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He was only brought back to reality when he heard a group of squeaky girly laughter coming from behind him. \n\n``You didn't want to sit with us so badly that you sat with a tiger? We're not that scarry.'' \n\nOscar looked behind him to see a mouse girl with an even mix of snow white and tan fur. Surrounding her was a mischief of mice, all seeming to be girls. ``We even shuffled over and everything.'' The mouse noted playfully, getting further giggles from the group of mice.\n\n``Oh my god stop teasing him Emily.'' A pure white mouse interrupted. ``He's probably terrified... I'm Samantha by the way.'' The young mouse added, trying to carefully to make Oscar feel more comfortable. \n\nOscar was terribly flustered. He was already a naturally shy guy, but a group of girls being openly flirty with him was just too much. If it wasn't for his tan fur, he would be bright blushing. ``I-I'm O-oscar'' he managed. A collective `awwww' from the girls was their response. ``He is so cute'' one of them added. Samantha just rolled her eyes sympathetic of the boy's situation. \n\n``We should get to the cafeteria'' Samantha suggested. ``You should come with oscar, safety in numbers and all that'' \n\nAnd with that Oscar was added to the group of girls, feeling a bit like he was their plaything, as they left the classroom to head towards the cafeteria. The girls all tried to introduce themselves, but there was so many it was hard to keep track of who was who and if he met them all. They all tried to Give oscar the crash course on how the high school worked. Oscar was greatly intrigued at how two students could get eaten in just one lesson. \n\n``Oh yeah.'' Emily explained. ``Vore kinda happens all the time here. Your normally not allowed to eat other students outside of lunch time though. But I reckon some teachers like Mr Wilson kinda get off on it, so it happens more often in their classes and stuff.'' All of this was rather fascinating to Oscar and nothing like what he had experienced growing up out of the city. \n\nOscar feeing a little more comfortable with the girls after they had all introduced themselves to him thought about his old school. ``Yeah Wow. That's nothing like my old school. We mostly had mice but there was the odd rat. But the rats weren't allowed to eat you. In fact, this one time this rat ate this mouse on a dare cause people wanted to see if he could do it, and he got into serious trouble. I think he was suspended for almost a month.'' \n\n``Oh, wow that's so weird.'' Was the general response of the collective mice. But as the group was making their way to the cafeteria they ran into Elsie from their previous class. There was a crowd of herbivores gathering around the big elephant girl, all of them seemed deeply interested in the slightly moving bulge in her midsection. Emily was the most talkative with Elsie, it seemed like this young mouse girl was very charismatic and very popular. \n\n``Can I have a listen?'' Emily asked as she was chatting with Elsie. \n\n``Sure, go ahead'' Elsie lowered her trunk for Emily to climb on as she brought her trunk to her stomach. Emily placed a large mousy ear against Elsie. The other herbivores, including Oscar, looked on at this mouse listening in on the gurgles and churning of Elsie's stomach as it processed the otter food. Oscar was also impressed by how brave this little mouse was, standing inches away from the mouth of somebody who had just moments ago eaten one of his classmates. \n\n``Did he taste good?'' Emily asked as she thought she could hear Jack making attempts to speak while inside Elsie's stomach. Perhaps he could still hear all the commotion coming from outside his fleshy prison. \n\n``hmmm.'' Elsie thought for a moment. ``He tasted kinda salty, but in like a really good way.'' Elsie licked her lips instinctively as she remembered the flavour of her previous classmate. Emily, realising she was only inches away from this now predator's mouth, hopped off the elephant's trunk while she was still stuck in thought. ``catch you in class'' Emily said quite hurriedly as she re-joined her group of friends. \n\n``You are way too trusting of bigger animals.'' Samantha teased Emily as she could see that she was a little shaken from seeing such a large salivating mouth up close. \n\n``ha ha, very funny.'' Emily mocked in response. ``It's Elsie, she's a gentle giant. She wasn't going to eat me.'' \n\nAs Oscar and his new group of friends where walking away from said gentle giant however, a fox yelp followed by a few herbivore gasps could be heard. They all looked back almost simultaneously to see a stray elephant trunk grab a fox who was minding their own business passing by. The young red vixen was being held up by her tail, suspended mid-air. The fox looked completely surprised and stunned at the occurrence, not completely sure why a large herbivore had gabbed them by the tail. \n\nDespite being help upside-down the vixen seemed to be relatively calm. More confused then worried. That was until Elsie brought her directly above her mouth as she tilted her head back. The fox started complaining and flailing about realising the intentions of the elephant. The previous crowd who had gathered around Elsie to ask her what it was like to be a predator were all now just watching in stunned silence. Those in the crowd who were unfortunate to miss the first time this elephant became a predator were lucky as they were about to see a re-enactment from a lovely fox (unwilling) volunteer. \n\nElsie slowly lowered the fox's snout into her awaiting maw. Her flat tongue pressed against the bottom on the fox's jaw as her snout slipped inside. Elsie began sucking lightly to help drag the now unable to protest fox further inside her. She could feel her tongue now pressing against the outside of the fox's throat. She could feel the fox trying to breath as she placed her tongue on her windpipe, feeling the slight vibration as air passed through. Elsie pressed down harder with her tongue not letting the vixen breath. This caused the fox's protests to escalate as panic properly set in, her arms and legs flailing more vigorously than before. Her arms pushing hard against the mouth of the elephant. Elsie continued to press down harder on her meal with her tongue, feeling the spasms of her prey as she brought the fox further into her mouth, the fox's snout now entering the back of her throat. Soon these spasms became more uncontrolled, until finally, and slowly, the fox's body when limp. Only her legs and bare rump could be seen hanging outside the elephant's mouth. Elsie kept swallowing, while still holding onto the fox's pristine fluffy red tail. Using her tongue, she licked the fox's legs into her mouth. With the whole fox, bar a tail, inside her mouth Elsie savoured the taste of the fox. \n\nSlowly, and to everyone's surprise, Elsie dragged the limp fox out of her mouth. She moved her around in her mouth as she did so, trying to taste every inch of the young fox. Until eventually, her trunk pulled the unconscious and floppy fox free of her mouth. The herbivore onlookers wide eyed, unsure as to what was going to happen next.\n\n``Oops, looks like I might have gotten a bit carried away.'' Elsie said with a guilty giggle. \n\n``What're going to do now?'' asked an Alpaca in the audience. \n\n``I dunno, I guess if she's not breathing, I should probably swallow her...'' Elsie responded. But as there was a brief pause while she dangled the unconscious and sloppy vixen next to her when suddenly a loud gasp of breath entered the girl's lungs. Followed by a spattering and coughing as Elsie placed the soaked fox onto hardwood ground. \n\nMany of the herbivores cheered, seeing the fox narrowly avoid a fate they all dread to meet one day. Some of the herbivores a bit saddened they didn't get to see a fox get a bit of their own medicine. Either the case, a conversation erupted amongst the group asking all sorts of questions of each of the girls. The fox, still a bit dizzy and unsure of completely what was happening did her best to answer the questions thrown at her, while Elsie just mainly kept describing the flavours of the fox to her. \n\n``Anyone else wanna try?'' Asked Elsie, nobody put up their hand. \n\n``You should try Jacob!'' A young bunny said, pointing at his lanky Stoat friend. \n\n``No-no-no-no.'' The stoat protested as Elsie began the whole process over again. \n\nFrom down the hall, the group of mice onlookers stared in disbelief. ``hahaha, omg she totally could have eaten me...'' Emily yielded to Samantha as she and her group of friends started laughing in relief at how narrowly they escaped being elephant food.\n\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Chapter 1.5: On the way to lunch
Non-Fatal Edition.
As the bell rang through the classroom, partially drowning out Mr Wilson's homework assignment, Oscar couldn't help but be stunned. He had just watched 2 of his fellow students get swallowed alive right in front of him, with a teacher's permission no less and it was only his first day at Kigora-Rose High. The reality of the situation was hitting him like a truck, this was nothing like the country.
What's worse is that he also had to find a carnivore partner for Mr Wilson's assignment. ``I guess that tiger, Jacqui I think her name was, didn't eat me.'' Oscar thought for a brief moment. ``No-no-no-no-no, you can't be serious brain. She could swallow ten mice at once, let alone a tiny mouse like me.'' Oscar continued his train of thought while every other animal got out of their chairs and headed out the classroom. He was only brought back to reality when he heard a group of squeaky girly laughter coming from behind him.
``You didn't want to sit with us so badly that you sat with a tiger? We're not that scarry.''
Oscar looked behind him to see a mouse girl with an even mix of snow white and tan fur. Surrounding her was a mischief of mice, all seeming to be girls. ``We even shuffled over and everything.'' The mouse noted playfully, getting further giggles from the group of mice.
``Oh my god stop teasing him Emily.'' A pure white mouse interrupted. ``He's probably terrified... I'm Samantha by the way.'' The young mouse added, trying to carefully to make Oscar feel more comfortable.
Oscar was terribly flustered. He was already a naturally shy guy, but a group of girls being openly flirty with him was just too much. If it wasn't for his tan fur, he would be bright blushing. ``I-I'm O-oscar'' he managed. A collective `awwww' from the girls was their response. ``He is so cute'' one of them added. Samantha just rolled her eyes sympathetic of the boy's situation.
``We should get to the cafeteria'' Samantha suggested. ``You should come with oscar, safety in numbers and all that''
And with that Oscar was added to the group of girls, feeling a bit like he was their plaything, as they left the classroom to head towards the cafeteria. The girls all tried to introduce themselves, but there was so many it was hard to keep track of who was who and if he met them all. They all tried to Give oscar the crash course on how the high school worked. Oscar was greatly intrigued at how two students could get eaten in just one lesson.
``Oh yeah.'' Emily explained. ``Vore kinda happens all the time here. Your normally not allowed to eat other students outside of lunch time though. But I reckon some teachers like Mr Wilson kinda get off on it, so it happens more often in their classes and stuff.'' All of this was rather fascinating to Oscar and nothing like what he had experienced growing up out of the city.
Oscar feeing a little more comfortable with the girls after they had all introduced themselves to him thought about his old school. ``Yeah Wow. That's nothing like my old school. We mostly had mice but there was the odd rat. But the rats weren't allowed to eat you. In fact, this one time this rat ate this mouse on a dare cause people wanted to see if he could do it, and he got into serious trouble. I think he was suspended for almost a month.''
``Oh, wow that's so weird.'' Was the general response of the collective mice. But as the group was making their way to the cafeteria they ran into Elsie from their previous class. There was a crowd of herbivores gathering around the big elephant girl, all of them seemed deeply interested in the slightly moving bulge in her midsection. Emily was the most talkative with Elsie, it seemed like this young mouse girl was very charismatic and very popular.
``Can I have a listen?'' Emily asked as she was chatting with Elsie.
``Sure, go ahead'' Elsie lowered her trunk for Emily to climb on as she brought her trunk to her stomach. Emily placed a large mousy ear against Elsie. The other herbivores, including Oscar, looked on at this mouse listening in on the gurgles and churning of Elsie's stomach as it processed the otter food. Oscar was also impressed by how brave this little mouse was, standing inches away from the mouth of somebody who had just moments ago eaten one of his classmates.
``Did he taste good?'' Emily asked as she thought she could hear Jack making attempts to speak while inside Elsie's stomach. Perhaps he could still hear all the commotion coming from outside his fleshy prison.
``hmmm.'' Elsie thought for a moment. ``He tasted kinda salty, but in like a really good way.'' Elsie licked her lips instinctively as she remembered the flavour of her previous classmate. Emily, realising she was only inches away from this now predator's mouth, hopped off the elephant's trunk while she was still stuck in thought. ``catch you in class'' Emily said quite hurriedly as she re-joined her group of friends.
``You are way too trusting of bigger animals.'' Samantha teased Emily as she could see that she was a little shaken from seeing such a large salivating mouth up close.
``ha ha, very funny.'' Emily mocked in response. ``It's Elsie, she's a gentle giant. She wasn't going to eat me.''
As Oscar and his new group of friends where walking away from said gentle giant however, a fox yelp followed by a few herbivore gasps could be heard. They all looked back almost simultaneously to see a stray elephant trunk grab a fox who was minding their own business passing by. The young red vixen was being held up by her tail, suspended mid-air. The fox looked completely surprised and stunned at the occurrence, not completely sure why a large herbivore had gabbed them by the tail.
Despite being help upside-down the vixen seemed to be relatively calm. More confused then worried. That was until Elsie brought her directly above her mouth as she tilted her head back. The fox started complaining and flailing about realising the intentions of the elephant. The previous crowd who had gathered around Elsie to ask her what it was like to be a predator were all now just watching in stunned silence. Those in the crowd who were unfortunate to miss the first time this elephant became a predator were lucky as they were about to see a re-enactment from a lovely fox (unwilling) volunteer.
Elsie slowly lowered the fox's snout into her awaiting maw. Her flat tongue pressed against the bottom on the fox's jaw as her snout slipped inside. Elsie began sucking lightly to help drag the now unable to protest fox further inside her. She could feel her tongue now pressing against the outside of the fox's throat. She could feel the fox trying to breath as she placed her tongue on her windpipe, feeling the slight vibration as air passed through. Elsie pressed down harder with her tongue not letting the vixen breath. This caused the fox's protests to escalate as panic properly set in, her arms and legs flailing more vigorously than before. Her arms pushing hard against the mouth of the elephant. Elsie continued to press down harder on her meal with her tongue, feeling the spasms of her prey as she brought the fox further into her mouth, the fox's snout now entering the back of her throat. Soon these spasms became more uncontrolled, until finally, and slowly, the fox's body when limp. Only her legs and bare rump could be seen hanging outside the elephant's mouth. Elsie kept swallowing, while still holding onto the fox's pristine fluffy red tail. Using her tongue, she licked the fox's legs into her mouth. With the whole fox, bar a tail, inside her mouth Elsie savoured the taste of the fox.
Slowly, and to everyone's surprise, Elsie dragged the limp fox out of her mouth. She moved her around in her mouth as she did so, trying to taste every inch of the young fox. Until eventually, her trunk pulled the unconscious and floppy fox free of her mouth. The herbivore onlookers wide eyed, unsure as to what was going to happen next.
``Oops, looks like I might have gotten a bit carried away.'' Elsie said with a guilty giggle.
``What're going to do now?'' asked an Alpaca in the audience.
``I dunno, I guess if she's not breathing, I should probably swallow her...'' Elsie responded. But as there was a brief pause while she dangled the unconscious and sloppy vixen next to her when suddenly a loud gasp of breath entered the girl's lungs. Followed by a spattering and coughing as Elsie placed the soaked fox onto hardwood ground.
Many of the herbivores cheered, seeing the fox narrowly avoid a fate they all dread to meet one day. Some of the herbivores a bit saddened they didn't get to see a fox get a bit of their own medicine. Either the case, a conversation erupted amongst the group asking all sorts of questions of each of the girls. The fox, still a bit dizzy and unsure of completely what was happening did her best to answer the questions thrown at her, while Elsie just mainly kept describing the flavours of the fox to her.
``Anyone else wanna try?'' Asked Elsie, nobody put up their hand.
``You should try Jacob!'' A young bunny said, pointing at his lanky Stoat friend.
``No-no-no-no.'' The stoat protested as Elsie began the whole process over again.
From down the hall, the group of mice onlookers stared in disbelief. ``hahaha, omg she totally could have eaten me...'' Emily yielded to Samantha as she and her group of friends started laughing in relief at how narrowly they escaped being elephant food.
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