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", "writing": "\n\nThe cool waters of the beach side were disturbed by none. Except by the slow steady strokes of blue furred arms. Slowly parting the waters was a young Dewott swimming along without a care on his face.\n\nThe water type named Daniel wore nothing else but a tasteful navy speedo. That was all that was needed with the pleasant noonday sun. It warmed the clear blue waters that cast caressing shadows along lithe abs and limbs that pushed the male forward.\n\nDaniel often came to this beach. A small secluded tropical paradise where the dewott could swim alone.The rest of his clothes lay in a bundle on the shore’s sand. \n\nThen another sound, one not the crashing of the waves or the rustling of wind reached the dewott’s ears. It was the even separation of sand around another’s foot. Daniel turned his yellow eyes towards the beach’s direction. The color of red and yellow stood out among the backdrop of green and white. \n\nThe intruder to Daniel’s small spot was a flareon, looking around self consciously “Hey who are you?” Daniel calls out. The flareon stepped back startled. And then the fire type noticed exactly who called. \n\nFrom where he floated in the water, Daniel saw a flareon dressed in loose short slacks and a white polo shirt. The dewott’s eyes met the flareon’s widening ones and the fire type’s cheeks flushed a deeper shade of red. “Sorry! I didn’t think anybody would be here” The flareon went to turn away.\n\n“Aw don’t let me bother you ” Daniel said, splashing some of the water into the air. “Why not keep me company?”\n\nThe flareon stopped turning away and faced Daniel.”Are you sure it won’t be a bother?”\n\nDaniel just waved the flareon over and smiled. “So what’s your name?” The dewott continued paddling on his back.\n\n“Jace” The flareon said, leaving behind sandals on the sand and climbing on one of the few large boulders framing the water. Jace sat down and let his red feet dip into the water but he had no sign of wanting to go in deeper. \n\nThey remained like this for some time Daniel making laps across the water while Jace splashed his feet against the shuffling waves. And all the while Daniel watches the flareon off the corner of his eye. Jace looking down on the water and entirely interested in splashing his feet against it. “Hey” Daniel called out.\n\nJace raised his head towards Daniel and said “Yes, ummm sorry but what was your name?”\n\n“Daniel” The dewott waved from the water “Why don’t you jump in? The water’s great ”\n\nJace’s eyes moved to the side. Scratching at the edge of his mouth for a few seconds he said. “Okay, but it’s not that deep is it?”\n\n“Nope, see” Daniel turned in the water showing that the water only went up to his underarms. Jace nodded slightly a few times but then said he didn’t bring anything for swimming. \n\n“No worries, my bag’s over there. There should be something you can use.” Daniel said, an arm pointing to a green sports bag in the sand. The flareon looked a little confused at what the dewott said but went over in any case.\n\nThere was the sound of a zipper being pulled and the rustling of fabric. Then Jace’s voice came barely over the soft sound of the waves. “I’m a little afraid to ask why you have this in your bag.” The flareon held up a bright red swimming speedo and it was rather close to the flareon’s size. \n\n“I rather be prepared.” Daniel casually said. “Sometimes when I have a swimming student, they don’t have any proper swimwear.” \n\n“So you carry your own?” Jace muttered but walked into the bushes carrying the speedo. The motion of flareon changing in the bushes was all the dewott could see. Then the glorious sight of red stood out against the green leaves. \n\nJace’s walk over to the water was slowed by his placing his clothing on the beach and the flareon’s constant looking around. “So, you give swimming lessons?” Jace said.\n\n“Sure, it’s a living. Interested?” Daniel said paddling closer to the flareon gingerly inching into the water.\n\n“But I don’t really have that much money on me.” Jace said being guided deeper by the dewott. “I can’t exactly pay you right now.”\n\n“Hey it’s a good enough living to offer freebies.” Daniel said, letting his hands fall on the fire type’s shoulders.\n\n“Now to start off, we’re going learn the easiest but most important lesson.” The dewott circled around the flareon, eying that bright red package in the water. “How to float.” At Jace’s confused expression. Daniel further said “You’d be surprised how many times getting a chance to catch your breath can save your life.”\n\nThe water type instructed Jace to lie on his back. Jace gulped but fell back, his motion slowed by the water. His fall into the clear waters was halted by the support of Daniel’s hand. The otter looking pokemon stroking along the flareon’s spine. Jace tensed, especially when Daniel ran his fingers through Jace’s hair. \n\n“Don’t forget to keep your head up.” Daniel said.\n\n“Right, ah!” Jace tilted his neck so that his face kept out the water. It was only a coincidence that this exposed the back of his head for the dewott to play with. And then Daniel moved his hand supporting the flareon’s back lower down. At first the dewott cheekily bounced his hand against Jace’s glutes. Sending the flareon’s body bobbing along the waves and letting the dewott have a good feel of Jace’s backside. \n\n“Now then you really must be enjoying this aren’t you.” Daniel flashed his teeth at the sight that was below him. Jace could only blush and sputter apologies at the boner that had set up a bright red tent between the flareon’s legs. “Relax, it’s only natural. Being alone with a guy like me paying complete attention to you.” The dewott breathed gently into the flareon’s ear with every word. Each word sending a pulse of heat down between Jace’s legs. \n\nJace’s grit his teeth and his body turned warmer as Daniel’s hands began roaming the toned fire’s limbs and chest. The red pokemon’s breathing grew sharper especially as the smell of the sea mixed with the musky smell of lean well endowed dewott reached Jace’s nose. \n\n“Hey, you said you were worried that you couldn’t pay me?” Daniel said, getting a small moan of agreement from Jace. “There’s something else I could take in payment.” The dewott played with the waistband of Jace’s current speedo.\n\nJace, flush with all the attention being given by Daniel nodded eagerly while making sure his head was above the water. Then the dewott hooked a single finger into the red speedo, A long smooth tug had the swimwear pulled down stroking the outside of Jace’s legs. \n\nDaniel licked his lips at the sight of the flareon’s hot pink length being released. The dewott’s same hand that was holding on the speedo Jace wore, also slipped Daniel’s swimwear off as well. Both pokemon now skinny dipping in the wide blue waters. \n\nThe dewott’s hand reached down to take Jace’s length and stroked the flareon between slim fingers. The flareon curled up but dipped from shifting his posture in the water. So Jace ended up needing to keep himself straight and sticking out his full cock for Daniel to tease. “I bet you wouldn’t know this but there’s a bunch of fun things we can do in the middle of the water, like this.” Daniel said, keeping up the stimulation to keep Jace in the mood. \n\n“Like what?” Jace moaned out, eyes closed in bliss and completely under the water type’s command. \n\nBlue hands went to rearrange the red body with yellow fur into a more suitable position. The dewott straddled the flareon. They Let the natural buoyancy of their bodies to bob in the water. Daniel looked down onto Jace’s face as he aimed his now throbbing dewott cock against the flareon’s tight hole. \n\nDaniel instead of ramming right inside took the time to tease Jace by poking the flareon’s ass a few times. Even letting the rocking motions of the ocean more easily slide his cock between the flareon’s cheeks. It made Jace clench on the length between his butt cheeks. \n\nThen Daniel thrust forward sending a little cry out from the flareon’s throat. Jace’s tight hole was warm and inviting. Jace’s nature as a fire type along with the surrounding ocean gave Daniel a delightful sensation between coolness and heat. It made his cock flex only for it to be milked further by Jace’s insides. \n\nThe flareon continued to moan against the motion of Daniel grinding away like the waves against the beach “Do you do this often? Swimming like this with your students?” \n\n“Only the cute ones.” Daniel said, hips speeding up in motion. Bending Jace’s back and making the flareon moan louder at the deeper penetration. The fur on Jace’s chest lightly tickling against the dewott’s. The flareon’s toes curled with every inch the dewott’s thick dick spread deeper inside of him.\n\n“Please faster, Daniel, faster!” Jace gripped the dewott’s shoulders. Fingers digging deep into short blue fur. \n\n“Gladly Jace, this is gonna get rough.” Daniel said, making sure he had a firm grip on the flareon. Deeper and harder did the water type show off his type advantage against the flame pokemon. The ocean water began to steam a little around them. They writhed, Daniel thrusted and spread Jace wide open. The dewott’s balls churned and with one final thrust. Jace’s hole overfilled with with Daniel’s seed, leaking out to dissolve with the salt of the sea.\n\nTheir breaths were long and slow. Paced by the touch of each other’s body in the warm beach waters. “I thought the first lesson was free?” Jace asked.\n\n“Then I guess I’ll owe you another lesson.” Daniel answered. And the Flareon looked forward to it. Maybe he’ll also pay in advance next time as well.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "

The cool waters of the beach side were disturbed by none. Except by the slow steady strokes of blue furred arms. Slowly parting the waters was a young Dewott swimming along without a care on his face.

The water type named Daniel wore nothing else but a tasteful navy speedo. That was all that was needed with the pleasant noonday sun. It warmed the clear blue waters that cast caressing shadows along lithe abs and limbs that pushed the male forward.

Daniel often came to this beach. A small secluded tropical paradise where the dewott could swim alone.The rest of his clothes lay in a bundle on the shore’s sand.

Then another sound, one not the crashing of the waves or the rustling of wind reached the dewott’s ears. It was the even separation of sand around another’s foot. Daniel turned his yellow eyes towards the beach’s direction. The color of red and yellow stood out among the backdrop of green and white.

The intruder to Daniel’s small spot was a flareon, looking around self consciously “Hey who are you?” Daniel calls out. The flareon stepped back startled. And then the fire type noticed exactly who called.

From where he floated in the water, Daniel saw a flareon dressed in loose short slacks and a white polo shirt. The dewott’s eyes met the flareon’s widening ones and the fire type’s cheeks flushed a deeper shade of red. “Sorry! I didn’t think anybody would be here” The flareon went to turn away.

“Aw don’t let me bother you ” Daniel said, splashing some of the water into the air. “Why not keep me company?”

The flareon stopped turning away and faced Daniel.”Are you sure it won’t be a bother?”

Daniel just waved the flareon over and smiled. “So what’s your name?” The dewott continued paddling on his back.

“Jace” The flareon said, leaving behind sandals on the sand and climbing on one of the few large boulders framing the water. Jace sat down and let his red feet dip into the water but he had no sign of wanting to go in deeper.

They remained like this for some time Daniel making laps across the water while Jace splashed his feet against the shuffling waves. And all the while Daniel watches the flareon off the corner of his eye. Jace looking down on the water and entirely interested in splashing his feet against it. “Hey” Daniel called out.

Jace raised his head towards Daniel and said “Yes, ummm sorry but what was your name?”

“Daniel” The dewott waved from the water “Why don’t you jump in? The water’s great ”

Jace’s eyes moved to the side. Scratching at the edge of his mouth for a few seconds he said. “Okay, but it’s not that deep is it?”

“Nope, see” Daniel turned in the water showing that the water only went up to his underarms. Jace nodded slightly a few times but then said he didn’t bring anything for swimming.

“No worries, my bag’s over there. There should be something you can use.” Daniel said, an arm pointing to a green sports bag in the sand. The flareon looked a little confused at what the dewott said but went over in any case.

There was the sound of a zipper being pulled and the rustling of fabric. Then Jace’s voice came barely over the soft sound of the waves. “I’m a little afraid to ask why you have this in your bag.” The flareon held up a bright red swimming speedo and it was rather close to the flareon’s size.

“I rather be prepared.” Daniel casually said. “Sometimes when I have a swimming student, they don’t have any proper swimwear.”

“So you carry your own?” Jace muttered but walked into the bushes carrying the speedo. The motion of flareon changing in the bushes was all the dewott could see. Then the glorious sight of red stood out against the green leaves.

Jace’s walk over to the water was slowed by his placing his clothing on the beach and the flareon’s constant looking around. “So, you give swimming lessons?” Jace said.

“Sure, it’s a living. Interested?” Daniel said paddling closer to the flareon gingerly inching into the water.

“But I don’t really have that much money on me.” Jace said being guided deeper by the dewott. “I can’t exactly pay you right now.”

“Hey it’s a good enough living to offer freebies.” Daniel said, letting his hands fall on the fire type’s shoulders.

“Now to start off, we’re going learn the easiest but most important lesson.” The dewott circled around the flareon, eying that bright red package in the water. “How to float.” At Jace’s confused expression. Daniel further said “You’d be surprised how many times getting a chance to catch your breath can save your life.”

The water type instructed Jace to lie on his back. Jace gulped but fell back, his motion slowed by the water. His fall into the clear waters was halted by the support of Daniel’s hand. The otter looking pokemon stroking along the flareon’s spine. Jace tensed, especially when Daniel ran his fingers through Jace’s hair.

“Don’t forget to keep your head up.” Daniel said.

“Right, ah!” Jace tilted his neck so that his face kept out the water. It was only a coincidence that this exposed the back of his head for the dewott to play with. And then Daniel moved his hand supporting the flareon’s back lower down. At first the dewott cheekily bounced his hand against Jace’s glutes. Sending the flareon’s body bobbing along the waves and letting the dewott have a good feel of Jace’s backside.

“Now then you really must be enjoying this aren’t you.” Daniel flashed his teeth at the sight that was below him. Jace could only blush and sputter apologies at the boner that had set up a bright red tent between the flareon’s legs. “Relax, it’s only natural. Being alone with a guy like me paying complete attention to you.” The dewott breathed gently into the flareon’s ear with every word. Each word sending a pulse of heat down between Jace’s legs.

Jace’s grit his teeth and his body turned warmer as Daniel’s hands began roaming the toned fire’s limbs and chest. The red pokemon’s breathing grew sharper especially as the smell of the sea mixed with the musky smell of lean well endowed dewott reached Jace’s nose.

“Hey, you said you were worried that you couldn’t pay me?” Daniel said, getting a small moan of agreement from Jace. “There’s something else I could take in payment.” The dewott played with the waistband of Jace’s current speedo.

Jace, flush with all the attention being given by Daniel nodded eagerly while making sure his head was above the water. Then the dewott hooked a single finger into the red speedo, A long smooth tug had the swimwear pulled down stroking the outside of Jace’s legs.

Daniel licked his lips at the sight of the flareon’s hot pink length being released. The dewott’s same hand that was holding on the speedo Jace wore, also slipped Daniel’s swimwear off as well. Both pokemon now skinny dipping in the wide blue waters.

The dewott’s hand reached down to take Jace’s length and stroked the flareon between slim fingers. The flareon curled up but dipped from shifting his posture in the water. So Jace ended up needing to keep himself straight and sticking out his full cock for Daniel to tease. “I bet you wouldn’t know this but there’s a bunch of fun things we can do in the middle of the water, like this.” Daniel said, keeping up the stimulation to keep Jace in the mood.

“Like what?” Jace moaned out, eyes closed in bliss and completely under the water type’s command.

Blue hands went to rearrange the red body with yellow fur into a more suitable position. The dewott straddled the flareon. They Let the natural buoyancy of their bodies to bob in the water. Daniel looked down onto Jace’s face as he aimed his now throbbing dewott cock against the flareon’s tight hole.

Daniel instead of ramming right inside took the time to tease Jace by poking the flareon’s ass a few times. Even letting the rocking motions of the ocean more easily slide his cock between the flareon’s cheeks. It made Jace clench on the length between his butt cheeks.

Then Daniel thrust forward sending a little cry out from the flareon’s throat. Jace’s tight hole was warm and inviting. Jace’s nature as a fire type along with the surrounding ocean gave Daniel a delightful sensation between coolness and heat. It made his cock flex only for it to be milked further by Jace’s insides.

The flareon continued to moan against the motion of Daniel grinding away like the waves against the beach “Do you do this often? Swimming like this with your students?”

“Only the cute ones.” Daniel said, hips speeding up in motion. Bending Jace’s back and making the flareon moan louder at the deeper penetration. The fur on Jace’s chest lightly tickling against the dewott’s. The flareon’s toes curled with every inch the dewott’s thick dick spread deeper inside of him.

“Please faster, Daniel, faster!” Jace gripped the dewott’s shoulders. Fingers digging deep into short blue fur.

“Gladly Jace, this is gonna get rough.” Daniel said, making sure he had a firm grip on the flareon. Deeper and harder did the water type show off his type advantage against the flame pokemon. The ocean water began to steam a little around them. They writhed, Daniel thrusted and spread Jace wide open. The dewott’s balls churned and with one final thrust. Jace’s hole overfilled with with Daniel’s seed, leaking out to dissolve with the salt of the sea.

Their breaths were long and slow. Paced by the touch of each other’s body in the warm beach waters. “I thought the first lesson was free?” Jace asked.

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