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Egad Nob belongs to Bogrim from FA", "writing": "\tYet again Egad Nob woke up and he was not in his office at this company or in his house or even his secret dungeon where he kept his kidnapped slaves. No, he was in an enclosed room and he had no clue as to how he got there. Who was responsible for this? The fox had a good idea who. There was an unknown canine perhaps that called himself Revol. He had somehow captured and bound up Egad Nob and turned the master fox into a slave. Egad Nob ground his teeth as he remembered that strange incident. One was that Revol had known things that were impossible for Revol to find out. Next was the fact that Egad had been let go thinking the whole thing was a dream and discovering that it was not. The last inconsistency was how did Revol break through all the fox’s security to snatch Egad Nob away? In any case Egad Nob was trapped by Revol, this he was sure of.\n\tThe reason being was that there was one doorway in this room and above it were lines of words. They said simply “This way to Revol, Distance: 7 Trials” Trials? That didn’t sound good. This time however Egad was not bound, so the fox knew that he might be able to seize control over this Revol with his own natural cunning and genius. After all, no mere amateur could ever get the best of Egad Nob \n\tEgad Nob walked through the door and into another room that had a particular color theme of red. Above in the ceiling written in slightly damp black ink was the question “What do I own?” There were two other doors, Egad’s entrance had vanished which worried the fox. One door had the words “Your Body” carved into it and the other had instead “Your Mind.” Egad Nob snorted; plainly he was supposed to choose one of the doors. If this Revol was thinking that Egad would actually follow through on his choices, he had another thing coming. The fox considered the options. He was after all a villain dedicated to capturing muscular heroes and turning them into his slaves. Egad himself was scrawny, lean, little definition, with no exceptional attraction. That with his inferiority complex gave him a sick thrill of the role reversal of him having bound buff men under his control. That said, his body could be easily given up, his mind however needed to be used in order to get the better of this Revol. The choice was clear, Egad walked through the door marked “Your Body” Then in a hall; something wrenched Egad’s arms behind his back and shackled them. Something bound his legs in manacles and chain. He couldn’t see it for it was too fast and he saw words above another door. “Then perform for me.”\n\tThe fox was incensed but continued on through the door and the next color theme was orange and again there was another question “What do you want most?” The choices this time were “Pleasure” and “Agony”. It seemed to be a trick question, for in Egad’s mind there was nothing better for him to promise one thing to a slave that was begged for only for the captive to utterly regret his desire. Yet the other option was just that, the promise of pain. Either way it might have been better to suffer enjoyment than anything else. Egad walked through the portal of Pleasure and immediately smelled some sort of gas. It tickled his nose and immediately sent his libido into overdrive. His cock stood ram rod straight, as hard as he ever remembered. Egad started to pant and he ran quickly to the next room and glanced the words in the hall saying. “Then I’ll give you so much you’ll beg for it to stop.”\n\tThe next room was bright yellow, so much that Egad had to squint his eyes to see the next message. “Do you deserve this?” and the choices this time were “Yes” or “No” Egad was just seized with a fury. How dare this Revol insult his genius, deserve this indeed. The fox bashed through the door labeled “No” and realized how he had let his anger bungle him into a risky situation. Yet there was nothing in the hall but a single line of text “I disagree and will give it to you just the same.”\n\tAnother room another trial, color scheme of green and only a single question “How Shall I use you?” Egad looked and saw what paths he could take “Gently” and “Roughly”. The fox had done it both ways before, but he didn’t trust this Revol character too much. So far every choice that he selected had turned out to be what he chose. Taking this into account he picked “Gently” for Egad didn’t want to find out what Revol’s idea of “Roughly” would be. \n\tHe wasn’t disappointed for as he stepped into the hall, yet another something slipped some device into his ass faster than Egad could react. When it started lightly buzzing within Egad’s insides that the fox realized he had a vibrator teasing him. The hall and Revol had this to say “Then you’ll beg for me to take you harder.”\n\tThe fifth trial with a room of blue hue and words that Egad already just aggravated Egad’s discomfort. “What will you lose?” and both choices were things that Egad could not bear to give up. “Freedom” and “Control”. Again the fox gnashed his teeth; it was if this Revol had learned directly from him. Two sadistic choices each an incomparable need in Egad’s life and there was no other way to progress beyond the doors. Egad weighed the values, sure he had come close to losing his freedom. Escaped heroes and other rivals aside but one thing had grated on his nerves each and every single time. More than the possibly than losing his freedom, Egad hated not being in control of things. It reminded him too much of jocks, muscular men, and heroes, being given authority and adoration for their appearances. They had power, had control, and Egad wasn’t going to give what control he had to anybody. He burst through the door of “Freedom” and there was a disheartening message there in the hall. “What makes you think that you have any to lose?” A subtle statement to Egad’s situation that left the fox in a dark mood.\n\t Another room colored in indigo, another trial another choice to be made. Strangely enough the message this time was longer than before. “Soon we shall meet, how do you feel?” and the choices were “Are you Scared?” “Are you Excited?” As if he would be scared. Egad still had the confidence that he would somehow overwhelm this Revol and get some answers. He firmly passed “Excited” and was “rewarded” with the words “So am I. Please. Quickly come to me.” \n\tThis was it the last trial, then he’ll meet with this so called Revol, Egad will deal with this upstart and then he can get back to doing what he enjoys. Taking down buff men. The last room, all in violet, two doors, just like before. A question and two answers just like before. Everything was just the same like the last six rooms. So why was Egad standing in the middle of the room doing nothing? Was it fear, anger, shock, disbelief, some sort of emotion? The question was “What do you fear the most?” There were two answers “Love” and “Hate”.\n\tTime passed, Egad did not speak, and just about no one could figure out what thought process was going on in his brain. The question was ridiculous and the answers more so. Fear, a primal feeling that at many times was hard to convey but easy to be overwhelmed by. The answers, two little words that had so much meaning for such short expressions. So why didn’t Egad Nob choose? Somebody’s hand seemed forced, for the walls began to close in and the ceiling as well. They did not slide down as so much collapse like a slowly deflating balloon or melt like runny pudding. Love or Hate what would be chosen? Egad shuffled quickly from one door to another, his foxhood standing proud, a vibrator buzzing away, and a chemical pleasure high. What to choose, what to choose. For reasons of his own, Egad could not decide which. Decisions, decisions, he made them every single day, why should this one any harder? The room was caving, he had no choice, and one answer must be picked. Egad closed his eyes and ran through maybe at random, maybe by conscious choice one door. \nThere was silence, then there was an embrace from behind and that voice heard only once before saying “Regardless of what you chose, I’ll hold on tighter and never let go.” Egad turned around catching glimpses of blue eyes and a sharp toothed smile before it shifted,, blurring into focus a window with slivers of a blue sky view and the piercing light of morning. “Another dream?” Egad thought “Or was it not?” He looked down length nodding at attention, still needy for that slide over the peak. Egad stared, not just because his cock was hard but that it was tied with thin ribbon, one for each color of the rainbow. \n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tYet again Egad Nob woke up and he was not in his office at this company or in his house or even his secret dungeon where he kept his kidnapped slaves. No, he was in an enclosed room and he had no clue as to how he got there. Who was responsible for this? The fox had a good idea who. There was an unknown canine perhaps that called himself Revol. He had somehow captured and bound up Egad Nob and turned the master fox into a slave. Egad Nob ground his teeth as he remembered that strange incident. One was that Revol had known things that were impossible for Revol to find out. Next was the fact that Egad had been let go thinking the whole thing was a dream and discovering that it was not. The last inconsistency was how did Revol break through all the fox’s security to snatch Egad Nob away? In any case Egad Nob was trapped by Revol, this he was sure of.
\tThe reason being was that there was one doorway in this room and above it were lines of words. They said simply “This way to Revol, Distance: 7 Trials” Trials? That didn’t sound good. This time however Egad was not bound, so the fox knew that he might be able to seize control over this Revol with his own natural cunning and genius. After all, no mere amateur could ever get the best of Egad Nob
\tEgad Nob walked through the door and into another room that had a particular color theme of red. Above in the ceiling written in slightly damp black ink was the question “What do I own?” There were two other doors, Egad’s entrance had vanished which worried the fox. One door had the words “Your Body” carved into it and the other had instead “Your Mind.” Egad Nob snorted; plainly he was supposed to choose one of the doors. If this Revol was thinking that Egad would actually follow through on his choices, he had another thing coming. The fox considered the options. He was after all a villain dedicated to capturing muscular heroes and turning them into his slaves. Egad himself was scrawny, lean, little definition, with no exceptional attraction. That with his inferiority complex gave him a sick thrill of the role reversal of him having bound buff men under his control. That said, his body could be easily given up, his mind however needed to be used in order to get the better of this Revol. The choice was clear, Egad walked through the door marked “Your Body” Then in a hall; something wrenched Egad’s arms behind his back and shackled them. Something bound his legs in manacles and chain. He couldn’t see it for it was too fast and he saw words above another door. “Then perform for me.”
\tThe fox was incensed but continued on through the door and the next color theme was orange and again there was another question “What do you want most?” The choices this time were “Pleasure” and “Agony”. It seemed to be a trick question, for in Egad’s mind there was nothing better for him to promise one thing to a slave that was begged for only for the captive to utterly regret his desire. Yet the other option was just that, the promise of pain. Either way it might have been better to suffer enjoyment than anything else. Egad walked through the portal of Pleasure and immediately smelled some sort of gas. It tickled his nose and immediately sent his libido into overdrive. His cock stood ram rod straight, as hard as he ever remembered. Egad started to pant and he ran quickly to the next room and glanced the words in the hall saying. “Then I’ll give you so much you’ll beg for it to stop.”
\tThe next room was bright yellow, so much that Egad had to squint his eyes to see the next message. “Do you deserve this?” and the choices this time were “Yes” or “No” Egad was just seized with a fury. How dare this Revol insult his genius, deserve this indeed. The fox bashed through the door labeled “No” and realized how he had let his anger bungle him into a risky situation. Yet there was nothing in the hall but a single line of text “I disagree and will give it to you just the same.”
\tAnother room another trial, color scheme of green and only a single question “How Shall I use you?” Egad looked and saw what paths he could take “Gently” and “Roughly”. The fox had done it both ways before, but he didn’t trust this Revol character too much. So far every choice that he selected had turned out to be what he chose. Taking this into account he picked “Gently” for Egad didn’t want to find out what Revol’s idea of “Roughly” would be.
\tHe wasn’t disappointed for as he stepped into the hall, yet another something slipped some device into his ass faster than Egad could react. When it started lightly buzzing within Egad’s insides that the fox realized he had a vibrator teasing him. The hall and Revol had this to say “Then you’ll beg for me to take you harder.”
\tThe fifth trial with a room of blue hue and words that Egad already just aggravated Egad’s discomfort. “What will you lose?” and both choices were things that Egad could not bear to give up. “Freedom” and “Control”. Again the fox gnashed his teeth; it was if this Revol had learned directly from him. Two sadistic choices each an incomparable need in Egad’s life and there was no other way to progress beyond the doors. Egad weighed the values, sure he had come close to losing his freedom. Escaped heroes and other rivals aside but one thing had grated on his nerves each and every single time. More than the possibly than losing his freedom, Egad hated not being in control of things. It reminded him too much of jocks, muscular men, and heroes, being given authority and adoration for their appearances. They had power, had control, and Egad wasn’t going to give what control he had to anybody. He burst through the door of “Freedom” and there was a disheartening message there in the hall. “What makes you think that you have any to lose?” A subtle statement to Egad’s situation that left the fox in a dark mood.
\t Another room colored in indigo, another trial another choice to be made. Strangely enough the message this time was longer than before. “Soon we shall meet, how do you feel?” and the choices were “Are you Scared?” “Are you Excited?” As if he would be scared. Egad still had the confidence that he would somehow overwhelm this Revol and get some answers. He firmly passed “Excited” and was “rewarded” with the words “So am I. Please. Quickly come to me.”
\tThis was it the last trial, then he’ll meet with this so called Revol, Egad will deal with this upstart and then he can get back to doing what he enjoys. Taking down buff men. The last room, all in violet, two doors, just like before. A question and two answers just like before. Everything was just the same like the last six rooms. So why was Egad standing in the middle of the room doing nothing? Was it fear, anger, shock, disbelief, some sort of emotion? The question was “What do you fear the most?” There were two answers “Love” and “Hate”.
\tTime passed, Egad did not speak, and just about no one could figure out what thought process was going on in his brain. The question was ridiculous and the answers more so. Fear, a primal feeling that at many times was hard to convey but easy to be overwhelmed by. The answers, two little words that had so much meaning for such short expressions. So why didn’t Egad Nob choose? Somebody’s hand seemed forced, for the walls began to close in and the ceiling as well. They did not slide down as so much collapse like a slowly deflating balloon or melt like runny pudding. Love or Hate what would be chosen? Egad shuffled quickly from one door to another, his foxhood standing proud, a vibrator buzzing away, and a chemical pleasure high. What to choose, what to choose. For reasons of his own, Egad could not decide which. Decisions, decisions, he made them every single day, why should this one any harder? The room was caving, he had no choice, and one answer must be picked. Egad closed his eyes and ran through maybe at random, maybe by conscious choice one door.
There was silence, then there was an embrace from behind and that voice heard only once before saying “Regardless of what you chose, I’ll hold on tighter and never let go.” Egad turned around catching glimpses of blue eyes and a sharp toothed smile before it shifted,, blurring into focus a window with slivers of a blue sky view and the piercing light of morning. “Another dream?” Egad thought “Or was it not?” He looked down length nodding at attention, still needy for that slide over the peak. Egad stared, not just because his cock was hard but that it was tied with thin ribbon, one for each color of the rainbow.
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