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The second one I posted on another site \" July 5th. Is my lore going too deep and too hard? Am I bringing up religious topics far too often here? The second one is done in the form of a dialog, with Goldendove saying all the odd numbered lines & Rose Le'wing saying all the even numbered ones. The fact she alludes to the idea she believes her mother was reincarnated as a dove would imply something tragic happened in her past. I might as well link to some actual art of these characters while I am at it. https://inkbunny.net/s/3365508 is the most recent one of Goldendove the mole woman, and https://inkbunny.net/s/3323083 is the most recent one of Rose Le'wing the fruit bat. As for the first poem, it clearly describes the main character in my game, Blast Le'wing, to declare that all the people of Earth are \"his people\" when he makes a certain declaration. While also establishing he has no idea if aliens exist or not. I wonder if my followup should be shared here.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is a crosspost of https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57282146/ and since posting it to FurAffinity I have written a followup lore entry to the second poem here. "The first one I uploaded on another site on July 2nd. The second one I posted on another site " July 5th. Is my lore going too deep and too hard? Am I bringing up religious topics far too often here? The second one is done in the form of a dialog, with Goldendove saying all the odd numbered lines & Rose Le'wing saying all the even numbered ones. The fact she alludes to the idea she believes her mother was reincarnated as a dove would imply something tragic happened in her past. I might as well link to some actual art of these characters while I am at it. https://inkbunny.net/s/3365508 is the most recent one of Goldendove the mole woman, and https://inkbunny.net/s/3323083 is the most recent one of Rose Le'wing the fruit bat. As for the first poem, it clearly describes the main character in my game, Blast Le'wing, to declare that all the people of Earth are "his people" when he makes a certain declaration. While also establishing he has no idea if aliens exist or not. I wonder if my followup should be shared here.", "writing": "EX Echoes:Story of His People\n\nWhat did the flying child mean when he echoed ancient scrolls?\nTo order the release of \"his people\" from the king of cyborg moles.\nDid the pup mean just the species to which he and his kin belong?\nTo limit what he meant to only that case would be wrong.\nDid he mean only those who shared certain cultural traits?\nHe would not be one to be keeping such limiting gates.\nDid the bat mean only those who traced back to a certain land?\nThat group alone was not what the scope of his demand.\nAt the very least he meant all the people of this Earth.\nFor he believes that everyone has inherent worth.\nNot that he would exclude those from worlds beyond ours\nBut it is unknown if life even exists on distant stars.\nIf aliens exist Mecha had captured none.\nThey fought, but in the end, twas wings, not steel, that won.\n\nDialog of Unexpected Distress\n\nTell me, little bat, why do they call you Rose?\nWith that flower I have a special bond, I suppose.\nI, too, share a bond with the species in my name.\nI guess, then, in that regard we are the same\nIf I have yet to tell you, my name is Goldendove\nThe global symbol of peace and love?\nYes, I feel a link to that people in my soul\nIt suits you well, for you are a kindhearted mole.\nI have a duty to tend for all the people in my care.\nWhy would someone sweet as you work this evil lair?\nIf my king were as evil as you say, would he need me?\nI'm sorry, but at least here I am safe, although not free.\nYou don't know the pain I bear from before he came to rule.\nDon't cry, my dear, I didn't say that to be cruel.\nYou speak with a mother's love, it brings back the grief.\nI'm so sorry, can I do anything to give you relief?\nI forgive you, for you knew not of my past.\nA Rose forgets of her thorns, it happened so fast.\nThere is a hope I cling to, as your wings around my arm.\nI wanted to make sure you knew I meant you no harm.\nIs it foolish to think her soul lives on inside a bird?\nNow why would your faith in that be something absurd?\nI know that is not something in which you believe.\nI am not one to judge how other people grieve.\nWould it be alright to tell this to your son?\nAll species survive hardship, we are not the one.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "EX Echoes:Story of His People

What did the flying child mean when he echoed ancient scrolls?
To order the release of "his people" from the king of cyborg moles.
Did the pup mean just the species to which he and his kin belong?
To limit what he meant to only that case would be wrong.
Did he mean only those who shared certain cultural traits?
He would not be one to be keeping such limiting gates.
Did the bat mean only those who traced back to a certain land?
That group alone was not what the scope of his demand.
At the very least he meant all the people of this Earth.
For he believes that everyone has inherent worth.
Not that he would exclude those from worlds beyond ours
But it is unknown if life even exists on distant stars.
If aliens exist Mecha had captured none.
They fought, but in the end, twas wings, not steel, that won.

Dialog of Unexpected Distress

Tell me, little bat, why do they call you Rose?
With that flower I have a special bond, I suppose.
I, too, share a bond with the species in my name.
I guess, then, in that regard we are the same
If I have yet to tell you, my name is Goldendove
The global symbol of peace and love?
Yes, I feel a link to that people in my soul
It suits you well, for you are a kindhearted mole.
I have a duty to tend for all the people in my care.
Why would someone sweet as you work this evil lair?
If my king were as evil as you say, would he need me?
I'm sorry, but at least here I am safe, although not free.
You don't know the pain I bear from before he came to rule.
Don't cry, my dear, I didn't say that to be cruel.
You speak with a mother's love, it brings back the grief.
I'm so sorry, can I do anything to give you relief?
I forgive you, for you knew not of my past.
A Rose forgets of her thorns, it happened so fast.
There is a hope I cling to, as your wings around my arm.
I wanted to make sure you knew I meant you no harm.
Is it foolish to think her soul lives on inside a bird?
Now why would your faith in that be something absurd?
I know that is not something in which you believe.
I am not one to judge how other people grieve.
Would it be alright to tell this to your son?
All species survive hardship, we are not the one.
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