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Egad Nob belongs to Bogrim.  ", "writing": "\tThese dreams, no nightmares had to stop, Egad Nob, bondage villain and also Ryan Foxmoore, company owner decided. The gold hued furred fox’s sleep was troubled with dreams that blurred into reality. Egad was nothing but a plaything in those dreams and when he woke up the fox found something that unquestionably stated that what he went through was no dream. The cause of these ambiguous experiences was someone that called himself Revol. Now just the fact that Egad was a plaything to this mysterious figure wasn’t enough to truly anger him. However this Revol knew things about Egad that very few should know like Egad’s dual identity and life experiences. That was coupled with Egad’s inability to stop these play sessions from recurring. The fact that somebody had that much power and control over him drove Egad nuts.\n\tThat was why Egad Nob when not running the company that supplied his funds or enjoying himself with his captive muscle slaves, he set about once and for all being victorious over this Revol. To a point it didn’t work and the dreams that Egad had began to take a darker turn with cruel memories and disturbing futures coming into play. One night he had to experience the humiliation and pain of being rejected by his first crush again. That wasn’t all, the soccer captain that Egad a fancy for once then preceded on to grind Egad’s face and ego into the dirt. Another time, he had to go through what might have happened if his company never went off the ground. A demeaning existence begging, having to crush his pride to stay one claw away from being street trash to be used or beaten by the all the large males that stalked the streets. Even worse were the false futures that were so terrifying because they were so close to possibly occurring. Actually getting caught by the authorities with no chance of escape, being defeated, captured and replaced on the Sinister Six, dying in pain from a plan gone horribly wrong with the target taking justice into his own hands, Egad had to live through experiences like that. The worst thing was the eyes, those dispassionate blue eyes that belonged to who could only be Revol. They appeared just about everywhere, in vents, in reflections, behind windows, even in the sky. Still Egad got used to those eyes appearing eventually and used Revol’s eyes as a sign whether he was dreaming or not. On the other hand there was something disturbing at Revol’s preference to look on Egad’s suffering. In other words Egad had had enough.\n\t“Damn you!” Egad screamed at the sky and the blue eyes in the sky looking down at the burning ruins of Egad’s home and the horde of escaped and vengeful former slaves out for blood. “You think you can break me with petty tricks like this? Think again, Revol you’ll never get me this way.” Egad laughed at the eyes in the sky, after all none of these dreams actually hurt him physically and Egad could still plan, still scheme, still search for an opening to make sure he came out on top. Then a sharp smile appeared under the Revol’s blue eyes and Egad at last heard Revol’s voice and the words turned him cold.\n\t“What makes you think that I was doing anything?” Revol said.\n\tThat stopped Egad in his tracks, Revol was lying, Egad was sure of it. This was just another attempt to make the fox slip. “Don’t lie; I know you’re responsible for everything here.” After all, it was a devilishly clever use of whatever power Revol was using to ensnare Egad night after night. Breaking him with situations full of despair and suffering and in the end submitting just to make it stop was a masterly tactic. \n\t“Really, what made you believe I was actually doing something?” Revol again stated.\n\t“Oh please, if you’re not doing to blame then who else could it be? After all the only people I know of here are you and…” Egad broke off, it couldn’t be that simple. It was impossible thought. The one responsible couldn’t have been “me? That’s just… insane. You can’t possibly think that I’m doing this! That isn’t true; you’re the one playing mind games.” The fox waved his hand out, maybe to the destruction of his property down below or maybe all the nightmares he had went through. There wasn’t any reason for Egad to put himself through this.\n\t“Sadly it is you after all you are to a point dreaming, and here I am waiting for you to finish your little tantrums so we can have some fun.” Revol sadly said in all seriousness.\n\tThat really made Egad’s fur stand on end, being in the clutches of someone he had no clue of, not being taken seriously, what he had to go through these past few nights, and now this. “Show yourself! Dammit! I demand that you face me!” It was just too much, while Egad had come close to defeat and sometime suffered losses; at least the possibility to turn things around was always in reach. Yet someone like this, who followed no rhyme or reason but his own, who could change the rules at whim, how could one even a genius such as Egad ever overcome this adversity? Even now every odd was stacked, the cards were fixed, and the dice were loaded. Egad’s pride wouldn’t let him accept this, yet pride could only take one so far. He screamed to the face in the sky and it gently smiled. \n\tAround Egad the scene of devastation slowly faded until he found himself on a giant bed, with scaled huge pillows and blankets. In front of Egad finally fading in was face of all his night troubles. Revol, who was proportionally sized to the bed towering over Egad, who found to his dismay that he was no position to be fighting back. So instead Egad quickly sized up his unknown enemy. Revol was a fox with gray for his fur color and the blue eyes that Egad already knew about looked back at Egad with amusement. From what Egad could see Revol was lean to a tasteful degree but with little to no muscle definition, but there was enough that the fox could be said to be attractive in an innocent way. A giant finger came down and under Egad’s chin, lifting it up and forcing the fox to stand on tippy toes. “Now that you’ve seen me what are you going to do about it?” Revol said, his voice booming down to Egad and making him lose his balance. \n\tEgad gritted his teeth but inwardly was more gleeful. He now knew what Revol looked like. Now the fox could search for information of the other fox. This wasn’t over by a long shot. Then a single finger pushed Egad in the chest, making him fall over. “Really now plotting to find an advantage?” Revol said and while Egad had self control to not let his expression change the gray fox went on. “Don’t bother hiding it; it’s what you do best and one of the reasons why I like you so much.” Egad tried to get back up but was blown down. Revol’s face had come over the fox’s body and blowing downward onto Egad. With the size difference, Egad’s frame was held down by the force of Revol’s breath. Then two pairs of fingers came down to pin Egad’s arms and legs to the bed and spread them wide. “So tell me what are you going to do about it?” Revol repeated his previous question letting his breath toss Egad’s fur around in the resulting wind. \n\tEgad could only say one thing to that challenge. “Beat you.” That was all that needed to be said. The fox was a mastermind, anybody can be made a slave was one creed that Egad lived by. This Revol was no different, he will win one day. Then Revol began to blow onto Egad’s crotch and inhale as well. Slowly but surely Egad’s rod rose from the stimulation of the wind and the bondage villain braced himself for what would be a sensual torment by Revol’s breath. In and out Revol breathed and each breath sent a wave of air to stroke over Egad’s cock with a sensation like the lightest of feathers. It was maddeningly teasing with Egad screwing his eyes shut in the pleasure and just when Egad was on the brink Revol’s tongue came down and licked the head swiftly sending Egad to spew all over, his bed. \n\tEgad opened his eyes and found that he had came all over his bed. His actual bed that he owned, it appeared the dream had ended yet again. However this time, Egad didn’t leave empty handed. He had a face and that would allow him to search for this Revol, and when Egad found him, the fox grinned he’ll show what a true genius could do. \n \n \n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tThese dreams, no nightmares had to stop, Egad Nob, bondage villain and also Ryan Foxmoore, company owner decided. The gold hued furred fox’s sleep was troubled with dreams that blurred into reality. Egad was nothing but a plaything in those dreams and when he woke up the fox found something that unquestionably stated that what he went through was no dream. The cause of these ambiguous experiences was someone that called himself Revol. Now just the fact that Egad was a plaything to this mysterious figure wasn’t enough to truly anger him. However this Revol knew things about Egad that very few should know like Egad’s dual identity and life experiences. That was coupled with Egad’s inability to stop these play sessions from recurring. The fact that somebody had that much power and control over him drove Egad nuts.
\tThat was why Egad Nob when not running the company that supplied his funds or enjoying himself with his captive muscle slaves, he set about once and for all being victorious over this Revol. To a point it didn’t work and the dreams that Egad had began to take a darker turn with cruel memories and disturbing futures coming into play. One night he had to experience the humiliation and pain of being rejected by his first crush again. That wasn’t all, the soccer captain that Egad a fancy for once then preceded on to grind Egad’s face and ego into the dirt. Another time, he had to go through what might have happened if his company never went off the ground. A demeaning existence begging, having to crush his pride to stay one claw away from being street trash to be used or beaten by the all the large males that stalked the streets. Even worse were the false futures that were so terrifying because they were so close to possibly occurring. Actually getting caught by the authorities with no chance of escape, being defeated, captured and replaced on the Sinister Six, dying in pain from a plan gone horribly wrong with the target taking justice into his own hands, Egad had to live through experiences like that. The worst thing was the eyes, those dispassionate blue eyes that belonged to who could only be Revol. They appeared just about everywhere, in vents, in reflections, behind windows, even in the sky. Still Egad got used to those eyes appearing eventually and used Revol’s eyes as a sign whether he was dreaming or not. On the other hand there was something disturbing at Revol’s preference to look on Egad’s suffering. In other words Egad had had enough.
\t“Damn you!” Egad screamed at the sky and the blue eyes in the sky looking down at the burning ruins of Egad’s home and the horde of escaped and vengeful former slaves out for blood. “You think you can break me with petty tricks like this? Think again, Revol you’ll never get me this way.” Egad laughed at the eyes in the sky, after all none of these dreams actually hurt him physically and Egad could still plan, still scheme, still search for an opening to make sure he came out on top. Then a sharp smile appeared under the Revol’s blue eyes and Egad at last heard Revol’s voice and the words turned him cold.
\t“What makes you think that I was doing anything?” Revol said.
\tThat stopped Egad in his tracks, Revol was lying, Egad was sure of it. This was just another attempt to make the fox slip. “Don’t lie; I know you’re responsible for everything here.” After all, it was a devilishly clever use of whatever power Revol was using to ensnare Egad night after night. Breaking him with situations full of despair and suffering and in the end submitting just to make it stop was a masterly tactic.
\t“Really, what made you believe I was actually doing something?” Revol again stated.
\t“Oh please, if you’re not doing to blame then who else could it be? After all the only people I know of here are you and…” Egad broke off, it couldn’t be that simple. It was impossible thought. The one responsible couldn’t have been “me? That’s just… insane. You can’t possibly think that I’m doing this! That isn’t true; you’re the one playing mind games.” The fox waved his hand out, maybe to the destruction of his property down below or maybe all the nightmares he had went through. There wasn’t any reason for Egad to put himself through this.
\t“Sadly it is you after all you are to a point dreaming, and here I am waiting for you to finish your little tantrums so we can have some fun.” Revol sadly said in all seriousness.
\tThat really made Egad’s fur stand on end, being in the clutches of someone he had no clue of, not being taken seriously, what he had to go through these past few nights, and now this. “Show yourself! Dammit! I demand that you face me!” It was just too much, while Egad had come close to defeat and sometime suffered losses; at least the possibility to turn things around was always in reach. Yet someone like this, who followed no rhyme or reason but his own, who could change the rules at whim, how could one even a genius such as Egad ever overcome this adversity? Even now every odd was stacked, the cards were fixed, and the dice were loaded. Egad’s pride wouldn’t let him accept this, yet pride could only take one so far. He screamed to the face in the sky and it gently smiled.
\tAround Egad the scene of devastation slowly faded until he found himself on a giant bed, with scaled huge pillows and blankets. In front of Egad finally fading in was face of all his night troubles. Revol, who was proportionally sized to the bed towering over Egad, who found to his dismay that he was no position to be fighting back. So instead Egad quickly sized up his unknown enemy. Revol was a fox with gray for his fur color and the blue eyes that Egad already knew about looked back at Egad with amusement. From what Egad could see Revol was lean to a tasteful degree but with little to no muscle definition, but there was enough that the fox could be said to be attractive in an innocent way. A giant finger came down and under Egad’s chin, lifting it up and forcing the fox to stand on tippy toes. “Now that you’ve seen me what are you going to do about it?” Revol said, his voice booming down to Egad and making him lose his balance.
\tEgad gritted his teeth but inwardly was more gleeful. He now knew what Revol looked like. Now the fox could search for information of the other fox. This wasn’t over by a long shot. Then a single finger pushed Egad in the chest, making him fall over. “Really now plotting to find an advantage?” Revol said and while Egad had self control to not let his expression change the gray fox went on. “Don’t bother hiding it; it’s what you do best and one of the reasons why I like you so much.” Egad tried to get back up but was blown down. Revol’s face had come over the fox’s body and blowing downward onto Egad. With the size difference, Egad’s frame was held down by the force of Revol’s breath. Then two pairs of fingers came down to pin Egad’s arms and legs to the bed and spread them wide. “So tell me what are you going to do about it?” Revol repeated his previous question letting his breath toss Egad’s fur around in the resulting wind.
\tEgad could only say one thing to that challenge. “Beat you.” That was all that needed to be said. The fox was a mastermind, anybody can be made a slave was one creed that Egad lived by. This Revol was no different, he will win one day. Then Revol began to blow onto Egad’s crotch and inhale as well. Slowly but surely Egad’s rod rose from the stimulation of the wind and the bondage villain braced himself for what would be a sensual torment by Revol’s breath. In and out Revol breathed and each breath sent a wave of air to stroke over Egad’s cock with a sensation like the lightest of feathers. It was maddeningly teasing with Egad screwing his eyes shut in the pleasure and just when Egad was on the brink Revol’s tongue came down and licked the head swiftly sending Egad to spew all over, his bed.
\tEgad opened his eyes and found that he had came all over his bed. His actual bed that he owned, it appeared the dream had ended yet again. However this time, Egad didn’t leave empty handed. He had a face and that would allow him to search for this Revol, and when Egad found him, the fox grinned he’ll show what a true genius could do.      
    
          
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