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As entertaining as they can be at times.\n\nSo instead, I took the two main stories, and did whatever the hell I normally do since freaking Wrong Side Of Heaven. Then told the very basics of the two smaller ones through them.\n\nThat sounds very complicated, Bartan.\n\nIt does, but it really isn't. Don't worry about it, you'll get what I mean when you come to them. Point being: I'm trying not to waste your time so much, all the white getting a good story-wow that sounds egotistical. Whatever, I don't want to say too much else due to spoilers, so just enjoy Act 2 of Beo's story.\n\nFear Is The Weakness © In Flames (Semi-harsh Vocals)\nDown With The Fallen © Starset (Mostly clean, as in like 95%)\n\n\nWhen the next Act will come out? I'm not sure yet. I gotta organize A-Lot of BS in hopes that I can make sense out of it. Oi... I'm digging myself a hole here, I just know it =P ", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Originally Posted: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19722263/


Phew, this one took a while. Long story short: March still sucks.

Anyway! We finally get some sex scenes in this story! For those of you who were waiting on such things, they're conveniently in another submission over here. Granted, keep in mind I just ripped the chapters with them out and threw them into a separate piece, so you will get some of the story before the scenes/during. So, like... Enjoy them.

Now, Down With The Fallen wasn't all that hard to work with, which is a good thing. What was somewhat difficult is... It was actually supposed to be four entire stories on it's own. It was entertaining to "Watch" in that length of time, but to read... I could see it dragging on. Some of it was interesting, but unnecessary to the overall plot. If you've read/remember the first one, you already know that the three main dragons are jerks (heh), and you really don't need to be beaten with that message through six stories... As entertaining as they can be at times.

So instead, I took the two main stories, and did whatever the hell I normally do since freaking Wrong Side Of Heaven. Then told the very basics of the two smaller ones through them.

That sounds very complicated, Bartan.

It does, but it really isn't. Don't worry about it, you'll get what I mean when you come to them. Point being: I'm trying not to waste your time so much, all the white getting a good story-wow that sounds egotistical. Whatever, I don't want to say too much else due to spoilers, so just enjoy Act 2 of Beo's story.

Fear Is The Weakness © In Flames (Semi-harsh Vocals)
Down With The Fallen © Starset (Mostly clean, as in like 95%)


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