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One could have the perfect job, sharing one’s life with a faithful love, such a bright future. Alas, life can never be so simple or even forgiving. Even those who do no wrong can have everything go wrong. None would fit this more than one black rat by the name of Jacob Marshall.\n\nJacob, the stories that could be told of him; The hardships he went through, the pains he endured. The sensible thing would be to start at the beginning.\n\nJacob had little to no memory of his past before he came to live in the seemingly lazy coastal city of Corpus Christi, TX. Aged 24 and living for the past few months in a cozy apartment with his childhood friend and the love his life, Hannah, he had it made. He was built, strong and at 5’8” not to be toyed with.\n\nJacob worked as a bouncer at a fairly popular nightclub called Studio 23. His godfather, a kindly old hippo named Frank, was a bartender here and had helped the rat get the job as a way to help pay the rent. He was good at his job. He was particularly good at just being able to stare down most troublemakers. Even if someone did try to fight him they usually ended up either tossed out back by Jacob or spending the night in the drunk tank downtown.\n\nTonight was to be to be different, however. Jacob arrived looking more chipper than usual. A few of the regular patrons recognized him and greeted him as such. He acknowledged them with a wordless gesture or two. He personally made little attempt to actually familiarize himself with anyone. Two years he had been working there and his only true friend there was Frank.\n\nThe old man saw his godson and shouted.\n“Jacob, you young son-of-a-gun you.”\nThe friends shared a quick friendly embrace.\n“Heh, good seeing you too, old man.”\nFrank pulled away, after feeling the lump in the young rat’s left jacket pocket.\n“So, tonight’s the night, eh?” the bartender asked.\nJacob shrugged and smiled as he showed his old friend the small box in which was a silver diamond ring.\nThe bartender raised an eyebrow.\n“Well, good luck with that then. You’ll find her upstairs.” He gestured to a picture behind him of Jacob with Hannah.\n “You two are perfect together. In all my years, I have never seen devotion quite like it; let alone that I expected it to be my own godson… your old man would be proud.” He put a friendly hand on Jake’s shoulder as he finished his statement.\n“Thanks, Frank. Well, till then.”\n\nSomewhere else in the club, Lucas Sharp, a medium-sized weasel in his mid-40s, was just hanging around, drinking his beers, and watching the strippers when one of the other patrons, a German shepherd, had gotten a little too close for comfort with one of the waitresses. She slapped him leaving a red mark on his cheek. He responded by grabbing her tail and pinning her to a nearby table. That was when a black rat grabbed him, lifted the guy into the air and threw him to the ground. The shepherd jumped back up on his feet and pulled out a pocket knife and began performing a few fancy tricks with it only to have Jacob snap his wrist and backhand him across the muzzle. The dog reached for his knife with his other hand and was about to cut Jacob this time when Lucas grabbed the knife from him and jammed it through his hand, nailing him to a nearby table. The shepherd let out a cry of anguish. Jacob quickly thanked the stranger and then, grabbed the shepherd’s head and turned him to face the girl.\n\n“Now, say ‘sorry’ to the nice girl, so we can leave here with a clean conscience.”\nThe dog slurred in his attempts. “S-s-sorry…”\n“What’s that? I didn’t hear you!” He grabbed the dog’s groin and twisted it hard on his last word. “AAHH!! Fuck, I’m sorry all right!?” This generated a cheer from the crowd.\nJake pulled out the knife, wiped it off on the dog’s jacket, borrowed a kerchief from another patron and wrapped it around the dog’s wounded hand.\n“There, now! No hard feelings, right? You just gotta understand, you don’t treat girls that way. You can come in whenever you want, indulge in whatever you desire because that is a privilege; a privilege you just lost.”\nHe picked up the dog and death-stared him in the eyes. “If I catch you beating on any other girls, whether it is here or on the outside, I won’t be so forgiving.”\nHis voice dropped to a harsh whisper. “Something about that just pisses me off to no end.”\nHe pushed the shepherd into the surrounding crowd.\n“Now, will someone please escort him to the front door? I’d do it if not for having a *very* lovely and *much* appreciated girl waiting for me upstairs.” He over-enunciated on the two adverbs to get his point through.\nAs he left though, he noticed that the weasel who helped him in the fight had disappeared.\n\nIn fact, Lucas had snuck backstage during the confusion. He crept quietly down the hall until he came to a door with the name Delores on it. He gave his hair a quick spit shine before he knocked. \n“Delores!” From the other side of the door he heard “Just a minute.”\nSeconds later, the door opened and a middle-aged squirrel stuck her head out.\n“Lucas, baby, you sure know how to come late.”\n“I love you too, Lori. Listen, I haven’t got much time, so let’s just make this quick.”\nShe blinked at his persistence. “Hmm, pushy.”\nShe opened the door all the way so he could come in. As soon as he was comfortably seated on her couch, she picked up a magazine, rolled it up and smacked him over the head with it.\n “What’re you freaking crazy? Do you know what’d happen if Jerry caught you in his club? You’re already marked for death and now you’re fixing to bring me down with you?”\nHe got up to settle her down.\n“I know I’m marked, that’s why I’m leaving here. I got us two one-way tickets to Europe. We can have our happy ever after.” \n\nDuring his attempts at sweet talking, he had sat her by his side on the couch. One of his hands crept under her thong and began teasing her panty region. He rolled it down and then went down on her. She rubbed the back of his head as he began to eat her out. She shuddered as his tongue tickled her vaginal walls. One free hand found its way to the front of his jeans. His licks became more intensified. He unfastened his jeans. She climaxed pouring her sweet juices down his throat. What he didn’t swallow trickled down his chin. She looked down at his throbbing red shaft which had been freed from its confines.\n\nShe put her hand around his throat and said “Do you have protection?”\nThe weasel answered dejectedly “No.”\nShe thought as her hand moved to the front of his shirt and then said “Oh, fuck it.”\nShe took her thong off the rest of the way, laid back and smiled. “Well, what’re you waiting for?”\n\nMeanwhile, Jacob had entered the v.i.p. Jacuzzi room to find his sweet lover eagerly awaiting him. He sat down by the edge of the Jacuzzi and began rubbing her face gently with his right hand before descending lower under the water.\nAs she sighed, he whispered into her ear “This wasn’t exactly what I had in mind when I said tonight was going to be special, but good thought, though.”\nHe reached into his left pocket and said “Close your eyes please.” She did so.\nHe quickly stripped down to nothing and joined her in the water. He took her left hand and slipped the ring on her finger. Her eyes shot open when she felt it. He kissed Hannah and held her head to show the honesty of his eyes.\n“Hannah, I’ve known you all my life. I would love the honor of spending the rest of my life with you as much as I love you right now.”\nShe wept slightly before hugging him. A flash of naughtiness spread across her face when she looked in his dark violet eyes. Her newly engaged left hand crept down his front side.\n“Um, Hannah, what’re you doing?”\nShe said seductively “I’m giving us a good head start on our future.”\nHer hand reached his shaft which had only become slightly erect. Now feeling perturbed, she began teasing his balls while quipping “You are such a Gentleman, babe.”\nHe answered with a smirk.\n“It’s what my dad taught me.”\n“How nice of him.”\nShe rubbed his shaft as it reacted to her juggling his balls. She licked his chest. Finally, he was the right size for her. She pushed him back to the edge of the Jacuzzi. She took off the ring. \n“Don’t want this getting wet now do we?”\nShe set it down on the side by his clothes.\n“Now you just sit back and enjoy yourself.”\n\nWithout wasting one second, she straddled his hips and impaled herself on him. He placed his hands on her waist as they kissed. He thrust even deeper into her as he tasted his lover’s tongue. Their kiss finally ended and he moved down to her breasts. He squeezed them and he sucked on her nipples. He pulled out briefly as if to give his shaft time to breathe. He picked her up and sat her on the edge.\n\n“I prefer doing this on dry land if you don’t mind.”\n\nHe kissed her again and reentered her. She stared up into his violet eyes. She closed her eyes to savor the sight. His thrusts began to get faster. He held her close. She wrapped her legs around his waist. Their tails intertwined together. Then he climaxed, blowing loads and loads of his seed into her cervix. He could tell by the pleasure and satisfaction in her face that his efforts were becoming fruitful. Finally, the two of them were done ensuring the continuation of their race and completely exhausted. \n\nHannah “I love you, Jacob.”\nJacob “I love you, Hannah.”\n\nBack downstairs, Lucas and Dolores were also making love. He gripped her tender abdomen as he rode her from behind. Her tail brushed against his genitals with each thrust. He bit her softly on her left shoulder. His sharp carnivore teeth teased her soft rodent skin. His warm breath made the fur on her neck stand up. His tongue soothed her. He squeezed her tits.\n\nThat’s when she heard the DJ calling her name. It was her turn to go up on stage.\n“Oh shit, baby! Looks you’ll have to go blue-balled ‘til I get back.”\nShe kissed him before he could make any protests, pulled her thong back up and left the room. He lay back with his hard-on still raging.\n“Fuck!” He muttered under his breath.\n\nHe rubbed it in an attempt to relieve some stress. He tried to imagine Delores giving him head. Her velvety soft tongue perfectly simulated by his index and long digits rubbing his tip. He began thrusting once more. A casual look to the side revealed that she had left her purse behind. He stopped briefly to reach out for it. He took it and searched it and came up with one of her toys. It was a reasonably sized purple ridged plastic penis. \n\n“To hell with it!” He sighed.\n\nHe propped himself up on one of her pillows and sucked on the tip of the toy. Once he had moistened it enough, he lifted his left leg up to his left pec; he parted the cheeks and stuck it in. The tip of his shaft was close to his face from the way he was positioned. He began to lap it lightly. His thrusts became more erratic. Finally, he could no longer take the pressure. He leaned back, his eyes rolled back and he burst. He basked in the glory of his seed showering his body. He was exhausted from the exertion. He rubbed his hands across his body, dipped his claws in warm cum and licked his fingers clean. \n\nThat was when he realized someone was standing over him. He looked up in a shock and his blood ran cold. It was a large Doberman Pinscher dressed in a cheesy pimp suit and the muscles on him to rival Heracles. All Lucas could say was “J-j-j-Jerome…”\n\nJacob and Hannah were walking down the stairs together hand in hand. She kissed him on the cheek.\n“I have to get going soon. I’ll be meeting you back at home. We can continue repopulating the species there.”\nShe left his side flashing her tail at him as she walked away. He sighed and shook his head as he turned his attention back to his job.\n\nLucas walked through the crowd as fast as he could. He was quite shaken by Jerome’s sudden appearance. He didn’t even bother to get his girlfriend. At the same time, Hannah was walking toward the front door. Lucas got to his car and turned the key in the ignition. It didn’t start. He pushed harder on it. He heard the click. He looked up for a brief second and saw a rat girl walking by his car. The car exploded, throwing Hannah across the street. Jacob heard the explosion and ran out pushing spectators put of his way. He saw Hannah lying in the middle of the street.\n\n“Hannah!”\n\nHe slipped and fell hard on the asphalt as he ran, ripping a light gash into his calf. Ignoring the pain, he rushed to her side and cradled her close to his chest. She was covered from head to toe in sickening burns. She opened her eyes once and saw into his as he held her. She looked as if she was going to say sorry but, she passed without a word.\n\nHe cried as he held her body to his. Someone from the crowd put a hand on his shoulder to calm him down. He jumped on him and began to strangle the helpless bystander, until he was tasered by two officers on the scene. They threw him in a cell to cool off for the night. He huddled in a corner by the window that night, clutching her rosary, the only thing of hers he could take as they pulled him away from her. The last thing he remembered of that night (which he would tell others.) was crying for her and then, envisioning the scum that put that bomb there and what he would do, if he ever found them.\n\nFour months later…\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The Prologue

This story will begin as many do...

On any given day, one could be the happiest man in the world.  One could have the perfect job, sharing one’s life with a faithful love, such a bright future.  Alas, life can never be so simple or even forgiving.  Even those who do no wrong can have everything go wrong.  None would fit this more than one black rat by the name of Jacob Marshall.

Jacob, the stories that could be told of him;  The hardships he went through, the pains he endured.  The sensible thing would be to start at the beginning.

Jacob had little to no memory of his past before he came to live in the seemingly lazy coastal city of Corpus Christi, TX.  Aged 24 and living for the past few months in a cozy apartment with his childhood friend and the love his life, Hannah, he had it made.  He was built, strong and at 5’8” not to be toyed with.

Jacob worked as a bouncer at a fairly popular nightclub called Studio 23.  His godfather, a kindly old hippo named Frank, was a bartender here and had helped the rat get the job as a way to help pay the rent.  He was good at his job.  He was particularly good at just being able to stare down most troublemakers.  Even if someone did try to fight him they usually ended up either tossed out back by Jacob or spending the night in the drunk tank downtown.

Tonight was to be to be different, however.  Jacob arrived looking more chipper than usual.  A few of the regular patrons recognized him and greeted him as such.  He acknowledged them with a wordless gesture or two.  He personally made little attempt to actually familiarize himself with anyone.  Two years he had been working there and his only true friend there was Frank.

The old man saw his godson and shouted.
“Jacob, you young son-of-a-gun you.”
The friends shared a quick friendly embrace.
“Heh, good seeing you too, old man.”
Frank pulled away, after feeling the lump in the young rat’s left jacket pocket.
“So, tonight’s the night, eh?” the bartender asked.
Jacob shrugged and smiled as he showed his old friend the small box in which was a silver diamond ring.
The bartender raised an eyebrow.
“Well, good luck with that then.  You’ll find her upstairs.”  He gestured to a picture behind him of Jacob with Hannah.
 “You two are perfect together.  In all my years, I have never seen devotion quite like it; let alone that I expected it to be my own godson… your old man would be proud.”  He put a friendly hand on Jake’s shoulder as he finished his statement.
“Thanks, Frank.  Well, till then.”

Somewhere else in the club, Lucas Sharp, a medium-sized weasel in his mid-40s, was just hanging around, drinking his beers, and watching the strippers when one of the other patrons, a German shepherd, had gotten a little too close for comfort with one of the waitresses.  She slapped him leaving a red mark on his cheek.  He responded by grabbing her tail and pinning her to a nearby table.  That was when a black rat grabbed him, lifted the guy into the air and threw him to the ground.  The shepherd jumped back up on his feet and pulled out a pocket knife and began performing a few fancy tricks with it only to have Jacob snap his wrist and backhand him across the muzzle.  The dog reached for his knife with his other hand and was about to cut Jacob this time when Lucas grabbed the knife from him and jammed it through his hand, nailing him to a nearby table.  The shepherd let out a cry of anguish.  Jacob quickly thanked the stranger and then, grabbed the shepherd’s head and turned him to face the girl.

“Now, say ‘sorry’ to the nice girl, so we can leave here with a clean conscience.”
The dog slurred in his attempts.  “S-s-sorry…”
“What’s that?  I didn’t hear you!”  He grabbed the dog’s groin and twisted it hard on his last word. “AAHH!!  Fuck, I’m sorry all right!?”  This generated a cheer from the crowd.
Jake pulled out the knife, wiped it off on the dog’s jacket, borrowed a kerchief from another patron and wrapped it around the dog’s wounded hand.
“There, now!  No hard feelings, right?  You just gotta understand, you don’t treat girls that way.  You can come in whenever you want, indulge in whatever you desire because that is a privilege; a privilege you just lost.”
He picked up the dog and death-stared him in the eyes.  “If I catch you beating on any other girls, whether it is here or on the outside, I won’t be so forgiving.”
His voice dropped to a harsh whisper.  “Something about that just pisses me off to no end.”
He pushed the shepherd into the surrounding crowd.
“Now, will someone please escort him to the front door?  I’d do it if not for having a *very* lovely and *much* appreciated girl waiting for me upstairs.”  He over-enunciated on the two adverbs to get his point through.
As he left though, he noticed that the weasel who helped him in the fight had disappeared.

In fact, Lucas had snuck backstage during the confusion.  He crept quietly down the hall until he came to a door with the name Delores on it.  He gave his hair a quick spit shine before he knocked.
“Delores!”  From the other side of the door he heard “Just a minute.”
Seconds later, the door opened and a middle-aged squirrel stuck her head out.
“Lucas, baby, you sure know how to come late.”
“I love you too, Lori.  Listen, I haven’t got much time, so let’s just make this quick.”
She blinked at his persistence.  “Hmm, pushy.”
She opened the door all the way so he could come in.  As soon as he was comfortably seated on her couch, she picked up a magazine, rolled it up and smacked him over the head with it.
 “What’re you freaking crazy?  Do you know what’d happen if Jerry caught you in his club?  You’re already marked for death and now you’re fixing to bring me down with you?”
He got up to settle her down.
“I know I’m marked, that’s why I’m leaving here.  I got us two one-way tickets to Europe.  We can have our happy ever after.”  

During his attempts at sweet talking, he had sat her by his side on the couch.  One of his hands crept under her thong and began teasing her panty region.  He rolled it down and then went down on her.  She rubbed the back of his head as he began to eat her out. She shuddered as his tongue tickled her vaginal walls.  One free hand found its way to the front of his jeans.  His licks became more intensified.  He unfastened his jeans.  She climaxed pouring her sweet juices down his throat.  What he didn’t swallow trickled down his chin.  She looked down at his throbbing red shaft which had been freed from its confines.

She put her hand around his throat and said “Do you have protection?”
The weasel answered dejectedly “No.”
She thought as her hand moved to the front of his shirt and then said “Oh, fuck it.”
She took her thong off the rest of the way, laid back and smiled.  “Well, what’re you waiting for?”

Meanwhile, Jacob had entered the v.i.p. Jacuzzi room to find his sweet lover eagerly awaiting him.  He sat down by the edge of the Jacuzzi and began rubbing her face gently with his right hand before descending lower under the water.
As she sighed, he whispered into her ear “This wasn’t exactly what I had in mind when I said tonight was going to be special, but good thought, though.”
He reached into his left pocket and said “Close your eyes please.”  She did so.
He quickly stripped down to nothing and joined her in the water.  He took her left hand and slipped the ring on her finger.  Her eyes shot open when she felt it.  He kissed Hannah and held her head to show the honesty of his eyes.
“Hannah, I’ve known you all my life.  I would love the honor of spending the rest of my life with you as much as I love you right now.”
She wept slightly before hugging him.  A flash of naughtiness spread across her face when she looked in his dark violet eyes.  Her newly engaged left hand crept down his front side.
“Um, Hannah, what’re you doing?”
She said seductively “I’m giving us a good head start on our future.”
Her hand reached his shaft which had only become slightly erect.  Now feeling perturbed, she began teasing his balls while quipping “You are such a Gentleman, babe.”
He answered with a smirk.
“It’s what my dad taught me.”
“How nice of him.”
She rubbed his shaft as it reacted to her juggling his balls.  She licked his chest.  Finally, he was the right size for her.  She pushed him back to the edge of the Jacuzzi.  She took off the ring.
“Don’t want this getting wet now do we?”
She set it down on the side by his clothes.
“Now you just sit back and enjoy yourself.”

Without wasting one second, she straddled his hips and impaled herself on him.  He placed his hands on her waist as they kissed.  He thrust even deeper into her as he tasted his lover’s tongue.  Their kiss finally ended and he moved down to her breasts.  He squeezed them and he sucked on her nipples.  He pulled out briefly as if to give his shaft time to breathe.  He picked her up and sat her on the edge.

“I prefer doing this on dry land if you don’t mind.”

He kissed her again and reentered her.  She stared up into his violet eyes.  She closed her eyes to savor the sight.  His thrusts began to get faster.  He held her close.  She wrapped her legs around his waist.  Their tails intertwined together.  Then he climaxed, blowing loads and loads of his seed into her cervix.  He could tell by the pleasure and satisfaction in her face that his efforts were becoming fruitful.  Finally, the two of them were done ensuring the continuation of their race and completely exhausted.  

Hannah “I love you, Jacob.”
Jacob “I love you, Hannah.”

Back downstairs, Lucas and Dolores were also making love. He gripped her tender abdomen as he rode her from behind.  Her tail brushed against his genitals with each thrust.  He bit her softly on her left shoulder.  His sharp carnivore teeth teased her soft rodent skin.  His warm breath made the fur on her neck stand up.  His tongue soothed her.  He squeezed her tits.

That’s when she heard the DJ calling her name.  It was her turn to go up on stage.
“Oh shit, baby!  Looks you’ll have to go blue-balled ‘til I get back.”
She kissed him before he could make any protests, pulled her thong back up and left the room.  He lay back with his hard-on still raging.
“Fuck!”  He muttered under his breath.

He rubbed it in an attempt to relieve some stress.  He tried to imagine Delores giving him head.  Her velvety soft tongue perfectly simulated by his index and long digits rubbing his tip.  He began thrusting once more.  A casual look to the side revealed that she had left her purse behind.  He stopped briefly to reach out for it. He took it and searched it and came up with one of her toys.  It was a reasonably sized purple ridged plastic penis.  

“To hell with it!”  He sighed.

He propped himself up on one of her pillows and sucked on the tip of the toy.  Once he had moistened it enough, he lifted his left leg up to his left pec; he parted the cheeks and stuck it in.  The tip of his shaft was close to his face from the way he was positioned. He began to lap it lightly.  His thrusts became more erratic. Finally, he could no longer take the pressure.  He leaned back, his eyes rolled back and he burst.  He basked in the glory of his seed showering his body.  He was exhausted from the exertion.  He rubbed his hands across his body, dipped his claws in warm cum and licked his fingers clean.

That was when he realized someone was standing over him.  He looked up in a shock and his blood ran cold.  It was a large Doberman Pinscher dressed in a cheesy pimp suit and the muscles on him to rival Heracles.  All Lucas could say was “J-j-j-Jerome…”

Jacob and Hannah were walking down the stairs together hand in hand.  She kissed him on the cheek.
“I have to get going soon.  I’ll be meeting you back at home.  We can continue repopulating the species there.”
She left his side flashing her tail at him as she walked away.  He sighed and shook his head as he turned his attention back to his job.

Lucas walked through the crowd as fast as he could.  He was quite shaken by Jerome’s sudden appearance.  He didn’t even bother to get his girlfriend.  At the same time, Hannah was walking toward the front door.  Lucas got to his car and turned the key in the ignition.  It didn’t start.  He pushed harder on it.  He heard the click.  He looked up for a brief second and saw a rat girl walking by his car.  The car exploded, throwing Hannah across the street. Jacob heard the explosion and ran out pushing spectators put of his way.  He saw Hannah lying in the middle of the street.

“Hannah!”

He slipped and fell hard on the asphalt as he ran, ripping a light gash into his calf.  Ignoring the pain, he rushed to her side and cradled her close to his chest.  She was covered from head to toe in sickening burns.  She opened her eyes once and saw into his as he held her.  She looked as if she was going to say sorry but, she passed without a word.

He cried as he held her body to his.  Someone from the crowd put a hand on his shoulder to calm him down.  He jumped on him and began to strangle the helpless bystander, until he was tasered by two officers on the scene.  They threw him in a cell to cool off for the night.  He huddled in a corner by the window that night, clutching her rosary, the only thing of hers he could take as they pulled him away from her.  The last thing he remembered of that night (which he would tell others.) was crying for her and then, envisioning the scum that put that bomb there and what he would do, if he ever found them.

Four months later…

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