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Of all the conclusions I have drawn over the years, I think it's safe to say that this is the one conclusion that I can draw after ALL these years. I am not just a grey muzzle, I'm a really grey muzzle. Officially over 17 years a half horse and Adolphus' tails is just younger than that. I leave this much longer, people will think that I've forgotten it, which I have sometimes. I have a difficulty keeping on task, but I think that I should maybe focus on this and get it finished.\n\nSo here we are, again, kind of. I've gone through and edited the first five for grammar, syntax, spelling and style. (The hell was I thinking 10 years ago?) And we shall start with number 6, the first one of this new part.\n\nFor those curious because we all are, I'll put up copies of the ORIGINAL (yes, that one) and the poorly edited second edition that I was working on just so we can all admire the old and say \"Damn it Avanti, you sucked\".\n\nAs with all things, I might actually finally get around to changing one more thing. Email. Going to change that (because it's overdue I think). AvantiHalfhorse@gmail.com is the new one, just in case the yahoo one finally lapses.\n\nSo here we go again, again and though I may never make a masterpiece that shall receive a series, at least we can say it'll be better than 50 Shades of Gray. (I used to wear a grey tie, but had to change after that book came out. Moved to blue, I think I like it better).\n\n\nThe satisfaction is in the reward, not the trials. -Avanti Halfhorse \n\n\n\nAdolphus looked through the openings in the canopy of the trees above and observed the sun high in the sky. The forest seemed to be nothing but a never-ending maze of trees and the pollen in the air was dulling his sense of smell. The peasant who told him about the short-cut through the forest must have been trying to get him lost and he started to wonder if thieves were tracking him. To go with his sense of dread, the summer day was getting hot and he was getting hungry.\n\n\nHer prey was slowly approaching her trap. The soldier had foolishly entered her forest and now, she would get herself a fine slave. The wolf wasn't just any normal soldier though, he was a soldier of war; a mercenary. His body had been forged in the heat of battle and his fur was decorated with streaks of white, the signs of scars long healed. He was dressed in a pair of trousers and a cloak. Along with his pack, he carried a long sword, slung over his right shoulder. Such a fine weapon had to be a trophy of his numerous campaigns, at least that's what she could guess as the sword was somewhat concealed under his cloak.\nShe slowly crept through the canopy of the trees as she watched him wander lost in the forest. She knew he would slowly make his way towards the trap eventually, but her time was running short and perhaps it would be best if she lured him with a suggestion of something that would wet his appetite.\n\n\nAs he walked through the forest he noticed a strange scent wafting through the leaves, almost calling to him and drawing him towards the mysterious source. It seemed familiar to him and though it had the slightest hint of hay, he couldn't make anything else out of the alluring fragrance His stomach also called to him as the musky smell of horse sweat filled his nostrils.\n\nA meal was a real possibility now. He took a few quick sniffs and drew his dagger; it was time for his hunt to begin.\n\nHe started to stalk slowly through the shadows of the forest floor, almost silent in his movement as both the smell of horse and the foreign fragrance steadily grew stronger. He soon came across a glade with a pool of water at the centre. It was here that the scents seemed to reach their peak. He kept his dagger close to his chest and started to investigate the pool. The scents were strongest here, but he couldn't find the actual origin, it seemed to cover the whole area and it overwhelmed even the pollen that was stuck in his nose, but he could tell it was fresh and the owner was likely nearby.\nHe drew closer to the pool to give it a closer look, but as he looked into the water to find it empty of anything important, he heard the rustling of leaves from behind him. He turned to see what the noise was, but before he had a chance to identify it he was struck in the chest by a pair of hooves and he fell backwards into the pool.\n\nHe struggled in the water as he tried to get his bearings on the situation and though his sword and wet pack were weighing him down, with some swift kicks of his legs, he had managed to get himself to the edge of the water and grab onto a large rock. Taking a moment to catch his breath, he looked around for whoever was trying to kill him. He dragged himself out of the pool and drew his sword. He knew he was at a considerable disadvantage now and he had to stay sharp. He slowly moved his way towards where his dagger had fallen after being knocked from his paw and kept an eye out for the next surprise attack. As he went to pick up the dagger, an arrow flew out of the canopy above him and stuck in the ground in front of him. He jumped back in surprise and held his sword ready. The glade was filled with the chilling laughter of a mare.\n\n\"Do you really think you can stop me with your sword?\" the disembodied voice called out. \"You can't even see me.\"\n\nAs the voice continued to laugh, another three arrows shot out of the canopy, but Adolphus was faster than his attacker had estimated and with an quick swipe of his sword, the arrows lay broken on the ground.\n\n\"If that's all you've got...,\" Adolphus threatened to the unseen voice.\n\n\"I suppose I might have to change my tactics then,\" the voice replied and a rather athletic looking chestnut anthro mare dropped from the bough of a tree near the tree line.\n\n\"How about we make this quick,\" the mare said a she drew two short swords from their scabbards on her back. \"I have other errands to do today.\"\n\n\"I can make this as quick as you like,\" Adolphus replied, holding his sword ready.\n\nThe mare charged at him and took a powerful strike with her right sword, but Adolphus was faster than she could have anticipated for someone wielding such a long and heavy blade and before she could bring her left sword in for a second strike, both blades had been stopped with mere impunity.\n\n\"This isn't my first fight nag,\" Adolphus sneered as he stared between the swords at the mare.\n\n\"Nor is it mine bitch,\" the mare replied with a malicious smile.\n\nAnd then, almost as fast as he could blink, Adolphus was sitting on the ground, disarmed and at the mercy of one of his prey's short swords, tip pressed ever so gently to his throat. He looked up at the commanding figure standing over him. She radiated authority, despite the fact that she stood there naked, save for a piece of rope tied around her waist and the scabbards on her back. Her body, carved and sculpted from years of military training, let no suggestion slip that she would be an easy fight and her voice left no doubt in his mind.\n\n\"You're at my mercy,\" she said without a hint of haste or fear. \"Yield, or I will pin you to where you lay.\"\n\n\"I'm not disarmed yet,\" Adolphus said as he stared up against the mare's gaze.\n\n\"Oh?\" The mare asked with a smirk. \"You intend to beat me with your stare?\"\n\nAdolphus quickly pulled a second dagger from it's sheath and with a quick flick of his wrist, sent the point flying towards the mare's face. The blade would have struck her had she not deflected the blade with the sword she held to his throat. This was just enough for Adolphus to make a break away from his position on the ground and over to his weapon.\n\n\"Impressive,\" the mare said with a smile as she regathered her composure. \"I don't think any of my rangers would have used such underhanded tactics to get out of that, but you seem to lack the scruples of real military training.\"\n\n\"I'm not here to chat,\" Adolphus growled as he picked up his blade and held himself ready.\n\n\"No, you're right,\" the mare said with a patronising flick of her mane, almost as if she were provoking him to action.\n\nAdolphus now took the first attack and with a secure swing, took aim at the mare's waist yet with nigh unseen dexterity she blocked the strike and drove the tip of his sword into the dirt; once again leaving him with the point of a blade at his throat.\n\n\"We're at this point again and I'm getting rather annoyed,\" the mare sighed, \"so yield and this won't be painful.\"\n\n\"Why should I?\" Adolphus demanded.\n\nOut of the trees, an arrow shot forth and struck Adolphus in his thigh.\n\n\"That's why,\" the mare replied. \"Now yield or my archers shoot your other leg.\"\n\nAdolphus fell back, his sword falling from his grip. The mare smiled as she untied the rope from her waist and proceeded to tie Adolphus' paws together.\n\n\"Now was that all so hard?\" the mare asked with a snide tone. \"Had you surrendered you wouldn't have had so much trouble.\"\n\nHe let out a low growl at the mare, only to catch a firm blow across his muzzle from the back of her paw, knocking him flat on the ground.\n\n\"Don't think that's the worst I can do. I can make you feel a multitude of pain and yet you would not pass out from it. You have lost the fight, so I suggest you be a good little bitch and yield to your new master.\"\n\nAdolphus simply growled at her suggestion, only to catch another blow across the face, knocking him out cold.\n\n\nAdolphus was woken by a bucket of water being thrown over him and he found he was hanging by his wrists from a rope that was looped over a thick branch of a tree, his legs had been tied by a rope that wrapped around the base of the tree and he had been relieved of his wet clothes and pack. He tried to struggle against his bindings, but he was tied rather firmly. The mare was standing in front of him with an empty bucket in her paws.\n\n\"About time you woke up.\"\n\n\"What the hell do you want, mare?\"\n\nThe mare put the bucket down, walked over to a pile of what appeared to be her clothes and pulled out Adolphus' sword, adorned with the crest of the Red Dragon family.\n\n\"I notice you have the sword of the Red Dragon family with you.\"\n\n\"I found it on my travels.\"\n\n\"I almost wish that was true, but the idea that you managed to beat a red dragon is laughable.\"\n\n\"I've killed one or two dragons in my time.\"\n\n\"Impressive, but the question remains as to how you got your paws on a sword used by the Red Dragon family, unless you are the Red Wolf.\"\n\n\"I don't think the Red Wolf would lose to a mare.\"\n\n\"I'm flattered you think I'm just some average mare, but you seem to forget that there is one definitive way to find out if you really are the Red Wolf.\"\n\nThe mare walked up to Adolphus and he growled angrily at her, but she quickly silenced him with a firm slap from the back of her paw, before grabbing between his ears and holding his head to the side.\n\n\"They say he has a habit of hiding the brand under the fur on his neck, so let's just look around and see what we can find.\"\n\nShe picked her way through the fur until she came across a patch of skin that showed signs of being branded by hot iron.\n\n\"The Red Wolf carries both the sword and the brand of the house of the Red Dragons,\" the mare said as she exposed the brand to her sight. \"Now either this is merely coincidence, or you really are the Red Wolf.\"\n\n\"Sounds more like coincidence to me.\"\n\n\"Your insubordinate behaviour isn't helping your cause here, Red Wolf.\" She stepped back and started to admire her prize now that she was aware of it's true value. \"In short, you are now my prisoner, so I suggest you start playing along and answering my questions. If you give me answers; I will reward you. If you do not answer or lie to me, then I will punish you. So what is your real name?\"\n\nHe gave a low growl as he shot her an angry stare , but this did not impress her. With two quick steps, she was right up against him and her paw was firmly pushed into his stomach, the blow itself forcing his back into tree and forcing most of his breath from his body. He gasped for air as he felt his stomach burn fiercely.\n\n\"That is your first warning, now tell me your name or I will punish you again.\"\n\nHe gave another, albeit weaker growl, only to take yet another blow to the stomach. He could taste a trace of blood in his mouth.\n\n\"I can keep punching your belly all day long, Red Wolf, so it is a matter of how much more you can take.\"\n\n\"Oh I'm enjoying this gentle massage.\"\n\n\"Your insubordination has been noted.\"\n\nA firm uppercut to the stomach and Adolphus could have sworn his stomach was sitting up next to his heart for a moment. He let out a heaving cough as blood spilled from his mouth.\n\n\"This is your last warning, give me your name or I shall start testing your resistance against more potent methods. What is your name?\"\n\n\"Why don't you tell me yours first?\"\n\nAdolphus tried to tense his stomach, but the horse was far to strong for him and she lay several firm, fast blows into his stomach. As soon as she finished, he started coughing blood.\n\n\"I can't say I am tiring of this simple game, but your complete lack of respect towards me has worn my patience too thin. So perhaps you start doing as I tell you before I start rubbing some nasty, nasty chemicals into some open wounds.\"\n\n\"Oh really? How bad could it be after those pitiful attempts at punches you've attacked me with?\"\n\n\"Well then, a demonstration is in order,\" the mare said as she slowly sauntered her way over to her clothes and began digging around in the pile, the whole time seductively flashing her rump at him. Her return trip was just as suggestive while she carried with her one his daggers and two earthenware jars.\n\n\"I was planning on giving you one more chance to comply before I broke these out,\" the mare said as she removed the leather lid from one of the jars and dipped the tip of the dagger into it's contents, \"but since you insisted, I think I'll show you just how harsh these mixtures are.\"\n\n\nThe mare put the tip of the dagger against his chest with just enough pressure to break the skin and began to slowly slide the blade through his fur, leaving a shallow cut across his chest, so shallow that blood only seeped out in a couple of places, but deep enough that he could feel the sting of the air on the exposed flesh beneath.\n\n\"Oh no,\" he said with some melodrama, \"you've injured me...\"\n\nHe stopped when he felt a burning sensation begin to grow where the dagger had cut his skin.\n\nAt first it could be compared to a mere scratch, but it was progressing into a pain that could only be compared to having a rod of iron, red hot from the forge of the finest blacksmiths, held against his chest. He grimaced and winced as he felt his flesh burning, but he tried to resist as long as he could against the ferocious pain.\n\n\"I must congratulate you on your stamina and will,\" the mare said as she watched the wolf wriggling on the tree, \"it is rare to come across someone who fights against the pain for so long. Now I'll let you think about answering before I give you another cut. What is your name?\"\n\nHe tried as hard as he could to hold out against her torture, but the more he fought, the worse the pain in his chest grew. It felt as though the cut was burning its way into his chest, scorching his ribs and burning his lungs. He gasped desperately as sweat started to mat his fur.\n\n\"It has only been ten seconds,\" the mare warned sternly. \"You have another ten to think before I add another cut to your body.\"\n\nHis attempts seemed almost in vain and his chest now felt as though it had been forced into yellow hot coals. Without saying a word, the mare stepped forward and pressed the tip of the dagger to the other side of his chest.\n\n\"Adolphus,\" he said as he tried to draw breath. \"I am known as Adolphus.\"\n\nThe mare picked up the other jar and rubbed its contents on the wound. The moment the murky green salve touched his skin, the pain immediately began to subside and he could breathe without pain. She continued to trace her finger down the cut to ensure that the fire was gone.\n\n\"Congratulations Adolphus, you've now reached level zero we can start this again, especially now that you are fully aware of the consequences for displeasing me. You can also appreciate just how rewarding it is to make me happy. So why don't we move onto the next part of our game while you keep in mind what I am capable of. Sound like fun?\"\n\nHe merely nodded as he tried to catch his breath.\n\n\"Good! Now to set the rules. I hope you're ready to pay attention as I'm sure you're not going to want me repeating myself.\"\n\nShe picked up the tainted dagger again and gently teased the tip around the arrow wound on his thigh before she took a few steps back and held the jar of relieving salve in front of her stomach.\n\n\"I trust I now have your full attention?\"\n\nHe nodded as fast as he could, the pain already starting to grow to the same intensity as before.\n\"You are my slave. From now on, you are no longer the Red Wolf, nor are you Adolphus. You are merely my slave and I will always refer to you as my bitch until such times as I feel you deserve a better name. Your sword, your belongings, your freedom, your future, are now mine. You are no longer a brave soldier, a feared warrior or a strong mercenary, you are now a pitiful pleasure slave owned by a mare. Do you understand me, bitch?\"\n\n\"I understand,\" he panted as the wound started to burn ferociously.\n\n\"Then say it. Tell me your name and that you understand just how much power I have over you.\"\n\nIt felt like white hot steel was being pressed into the wound.\n\n\"I am your slave.\"\n\n\"That's not good enough. Tell me what you are.\"\n\n\"I am your bitch!\"\n\nDespite that his leg was not actually burning, he thought he could smell the scent of burning fur and flesh.\n\n\"Good bitch, you're learning.\"\n\nThe mare traced just a mere sliver of salvation over the wound, just enough to dull the pain for a moment.\n\n\"Now bitch, I have graciously given you a moment of relief. I've merely given you the first hints of salvation at this point so there's not enough there to stop the fire. In a moment, we'll start your next lesson.\"\n\nAdolphus just hung there, already starting to question just how far he'd gone.\n\n\nThe pain had subsided to the point that it felt like he had just burned himself on some hot coals, but just like before the pain began to grow. The mare smiled as she watched him start to wriggle a bit, writhing in pain.\n\n\"It hurts, doesn't it?\"\n\n\"Immensely.\"\n\n\"Which brings us to the second lesson; my title. I am now your master, your boss and your commander, should I so choose to let you fight again.\nFrom now on, you will do as I say, when I say, and you will do it promptly and without question. Any insolence will be punished as soon as I am able.\nYou are to refer to me at all times as Mistress Felicity, regardless of how anyone else may address me. You are always to refer to me as Mistress Felicity even in my absence and regardless of who you are talking to. Do you understand that bitch?\"\n\n\"Yes, yes I understand.\"\n\n\"Say it properly, bitch.\"\n\n\"I understand you.\"\n\n\"Who am I, bitch?\"\n\n\"Mistress Felicity, you are Mistress Felicity.\"\n\n\"Good boy, bitch, you are learning. Make sure you always say it when addressing me, clear?\"\n\n\"Perfectly clear.\"\n\n\"You can't be listening very well if you have already forgotten the lesson.\"\n\n\"Perfectly clear, Mistress Felicity.\"\n\n\"Good boy, bitch. You are learning.\"\n\nThe mare rubbed just a trace of soothing salve across the arrow wound, causing the pain to subside for a moment.\n\n\"I must admit that you're learning rather quickly, but then again I am a good teacher, wouldn't you agree bitch?\"\n\n\"Yes, you're a very good teacher, Mistress Felicity.\"\n\n\"That's good to hear bitch, I was afraid you were starting to doubt me again.\"\n\n\"No doubt, Mistress Felicity.\"\n\n\"Hmm, no doubt at the moment, but I know I cannot trust what you say just yet.\"\n\n\"Please forgive my impatience, Mistress Felicity, but can we continue our lessons? The wound on my leg is starting to burn again.\"\n\n\"Of course. I'm glad to hear you're so anxious to learn like the good bitch you are.\"\n\nShe made her sarcasm quite evident.\n\n\"Lesson three. To begin with you will remain upon your leash at all times and you will not remove your bindings. As time passes and you show that you are capable of being trusted, I will extend how close you must be and the restraints you will wear. The only thing, though, that you will not remove will be your slave collar. Should you remove it, you will face the full fury of my wraith. Do you understand me bitch?\"\n\nAdolphus grit his teeth as he tried to focus on not screaming, the pain nigh on unbearable.\n\n\"Bitch? Did you hear me?\"\n\nHe gasped for breath as his heartbeat throbbed through his head like the pounds of catapult shots hitting castle walls. He felt dizzy and his vision started to go a bright shade of red.\n\n\"Did you hear what I said, bitch?\"\n\n\"Yes, Mistress Felicity.\"\n\nIn that moment, the red passed to black.\n\n\n\nHe was out cold. She was impressed that he had lasted so long against her, but it was to be expected that he would eventually pass out. By the time he came to, the fire would have subsided.\n\n\"It appears as though our initial reports were correct?\" An unseen voice asked from the canopy of the trees.\n\n\"That is correct,\" the mare called Mistress Felicity said as she wiped her paws on the wolf's shirt, \"and without their star mercenary, we've hampered their plans for at least a week.\"\n\n\"Assuming he was key to their assault.\"\n\n\"True, they have proven to be more resourceful in the past. Now I suggest you get down here Razher, I will need your assistance to fix him up.\"\n\nA large, black stallion, dressed in green, dropped down from the canopy with a reasonable thud. Razher was rather tall, standing a clear 60 centimetres above Felicity. His tail and mane, normally a rather brilliant white, were a dull grey from having been dirtied with charcoal earlier that day.\n\n\"Are you sure you have time for this, Commander?\" Razher asked as she untied the rope that held Adolphus up and slowly lowered his body to the ground.\n\n\"This irritant has left me with a lot of pent up stress,\" Felicity replied as she attached a pair of locked bracers to Adolphus' wrists. \"I know we don't have much time to get back to the castle, but I would prefer to work off this stress now, as opposed to taking it all out on Celdepah.\"\n\n\"I'll get Kitty to keep sentry.\"\n\n\"No, bring her here and let Gareth keep sentry. I would like to humiliate my slave in front of one of his own species.\"\n\n\n\nHe awoke, dazed and confused with the feeling that his mouth was filled with wool. He did notice he was no longer hanging by his arms from a tree, but was not laying on his back. He looked up to see the leg of a rather large horse between his arms and as he tried to move his arms, he found his wrists had been bound together in a pair of leather braces. The leg belonged to a rather tall and muscular black stallion who looked like he could make his intentions known without too much effort. The horse looked down at him and gave a rather unimpressed snort.\n\n\"Good to see you're awake bitch,\" a voice that was starting to grate on his nerves spoke as he craned his neck to try and see where his mistress was. \"I was worried I'd have to drag your unconscious body back to the castle.\"\n\nAdolphus tried to speak, but found that not only was his mouth held almost shut by a muzzle, but his tongue and throat were rather numb.\n\n\"Don't worry, I'm not expecting much out of your mouth at the moment,\" Felicity said as she walked around and stood over him, one hoof on either side of his hips. \"I've covered your tongue in a mild anaesthetic, so things like talking and biting aren't an option for you at the moment.\"\n\nHe tried to move his arms, but found that the horse standing at his head was preventing him from moving them very far and as he looked between his mistress' legs he noticed his legs were still tied to the base of the tree. As escape seemed impossible at the moment, he started to wonder just what the mare had in mind for him.\n\n\n\nFelicity smiled as she crouched down and sat on Adolphus' legs with his crotch between her thighs.\n\n\"I must ask again Commander,\" Razher asked as he looked around, \"are you sure this is the right time for this?\"\n\n\"Razher, I know what I am doing,\" she replied as she picked up an earthenware jar. \"Now where is Kitty?\"\n\n\"She was out tracking patrols a mile or so away, she's on her way back as we speak,\" Razher answered as he looked around.\n\n\"Don't even think of moving Razher.\"\n\n\"I wasn't thinking of moving Commander.\"\n\nA female grey anthro wolf, dressed in green and grey, stepped out of the shadows, carrying a bow at the ready with an arrow already notched, a small pack on her back and a quiver of arrows strapped to one of her legs.\n\n\"Reporting Commander,\" the wolf said as she walked into the clearing.\n\n\"Any reason for the delay, Lieutenant?\" Felicity asked as she looked up at her.\n\n\"The patrols have been passing within our safety perimeter,\" the wolf replied. \"I had to avoid one on my way in.\"\n\n\"Well both of you keep your ears open for anything suspicious,\" Felicity said as she dipped her fingers into the jar, \"but I think you'll enjoy watching this Kitty, simply for your own satisfaction.\"\n\n\"I am honoured, Commander,\" the wolf named Kitty said with a small bow of her head.\n\n\nFelicity ran her fingers through the lotion in another jar she had been carrying in her pack before taking out a reasonable dollop and rubbing it onto Adolphus' sheath.\n\n\"This lotion is something my alchemist devised for those times when I needed my current slave's services, but his will was rather, shall we say, lacking. This allowed him to perform his duties.\"\n\nShe massaged the lotion into his furry sheath and balls as she continued to talk.\n\n\"I have also found that it can inspire the same response in almost any male, regardless of how willing they are. This particular batch has an additional something mixed in that will ensure that you won't be leaving me with any of your bastard offspring.\"\n\nHe tried to resist his arousal, but the lotion started to have its intended effect and he could feel his sheath start to throb with his heartbeat.\nHe panted as he felt his sheath start to grow, the sexual need inside him now seemed to have its own desires. Despite how heavily he fought against it, his wolfhood slowly made its way from his sheath and exposed its sensitive flesh to the air. It gave an involuntary throb as Felicity gently ran her fingers almost teasingly over the skin.\n\n\"It seems yet another rumour of the Red Wolf is true,\" Felicity said as she rubbed some of the lotion onto his cock. \"Once trained, I may enjoy you much more than I first though.\"\n\nThe cool lotion on his wolfhood seemed to gently calm the itching that now seemed to grow inside his erect member. He closed his eyes as he tried to regather his thoughts, but they were suddenly scattered as he felt a rather warm, wet sensation slide down his length. He opened his eyes and noticed that his mistress was crouched over him, breathing rather heavily as she slowly mounted his hard cock. After shifting herself a bit, she was sitting upright on his crotch with his cock buried deep within her moist marehood, the tip of his sheath barely visible. His mistress panted for a moment as she sat herself in a comfortable position.\n\n\"He certainly has a different shape to Celdepah,\" she said as she placed her paws on his belly. \"Let us see just how enjoyable his knot is though.\"\n\n\nWith that, she gave a firm squeeze with her thighs and watched her slave tense at the feeling that wrapped around his shaft. She smirked at the sight of her new slave, bound, gagged and under her sway as she started to work her way towards her goal. Felicity pulled herself forward, his cock slowly slipping from her insides and with a thrust, sent the full 30cm of his length deep within herself again. Adolphus let out a groan, the only noise his throat could mutter as she now increased her pace. She moaned as the large woof cock slid into her body, rubbing and stimulating different parts of her as it throbbed with each thrust. She could feel the well-known lupine knot start to form at the base of his cock and knew he was getting close to finishing, but she was far from her own orgasm. She changed her movements, spending less time near his knot and more time at the tip, enjoying the feeling of a lupine cock rubbing against her wet inside. She watched his expressions as she continued to arouse him without any sign of relief. The sight of this made her hornier and it increased her desires. She lost all control of herself as her animal desires took over, driving her further and further down his cock until the knot was at the point of no return.\n\nWith one last thrust down, Felicity forced herself down and over Adolphus' knot and the sudden rush of blood filling the glands tied the two together. She continued to bounce on his crotch, moving what few centimetres she could as the knot held tight inside of her. She could feel her insides tense in anticipation of what was to come and she knew she was now committed. With two or three more thrusts against the lupine cock inside of her, she felt herself tip over the edge and with a loud neigh, she reached her orgasm, just as she felt the knot of her new slave suddenly swell inside of her. Her sex squeezed desperately as she felt the torrents of wolf seed spill into her awaiting body, fuelled by her own desires for release. She squeezed and moaned in ecstasy as she leaned forward so as to not fall from her somewhat precarious perch atop her slave's crotch. She sat there for several minutes, savouring the glow of her climax, trying to catch her breath.\n\n\nHe felt dazed as he lay there, a feeling of warmth flowing over his body. No female had ever driven him to such heights of climax before and he was now out of breath. He watched his mistress as she regathered her composure before sitting back up.\n\n\"I am rather proud of you bitch,\" she said as she stopped gasping for air. \"You certainly have a rather different style to what I'm used to.\"\n\nShe went to stand up, but found she was still tied to him, the bulge of his knot now spread inside of her and was unwilling to let go of its comfortable place. He gave a happy sigh at his mistress' predicament, but this only stimulated her to give his tender cock a firm squeeze with her insides.\n\n\"You will recede in time,\" she said as she sat back, \"and I can wait. Captain Razher, keep an eye on the perimeter whilst my new slave calms down.\"\n\n\"Yes Commander.\"\n\nRazher disappeared into the trees as Kitty took his place, making sure Adolphus couldn't move his arms.\n\n\"They can be humiliated just as much as you were,\" Felicity said to Kitty as she looked down at him with scorn.\n\n\"That doesn't mean I will trust another like him again,\" Kitty replied.\n\n\"In time you may believe differently.\"\n\n\"I severely doubt that Commander.\"\n\n\"Time shall tell Kitty. Maybe you're just waiting for the right one.\"\n\nAdolphus looked up at Kitty, only to come point to face to an arrow, drawn ready in Kitty's bow.\n\n\"I will hurt you,\" Kitty threatened.\n\nAdolphus quickly averted his gaze back to Felicity, who was still stuck firmly to his crotch.\n\n\"Once I have broken you in, my bitch, you will be a slave worthy of a princess.\"", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "I am old. Of all the conclusions I have drawn over the years, I think it's safe to say that this is the one conclusion that I can draw after ALL these years. I am not just a grey muzzle, I'm a really grey muzzle. Officially over 17 years a half horse and Adolphus' tails is just younger than that. I leave this much longer, people will think that I've forgotten it, which I have sometimes. I have a difficulty keeping on task, but I think that I should maybe focus on this and get it finished.

So here we are, again, kind of. I've gone through and edited the first five for grammar, syntax, spelling and style. (The hell was I thinking 10 years ago?) And we shall start with number 6, the first one of this new part.

For those curious because we all are, I'll put up copies of the ORIGINAL (yes, that one) and the poorly edited second edition that I was working on just so we can all admire the old and say "Damn it Avanti, you sucked".

As with all things, I might actually finally get around to changing one more thing. Email. Going to change that (because it's overdue I think). AvantiHalfhorse@gmail.com is the new one, just in case the yahoo one finally lapses.

So here we go again, again and though I may never make a masterpiece that shall receive a series, at least we can say it'll be better than 50 Shades of Gray. (I used to wear a grey tie, but had to change after that book came out. Moved to blue, I think I like it better).


The satisfaction is in the reward, not the trials. -Avanti Halfhorse



Adolphus looked through the openings in the canopy of the trees above and observed the sun high in the sky. The forest seemed to be nothing but a never-ending maze of trees and the pollen in the air was dulling his sense of smell. The peasant who told him about the short-cut through the forest must have been trying to get him lost and he started to wonder if thieves were tracking him. To go with his sense of dread, the summer day was getting hot and he was getting hungry.


Her prey was slowly approaching her trap. The soldier had foolishly entered her forest and now, she would get herself a fine slave. The wolf wasn't just any normal soldier though, he was a soldier of war; a mercenary. His body had been forged in the heat of battle and his fur was decorated with streaks of white, the signs of scars long healed. He was dressed in a pair of trousers and a cloak. Along with his pack, he carried a long sword, slung over his right shoulder. Such a fine weapon had to be a trophy of his numerous campaigns, at least that's what she could guess as the sword was somewhat concealed under his cloak.
She slowly crept through the canopy of the trees as she watched him wander lost in the forest. She knew he would slowly make his way towards the trap eventually, but her time was running short and perhaps it would be best if she lured him with a suggestion of something that would wet his appetite.


As he walked through the forest he noticed a strange scent wafting through the leaves, almost calling to him and drawing him towards the mysterious source. It seemed familiar to him and though it had the slightest hint of hay, he couldn't make anything else out of the alluring fragrance His stomach also called to him as the musky smell of horse sweat filled his nostrils.

A meal was a real possibility now. He took a few quick sniffs and drew his dagger; it was time for his hunt to begin.

He started to stalk slowly through the shadows of the forest floor, almost silent in his movement as both the smell of horse and the foreign fragrance steadily grew stronger. He soon came across a glade with a pool of water at the centre. It was here that the scents seemed to reach their peak. He kept his dagger close to his chest and started to investigate the pool. The scents were strongest here, but he couldn't find the actual origin, it seemed to cover the whole area and it overwhelmed even the pollen that was stuck in his nose, but he could tell it was fresh and the owner was likely nearby.
He drew closer to the pool to give it a closer look, but as he looked into the water to find it empty of anything important, he heard the rustling of leaves from behind him. He turned to see what the noise was, but before he had a chance to identify it he was struck in the chest by a pair of hooves and he fell backwards into the pool.

He struggled in the water as he tried to get his bearings on the situation and though his sword and wet pack were weighing him down, with some swift kicks of his legs, he had managed to get himself to the edge of the water and grab onto a large rock. Taking a moment to catch his breath, he looked around for whoever was trying to kill him. He dragged himself out of the pool and drew his sword. He knew he was at a considerable disadvantage now and he had to stay sharp. He slowly moved his way towards where his dagger had fallen after being knocked from his paw and kept an eye out for the next surprise attack. As he went to pick up the dagger, an arrow flew out of the canopy above him and stuck in the ground in front of him. He jumped back in surprise and held his sword ready. The glade was filled with the chilling laughter of a mare.

"Do you really think you can stop me with your sword?" the disembodied voice called out. "You can't even see me."

As the voice continued to laugh, another three arrows shot out of the canopy, but Adolphus was faster than his attacker had estimated and with an quick swipe of his sword, the arrows lay broken on the ground.

"If that's all you've got...," Adolphus threatened to the unseen voice.

"I suppose I might have to change my tactics then," the voice replied and a rather athletic looking chestnut anthro mare dropped from the bough of a tree near the tree line.

"How about we make this quick," the mare said a she drew two short swords from their scabbards on her back. "I have other errands to do today."

"I can make this as quick as you like," Adolphus replied, holding his sword ready.

The mare charged at him and took a powerful strike with her right sword, but Adolphus was faster than she could have anticipated for someone wielding such a long and heavy blade and before she could bring her left sword in for a second strike, both blades had been stopped with mere impunity.

"This isn't my first fight nag," Adolphus sneered as he stared between the swords at the mare.

"Nor is it mine bitch," the mare replied with a malicious smile.

And then, almost as fast as he could blink, Adolphus was sitting on the ground, disarmed and at the mercy of one of his prey's short swords, tip pressed ever so gently to his throat. He looked up at the commanding figure standing over him. She radiated authority, despite the fact that she stood there naked, save for a piece of rope tied around her waist and the scabbards on her back. Her body, carved and sculpted from years of military training, let no suggestion slip that she would be an easy fight and her voice left no doubt in his mind.

"You're at my mercy," she said without a hint of haste or fear. "Yield, or I will pin you to where you lay."

"I'm not disarmed yet," Adolphus said as he stared up against the mare's gaze.

"Oh?" The mare asked with a smirk. "You intend to beat me with your stare?"

Adolphus quickly pulled a second dagger from it's sheath and with a quick flick of his wrist, sent the point flying towards the mare's face. The blade would have struck her had she not deflected the blade with the sword she held to his throat. This was just enough for Adolphus to make a break away from his position on the ground and over to his weapon.

"Impressive," the mare said with a smile as she regathered her composure. "I don't think any of my rangers would have used such underhanded tactics to get out of that, but you seem to lack the scruples of real military training."

"I'm not here to chat," Adolphus growled as he picked up his blade and held himself ready.

"No, you're right," the mare said with a patronising flick of her mane, almost as if she were provoking him to action.

Adolphus now took the first attack and with a secure swing, took aim at the mare's waist yet with nigh unseen dexterity she blocked the strike and drove the tip of his sword into the dirt; once again leaving him with the point of a blade at his throat.

"We're at this point again and I'm getting rather annoyed," the mare sighed, "so yield and this won't be painful."

"Why should I?" Adolphus demanded.

Out of the trees, an arrow shot forth and struck Adolphus in his thigh.

"That's why," the mare replied. "Now yield or my archers shoot your other leg."

Adolphus fell back, his sword falling from his grip. The mare smiled as she untied the rope from her waist and proceeded to tie Adolphus' paws together.

"Now was that all so hard?" the mare asked with a snide tone. "Had you surrendered you wouldn't have had so much trouble."

He let out a low growl at the mare, only to catch a firm blow across his muzzle from the back of her paw, knocking him flat on the ground.

"Don't think that's the worst I can do. I can make you feel a multitude of pain and yet you would not pass out from it. You have lost the fight, so I suggest you be a good little bitch and yield to your new master."

Adolphus simply growled at her suggestion, only to catch another blow across the face, knocking him out cold.


Adolphus was woken by a bucket of water being thrown over him and he found he was hanging by his wrists from a rope that was looped over a thick branch of a tree, his legs had been tied by a rope that wrapped around the base of the tree and he had been relieved of his wet clothes and pack. He tried to struggle against his bindings, but he was tied rather firmly. The mare was standing in front of him with an empty bucket in her paws.

"About time you woke up."

"What the hell do you want, mare?"

The mare put the bucket down, walked over to a pile of what appeared to be her clothes and pulled out Adolphus' sword, adorned with the crest of the Red Dragon family.

"I notice you have the sword of the Red Dragon family with you."

"I found it on my travels."

"I almost wish that was true, but the idea that you managed to beat a red dragon is laughable."

"I've killed one or two dragons in my time."

"Impressive, but the question remains as to how you got your paws on a sword used by the Red Dragon family, unless you are the Red Wolf."

"I don't think the Red Wolf would lose to a mare."

"I'm flattered you think I'm just some average mare, but you seem to forget that there is one definitive way to find out if you really are the Red Wolf."

The mare walked up to Adolphus and he growled angrily at her, but she quickly silenced him with a firm slap from the back of her paw, before grabbing between his ears and holding his head to the side.

"They say he has a habit of hiding the brand under the fur on his neck, so let's just look around and see what we can find."

She picked her way through the fur until she came across a patch of skin that showed signs of being branded by hot iron.

"The Red Wolf carries both the sword and the brand of the house of the Red Dragons," the mare said as she exposed the brand to her sight. "Now either this is merely coincidence, or you really are the Red Wolf."

"Sounds more like coincidence to me."

"Your insubordinate behaviour isn't helping your cause here, Red Wolf." She stepped back and started to admire her prize now that she was aware of it's true value. "In short, you are now my prisoner, so I suggest you start playing along and answering my questions. If you give me answers; I will reward you. If you do not answer or lie to me, then I will punish you. So what is your real name?"

He gave a low growl as he shot her an angry stare , but this did not impress her. With two quick steps, she was right up against him and her paw was firmly pushed into his stomach, the blow itself forcing his back into tree and forcing most of his breath from his body. He gasped for air as he felt his stomach burn fiercely.

"That is your first warning, now tell me your name or I will punish you again."

He gave another, albeit weaker growl, only to take yet another blow to the stomach. He could taste a trace of blood in his mouth.

"I can keep punching your belly all day long, Red Wolf, so it is a matter of how much more you can take."

"Oh I'm enjoying this gentle massage."

"Your insubordination has been noted."

A firm uppercut to the stomach and Adolphus could have sworn his stomach was sitting up next to his heart for a moment. He let out a heaving cough as blood spilled from his mouth.

"This is your last warning, give me your name or I shall start testing your resistance against more potent methods. What is your name?"

"Why don't you tell me yours first?"

Adolphus tried to tense his stomach, but the horse was far to strong for him and she lay several firm, fast blows into his stomach. As soon as she finished, he started coughing blood.

"I can't say I am tiring of this simple game, but your complete lack of respect towards me has worn my patience too thin. So perhaps you start doing as I tell you before I start rubbing some nasty, nasty chemicals into some open wounds."

"Oh really? How bad could it be after those pitiful attempts at punches you've attacked me with?"

"Well then, a demonstration is in order," the mare said as she slowly sauntered her way over to her clothes and began digging around in the pile, the whole time seductively flashing her rump at him. Her return trip was just as suggestive while she carried with her one his daggers and two earthenware jars.

"I was planning on giving you one more chance to comply before I broke these out," the mare said as she removed the leather lid from one of the jars and dipped the tip of the dagger into it's contents, "but since you insisted, I think I'll show you just how harsh these mixtures are."


The mare put the tip of the dagger against his chest with just enough pressure to break the skin and began to slowly slide the blade through his fur, leaving a shallow cut across his chest, so shallow that blood only seeped out in a couple of places, but deep enough that he could feel the sting of the air on the exposed flesh beneath.

"Oh no," he said with some melodrama, "you've injured me..."

He stopped when he felt a burning sensation begin to grow where the dagger had cut his skin.

At first it could be compared to a mere scratch, but it was progressing into a pain that could only be compared to having a rod of iron, red hot from the forge of the finest blacksmiths, held against his chest. He grimaced and winced as he felt his flesh burning, but he tried to resist as long as he could against the ferocious pain.

"I must congratulate you on your stamina and will," the mare said as she watched the wolf wriggling on the tree, "it is rare to come across someone who fights against the pain for so long. Now I'll let you think about answering before I give you another cut. What is your name?"

He tried as hard as he could to hold out against her torture, but the more he fought, the worse the pain in his chest grew. It felt as though the cut was burning its way into his chest, scorching his ribs and burning his lungs. He gasped desperately as sweat started to mat his fur.

"It has only been ten seconds," the mare warned sternly. "You have another ten to think before I add another cut to your body."

His attempts seemed almost in vain and his chest now felt as though it had been forced into yellow hot coals. Without saying a word, the mare stepped forward and pressed the tip of the dagger to the other side of his chest.

"Adolphus," he said as he tried to draw breath. "I am known as Adolphus."

The mare picked up the other jar and rubbed its contents on the wound. The moment the murky green salve touched his skin, the pain immediately began to subside and he could breathe without pain. She continued to trace her finger down the cut to ensure that the fire was gone.

"Congratulations Adolphus, you've now reached level zero we can start this again, especially now that you are fully aware of the consequences for displeasing me. You can also appreciate just how rewarding it is to make me happy. So why don't we move onto the next part of our game while you keep in mind what I am capable of. Sound like fun?"

He merely nodded as he tried to catch his breath.

"Good! Now to set the rules. I hope you're ready to pay attention as I'm sure you're not going to want me repeating myself."

She picked up the tainted dagger again and gently teased the tip around the arrow wound on his thigh before she took a few steps back and held the jar of relieving salve in front of her stomach.

"I trust I now have your full attention?"

He nodded as fast as he could, the pain already starting to grow to the same intensity as before.
"You are my slave. From now on, you are no longer the Red Wolf, nor are you Adolphus. You are merely my slave and I will always refer to you as my bitch until such times as I feel you deserve a better name. Your sword, your belongings, your freedom, your future, are now mine. You are no longer a brave soldier, a feared warrior or a strong mercenary, you are now a pitiful pleasure slave owned by a mare. Do you understand me, bitch?"

"I understand," he panted as the wound started to burn ferociously.

"Then say it. Tell me your name and that you understand just how much power I have over you."

It felt like white hot steel was being pressed into the wound.

"I am your slave."

"That's not good enough. Tell me what you are."

"I am your bitch!"

Despite that his leg was not actually burning, he thought he could smell the scent of burning fur and flesh.

"Good bitch, you're learning."

The mare traced just a mere sliver of salvation over the wound, just enough to dull the pain for a moment.

"Now bitch, I have graciously given you a moment of relief. I've merely given you the first hints of salvation at this point so there's not enough there to stop the fire. In a moment, we'll start your next lesson."

Adolphus just hung there, already starting to question just how far he'd gone.


The pain had subsided to the point that it felt like he had just burned himself on some hot coals, but just like before the pain began to grow. The mare smiled as she watched him start to wriggle a bit, writhing in pain.

"It hurts, doesn't it?"

"Immensely."

"Which brings us to the second lesson; my title. I am now your master, your boss and your commander, should I so choose to let you fight again.
From now on, you will do as I say, when I say, and you will do it promptly and without question. Any insolence will be punished as soon as I am able.
You are to refer to me at all times as Mistress Felicity, regardless of how anyone else may address me. You are always to refer to me as Mistress Felicity even in my absence and regardless of who you are talking to. Do you understand that bitch?"

"Yes, yes I understand."

"Say it properly, bitch."

"I understand you."

"Who am I, bitch?"

"Mistress Felicity, you are Mistress Felicity."

"Good boy, bitch, you are learning. Make sure you always say it when addressing me, clear?"

"Perfectly clear."

"You can't be listening very well if you have already forgotten the lesson."

"Perfectly clear, Mistress Felicity."

"Good boy, bitch. You are learning."

The mare rubbed just a trace of soothing salve across the arrow wound, causing the pain to subside for a moment.

"I must admit that you're learning rather quickly, but then again I am a good teacher, wouldn't you agree bitch?"

"Yes, you're a very good teacher, Mistress Felicity."

"That's good to hear bitch, I was afraid you were starting to doubt me again."

"No doubt, Mistress Felicity."

"Hmm, no doubt at the moment, but I know I cannot trust what you say just yet."

"Please forgive my impatience, Mistress Felicity, but can we continue our lessons? The wound on my leg is starting to burn again."

"Of course. I'm glad to hear you're so anxious to learn like the good bitch you are."

She made her sarcasm quite evident.

"Lesson three. To begin with you will remain upon your leash at all times and you will not remove your bindings. As time passes and you show that you are capable of being trusted, I will extend how close you must be and the restraints you will wear. The only thing, though, that you will not remove will be your slave collar. Should you remove it, you will face the full fury of my wraith. Do you understand me bitch?"

Adolphus grit his teeth as he tried to focus on not screaming, the pain nigh on unbearable.

"Bitch? Did you hear me?"

He gasped for breath as his heartbeat throbbed through his head like the pounds of catapult shots hitting castle walls. He felt dizzy and his vision started to go a bright shade of red.

"Did you hear what I said, bitch?"

"Yes, Mistress Felicity."

In that moment, the red passed to black.



He was out cold. She was impressed that he had lasted so long against her, but it was to be expected that he would eventually pass out. By the time he came to, the fire would have subsided.

"It appears as though our initial reports were correct?" An unseen voice asked from the canopy of the trees.

"That is correct," the mare called Mistress Felicity said as she wiped her paws on the wolf's shirt, "and without their star mercenary, we've hampered their plans for at least a week."

"Assuming he was key to their assault."

"True, they have proven to be more resourceful in the past. Now I suggest you get down here Razher, I will need your assistance to fix him up."

A large, black stallion, dressed in green, dropped down from the canopy with a reasonable thud. Razher was rather tall, standing a clear 60 centimetres above Felicity. His tail and mane, normally a rather brilliant white, were a dull grey from having been dirtied with charcoal earlier that day.

"Are you sure you have time for this, Commander?" Razher asked as she untied the rope that held Adolphus up and slowly lowered his body to the ground.

"This irritant has left me with a lot of pent up stress," Felicity replied as she attached a pair of locked bracers to Adolphus' wrists. "I know we don't have much time to get back to the castle, but I would prefer to work off this stress now, as opposed to taking it all out on Celdepah."

"I'll get Kitty to keep sentry."

"No, bring her here and let Gareth keep sentry. I would like to humiliate my slave in front of one of his own species."



He awoke, dazed and confused with the feeling that his mouth was filled with wool. He did notice he was no longer hanging by his arms from a tree, but was not laying on his back. He looked up to see the leg of a rather large horse between his arms and as he tried to move his arms, he found his wrists had been bound together in a pair of leather braces. The leg belonged to a rather tall and muscular black stallion who looked like he could make his intentions known without too much effort. The horse looked down at him and gave a rather unimpressed snort.

"Good to see you're awake bitch," a voice that was starting to grate on his nerves spoke as he craned his neck to try and see where his mistress was. "I was worried I'd have to drag your unconscious body back to the castle."

Adolphus tried to speak, but found that not only was his mouth held almost shut by a muzzle, but his tongue and throat were rather numb.

"Don't worry, I'm not expecting much out of your mouth at the moment," Felicity said as she walked around and stood over him, one hoof on either side of his hips. "I've covered your tongue in a mild anaesthetic, so things like talking and biting aren't an option for you at the moment."

He tried to move his arms, but found that the horse standing at his head was preventing him from moving them very far and as he looked between his mistress' legs he noticed his legs were still tied to the base of the tree. As escape seemed impossible at the moment, he started to wonder just what the mare had in mind for him.



Felicity smiled as she crouched down and sat on Adolphus' legs with his crotch between her thighs.

"I must ask again Commander," Razher asked as he looked around, "are you sure this is the right time for this?"

"Razher, I know what I am doing," she replied as she picked up an earthenware jar. "Now where is Kitty?"

"She was out tracking patrols a mile or so away, she's on her way back as we speak," Razher answered as he looked around.

"Don't even think of moving Razher."

"I wasn't thinking of moving Commander."

A female grey anthro wolf, dressed in green and grey, stepped out of the shadows, carrying a bow at the ready with an arrow already notched, a small pack on her back and a quiver of arrows strapped to one of her legs.

"Reporting Commander," the wolf said as she walked into the clearing.

"Any reason for the delay, Lieutenant?" Felicity asked as she looked up at her.

"The patrols have been passing within our safety perimeter," the wolf replied. "I had to avoid one on my way in."

"Well both of you keep your ears open for anything suspicious," Felicity said as she dipped her fingers into the jar, "but I think you'll enjoy watching this Kitty, simply for your own satisfaction."

"I am honoured, Commander," the wolf named Kitty said with a small bow of her head.


Felicity ran her fingers through the lotion in another jar she had been carrying in her pack before taking out a reasonable dollop and rubbing it onto Adolphus' sheath.

"This lotion is something my alchemist devised for those times when I needed my current slave's services, but his will was rather, shall we say, lacking. This allowed him to perform his duties."

She massaged the lotion into his furry sheath and balls as she continued to talk.

"I have also found that it can inspire the same response in almost any male, regardless of how willing they are. This particular batch has an additional something mixed in that will ensure that you won't be leaving me with any of your bastard offspring."

He tried to resist his arousal, but the lotion started to have its intended effect and he could feel his sheath start to throb with his heartbeat.
He panted as he felt his sheath start to grow, the sexual need inside him now seemed to have its own desires. Despite how heavily he fought against it, his wolfhood slowly made its way from his sheath and exposed its sensitive flesh to the air. It gave an involuntary throb as Felicity gently ran her fingers almost teasingly over the skin.

"It seems yet another rumour of the Red Wolf is true," Felicity said as she rubbed some of the lotion onto his cock. "Once trained, I may enjoy you much more than I first though."

The cool lotion on his wolfhood seemed to gently calm the itching that now seemed to grow inside his erect member. He closed his eyes as he tried to regather his thoughts, but they were suddenly scattered as he felt a rather warm, wet sensation slide down his length. He opened his eyes and noticed that his mistress was crouched over him, breathing rather heavily as she slowly mounted his hard cock. After shifting herself a bit, she was sitting upright on his crotch with his cock buried deep within her moist marehood, the tip of his sheath barely visible. His mistress panted for a moment as she sat herself in a comfortable position.

"He certainly has a different shape to Celdepah," she said as she placed her paws on his belly. "Let us see just how enjoyable his knot is though."


With that, she gave a firm squeeze with her thighs and watched her slave tense at the feeling that wrapped around his shaft. She smirked at the sight of her new slave, bound, gagged and under her sway as she started to work her way towards her goal. Felicity pulled herself forward, his cock slowly slipping from her insides and with a thrust, sent the full 30cm of his length deep within herself again. Adolphus let out a groan, the only noise his throat could mutter as she now increased her pace. She moaned as the large woof cock slid into her body, rubbing and stimulating different parts of her as it throbbed with each thrust. She could feel the well-known lupine knot start to form at the base of his cock and knew he was getting close to finishing, but she was far from her own orgasm. She changed her movements, spending less time near his knot and more time at the tip, enjoying the feeling of a lupine cock rubbing against her wet inside. She watched his expressions as she continued to arouse him without any sign of relief. The sight of this made her hornier and it increased her desires. She lost all control of herself as her animal desires took over, driving her further and further down his cock until the knot was at the point of no return.

With one last thrust down, Felicity forced herself down and over Adolphus' knot and the sudden rush of blood filling the glands tied the two together. She continued to bounce on his crotch, moving what few centimetres she could as the knot held tight inside of her. She could feel her insides tense in anticipation of what was to come and she knew she was now committed. With two or three more thrusts against the lupine cock inside of her, she felt herself tip over the edge and with a loud neigh, she reached her orgasm, just as she felt the knot of her new slave suddenly swell inside of her. Her sex squeezed desperately as she felt the torrents of wolf seed spill into her awaiting body, fuelled by her own desires for release. She squeezed and moaned in ecstasy as she leaned forward so as to not fall from her somewhat precarious perch atop her slave's crotch. She sat there for several minutes, savouring the glow of her climax, trying to catch her breath.


He felt dazed as he lay there, a feeling of warmth flowing over his body. No female had ever driven him to such heights of climax before and he was now out of breath. He watched his mistress as she regathered her composure before sitting back up.

"I am rather proud of you bitch," she said as she stopped gasping for air. "You certainly have a rather different style to what I'm used to."

She went to stand up, but found she was still tied to him, the bulge of his knot now spread inside of her and was unwilling to let go of its comfortable place. He gave a happy sigh at his mistress' predicament, but this only stimulated her to give his tender cock a firm squeeze with her insides.

"You will recede in time," she said as she sat back, "and I can wait. Captain Razher, keep an eye on the perimeter whilst my new slave calms down."

"Yes Commander."

Razher disappeared into the trees as Kitty took his place, making sure Adolphus couldn't move his arms.

"They can be humiliated just as much as you were," Felicity said to Kitty as she looked down at him with scorn.

"That doesn't mean I will trust another like him again," Kitty replied.

"In time you may believe differently."

"I severely doubt that Commander."

"Time shall tell Kitty. Maybe you're just waiting for the right one."

Adolphus looked up at Kitty, only to come point to face to an arrow, drawn ready in Kitty's bow.

"I will hurt you," Kitty threatened.

Adolphus quickly averted his gaze back to Felicity, who was still stuck firmly to his crotch.

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