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I will be adding more to this as time goes on, just judging reactions and looking for feedback that will help me build on my skills.", "writing": "Homeward Bound,\nChapter 1\n-----------------------------------\nSitting on the packed coach Jake the 17 year old white shepherd watched as the world went by, his music playing quietly through his ear buds, so far the journey had lasted a good three hours and his legs where beginning to ache in the cramped seats, sighing softly as he had already gotten bored and fidgety from the long drive and the mare sitting beside him wasn't helping.\n\nSitting beside him was a middle aged pinto mare, from what he could see of her coat as he'd walked to his seat, her coat was a dulled brown and white almost grey fur most of her frame was covered by her coat and skirt, not long after they had set off she was fast asleep. However Jake had noticed her skirt had started to ride up with each time she stirred in her seat, they had ridden up so far in fact she was now showing off her panties to the canine and her velvety lips within where outlined ever so perfectly, every curve and dip in those lips and even the slight winks they gave, the pup could see and they enticed his glances more and more. ever since he watched that skirt ride up his eyes would wander south to sneak a quick glance of her in her rather exposed state.\n\nhowever his luck was about to run out, as he glanced for what must've been the hundredth time his eyes fixated on her outlined lips he was quickly interrupted by a cough, his gaze looking up and meeting the mares “see something you like pup?” she asked with what Jake could only surmise was a look of annoyance that he had dared to look at her.. Pinning his ears back as his cheeks burned red hot, He'd been caught and the whole coach will know him as a pervert. His entire young life flashed before his eyes as they slowly moved up to meet her gaze, a sly grin on her muzzle as she stared directly back into his eyes and deep within his mind.\n\nPinning his ears back he let out a soft and pitiful whine, almost going for the puppy eyes before she leaned over and whispered into his ear “Keep quiet pup, or I'll tell everyone here you where staring” she whispered just before leaning back and adjusted her skirt. just then the driver called out “Alright, where going to stop here for a few minutes, so bathroom breaks now please”. As the coach came to a halt the young shepherd almost bolted out of his seat and towards the door which made the driver chuckle “bursting that bad huh?” as the young pup bolted for the bathroom.\n\nhowever his luck was about to run out, as he glanced for what must've been the hundreth time his eyes fixated on her outlined lips he was quickly interupted by a cough, his gaxe looking up and meeting the mares “see something you like pup?” she asked with what jake could only summise was a look of annoyance that he had dared to look at her.. Pinning his ears back as his cheeks burned red hot, He'd been caught and the whole coach will know him as a pervert. His entire young life flashed before his eyes as they slowly moved up to meet her gaze, a sly grin on her muzzle as she stared directly back into his eyes and deep within his mind.\n\n\n\nPinning his ears back he let out a soft and pitiful whine, almost going for the puppy eyes before she leaned over and whisperered into his ear “Keep quiet pup, or i'll tell everyone here you where staring” she whispered just before leaning back and adjusted her skirt. just then the driver called out “Alright, where going to stop here for a few minutes, so bathroom breaks now please”. As the coach came to a hault the young shephard almost bolted out of his seat and towards the door which made the driver chuckle “bursting that bad huh?” as the young pup bolted for the bathroom.\n\nAs Jake stood staring into the mirror he felt his phone begin to vibrate in his pocket, pulling it out and looking at the screen and the caller ID showing as Mum, he quickly answered it. “Happy Birthday Jacob” came both his mother and father on the end of the line, quickly looking at the clock on his phone he noticed it had just passed midnight and he was officially eighteen years old.\n\nresponding to his parents he thanked them for their message and for staying up a little longer for his birthday. as the conversation came to a close his mother whispered into the phone “I hope you like my gift” just as she hung up. Confused by her words his confusion quickly changed to fear as he heard from behind him “Oh, it's your birthday is it?” quickly spinning round Jake caught the gaze of the Pinto mare from the coach who was now standing with the door closed and her fingers turning the lock “Suppose I could let you off for peaking, seeing as how it is your birthday, what do you think handsome?”\n\nGulping softly as he looked at her, “I..I suppose you c..could?” he stammered, his nerves racked at her forwardness as the mare slowly wwalked to wards him, her hooves clicking on the tiled floor with each step as she approached him “oh, but im not going to stop there, I think the pup needs to show how apologetic he is feeling? how about it?” watching her come right up close to him, close enough he could smell the fress perfume she must’ve put on for him, her muzzle close to his as he looked at her.\n\n“Tell you what, How about I give you a present that you won't forget. Have you ever done anything with a mare? or a woman?” She asked him, Shaking his head in response “N..no” he answered, “Oh well then, must be my lucky day, would you like to have some fun with me?” she asked, her gaze still on his own and not breaking for even a second “I..I would. But the coach will be leaving soon, and I have to get home to my folks” he answered, a little more urgency in his voice as he didn't want to get stuck in the middle of no-where. “Oh don't you worry about that” she smiled, just as she leaned in to his ear and whispered “Be a good puppy, and mommy will make sure you get home safe”\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Homeward Bound,
Chapter 1
-----------------------------------
Sitting on the packed coach Jake the 17 year old white shepherd watched as the world went by, his music playing quietly through his ear buds, so far the journey had lasted a good three hours and his legs where beginning to ache in the cramped seats, sighing softly as he had already gotten bored and fidgety from the long drive and the mare sitting beside him wasn't helping.

Sitting beside him was a middle aged pinto mare, from what he could see of her coat as he'd walked to his seat, her coat was a dulled brown and white almost grey fur most of her frame was covered by her coat and skirt, not long after they had set off she was fast asleep. However Jake had noticed her skirt had started to ride up with each time she stirred in her seat, they had ridden up so far in fact she was now showing off her panties to the canine and her velvety lips within where outlined ever so perfectly, every curve and dip in those lips and even the slight winks they gave, the pup could see and they enticed his glances more and more. ever since he watched that skirt ride up his eyes would wander south to sneak a quick glance of her in her rather exposed state.

however his luck was about to run out, as he glanced for what must've been the hundredth time his eyes fixated on her outlined lips he was quickly interrupted by a cough, his gaze looking up and meeting the mares “see something you like pup?” she asked with what Jake could only surmise was a look of annoyance that he had dared to look at her.. Pinning his ears back as his cheeks burned red hot, He'd been caught and the whole coach will know him as a pervert. His entire young life flashed before his eyes as they slowly moved up to meet her gaze, a sly grin on her muzzle as she stared directly back into his eyes and deep within his mind.

Pinning his ears back he let out a soft and pitiful whine, almost going for the puppy eyes before she leaned over and whispered into his ear “Keep quiet pup, or I'll tell everyone here you where staring” she whispered just before leaning back and adjusted her skirt. just then the driver called out “Alright, where going to stop here for a few minutes, so bathroom breaks now please”. As the coach came to a halt the young shepherd almost bolted out of his seat and towards the door which made the driver chuckle “bursting that bad huh?” as the young pup bolted for the bathroom.

however his luck was about to run out, as he glanced for what must've been the hundreth time his eyes fixated on her outlined lips he was quickly interupted by a cough, his gaxe looking up and meeting the mares “see something you like pup?” she asked with what jake could only summise was a look of annoyance that he had dared to look at her.. Pinning his ears back as his cheeks burned red hot, He'd been caught and the whole coach will know him as a pervert. His entire young life flashed before his eyes as they slowly moved up to meet her gaze, a sly grin on her muzzle as she stared directly back into his eyes and deep within his mind.



Pinning his ears back he let out a soft and pitiful whine, almost going for the puppy eyes before she leaned over and whisperered into his ear “Keep quiet pup, or i'll tell everyone here you where staring” she whispered just before leaning back and adjusted her skirt. just then the driver called out “Alright, where going to stop here for a few minutes, so bathroom breaks now please”. As the coach came to a hault the young shephard almost bolted out of his seat and towards the door which made the driver chuckle “bursting that bad huh?” as the young pup bolted for the bathroom.

As Jake stood staring into the mirror he felt his phone begin to vibrate in his pocket, pulling it out and looking at the screen and the caller ID showing as Mum, he quickly answered it. “Happy Birthday Jacob” came both his mother and father on the end of the line, quickly looking at the clock on his phone he noticed it had just passed midnight and he was officially eighteen years old.

responding to his parents he thanked them for their message and for staying up a little longer for his birthday. as the conversation came to a close his mother whispered into the phone “I hope you like my gift” just as she hung up. Confused by her words his confusion quickly changed to fear as he heard from behind him “Oh, it's your birthday is it?” quickly spinning round Jake caught the gaze of the Pinto mare from the coach who was now standing with the door closed and her fingers turning the lock “Suppose I could let you off for peaking, seeing as how it is your birthday, what do you think handsome?”

Gulping softly as he looked at her, “I..I suppose you c..could?” he stammered, his nerves racked at her forwardness as the mare slowly wwalked to wards him, her hooves clicking on the tiled floor with each step as she approached him “oh, but im not going to stop there, I think the pup needs to show how apologetic he is feeling? how about it?” watching her come right up close to him, close enough he could smell the fress perfume she must’ve put on for him, her muzzle close to his as he looked at her.

“Tell you what, How about I give you a present that you won't forget. Have you ever done anything with a mare? or a woman?” She asked him, Shaking his head in response “N..no” he answered, “Oh well then, must be my lucky day, would you like to have some fun with me?” she asked, her gaze still on his own and not breaking for even a second “I..I would. But the coach will be leaving soon, and I have to get home to my folks” he answered, a little more urgency in his voice as he didn't want to get stuck in the middle of no-where. “Oh don't you worry about that” she smiled, just as she leaned in to his ear and whispered “Be a good puppy, and mommy will make sure you get home safe”
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