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I promise, we mean no harm.”\n\n\tDiana shrugged. “I wouldn’t think two blood elves would risk it in a worgen’s [i]den[/i],” the worgen mage remarked darkly, chuckling and gesturing toward Carson’s makeshift storefront. “He’s got the armor all polished up and ready.”\n\n\t“Thank you,” Athilis said, bowed, then ushered his family onward.\n\n\tCarson was already behind his countertop, tapping his claws absently. “Why does it feel like I’m making a mistake?” the worgen rumbled as he pushed forth a relatively plain-looking set of plate armor.\n\n\t“What’s life without a little risk, huh?” prodded Athilis, letting his mother step forward and delicately touch the armor.\n\n\t“Safe. That’s what,” the worgen added. “Careful how you handle it or you’ll smudge it,” he cautioned. “If word gets back to me that the armor doesn’t make it to her….”\n\n\t“It will,” Vivine said curtly.\n\n\tCarson raised his brow and studied the rogue for a long moment before adding, “Alright then.” He casually pushed a small piece of folded parchment across the counter. “Here’s her address.”\n\n\tGianna took up the parchment, but Vivine suddenly had a thought. “Does she live alone?”\n\n\t“Alone? She’s only eighteen,” Carson remarked dryly. “Oh, actually, I wanted to warn ya about that: Make sure you talk with [i]her[/i]. Her old man’s pretty… protective. Knew him a while back when he was big in the army. Sturdy bastard. Not very trusting. I heard Summer softened him up a bit, but… I find that hard to believe.”\n\n\t“And her mother?” Vivine pressed.\n\n\t“No mother,” was all the worgen said, and he held back further words when he practically watched Vivine’s heart break through her glowing eyes.\n\n\tGianna quickly went up to her and helped tuck the armor away into a pack. “Thank you, Sir, really. This means a lot to us.”\n\n\tCarson waved a dismissive hand. “Be safe. I expect some business from you three when you’re done. I don’t run a charity.”\n\n\t“You can count on it,” Athilis assured him and grinned, earning a toothy grin back from Carson.\n\n\tThe three of them quickly left the manor, but stopped outside to take a collective deep breath. “Alright, I guess I’m up,” Gianna remarked and started to cast an arcane spell. “This portal should get us into a portion of the city called ‘Old Town’, ‘cause that seems to be where their arcane wards are the weakest. If my coordinates are accurate, we’ll be in an alleyway, but I suggest we cover up as much as we can first.”\n\n\t“You two should,” Athilis gently corrected. “But if you’re both with me, even if someone catches sight of you, I don’t think you’ll raise any alarms. There are quite a few fair-skinned void elves too, and, well… humans can’t really tell us apart all that well.”\n\n\t“Let’s just get through this,” Vivine uttered nervously.\n\n\tGianna nodded, and with a flash a glowing blue portal opened before them. Athilis took Vivine’s hand, and Vivine took Gianna’s, then all three walked through the portal in single file.\n\n\tThe wilderness of Gilneas disappeared, and out they stepped in between two closely-built houses. Vivine and Gianna pulled a set of navy cloaks tightly about their heads, while Athilis dared to peek out of the alleyway first. He paused at the entrance, noting that the streets were fairly empty, with a few beggars being the exception. Old Town was a poor portion of Stormwind, and while the Spymaster’s headquarters were nearby, their eyes weren’t often fixated on Old Town itself. “Clear,” he whispered and beckoned them toward him.\n\n\tVivine and Gianna exchanged glances once more, then rushed up close behind Athilis. All three stepped out into the street, with Athilis leading them gradually out of Old Town and into the heart of Stormwind, which proved far busier everywhere except along the canals. Indeed, no one seemed particularly interested in them as all three wandered the city. A few of the guards did appear to look at Vivine and Gianna a bit more closely, but all Athilis had to do was smile and wave, and they seemed to lose interest. 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Gianna reached into the pack on Athilis’ back and pulled out the set of armor, then handed it to him before he turned back to the door and knocked thrice.\n\n\tThe door opened to reveal a large human male with disheveled, reddish-brown hair that was streaked with silver. A modest beard had more silver in it than his hair, though his bright blue eyes appeared sunken and bloodshot. A thin tunic and baggy leggings covered a copious form of either fat or muscle, but the trio didn’t get the chance to guess which it was.\n\n\tThe moment his eyes fell upon them, they went wide, and the human lunged right for Athilis, roaring, “WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE WITH HER!?”\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "<29>

\tBoth Athilis and Gianna hugged her, which seemed to relieve a bit of the tension.  With this, Athilis produced his hearthstone and held it between the three of them.  “Alright… ready?”

\tBoth blood elf ladies nodded and locked hands.

\tA blue glow flashed, and all three vanished from Eversong, opening their eyes in the foyer of Shadowclaw Manor.

\t“Aha!  Just in time, like I said he’d be!” Diana chirped and chuckled from her seat in one corner.  “Oh wow, you brought the whole family, huh?”

\tBoth Gianna and Vivine bristled, but Athilis held up a hand.  “Y-yeah, this is my mom and my sister.  I promise, we mean no harm.”

\tDiana shrugged.  “I wouldn’t think two blood elves would risk it in a worgen’s den,” the worgen mage remarked darkly, chuckling and gesturing toward Carson’s makeshift storefront.  “He’s got the armor all polished up and ready.”

\t“Thank you,” Athilis said, bowed, then ushered his family onward.

\tCarson was already behind his countertop, tapping his claws absently.  “Why does it feel like I’m making a mistake?” the worgen rumbled as he pushed forth a relatively plain-looking set of plate armor.

\t“What’s life without a little risk, huh?” prodded Athilis, letting his mother step forward and delicately touch the armor.

\t“Safe.  That’s what,” the worgen added.  “Careful how you handle it or you’ll smudge it,” he cautioned.  “If word gets back to me that the armor doesn’t make it to her….”

\t“It will,” Vivine said curtly.

\tCarson raised his brow and studied the rogue for a long moment before adding, “Alright then.”  He casually pushed a small piece of folded parchment across the counter.  “Here’s her address.”

\tGianna took up the parchment, but Vivine suddenly had a thought.  “Does she live alone?”

\t“Alone?  She’s only eighteen,” Carson remarked dryly.  “Oh, actually, I wanted to warn ya about that:  Make sure you talk with her.  Her old man’s pretty… protective.  Knew him a while back when he was big in the army.  Sturdy bastard.  Not very trusting.  I heard Summer softened him up a bit, but… I find that hard to believe.”

\t“And her mother?” Vivine pressed.

\t“No mother,” was all the worgen said, and he held back further words when he practically watched Vivine’s heart break through her glowing eyes.

\tGianna quickly went up to her and helped tuck the armor away into a pack.  “Thank you, Sir, really.  This means a lot to us.”

\tCarson waved a dismissive hand.  “Be safe.  I expect some business from you three when you’re done.  I don’t run a charity.”

\t“You can count on it,” Athilis assured him and grinned, earning a toothy grin back from Carson.

\tThe three of them quickly left the manor, but stopped outside to take a collective deep breath.  “Alright, I guess I’m up,” Gianna remarked and started to cast an arcane spell.  “This portal should get us into a portion of the city called ‘Old Town’, ‘cause that seems to be where their arcane wards are the weakest.  If my coordinates are accurate, we’ll be in an alleyway, but I suggest we cover up as much as we can first.”

\t“You two should,” Athilis gently corrected.  “But if you’re both with me, even if someone catches sight of you, I don’t think you’ll raise any alarms.  There are quite a few fair-skinned void elves too, and, well… humans can’t really tell us apart all that well.”

\t“Let’s just get through this,” Vivine uttered nervously.

\tGianna nodded, and with a flash a glowing blue portal opened before them.  Athilis took Vivine’s hand, and Vivine took Gianna’s, then all three walked through the portal in single file.

\tThe wilderness of Gilneas disappeared, and out they stepped in between two closely-built houses.  Vivine and Gianna pulled a set of navy cloaks tightly about their heads, while Athilis dared to peek out of the alleyway first.  He paused at the entrance, noting that the streets were fairly empty, with a few beggars being the exception.  Old Town was a poor portion of Stormwind, and while the Spymaster’s headquarters were nearby, their eyes weren’t often fixated on Old Town itself.  “Clear,” he whispered and beckoned them toward him.

\tVivine and Gianna exchanged glances once more, then rushed up close behind Athilis.  All three stepped out into the street, with Athilis leading them gradually out of Old Town and into the heart of Stormwind, which proved far busier everywhere except along the canals.  Indeed, no one seemed particularly interested in them as all three wandered the city.  A few of the guards did appear to look at Vivine and Gianna a bit more closely, but all Athilis had to do was smile and wave, and they seemed to lose interest.  Each time it happened though, both ladies felt their hearts leap up into their throats, worrying that all it’d take is one nosy guard to jeopardize their entire plan.

\tThankfully, most of the adventurers they passed looked far more outlandish, with some of them even taking the guise of the Lich King himself, strangely enough.  Still, they weren’t about to question their good fortune, and eventually all three stood before a tall apartment complex that was squished between two other buildings and stretched no less than six stories high.  As luck would have it, the door had been propped open to allow air flow on the hot summer day, allowing them to head inside and rush up the stairs.

\tFinally, the three stopped, and Athilis reread the note Carson had given them.  “Apartment three.  This is it.”  He looked back at his stern mother, who simply nodded at him.  Gianna reached into the pack on Athilis’ back and pulled out the set of armor, then handed it to him before he turned back to the door and knocked thrice.

\tThe door opened to reveal a large human male with disheveled, reddish-brown hair that was streaked with silver.  A modest beard had more silver in it than his hair, though his bright blue eyes appeared sunken and bloodshot.  A thin tunic and baggy leggings covered a copious form of either fat or muscle, but the trio didn’t get the chance to guess which it was.

\tThe moment his eyes fell upon them, they went wide, and the human lunged right for Athilis, roaring, “WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE WITH HER!?”
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