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He grew more and more crestfallen, and Vivine could only hold him in the evenings to ease his pain.\n\nThe sixth day came and went, and that night Athilis found himself unable to lay down. He stood in his sleep shorts in front of his mother’s window, staring out into the darkness aimlessly.\n\nVivine pulled the sheets over her chest as she sat upright. “Sweetie, come to bed, please?”\n\nAthilis dropped his head into his hands, then ran his fingers up through his hair. “I can’t sleep tonight. Maybe… maybe I should just go.”\n\n“No!” Vivine blurted. “I’m not losing my son again!”\n\n“But I’m causing her pain, I know it!” Athilis persisted and spun to face her. “I feel just… just wrenched up inside, and she won’t let me speak to her about it! I’m out of ideas, Mom!”\n\nVivine’s gaze turned fiery, and she bolted up out of the bed to stand proudly naked in the moonlight. “Athilis Dray Leythorne, if you so much as set foot out of Eversong again, I’ll drag you back here and chain you to the house if I must! I am [i]not[/i] losing you thrice!”\n\nAthilis narrowed his eyes. “Thrice? I left home for the first… was the second my transformation?” Vivine visibly shrunk at this. “You think I’m lost? That Athilis is no more in this state? 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I’m not confronting you while I’m nude!”\n\nAthilis’ patience had depleted. Without hesitation, the void elf yanked his shorts down and kicked them over the bed to flop on top of his sister’s head. “Yeah, well, now we’re even!”\n\nHer pink cheeks turned a deep crimson, but Gianna slowly dared to peer up over the bed. She promised herself she wouldn’t do it, but her eyes uncontrollably went right to her brother’s flaccid cock.\n\n“Ha!” he cried accusingly. “I [i]knew[/i] it! If you thought I was a perv, you wouldn’t have peeked knowing I was naked!”\n\n“You jerk!” she shot back and stood bolt upright. Athilis was easily a foot taller than she was, but that didn’t seem to cause Gianna any discomfort, even as she marched around the bed to stand mere inches from him. “That’s all you ever do! You just gotta one-up everyone, huh!? Life’s just one big fucking Hearthstone game!”\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "<17>

That night, Gianna elected to sleep early rather than visit, claiming to be tired from the long trip.  Athilis and Vivine waited until her door shut before they went upstairs, with Athilis pretending to shut his own door before stepping into his mother’s room.  The two of them undressed, cuddled up, and chatted idly for a little while, but Athilis simply fell asleep on his mother’s chest before anything happened.

This pattern continued for another five days.  Neither mother nor son felt particularly inclined toward intimacy with Gianna in the house, but at the same time the both of them were growing increasingly sexually frustrated.  They’d just gotten used to their new routine, and it was uncomfortable to have to change it all over again.  It didn’t help that Gianna continued to ignore Athilis, with each slight acting like an arrow through his heart, his energy.  He grew more and more crestfallen, and Vivine could only hold him in the evenings to ease his pain.

The sixth day came and went, and that night Athilis found himself unable to lay down.  He stood in his sleep shorts in front of his mother’s window, staring out into the darkness aimlessly.

Vivine pulled the sheets over her chest as she sat upright.  “Sweetie, come to bed, please?”

Athilis dropped his head into his hands, then ran his fingers up through his hair.  “I can’t sleep tonight.  Maybe… maybe I should just go.”

“No!” Vivine blurted.  “I’m not losing my son again!”

“But I’m causing her pain, I know it!” Athilis persisted and spun to face her.  “I feel just… just wrenched up inside, and she won’t let me speak to her about it!  I’m out of ideas, Mom!”

Vivine’s gaze turned fiery, and she bolted up out of the bed to stand proudly naked in the moonlight.  “Athilis Dray Leythorne, if you so much as set foot out of Eversong again, I’ll drag you back here and chain you to the house if I must!  I am not losing you thrice!”

Athilis narrowed his eyes.  “Thrice?  I left home for the first… was the second my transformation?”  Vivine visibly shrunk at this.  “You think I’m lost?  That Athilis is no more in this state?  That the void has made me nothing?”

“No… no that’s not what I meant,” Vivine said quietly.

Tears formed in Athilis’ eyes.  “I’m… I’m not convinced,” he said, then hastily strode toward the bedroom door.

“Where are you going!?” Vivine said, panicked.

Athilis hesitated with his hand on the doorknob.  “I’m just getting a drink.”  He stepped out the door and quietly closed it behind him, leaving Vivine to flop onto her bed and shriek into a pillow.

* * * * *

True to his word, Athilis ambled quietly up the stairs just a few minutes later with a glass of water in his hand.  His thoughts were a jumbled mess, and a powerful urge to just walk out the door gave him pause on the second floor landing.  ’No.  I’m not doing this.  Not right now,’ he thought to himself.  ’No more snap decisions.  Cutting corners and overreacting is what got you… here in the first place.’  He looked down at his violet-skinned hand and grimaced.  He thought for a minute he’d grown past the self-hatred, but those nasty thoughts had reared their head again once more.

“... Athy….”

The sound of his name broke him from his reverie.  “... yeah?” he responded softly toward his mother’s door.

“... -ck… Athilis….”

The monk had to do a double take.  ’That’s… that’s coming from Gianna’s room…?’  His footsteps were dead silent as he slipped down the hallway, stopping before Gianna’s door at the very end of the hall.

“Mmmh… more…!”

Athilis felt his breath catch.  Her door was ajar, open about a third of the way, leaving the outsider a complete view of Gianna’s bed.  The younger blood elf laid there, buck naked save for her spectacles, and had her legs spread nearly doing a full split.  The full extent of her stout, chubby body was on full display, though both of her hands were in the process of tugging hard at her rosy red, inverted nipples.  A prismatic, vibrating crystal had been pushed between her legs.

“Oh Light… give it to me harder… Athy…!”

“No way…” The words escaped his lips without a second thought.

And Gianna’s long ears twitched in immediate response.  The blood elf screamed and pulled her legs straight to her chest, which in turn caused the crystal to flop onto the bed, and for her to roll to one side and tumble off behind the bed.  “The fuck are you doing!?  Go away, perv!” she cried at him from behind the bed.

Athilis furrowed his brow in frustration.  “Uh-uh, we need to talk, now!  I know what I heard, you can’t deny it!”

“You didn’t hear anything!’ she pressed desperately.  “Other than me screaming for you to get the fuck out!”

“I’m not some dumb jock, Gia!  And I’m getting really tired of the silent treatment!  Then I happen to hear you moaning my name!?  What’s going on!?”

Gianna hesitated before responding.  “I… I’m naked!  I’m not confronting you while I’m nude!”

Athilis’ patience had depleted.  Without hesitation, the void elf yanked his shorts down and kicked them over the bed to flop on top of his sister’s head.  “Yeah, well, now we’re even!”

Her pink cheeks turned a deep crimson, but Gianna slowly dared to peer up over the bed.  She promised herself she wouldn’t do it, but her eyes uncontrollably went right to her brother’s flaccid cock.

“Ha!” he cried accusingly.  “I knew it!  If you thought I was a perv, you wouldn’t have peeked knowing I was naked!”

“You jerk!” she shot back and stood bolt upright.  Athilis was easily a foot taller than she was, but that didn’t seem to cause Gianna any discomfort, even as she marched around the bed to stand mere inches from him.  “That’s all you ever do!  You just gotta one-up everyone, huh!?  Life’s just one big fucking Hearthstone game!”
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