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LYRAH NO!” The bull clutched his daughter’s limp hands, and all at once tears started running down his bovine face.\n\n\tShele lurched to the side and grasped Drenan’s upper arm. “Drenan, we’re doing everything we can, but you need to leave, [i]now[/i].”\n\n\tThe look of fury in his eye when he turned to her was one Shele had never seen before. “NO. I will [i]NOT[/i] leave her side this time!”\n\n\tShele felt the sinking feeling of history repeating itself. She flashed back to that dark day so many years prior. A team of six healers were all working to save Kinah’s life, while Shele herself was designated to escort him from the room when Kinah started to fade. He didn’t fight her that time, having placed his trust in the healers… and she had to wonder just how much he regretted it now. The druidess also knew she couldn’t hesitate for long, and this time she looked Drenan in the eye, nodded, then resumed her work next to Groa.\n\n\tDrenan resisted the urge to shake Lyrah, but instead flung his body onto hers, holding her close to his chest and whispering in her ear. “Please, Lyrah… you have to fight for our little one. Fight for yourself, for us… just come back to me, [i]please[/i]… I cannot lose you, too…!” His voice cracked between every other word, but he never stopped whispering, hoping against hope that she might somehow hear him.\n\n* * * * *\n\n\t”What do you mean, Mom!?” Lyrah grabbed her mother’s shoulders, frantic, then paused to study her pained expression. “You know something.”\n\n\tKinah let out a shaky exhale. “I do… and I have not had the heart to tell it to you. I had hoped that the curse stopped with me.”\n\n\t”Curse?! What the hell do you mean ‘curse’!?”\n\n\tKinah closed her eyes and hugged herself. “When I ran from the Grimtotem tribe so long ago, my mother was beyond furious. I only saw her once more after I met your father. She had sought us out in hopes of bringing me back into the fold. We only saw each other for a moment before your father stepped in, but she saw enough. I was pregnant with you at the time.” She let out another deep breath. “I thought her words were meaningless. She spat curses at me as Drenan ushered her away. She said I was dead to her, that she wished I had never existed, and that her bloodline would end with me.”\n\n\t”But it didn’t!”\n\n\tTears were in Kinah’s eyes. “That is right. I heard you start to cry, and I thought I had won… and then I was here.” She reached out as if to hug Lyrah, but the shaman took a step back away from her. “You carry my blood, and I fear, in that same vein, somehow her curse had merit. I was told by my medics that I was healthy before I had you….”\n\n\t”… and no one knew exactly why you died,” Lyrah murmured softly. “But Magatha seemed… pleased that I would carry on her legacy. If she cursed your blood, why would she not remove it?”\n\n\t”Perhaps she did not even know she did it,” Kinah mused. “But there is nothing to be done about it now. It is taking you.”\n\n\tLyrah opened her mouth to protest… but hesitated. Her hand dropped to her hip, and there was her flail, just where she had placed it before returning to the living world. She drew the weapon and inspected it for a moment, taking note of the three sets of carvings along it, and the smooth haft beyond. “No,” Lyrah said with utter conviction. “You… I don’t think you had a choice, Mom. But even you said it’s ‘taking’ me. It hasn’t stolen me yet.”\n\n\t”There is not much time,” Kinah admitted.\n\n\t”But there [i]is[/i] time.” The shaman brandished her flail, swung it above her head, and with a ferocious cry she slammed it into the ground below her. The spiked end embedded into the ground with such a crash that a crater formed all around her, and the entire grove shook as if it had been hit with an earthquake.\n\n\tKinah staggered backwards and met her daughter’s gaze. “Lyrah!”\n\n\tThe shaman looked at her mother with both empathy and determination before raising her flail again, and with each subsequent strike on the ground, Lyrah cried out, “NOT, EVEN, DEATH, WILL, TAKE, ME, FROM, MY, BABY!” The ground cracked in all directions, and as if her surroundings were made of glass, glowing blue cracks appeared in a spiderweb all around her. The image of her mother became slanted, but the last thing Lyrah saw of her was Kinah with an incredulous smile. “YOU HEAR ME, MAGATHA!?” Lyrah roared. “YOU, CAN’T, CONTROL, ME!” Again and again she struck. The ground shook even more violently. “I FORGE MY OWN PATH! I WILL HAVE MY FAMILY!”\n\n\tOne last strike, and the fabric of the world around her shattered into a billion pieces.\n\n\tThe sound of a male’s deep, tender whispers echoed all around her as she fell into a deep, dark void.\n\n\tAnd with those echoes, she knew just which way to throw herself amid the nothingness.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "<171>

\t“H-huh!?  Mom?!  What’s going on!?”

\tThis time, Kinah wasn’t smiling.  “You are at a critical crossroads, my darling daughter… one I had desperately hoped you might not go near.”

\tThe shaman’s eyes went wide with sheer panic.  “No!  No, I can't be here!”  Lyrah looked to and fro around the small, glowing clearing, unwilling to settle herself in the slightest.  “Mom, you have to get me back to my body, NOW!”

\tIntense sadness crept into Kinah’s gaze.  “Honey… that’s not up to me.”

* * * * *

\tLyrah’s body went limp.

\tBoth Shele and Groa sprung into motion, spellcasting.

\tAnd Drenan went into a full-on panic.

\t”LYRAH!  LYRAH NO!”  The bull clutched his daughter’s limp hands, and all at once tears started running down his bovine face.

\tShele lurched to the side and grasped Drenan’s upper arm.  “Drenan, we’re doing everything we can, but you need to leave, now.”

\tThe look of fury in his eye when he turned to her was one Shele had never seen before.  “NO.  I will NOT leave her side this time!”

\tShele felt the sinking feeling of history repeating itself.  She flashed back to that dark day so many years prior.  A team of six healers were all working to save Kinah’s life, while Shele herself was designated to escort him from the room when Kinah started to fade.  He didn’t fight her that time, having placed his trust in the healers… and she had to wonder just how much he regretted it now.  The druidess also knew she couldn’t hesitate for long, and this time she looked Drenan in the eye, nodded, then resumed her work next to Groa.

\tDrenan resisted the urge to shake Lyrah, but instead flung his body onto hers, holding her close to his chest and whispering in her ear.  “Please, Lyrah… you have to fight for our little one.  Fight for yourself, for us… just come back to me, please… I cannot lose you, too…!”  His voice cracked between every other word, but he never stopped whispering, hoping against hope that she might somehow hear him.

* * * * *

\t”What do you mean, Mom!?”  Lyrah grabbed her mother’s shoulders, frantic, then paused to study her pained expression.  “You know something.”

\tKinah let out a shaky exhale.  “I do… and I have not had the heart to tell it to you.  I had hoped that the curse stopped with me.”

\t”Curse?!  What the hell do you mean ‘curse’!?”

\tKinah closed her eyes and hugged herself.  “When I ran from the Grimtotem tribe so long ago, my mother was beyond furious.  I only saw her once more after I met your father.  She had sought us out in hopes of bringing me back into the fold.  We only saw each other for a moment before your father stepped in, but she saw enough.  I was pregnant with you at the time.”  She let out another deep breath.  “I thought her words were meaningless.  She spat curses at me as Drenan ushered her away.  She said I was dead to her, that she wished I had never existed, and that her bloodline would end with me.”

\t”But it didn’t!”

\tTears were in Kinah’s eyes.  “That is right.  I heard you start to cry, and I thought I had won… and then I was here.”  She reached out as if to hug Lyrah, but the shaman took a step back away from her.  “You carry my blood, and I fear, in that same vein, somehow her curse had merit.  I was told by my medics that I was healthy before I had you….”

\t”… and no one knew exactly why you died,” Lyrah murmured softly.  “But Magatha seemed… pleased that I would carry on her legacy.  If she cursed your blood, why would she not remove it?”

\t”Perhaps she did not even know she did it,” Kinah mused.  “But there is nothing to be done about it now.  It is taking you.”

\tLyrah opened her mouth to protest… but hesitated.  Her hand dropped to her hip, and there was her flail, just where she had placed it before returning to the living world.  She drew the weapon and inspected it for a moment, taking note of the three sets of carvings along it, and the smooth haft beyond.  “No,” Lyrah said with utter conviction.  “You… I don’t think you had a choice, Mom.  But even you said it’s ‘taking’ me.  It hasn’t stolen me yet.”

\t”There is not much time,” Kinah admitted.

\t”But there is time.”  The shaman brandished her flail, swung it above her head, and with a ferocious cry she slammed it into the ground below her.  The spiked end embedded into the ground with such a crash that a crater formed all around her, and the entire grove shook as if it had been hit with an earthquake.

\tKinah staggered backwards and met her daughter’s gaze.  “Lyrah!”

\tThe shaman looked at her mother with both empathy and determination before raising her flail again, and with each subsequent strike on the ground, Lyrah cried out, “NOT, EVEN, DEATH, WILL, TAKE, ME, FROM, MY, BABY!”  The ground cracked in all directions, and as if her surroundings were made of glass, glowing blue cracks appeared in a spiderweb all around her.  The image of her mother became slanted, but the last thing Lyrah saw of her was Kinah with an incredulous smile.  “YOU HEAR ME, MAGATHA!?” Lyrah roared.  “YOU, CAN’T, CONTROL, ME!”  Again and again she struck.  The ground shook even more violently.  “I FORGE MY OWN PATH!  I WILL HAVE MY FAMILY!”

\tOne last strike, and the fabric of the world around her shattered into a billion pieces.

\tThe sound of a male’s deep, tender whispers echoed all around her as she fell into a deep, dark void.

\tAnd with those echoes, she knew just which way to throw herself amid the nothingness.
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