub. \n\nHe sank in and regretted never trying one before “OK, I’ll admit, this is, in fact, amazing. We’ll have to figure out how to get one of these on the bus”\n\nDanielle laughed lightly. “Sometimes civilization is good, huh cowboy?”\n\nKyle grinned at her “I guess it is. I’ve never really gotta a chance to see anything but the underside of it.”\n\n“Well when you get a week of leave together let me know and we’ll hit the town.” \n\n“What leave, I don’t even have dental.”\n\nDanielle couldn’t help herself, “They don’t even have dental.” she told the empty space beside her. “Oh right, you’ve probably never seen those. We’ll have to marathon them at some point. Your cultural zeitgeist needs some catching up.”\n\nKyle grinned at her “how about we enjoy this date before we start planning the next one.”\n\nDanielle flushed red at the word date. “O-oh, would you look at that, the food is here.” She passed Kyle a plate bearing a slab of meat and a glass of wine, before picking up a plate of salad and wine for herself.\n\n“Thank you dear, it looks lovely” Kyle pushed Danielle’s buttons further, enjoying seeing the usually shameless girl act shy.\n\nA soft silence filled the room as Kyle figured out how to maneuver his plate so he could operate both a fork and steak knife. He ended up setting it on the lip of the tub between him and Danielle before cutting off a piece as Danielle eagerly watched. \n\nHe’d slightly suspected but as soon as the meat hit his taste buds he knew her game. He decided to tease her a bit more as revenge. \n\n“Oh wow, that’s absolutely amazing.” he set the cutlery aside and picked up the meat, roughly tearing off a chunk as Danielle couldn’t even pretend she wasn’t staring.\n\n“Oh fuck” she muttered, hand disappearing below the water and into her legs, completely mesmerized as Kyle savagely tore through the rest of the cut.\n\nThe canine gave her a predatory smile. Had his teeth always been that sharp? “Wow Danielle, that was better than any steak I’ve ever tasted. What was it?”\n\n“venison” Danielle let out with a squeak.\n\n“Oh well isn’t that a coincidence.” Kyle loomed over her\n\n“Oh god fuck me” the deer’s voice was barely audible. Getting this turned on had not been part of her plan. \n\n“Oh with pleasure.” The canine picked her up, lifting her easily so that her back was laying on the edge of the tub and her legs were hooked over his shoulders. “Although I suspect you’re actually angling for something with a little more… BITE” He snapped his jaw at her.\n\nDanielle nearly came just from that, but Kyle wasn’t done with her. He bit along both of her inner thighs, gently at first, gauging her reactions, and then with increasing force. For her part Danielle squealed with joy every single time.\n\nThen it came, Kyle bit her hard enough that his fangs pierced into her flesh. At the coppery tang of blood his eyes shot open and he started to pull back, but Danielle grabbed his head and pulled it right up against her pussy as she came, her juices mixing with the faint hint of blood and flooding his senses. \n\nHe started back to work again, alternating between using his broad tongue to delve into her and giving rough nips against her clit. Still riding the high of the last orgasm she felt herself getting near again. \n\nShe leaned up as far as she could. “I bet it tastes even better fresh.” \n\nHe’d expected it but the request still hit him like a truck. He froze.\n\nDanielle released his head. She saw the conflict on his face. This was asking a lot even given the progress he’d made. \n\nKyle swallowed. He grabbed his glass on wine and downed it in one before repeating the same with hers.\n\nPainfully slowly he opened up, fangs tickling the flesh of her thigh where he had made her bleed. Danielle could feel her heart racing.\n\nAnd all at once his jaw snapped shut, and combined with a yank of his head he tore a large chunk out of her thigh. Then he was back in, pulling another chunk free, before his jaw locked around her nethers and he tore them open.\n\n-----\n\nIt hadn’t taken long for her constructed body to bleed out and fade from existence thanks to the torn arteries in her thigh, blood staining the water pink, which slowly turned back to clear as it all disappeared. Danielle was a spirit again, but that wasn’t stopping her from fiercely playing with herself.\n\n“Oh my god that was so fucking hot, where did that whole savage wolf thing come from.” She moaned came hard again with a shout before her voice returned to normal, not troubled by needing to catch her breath in her current state. “Seriously, that was amazing”\n\nIt was Kyle’s turn to blush, still lounging in the hot tub. “Well, when I tasted that somebody gave me a plate of venison it was pretty obvious what game you wanted to play. I’m glad it was such a hit.” His voice got more serious “I’ll admit, I was more than a little worried when you started bleeding. And when you asked me to…” he trailed off “I very nearly couldn’t do it.”\n\nDanielle’s voice snapped him back “Well I, for one, am super glad that you did. Especially that last bit. It hurt so fucking much. It was amazing.”\n\n“Amazing, huh.”\n\n“Yeah-huh”\n\n“Amazing.” Kyle muttered thoughtfully, relaxing back into the water.\n\n-----\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Kyle Blackpaw lay in a bed in the motel room.  His school bus turned camper was fine and all, but it made going into city hard so he was once again animating the dead wreck of a car picked up from the local junkyard.  No engine, but the wheels still turned and using magic to turn the drive shaft was hardly a complicated feat.  However it did leave him and his companions without a place to sleep. Well, the one companion that slept anyway.

Said companion currently had his head between the canine legs.  It had been a few weeks since Rick’s big epiphany that he was, against all odds, happier being the canines magically enforced slave than he ever had been in his regular life.  And right now the green and red lizard was happily breathing his masters scent as Kyle rubbed his crest absently as the news played in the background.  

He just wished the canine would actually do something with it.  No matter how many times rick assured him that there was no issue the canine still treated him as something like a companion. Maybe not an equal since he was not also a 200 year old immortal wizard, but still as a fellow adult and person.

Rick got it, Kyle wasn’t comfortable with his side of the relationship. But it would be nice if the canine would order him to suck his dick without being gently reminded that Rick was here to serve him,  or to torture him without periodically stopping to ask him if he was doing OK.

Kyle flicked through the news channels.  He knew what Rick wanted him to do. But every time he went to give an order something inside stopped him. An anxiety. Whatever else he may have been, he was also a massive worrywart.

And so it was that he lay here with Ricks face in his lap and both of them wondering why he couldn’t even say “suck my dick”.   His most recent conversation with Danielle replayed in his head.

-----

“I really don’t get you Kyle.”  The spirit of a deer who was currently the canines familiar, shook her head at him “You serve a pain god, you have a happy slave and willing pain slut. Two willing pain sluts when you make one of those temporary bodies for me.  And you can literally use pain to fuel your magic.  Why do you need like ten assurances somebody is OK these days. Its only gotten worse since you got Rick.”

“Yeah, I don’t get me either. It seems like it should be so easy.”

“Or even if you don’t wanna order him around directly, just grab him and use him.”

“Yeah”

“What are you so afraid of.”

Kyle sighed. He knew this one. The root cause of it all  “Becoming the kind of person who hurts people for their own gain.”

“That’s not gonna happen, and not what you’d be doing.  He’s literally begging for it. I am too.”

“This is true, and yet here we are. Just talking in the same circles that we have been for the past few weeks.”

“You are impossible”

-----

His heart was racing. He was so fucking nervous. His breathing trembled. If Rick noticed he did a good job at hiding it. Shakily he tightened his grip on the lizards crest and dragged the lizards head into position.  His arm felt like it was made of lead.

His tip was already poking out of his sheathe from the previous attention. He guided his slave’s head to his tip, and obediently Rick latched onto the tip, his long tongue snaking down into the canines sheathe. The canine’s arousal quickly grew, more of his member emerging for rick to taste.  And gulp down.  He let go of Ricks crest, moving both his hands to behind Rick’s head.  He began to buck his hips, pulling down the lizard’s head to meet each thrust. Slowly he got bolder, using force to move Rick’s head to meet his thrusts instead of merely guiding the lizards movement’s.  

He pushed deeper, forcing the lizard to gag with each shove. The lizards shoulders heaved and he swallowed repeatedly swallowed hard.  His eyes were watering.  His dick was leaking.   Finally his master was giving him some of the rough use he craved.

The gags grew harder as Kyle started to force his knot in and out with each thrust as well, Rick fighting to keep his teeth back as his jaw began to immediately ache. Then he was pushed down hard and held there, the intruding member cutting off his air. His body repeatedly heaved as he gagged. His lungs started to burn as the canine kept him down.  Was Kyle going to keep going until he passed out?  Until he died? If he did, would the canine revive him? Or would he just be thrown away, used up for his master’s pleasure. His lungs were screaming at him now. He lost his control and started to struggle, trying to lift his head, trying to pull from the canines grip.  

Kyle saw Rick start to struggle and was filled with doubt. He let go of the lizards head, which shot up and took a deep breath of air. Rick obediently went back down on him sucking him to completion, swallowing the full load.  

“Thank you master.”  

Kyle could see the disappointment in his face though.

-----

A bit later

“Hey Rick, I’m sorry.”

“For what master?”    

“For not being up to the task.”

“You know all I ask is to serve you master.”

“Yeah…”

-----

“We have to get him over this.”  Danielle told Rick as he jerked off.  Modesty between the two was long dead at this point.

Rick and Danielle didn’t get too much time without Kyle, but it just didn’t do to bring your servants to certain meetings.  Kyle was getting the details on the next ‘bounty’ they were going after and was in a private meeting with some demon prince of knowledge or something.  It didn’t really matter.

“Why? Yeah I’d like it if he could get rough with me more and had better carry through, but that’s not who he is.” Rick picked up the pace a bit, seemingly frustrated.

“Well aside from how pent up you’re getting again.”

“Shut up, I am not”

“Whatever you say.  But isn’t that why we’re here? ‘training aids’ I’m pretty sure I remember being called.”

Rick gave up on it.  The last few times he’d had to resort to choking himself and he didn’t particularly feel like putting in the effort right now.  “Yeah that what she called us.”

“She concocted that whole thing to get us to hurt each other to show Kyle its OK to hurt us.  She got you in touch with your masochism, showed me I can be a bit of a sadist.  This whole things been geared at showing Kyle there’s good pain. Right?”

“I see what you’re saying but why would she do that?”

“I think she genuinely likes him, wants him to be successful at this avatar stuff. He’s never gonna go become the next Vlad the Impaler or anything despite what he seems to think, so this is her alternative.”

Rick looked thoughtful “But why do we want to help her?”

“We want to help HIM. I’m fairly certain she could just kill him outright if it came to it. How long do you think she’ll wait before deciding its not worth quote unquote training him any more.  Besides, you’ve seen it. He’s blaming himself like he always does.”

“You know Danielle, it always surprises me just how sharp you are sometimes.  OK, what’s the plan.”

“Right now? Simple. We create opportunity whenever we can.  Kinda hard for me most of the time, but try to leave yourself exposed and vulnerable. It’s hard for him but he’s already trying.  We just need to make sure he has the chance to practice.”

-----


Kyle drove the animated wreck through the city to their next stop.  Apparently some amateur fortune teller downtown had sold her soul for enough insight to actually become somewhat legit. And to also occasionally steal souls when the cards fell wrong. Now that her time was up she was using that insight to be just enough of a pain in the ass that they’d asked Kyle to go get her.  It was pretty low key even by his standards for such things. But the entity she made a deal with wanted her dealt with on principle, couldn’t let people think they could get away with breaking a pact. He had given Kyle free reign to deal with the matter as he pleased and left to his discretion everything else of hers, from possessions to body to whatever souls she had collected. An easy job to keep him preoccupied for a bit.

Rick sat quietly in the passenger seat, gazing blankly out the window.  He’d gotten more and more into the whole servant thing, these days mostly not speaking until spoken to and yes-manning everything the canine said. It was really starting to grind on Kyle.  

“What’s got you all quiet over there?”

“Apologies master, did you wish to discuss something?”

Kyle sighed.  It wasn’t Rick’s fault, wasn’t right to be irritated with him. “You don’t have to do that. You’re still your own person as much as possible.”

“I’m apologize if my behavior upsets you master. Is there a way you would like me to act instead.”

“I want you to be you. You’ve been going harder and harder on this whole ‘anything you want master’ shtick.  I can’t remember the last time you even said my name instead of master.”

Rick snapped angrily “Well maybe if you’d use me every once in a while I wouldn’t need to.” His hand shot up over his mouth “My sincerest apologies master, I don’t know where that outburst came from. Please disregard what I said, I am happy just to meet your needs.”
Kyle nodded. Now it made sense.  “Of course.”

-----

Kyle swiped the key card He’d gotten a couple funny looks from the desk during check in, but frankly he had something else on his mind.  Something he’d been mentally working himself up to since Rick’s fit of honesty in the car.  It was small, but it would be something.  

He probably didn’t need to worry about sliding into becoming a history changing despot of cruelty quite yet.

The reader beeped and flashed red at him.  He checked the room number on the cardboard sleeve the card had been given in, then glanced at the door. He then took two steps to his right and swiped the card in the reader of the correct door. It flashed green.  He went to open it, but paused. Now or never he thought.

He tossed cardboard sleeve, which still held the second key card, at Rick.

“Go get” he wheezed, stopping to clear his throat. “Go get the bags and gear from the car.” He ordered. It was pathetic that he’d had to psych himself up for this.

“Yes master.” Rick immediately turned to complete his task, but not before Kyle caught the slight hint of a grin.

He turned back to the door and tried to turn the handle, but it had re-locked.  Swiping the card again, he practically collapsed through the door.  


-----

He hadn’t actually stayed.  They’d dropped their stuff in the room and he’d thrown up the usual spells he used to make sure he get lice or bedbugs. They’d clean the room to a livable standard, but it would take a couple hours.  In the meantime he wanted to run some recon.

Uncharacteristically, Rick had requested to go run some errands of his own instead of sticking to his master, something Kyle had been only to happy to OK.

He strolled down the strip, red sleeveless duster coat gently rippling as he chatted with Danielle.  To most people he just appeared to be talking to himself, but given that this was the red light district that hardly made him the biggest weirdo on the street.

“I’m proud of you.” The deer told him.

“He would have done it anyway.”

“Yeah but its a big step away from this whole,” Danielle turned her face into a caricature of his and put on a mocking voice “I’m gonna become an irredeemable monster with no self control”  her face returned to the normal projection of her former body “anxiety you’ve got going on.”

“OK first, wow, you’re getting good at changing what appearance. Second, rude.  It’s a legitimate concern. If somebody spent a hundred years trying to brainwash you to torture families and raze towns you’d worried too.”

“I know you, that’s not who you are. You’d never do that.” she reassured the dog. He’d not mentioned that before.

“I wish that were true.   Best I can hope for is I’ll never do it again.”

Danielle stopped “What”

Kyle kept walking.

Zipping back to to fly along side the canine “We can talk about that later I guess. Whatever is in your past, its not who you are right now.  Somebody who got splatted for yelling at the god of pain to protect their companions isn’t going to just slip up and accidentally subjugate a country.

“I hope you are right.”

-----
“You should get your fortune told.”

“I really shouldn’t, that’s the target.”

“So? Can she actually do anything to you?”

“No but if she runs its going to be a pain.”

“Shouldn’t she already know you’re coming.”

“Generally, but not in any great detail.”

“So she’s not going to know who you are.”

“We’re only scoping it out.”

“So scope it out up close by getting a reading, she’ll think you’re a customer.”

“Doubtful, but I can see I’m not getting out of this.

He stood from the trashcan he’d been half leaning half sitting on and crossed the street.  The booth was made up to look like a stereotypical fortunetellers wagon, wooden wagon wheels attached to the side facing the street.  It also bore a neon sign up top that depicted several tarot cards.

As he approached he saw an elderly gray rabbit push aside the black curtain that hid the rear of the booth.  “I’ve been expecting you dear.  Both of you.  In fact should there not be a third?”

“He’s busy unfortunately.”

“I seeeeee,  well, shall I read your cards anyway?”  

“You are awfully calm about this.”

“My dear, you are my best option. With you I simply end, while all other roads I see lead to great suffering.” The elderly bunny let out a cackle.  “How one with your disposition ends up serving the power you do, well life is strange I suppose.”

“I suppose that a quick reading won’t hurt.”

“EXCELLENT!”

The elderly rabbit gave a dexterous and showy shuffle of the cards, dancing them between her fingers before reforming the deck and closing her eyes.

“We shall keep this brief.  A three card spread.  The past.”

The first card from the deck was laid. It depicted an individual being hanged from a gnarled old tree.

“The hanged man. Sacrifice”

“The present”

This card simply showed a skull.  “Death. Change. The end of the old and beginning of the new”

“The future.”  In spite of himself Kyle held his breath.

“Temperance. Moderation. Balance.”

The rabbit opened her eyes again. “You walk the border of two worlds. Keep them in balance and you will prosper.”  She yawned.  “Come, my hour grows late, and it would not do for us to conduct business on the street.

A short time later the canine stepped out of the back of the tent.

“That’s it?” Danielle asked

“That’s it.” Kyle answered.

“She really didn’t try anything?”

“I guess there’s just not much point if you already know the outcome.”

-----

It had been a nice find, the room they were staying in.  It was cheap but well equipped. Although once he saw the mirror on the ceiling over the bed and the significant number of tie points on all the furniture he understood the look the desk clerk had given him over asking about multiple nights. To be fair, he hadn’t known that the fortune teller had set up in the red light district.

He’d run a second set of cleaning and disinfecting type spells over the room, just in case.

When Kyle returned to the bedroom he found Rick asleep.  The mostly green lizard was sprawled out over the bed, red belly exposed. He breathed softly and didn’t stir as Kyle entered the room.  Danielle was nowhere to be seen. He could do anything he wanted to Rick, to his slave, right now.  Rick would almost certainly thank him for it, his newfound masochism and desire to serve both desperately starving.  

The canine considered what the fortune teller had said. Sacrifice in the past, change in the present, balance in the future.

“Lets try this again.” He muttered to nobody in particular.  He took a few moments, rehearsing what he was about to do in his head. Then he grabbed the lizards arms and used them to drag the lizard around so that his head was hanging off the edge of the bed.  As Rick blinked awake at the sudden disturbance, he found a familiar sent filling his nose.

“Open”

Rick was having trouble putting his situation together, brain skipping like a phonograph playing a warped record. The order cut through his confusion and he dutifully opened his mouth.  He didn’t need to think about the rest.

Positioned like this Kyle pushed forward until his sheathe was pressed to Rick’s nostrils, skipping any sort of warm up. Rick gagged, retching at the unexpected deep throating.  Kyle wasted no time, holding the lizards head he began to thrust into the lizards face as if it were a sex toy,  Rick once again retching and squirming.  Every thrust seemed to drag out another strand of throat slime, all of which dropped onto the lizards face, rapidly turning his visage into a giant mess. The tears from his watering eyes ran up his head and dripped from one of the points on his crest.

Kyle repositioned his grip, grabbing the lizard by the throat as his knot popped free of his sheath. He slammed it into his slave, whose body heaved and twitched as it fought to expel the intruder.  This time he didn’t pull out, holding himself locked in place as he felt Rick weaken. As Ricks eye’s rolled back in his head and he was on the verge of blacking out he was vaguely aware of his throat being filled with cum, which some reflex swallowed over and over as his master came. The world was a scant pinprick of light when suddenly air filled his lungs.

Rick gasped, taking in as much as as quickly as he could.  His own dick was rock hard and twitching like crazy. As the lizard breathed in sweet air Kyle climbed up onto him and wrapped his muzzle around the slick tapered lizard shaft.  It didn’t taste much before Rick blew, pent up see filling his master’s maw.

-----

“Thank you master”

“No, thank you.  You did a good job.”

Rick lay on his back on the bed, breathing deeply while Kyle clung to his side.

“Seriously though Kyle, that was incredible.”

“Ayy, you’re using my name again.”

It was at this point Danielle coasted through the wall, back from spying on other rooms.  “Aww don’t tell me I missed the fun.”

-----

“So let me get this straight,  you have me spend hours making you a temporary body, and what you want to do with the very short time it lasts is take a bath?”

“Um, its a hot tub. They’re amazing and I haven’t done anything in water in ages. I figured it could be romantic. That’s why I asked Rick to pull this together.” She waved at the dinner, candles and radio playing soft music.  “You seem stressed so I figure a change of pace could be nice.”
‘
“Thanks Danielle.”  Kyle disrobed as they both climbed into the hot tub.  

He sank in and regretted never trying one before “OK, I’ll admit, this is, in fact, amazing.  We’ll have to figure out how to get one of these on the bus”

Danielle laughed lightly. “Sometimes civilization is good, huh cowboy?”

Kyle grinned at her “I guess it is. I’ve never really gotta a chance to see anything but the underside of it.”

“Well when you get a week of leave together let me know and we’ll hit the town.”

“What leave, I don’t even have dental.”

Danielle couldn’t help herself, “They don’t even have dental.” she told the empty space beside her. “Oh right, you’ve probably never seen those.  We’ll have to marathon them at some point. Your cultural zeitgeist needs some catching up.”

Kyle grinned at her “how about we enjoy this date before we start planning the next one.”

Danielle flushed red at the word date. “O-oh, would you look at that, the food is here.”  She passed Kyle a plate bearing a slab of meat and a glass of wine, before picking up a plate of salad and wine for herself.

“Thank you dear, it looks lovely” Kyle pushed Danielle’s buttons further, enjoying seeing the usually shameless girl act shy.

A soft silence filled the room as Kyle figured out how to maneuver his plate so he could operate both a fork and steak knife. He ended up setting it on the lip of the tub between him and Danielle before cutting off a piece as Danielle eagerly watched.

He’d slightly suspected but as soon as the meat hit his taste buds he knew her game.  He decided to tease her a bit more as revenge.

“Oh wow,  that’s absolutely amazing.” he set the cutlery aside and picked up the meat, roughly tearing off a chunk as Danielle couldn’t even pretend she wasn’t staring.

“Oh fuck” she muttered, hand disappearing below the water and into her legs, completely mesmerized as Kyle savagely tore through the rest of the cut.

The canine gave her a predatory smile.  Had his teeth always been that sharp? “Wow Danielle, that was better than any steak I’ve ever tasted. What was it?”

“venison” Danielle let out with a squeak.

“Oh well isn’t that a coincidence.” Kyle loomed over her

“Oh god fuck me” the deer’s voice was barely audible.  Getting this turned on had not been part of her plan.

“Oh with pleasure.” The canine picked her up, lifting her easily so that her back was laying on the edge of the tub and her legs were hooked over his shoulders.  “Although I suspect you’re actually angling for something with a little more… BITE” He snapped his jaw at her.

Danielle nearly came just from that, but Kyle wasn’t done with her. He bit along both of her inner thighs, gently at first, gauging her reactions, and then with increasing force. For her part Danielle squealed with joy every single time.

Then it came, Kyle bit her hard enough that his fangs pierced into her flesh.  At the coppery tang of blood his eyes shot open and he started to pull back, but Danielle grabbed his head and pulled it right up against her pussy as she came, her juices mixing with the faint hint of blood and flooding his senses.  

He started back to work again, alternating between using his broad tongue to delve into her and giving rough nips against her clit.  Still riding the high of the last orgasm she felt herself getting near again.

She leaned up as far as she could.  “I bet it tastes even better fresh.”  

He’d expected it but the request still hit him like a truck. He froze.

Danielle released his head.  She saw the conflict on his face.  This was asking a lot even given the progress he’d made.

Kyle swallowed.  He grabbed his glass on wine and downed it in one before repeating the same with hers.

Painfully slowly he opened up, fangs tickling the flesh of her thigh where he had made her bleed.  Danielle could feel her heart racing.

And all at once his jaw snapped shut, and  combined with a yank of his head he tore a large chunk out of her thigh.  Then he was back in, pulling another chunk free,  before his jaw locked around her nethers and he tore them open.

-----

It hadn’t taken long for her constructed body to bleed out and fade from existence thanks to the torn arteries in her thigh, blood staining the water pink, which slowly turned back to clear as it all disappeared. Danielle was a spirit again, but that wasn’t stopping her from fiercely playing with herself.

“Oh my god that was so fucking hot, where did that whole savage wolf thing come from.” She moaned came hard again with a shout before her voice returned to normal, not troubled by needing to catch her breath in her current state. “Seriously, that was amazing”

It was Kyle’s turn to blush, still lounging in the hot tub. “Well, when I tasted that somebody gave me a plate of venison it was pretty obvious what game you wanted to play. I’m glad it was such a hit.”  His voice got more serious “I’ll admit, I was more than a little worried when you started bleeding.  And when you asked me to…”  he trailed off “I very nearly couldn’t do it.”

Danielle’s voice snapped him back “Well I, for one, am super glad that you did.  Especially that last bit. It hurt so fucking much. It was amazing.”

“Amazing, huh.”

“Yeah-huh”

“Amazing.” Kyle muttered thoughtfully, relaxing back into the water.

-----


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