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A sudden appearance gives him new energy. What will be the result of these events? Read on dear reader and please comment if you will.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "Fate seems to play with the white tiger. A sudden appearance gives him new energy. What will be the result of these events? Read on dear reader and please comment if you will.", "writing": "\tThis film was an action thriller and it capitalized on an interest that the general public held, espionage. Rhawn was now involved in another production of an action spy thriller but he wasn’t the headliner thankfully. That honor went to another aspiring actor who at first was bitter thinking that he was going to be replaced as the star. However Rhawn wouldn’t have fit the character as the script required and was going to play support to the star spy role. That smoothed the fragile ego of the star and his mood then turned to admiration as most people did when they didn’t have a particular reason to be angry at Rhawn. As plots for the movie went, it was a bit formulaic. Rising agent within the ranks, mission that involves the disappearances of senior agents, send out rookie as sort of a cruel joke, rookie saves the world. The villain was an insane biotechnological professor lizard. He hated the fact of the temperate places and something that happens to them called winter and like all mad scientists decided to do something about it. \n\tRhawn waited outside his trailer, for now shooting was being done on the star and the femme fatale who would also predictably be the love interest. As of now there wasn’t anything for Rhawn to do but prep himself on the next scene he would be required. He had the script in his lap and read it occasionally looking up to notice passerby, bystanders, crewmen, and sometimes the paparazzi. The last group thankfully was few in number for now, when word came out that he was acting in this particular film though the media would be all over this place like ants. That would be another distraction for Rhawn then, maybe it would help the white tiger forget about the fox Kade. The way he walked, always withdrawn and sometimes slightly frightened just like that fox that was passing by. It was sometimes fun to tease Kade, the white tiger remembered that when they were living together and the fox was reading, listening to music or just plain staring off into space that Rhawn jump at his shoulders making Kade give off the most delightful yip of surprise. In fact that fox from before was the spitting image of a preoccupied Kade. A little too spitting was what his subconscious told him. Rhawn jumped out of his seat overturning the script on his lap. ‘It couldn’t be’ he told himself. ‘It just couldn’t be Kade I saw. That’s impossible. What are odds of finding him here after all the searching I’ve done?’\n\tWhen Kade had ended their housemate agreement, paying up his side of the deal the fox just went up and vanished. Rhawn had searched for him, wanting answers and perhaps if Rhawn really had to be honest with himself wanting the fox. The white tiger had watched motion pictures but never thought he would able to perform in one. That changed the day Nick had scouted him out. One film had the populace obsessed with him with fame and fortune following soon after. The funny thing was that Rhawn did enjoy this, the roles, the society, the fans occasionally, and the income was a pretty sweet deal as well. The big thing however was acting itself, for it was the perfect drug, to put on a mask for others’ entertainment and winning their affection as a result, best of all it was entirely legal and drawback free. That was what he had thought at the time. \n\tThen the envelope and the farewell letter came and that brought loneliness that Rhawn detested. Yet all attempts to seek out the fox again had been unsuccessful in spite of all odds being in Rhawn’s favor. Now here Kade was right smack dab in Rhawn’s face and the fox just passed him by. Was it just a coincidence or was it fate? Anyway Rhawn now had a new purpose, Kade couldn’t escape him. Rhawn’s species was a hunter and now the fox was the prey. “Just you wait Kade, I’m going to catch you.” He said.\n------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- \n\tRhys was riding public transport back to his house. The pale golden furred fox had come back from a nice relaxing walk in the park. Or at least it was relaxing until he found out they were shooting a movie there. Film had negative associations with the fox, too many bad memories. Actual movies being shown in the theater, that he could tolerate but seeing one being made caused Rhys to feel a little sick. He was going to have to skip out on walking in the park for a few weeks. Hopefully whoever was filming there would finish up shooting and move on. The fox thought about what he should make for dinner tonight. Eventually this week Rhys would have to go buying groceries but he was good for at least three more days before he would have to cook what could only be called “desperation meals”. The fox looked out the window and his expression changed into long term melancholy. Almost two years he’d been living in this city and maybe he’ll stay here forever. There was little chance of meeting him here of all places. Besides even if he wouldn’t be looking for “Rhys” it’ll be better if Rhys lived somewhere they couldn’t bump into each other. It would save a lot of pain for both sides. The fox sighed and daydreamt until his stop.\n----------------------------------------------------------------------------------\n\tA few days later Rhawn met up with his agent Nick a kangaroo in a coffee shop. It was located the second floor of one of the city malls and was easily accessible and suitable for both of them. In truth it was Rhawn who actually set up this meeting instead of Nick. “Well you seem to be in a good mood” the kangaroo pointed out. The white tiger seemed to have a bounce in his step and some feline friskiness. “The work doing you a load of good? We’re about to release a press conference about your involvement in this film”\n\t“Even better you won’t believe what just happened to me a few days ago.” Rhawn said.\n\t“I don’t particularly enjoy guessing games since that seems to be my entire work load” was Nick’s dry reply.\n\t“Well I was reviewing my role’s lines just watching people passing by when a particular fox I’ve been looking for slipped past my field of view.” Rhawn said.\n\t“No, it couldn’t be” Nick’s jaw dropped and he put down the coffee that he had brought before the meeting’s start. “There’re plenty of foxes that look like him.”\n\t Rhawn smiled knowing that Nick had caught his drift. “Sure plenty that have his general appearance, maybe even his behavior I’ll give you that, I’ll even give in to the fact that they have the same clothing style but think what are the odds of that happening? Someone who looks and walks exactly like Kade?”\n\t“Small but certainly possible but be reasonable Rhawn. I’ve searched and there’s no possible way that…” Nick grabbed onto Rhawn’s arm “Maybe I’m wrong” The kangaroo pointed and the white tiger followed his finger. The pointed one was a fox with pale golden fur walking on the ground floor with a bag full from the grocery store. Rhawn quickly left out the coffee shop as swiftly as he could, trying to keep the fox within his view. He was down the first flight of steps when the fox left the mall. Out the door when he spotted the fox boarding a public bus yet couldn’t catch the bus before it left. He did however manage to get the bus number. Nick came calmly walking with their coffee in a portable tray. “Did you manage to catch him?” Nick asked and got a head shake no in response. The kangaroo sighed “I’m pretty sure now that you’ve got a lead no matter how flimsy you’re going to chase it anyway.”\n\t“Don’t worry Nick I won’t slack off at work.” Rhawn smiled back at his agent “This just gives me something more for me to do in my free time.” The white tiger gave his agent a thoughtful look, expecting an agreement “I wouldn’t mind if you could keep off the paparazzi while I’m looking.” \n\tNick sighed “Have you thought that media coverage would make your search easier, flush Kade out of hiding?” The kangaroo’s gut feeling had made a decision, it would be better if Rhawn go after this mystery and he knew that Rhawn loved acting enough not to slip up.\n\t“No, better feed the media only the fact that I’m here. Kade passed me by in the city park so he might know about the film in the park. Knowing that I’m doing a film here could unbalance him; make him slip up if he tries to keep hiding. In fact I think he’ll limit his movements to as few places as possible. Try to keep me from spotting him anymore. That’ll make finding where he lives simpler.”\n\t“You’re not going to let him go eh?” Nick said. \n\t“I let him go once, that taught me not to let him go again.” Rhawn’s eyes turned sharp as flint. “I don’t know why working here of all places would let me see him again but I’m not letting this chance slip by.” The white tiger nodded “I’d better get back Nick, I’m trusting you to help me, please?”\n\tThe kangaroo laughed “I don’t have much choice, my intuition’s telling me that’s the only choice I have.”\n\t\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "\tThis film was an action thriller and it capitalized on an interest that the general public held, espionage. Rhawn was now involved in another production of an action spy thriller but he wasn’t the headliner thankfully. That honor went to another aspiring actor who at first was bitter thinking that he was going to be replaced as the star. However Rhawn wouldn’t have fit the character as the script required and was going to play support to the star spy role. That smoothed the fragile ego of the star and his mood then turned to admiration as most people did when they didn’t have a particular reason to be angry at Rhawn. As plots for the movie went, it was a bit formulaic. Rising agent within the ranks, mission that involves the disappearances of senior agents, send out rookie as sort of a cruel joke, rookie saves the world. The villain was an insane biotechnological professor lizard. He hated the fact of the temperate places and something that happens to them called winter and like all mad scientists decided to do something about it.
\tRhawn waited outside his trailer, for now shooting was being done on the star and the femme fatale who would also predictably be the love interest. As of now there wasn’t anything for Rhawn to do but prep himself on the next scene he would be required. He had the script in his lap and read it occasionally looking up to notice passerby, bystanders, crewmen, and sometimes the paparazzi. The last group thankfully was few in number for now, when word came out that he was acting in this particular film though the media would be all over this place like ants. That would be another distraction for Rhawn then, maybe it would help the white tiger forget about the fox Kade. The way he walked, always withdrawn and sometimes slightly frightened just like that fox that was passing by. It was sometimes fun to tease Kade, the white tiger remembered that when they were living together and the fox was reading, listening to music or just plain staring off into space that Rhawn jump at his shoulders making Kade give off the most delightful yip of surprise. In fact that fox from before was the spitting image of a preoccupied Kade. A little too spitting was what his subconscious told him. Rhawn jumped out of his seat overturning the script on his lap. ‘It couldn’t be’ he told himself. ‘It just couldn’t be Kade I saw. That’s impossible. What are odds of finding him here after all the searching I’ve done?’
\tWhen Kade had ended their housemate agreement, paying up his side of the deal the fox just went up and vanished. Rhawn had searched for him, wanting answers and perhaps if Rhawn really had to be honest with himself wanting the fox. The white tiger had watched motion pictures but never thought he would able to perform in one. That changed the day Nick had scouted him out. One film had the populace obsessed with him with fame and fortune following soon after. The funny thing was that Rhawn did enjoy this, the roles, the society, the fans occasionally, and the income was a pretty sweet deal as well. The big thing however was acting itself, for it was the perfect drug, to put on a mask for others’ entertainment and winning their affection as a result, best of all it was entirely legal and drawback free. That was what he had thought at the time.
\tThen the envelope and the farewell letter came and that brought loneliness that Rhawn detested. Yet all attempts to seek out the fox again had been unsuccessful in spite of all odds being in Rhawn’s favor. Now here Kade was right smack dab in Rhawn’s face and the fox just passed him by. Was it just a coincidence or was it fate? Anyway Rhawn now had a new purpose, Kade couldn’t escape him. Rhawn’s species was a hunter and now the fox was the prey. “Just you wait Kade, I’m going to catch you.” He said.
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\tRhys was riding public transport back to his house. The pale golden furred fox had come back from a nice relaxing walk in the park. Or at least it was relaxing until he found out they were shooting a movie there. Film had negative associations with the fox, too many bad memories. Actual movies being shown in the theater, that he could tolerate but seeing one being made caused Rhys to feel a little sick. He was going to have to skip out on walking in the park for a few weeks. Hopefully whoever was filming there would finish up shooting and move on. The fox thought about what he should make for dinner tonight. Eventually this week Rhys would have to go buying groceries but he was good for at least three more days before he would have to cook what could only be called “desperation meals”. The fox looked out the window and his expression changed into long term melancholy. Almost two years he’d been living in this city and maybe he’ll stay here forever. There was little chance of meeting him here of all places. Besides even if he wouldn’t be looking for “Rhys” it’ll be better if Rhys lived somewhere they couldn’t bump into each other. It would save a lot of pain for both sides. The fox sighed and daydreamt until his stop.
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\tA few days later Rhawn met up with his agent Nick a kangaroo in a coffee shop. It was located the second floor of one of the city malls and was easily accessible and suitable for both of them. In truth it was Rhawn who actually set up this meeting instead of Nick. “Well you seem to be in a good mood” the kangaroo pointed out. The white tiger seemed to have a bounce in his step and some feline friskiness. “The work doing you a load of good? We’re about to release a press conference about your involvement in this film”
\t“Even better you won’t believe what just happened to me a few days ago.” Rhawn said.
\t“I don’t particularly enjoy guessing games since that seems to be my entire work load” was Nick’s dry reply.
\t“Well I was reviewing my role’s lines just watching people passing by when a particular fox I’ve been looking for slipped past my field of view.” Rhawn said.
\t“No, it couldn’t be” Nick’s jaw dropped and he put down the coffee that he had brought before the meeting’s start. “There’re plenty of foxes that look like him.”
\t Rhawn smiled knowing that Nick had caught his drift. “Sure plenty that have his general appearance, maybe even his behavior I’ll give you that, I’ll even give in to the fact that they have the same clothing style but think what are the odds of that happening? Someone who looks and walks exactly like Kade?”
\t“Small but certainly possible but be reasonable Rhawn. I’ve searched and there’s no possible way that…” Nick grabbed onto Rhawn’s arm “Maybe I’m wrong” The kangaroo pointed and the white tiger followed his finger. The pointed one was a fox with pale golden fur walking on the ground floor with a bag full from the grocery store. Rhawn quickly left out the coffee shop as swiftly as he could, trying to keep the fox within his view. He was down the first flight of steps when the fox left the mall. Out the door when he spotted the fox boarding a public bus yet couldn’t catch the bus before it left. He did however manage to get the bus number. Nick came calmly walking with their coffee in a portable tray. “Did you manage to catch him?” Nick asked and got a head shake no in response. The kangaroo sighed “I’m pretty sure now that you’ve got a lead no matter how flimsy you’re going to chase it anyway.”
\t“Don’t worry Nick I won’t slack off at work.” Rhawn smiled back at his agent “This just gives me something more for me to do in my free time.” The white tiger gave his agent a thoughtful look, expecting an agreement “I wouldn’t mind if you could keep off the paparazzi while I’m looking.”
\tNick sighed “Have you thought that media coverage would make your search easier, flush Kade out of hiding?” The kangaroo’s gut feeling had made a decision, it would be better if Rhawn go after this mystery and he knew that Rhawn loved acting enough not to slip up.
\t“No, better feed the media only the fact that I’m here. Kade passed me by in the city park so he might know about the film in the park. Knowing that I’m doing a film here could unbalance him; make him slip up if he tries to keep hiding. In fact I think he’ll limit his movements to as few places as possible. Try to keep me from spotting him anymore. That’ll make finding where he lives simpler.”
\t“You’re not going to let him go eh?” Nick said.
\t“I let him go once, that taught me not to let him go again.” Rhawn’s eyes turned sharp as flint. “I don’t know why working here of all places would let me see him again but I’m not letting this chance slip by.” The white tiger nodded “I’d better get back Nick, I’m trusting you to help me, please?”
\tThe kangaroo laughed “I don’t have much choice, my intuition’s telling me that’s the only choice I have.”
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