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Please let me know what you think.  Like chapter one i will prolly be changing it a bit here and there as i continue on writing.  I am now well on my way with chapter 3 but seeing how long it took me to finish chapter 2...  i may be at it for a while.

Any and all feedback is appreciated!  

Edit:  Reworked this chapter as well so it flowed a bit better and matched what had been changed in chapter one.", "writing": "Chapter Two - Its all fun and games till you get caught... Again...\n\n\nMaking up his mind as they pulled into the parking lot of the restaurant, Dave told them that he would only be with them until they got to the movies then he would come back to pick them up afterwords. Explaining that he needed some time to work on some paperwork or something. Alvin and Brittany looked at each other then quickly away smiling, knowing exactly what it was that each other was thinking. They all looked at Dave and said “ok.” He couldn't help but wonder what they were thinking as they got out of the car and headed in to the restaurant. \n\nThey were seated pretty fast when they got into the restaurant. They only stood there for a few minutes before they were called over to be led to their table. All throughout dinner they were talking about various things. Dave could have sworn at one point in time Alvin had hinted at bringing Brittany camping but just brushed it off. This year he wanted to go camping with just the boys. Every time the girls came there was trouble. Alvin and Brittany were caught messing around a little ways off in the woods last time. Even though they had not gotten far before Theo stumbled upon them but it was getting there really fast.\n\nAs they finished eating dinner and were getting ready to head off to the movies, Alvin decided he was going to try his luck. Both he and Brittany had managed to keep out of trouble for the most part over the last few months. Only getting caught making out once or twice. Something Dave did not like but figured there was nothing he could do about.\n\n“D-dave?” Alvin started, causing him to turn and look at him as they were leaving the restaurant. “Yes Alvin?” He responded. “Do you think Brittany could come camping with us again this year?” Alvin asked shakily. Dave could tell he rely wanted her to come along again. “We will see Alvin” Dave answered. Though he had no intention of letting her come along, he did not want to spoil Alvin's evening with her. As they got back into the car to head off to the movie theater Alvin seemed to be a lot more excited than Dave had expected to see him with only having given him a 'We will see' as an answer. \n\nA few minutes after they left the restaurant they were pulling up to the front of the theater. Dave gave each of the boys some money for their tickets and snacks. Making sure to tell them to call when their movies got out and to behave themselves. Looking at Alvin when he did so. As they climbed out of the car they all nodded and said “Ok Dave, We will.” They closed the car door and waved as Dave drove away.\n\n“Yes!” exclaimed Alvin as soon as Dave turned the corner and drove off. “Don't get any ideas Alvin. From the sounds of things you might stand a chance of getting what you want for once.” Simon said looking Alvin in the face. “Don't worry Si...” Alvin responded but was cut off by his younger brother before he could finish. “I'm serious Alvin. Please... Just don't ruin the evening for the rest of us.” Alvin sighed as his younger brother finished. “Si... When have I ever ruined your evening before?” Alvin asked. “Hmmm... How about last weekend, when Jen and I had planned on hanging out and watching a movie together? Or maybe the time you...” Alvin cut him off there “Okay, okay... I promise to stay out of trouble this time.” “And?” Simon retorted. “And I wont mess up your evening.” Alvin snapped, their argument quickly coming to a end.\n\n“Stop fighting you two!” Brittany yelled. Alvin and Simon both blushed deeply as they looked away from one another. Though they were upset at each other for some reason they could not stay mad. Elanor and Theodore were off a little ways talking and had not even noticed them fighting until they heard Brittany. “What movie you guys gonna see?” Theodore asked as they joined everyone where they were standing. “Um... Britt? Which one did you want to see?” Alvin asked. “I hear that one is good.” she responded pointing to a poster. “Sounds good to me!” Alvin responded not even looking to see what she was pointing at. “And you two?” Theo asked looking to Simon and Jeannette. “We are going to see that new documentary that just came out. What about you two?” Simon answered. “ICE AGE!” Elanor stated, almost shouting in excitement. “Looks like they all end around the same time too.” Simon said as they all turned to go inside. \n\nAlvin practically sprinted to the door to open it for Brittany, smiling at her as she went in. She laughed at the look on his face as everyone else took advantage of the opportunity and went in that door as well. When they all made it in the boys went up to the ticket counter and got the tickets, Alvin having to run back and ask Brittany what movie it was again before buying the tickets. \n\nIt wasn't too long before they were at the concessions stand. Theodore having quite a pile going as they all split up to go to their respective theaters. Alvin and Brittany watched them all go in as they headed off to theirs which was conveniently almost at the end of the hallway. Looking around as they entered the theater they saw that they were the only ones in there so far. They decided to sit close to the back of the theater, sitting down just as the first preview started to roll.\n\nAlvin giggled as he looked around at all the empty seats. “Looks like we have this place all to ourselves tonight.” Alvin said smiling at Brittany leaning over for a kiss. Brittany smiled as she leaned over as well, their lips meeting halfway. Their tongues danced around in each others maw whale they continued kissing all through the previews wrapping their arms around each other, Giggling and murring as their kiss deepened. \n\nAlvin gently ran his paw over Brittany's cheek and smiled as he broke the kiss. Both of them were breathing heavily having being lost in their kiss for so long. Neither of them had even noticed that the movie had started playing. Alvin was starring off into space, smiling Brittany giggled as she saw the lovesick look on Alvin's face. “So... What you wanna do?” she asked, running her paw gently down the front of Alvin's hoodie. He couldn't help but to smile and giggle, having only one thought in mind. \nBlushing deeply, he leaned over and whispered “Wanna try and finish what we started last time?” Brittany giggled and ran her paw over his chest once more in a teasing manner, circling his nipples slowly. “We could... And we do have the whole theater to ourselves.” Alvin nodded slowly as she said this, his pants already beginning to tighten with anticipation. She ran her paw down his front as she leaned in for another kiss, this one lasting nearly twice as long as the last. The couple occasionally breaking the kiss only long enough to take a few quick breaths before diving right back in.\n\nHer paw worked its way lower and lower, eventually reaching Alvin's lap. Alvin murred at the feeling of her paw being just on the other side of his pants, rubbing ever so lightly over his crotch as they kissed. She seemed to know exactly what she was doing, continuing to rub over the crotch of his pants. He quietly started to moan a bit as the tent in his pants continued to grow. Brittany slowly pulled away breaking the kiss, giggling as she looked down at Alvin's lap.\n\nSeeing the more than obvious bulge in Alvin’s pants Brittany slipped her paw under Alvin's hoodie, pushing him back in his seat before she started undoing his zipper with her free paw. She had some trouble with his zipper, not only was it difficult due to the sizable tent in his pants but also her desire to get to what they had been longing to do for so long. Before too long she had managed to get his zipper down about half way. Continuing to fiddle with it she started to lift his shirt up as she ran her paw over his stomach and chest. \n\nAlvin smiled as he caught a glimpse of the determined look on Brittany's face as she fought with his zipper which seemed to be stuck. Paying little to no attention to their surroundings as she continued fighting with his zipper, they nearly jumped out of their seats when they heard what sounded like the door of the theater closing. Not sure if they were still alone they quickly looked around the theater seeing they were still the only ones there. \n\nOnce they were sure they were still the only ones in there, Brittany finally managed to pull Alvin's zipper down with a little help. It was just enough to grant her access to what she wanted. She slipped her paw inside gently running her fingers along Alvin's bulge, separated now by only the thin pair of boxers he decided to wear. Raising up a little as she slid his boxers down inside his pants, he shivered a little as the cool air in the theater ran over his member.\n\nAlvin let out a quiet moan as she grasped his now exposed member. He started squirming a little and continued to moan quietly as she started to stroke him gently, the soft warm fur of her paw feeling amazing. Before too long he was fully erect and had started humping into her paw lightly, enjoying the sensations her gentle touch was giving him. Her strokes gradually getting a little faster as she ran her paw over his tip, noticing that it was stating to get covered with pre.\n\nBrittany paused for a moment before giving his tip a quick swipe with her tongue, causing him to moan louder than he had been, sending a chill down his spine. Continuing to lick over his tip lightly, she found the slightly musky and salty taste of his pre to be more pleasant than she had thought it would be. Alvin Started to lightly hump into Brittany's maw, moaning completely lost in their activities.\n\nBrittany closed her eyes as she started to take his member into her maw, murring lightly. She began running her tongue over his length as she went along. Having taken almost all of him into her mouth as she continued teasing him with her tongue, starting to suckle on him lightly. \n\nThey were so lost in what they were doing that they had not even noticed the movie had finished. Just as the credits had finished one of the employees happened to stumble upon the couple of chipmunks. Brittany opened her eyes just as the employee had started to turn and run to get the manager. The sight of the employee startling her. She gasped as she jumped quickly trying to hide what they had been doing but it was too late. The manager was already there. She had not even noticed she had knocked their soda into Alvin's lap causing him to nearly fly out of his seat only to be hit with the same shock as he saw the manager standing just beside them. They both froze, neither of them able to speak. \n\nTaking a deep breath the manager cleared his throat loudly. His arms were crossed in front of his chest and he had a look of complete disbelief on his face. “I know you weren't expecting us but would you mind covering your self up?” he said pointing to the crotch of Alvin's jeans. Alvin's heart sunk almost instantly as he looked down seeing that his zipper was still completely down showing off all of his munkhood. He quickly zipped his pants, brushing them off a little, though to no effect. They were soaked through with soda.\n\nWithout a word they followed the manager to his office, sitting down on the bench just outside. “Are your parents here with you two?” The manager asked, the same look still on his face. “N-no...” Alvin responded, shaking his head slightly. “There coming to pick us up.” His voice was starting to get shaky as he spoke. “And you?” He asked turning to Brittany. She shook her head, tears running down her cheeks as she tried to find her voice. “We came together.” Alvin said. “I'm going to need to talk to your parents before I can let you two leave.” The manager said, still sounding disappointed. “Can't we just...” Alvin started. “No. Either that or they can pick you up at the police station. Your choice.” The manager said firmly. \n\nThey both sat there for a moment, the only sound being that of Brittany's crying. “But...” Alvin fell short as he tried to think of a way out of having to tell Dave what they were doing. “Well?” the manager asked, starting to get annoyed. “I... I guess... Can I use the payphone?” Alvin was still trying to think of any possible way out of it but still unable to think of a way. \n\nThe manager led them over to the phone letting him call Dave. Alvin put the coins in the slot as slowly as he could, only managing to upset the manager further. Noticing this he did not dare continue delaying it. He dialed Dave's phone number a little faster, pausing before hitting the last number to take a deep breath. The phone seemed to ring forever before there was an answer. \n\n“Hello?” He heard Dave's voice say on the other end. “D-dave?” Alvin stuttered. “This is.” Dave's voice responded. “We... We just got out of the movie...” Alvin said trying to cover up the shakiness of his voice. “Ok. Ill be there soon. Is everything ok Alvin?” Dave was not sure but thought he heard sobbing in the background as he spoke. “Ye... Yeah... We... We'll be on the bench in the lobby.” Alvin was nearly crying as he spoke. “Alright. And you sure everything is ok?” He knew something was not right, but couldn't seem to pinpoint it or get an answer from Alvin. “Yeah.... Were ok.... See you soon.” Alvin hung up before Dave could ask anymore questions. The manager Sighed as he led them back to the bench, offering them some tissues to dry their eyes. Brittany took them as she sat down wiping her face, smearing her makeup and still crying. \n\nDave arrived at the theater shortly after he hung up the phone. He had left the house in quite a hurry, having not even taken the time to button his shirt or even tie his shoes. The manager cornering him almost instantly as he walked towards the bench Alvin and Brittany were sitting on. He lead Dave into his office and shut the door, their voices barely audible outside his office.\n\n“Al.... Alvin?” Alvin jumped almost instantly as he heard his name. It was Theodore. Their movie had just let out and he saw Simon and Jeannette off a ways as well. “Is everything ok? Whys Brittany crying? Is she hurt?” Theodore asked. “No...” Alvin responded “Dave is gonna kill me...” Alvin sighed as he saw the look on Theodore's face. “You Didn't...?” He heard Simon say but did not respond. Alvin avoided Simon's eye, looking quickly to the ground in front of him. “How could you? Why here? Why now? What were you thinking?” Simon continued. \n\nAlvin opened his mouth to respond but just sat there. Unable to speak, the look on Simon's face bringing tears to his eyes again. “I... I don't know Si...” he managed to say after a while. “Does Dave know?” Simon asked. “Ye... Yeah... He is in there... With the manager.” Alvin pointed at the office door behind him, Dave's voice still barely able to be made out from time to time. “I... Im sorry Si.” Alvin could not bring himself to look at his brother as he spoke, only to be shocked as his older brother hugged him. “It'll be ok.” Simon said as he hugged him. As much as Simon wanted to be mad at his brother for breaking his promise, for some reason he found it hard seeing him so scared. “But... What about Britt?” Simon looked up as Alvin spoke. “I... I think it will work out in the end.” Simon responded.\n\nDave emerged from the office a short while later. “Are you all ready to go?” He asked in a cool tone, looking at everyone as he spoke. They all nodded, Brittany still sniffling a little, Jen sitting by her letting her rest her head on her shoulder as she tried to comfort her. “Ok... Well lets get you girls home before it gets too late.” Dave said as they got up and started heading out to the car.\n\nNo one dared to say a word on the way to the car or during the trip back to the Chippette's house. Alvin sat upfront with Dave and Simon. Brittany was still upset, she continued to sniffle and wipe the tears from her eyes during the ride home. She was fearing what would happen when she got home. What would Miss Miller do when she found out what they were doing in the theatre? Alvin starred at the floor for the majority of the trip. He knew now there was no way Dave would let Brittany come along with them on the camping trip.\n\nDave stopped the car in front of the Chippettes house, putting the car in park before he turned and spoke to them. “Okay... Do either of you two want to tell me what happened?” He asked, getting no response from anyone. “Alvin?” Dave looked right at Alvin as he spoke. “Well... Um.... We sorta, well... you know...” Alvin was searching for the right words to use, not wanting to just sat what they had been doing in front of everyone. “Ok... That is what I thought you were doing...” He did not seem to sound surprised at all. “Do either of you realize how lucky you two are that he did not have you arrested? Did you ever stop to think what would happen when you got caught?” Dave sounded more disappointed than anything else. \n\n“Are... Are you gonna tell Miss Miller?” Brittany asked as she tried to dry her eyes again. “No. I think you should tell her. But I'm not going to make you...” Brittany relaxed quite a bit, finding it easier to stop crying as he said this. “But. I think you both know that Brittany will not be joining us on the camping trip this year. And i think you two need to take a break for a while.” Alvin knew he was going to say that, but hearing it still made him a little sad. \n\nWhat exactly did Dave mean by “take a break”? Did he mean they needed to lay low for a while and not spend so much time together or...? Was he saying they should break up...? Alvin could not bare to think about it anymore. The thought of breaking up with Brittany was too much for him to take. The embarrassment of being caught with his pants undone like that alone was more than enough.\n\nThey sat there and continued talking for a little while before the girls got out and headed inside. As soon as they were inside Dave drove away heading home. The remainder of the trip seemed to take forever. Though they lived just a few blocks away from the Chipettes time seemed to almost come to a halt, every block seeming like miles.\n\nArriving home after what seemed like hours, Dave pulled into the driveway and turned off the car. Alvin was the first one to get out of the car, having barely waited for Dave to put the car into park before undoing his seat belt and hopping out. He quickly made his way to the front door, followed closely by his brothers and Dave. He nearly tripped as he came to the front step, the events of the night playing back in his mind like a bad horror film.\n \nShortly after they went inside, Simon and Theodore headed up to get ready for bed leaving Alvin and Dave to talk in the living room. Only having stuck around long enough to say goodnight to Dave. Neither one of them wanted to stay much longer, knowing how upset Dave was with Alvin. ", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chapter Two - Its all fun and games till you get caught...  Again...


Making up his mind as they pulled into the parking lot of the restaurant, Dave told them that he would only be with them until they got to the movies then he would come back to pick them up afterwords.    Explaining that he needed some time to work on some paperwork or something.  Alvin and Brittany looked at each other then quickly away smiling, knowing exactly what it was that each other was thinking.  They all  looked at Dave and said “ok.”  He couldn't help but wonder what they were thinking as they got out of the car and headed in to the restaurant.  

They were seated pretty fast when they got into the restaurant.  They only stood there for a few minutes before they were called over to be led to their table.  All throughout dinner they were talking about various things.  Dave could have sworn at one point in time Alvin had hinted at bringing Brittany camping but just brushed it off.  This year he wanted to go camping with just the boys.  Every time the girls came there was trouble.  Alvin and Brittany were caught messing around a little ways off in the woods last time.  Even though they had not gotten far before Theo stumbled upon them but it was getting there really fast.

As they finished eating dinner and were getting ready to head off to the movies, Alvin decided he was going to try his luck.  Both he and Brittany had managed to keep out of trouble for the most part over the last few months.  Only getting caught making out once or twice.  Something Dave did not like but figured there was nothing he could do about.

“D-dave?” Alvin started, causing him to turn and look at him as they were leaving the restaurant.  “Yes Alvin?” He responded.  “Do you think Brittany could come camping with us again this year?”  Alvin asked shakily.  Dave could tell he rely wanted her to come along again.  “We will see Alvin” Dave answered.  Though he had no intention of letting her come along, he did not want to spoil Alvin's evening with her.  As they got back into the car to head off to the movie theater Alvin seemed to be a lot more excited than Dave had expected to see him with only having given him a 'We will see' as an answer.  

A few minutes after they left the restaurant they were pulling up to the front of the theater.  Dave gave each of the boys some money for their tickets and snacks.  Making sure to tell them to call when their movies got out and to behave themselves.  Looking at Alvin when he did so.  As they climbed out of the car they all nodded and said “Ok Dave, We will.”  They closed the car door and waved as Dave drove away.

“Yes!” exclaimed Alvin as soon as Dave turned the corner and drove off.  “Don't get any ideas Alvin.  From the sounds of things you might stand a chance of getting what you want for once.”  Simon said looking Alvin in the face.  “Don't worry Si...” Alvin responded but was cut off by his younger brother before he could finish.  “I'm serious Alvin.  Please...  Just don't ruin the evening for the rest of us.”  Alvin sighed as his younger brother finished.  “Si...  When have I ever ruined your evening before?” Alvin asked.  “Hmmm...  How about last weekend,  when Jen and I had planned on hanging out and watching a movie together?  Or maybe the time you...”  Alvin cut him off there “Okay, okay...  I promise to  stay out of trouble this time.”  “And?” Simon retorted.  “And I wont mess up your evening.” Alvin snapped, their argument quickly coming to a end.

“Stop fighting you two!” Brittany yelled.  Alvin and Simon both blushed deeply as they looked away from one another.  Though they were upset at each other for some reason they could not stay mad.  Elanor and Theodore were off a little ways talking and had not even noticed them fighting until they heard Brittany.  “What movie you guys gonna see?” Theodore asked as they joined everyone where they were standing.  “Um...  Britt?  Which one did you want to see?” Alvin asked.  “I hear that one is good.” she responded pointing to a poster.  “Sounds good to me!” Alvin responded not even looking to see what she was pointing at.  “And you two?” Theo asked looking to Simon and Jeannette.  “We are going to see that new documentary that just came out.  What about you two?” Simon answered.  “ICE AGE!”  Elanor stated, almost shouting in excitement.  “Looks like they all end around the same time too.” Simon said as they all turned to go inside.  

Alvin practically sprinted to the door to open it for Brittany, smiling at her as she went in.  She laughed at the look on his face as everyone else took advantage of the opportunity and went in that door as well.  When they all made it in the boys went up to the ticket counter and got the tickets, Alvin having to run back and ask Brittany what movie it was again before buying the tickets.  

It wasn't too long before they were at the concessions stand.  Theodore having quite a pile going as they all split up to go to their respective theaters.  Alvin and Brittany watched them all go in as they headed off to theirs which was conveniently almost at the end of the hallway.  Looking around as they entered the theater they saw that they were the only ones in there so far.  They decided to sit close to the back of the theater, sitting down just as the first preview started to roll.

Alvin giggled as he looked around at all the empty seats.  “Looks like we have this place all to ourselves tonight.” Alvin said smiling at Brittany leaning over for a kiss. Brittany smiled as she leaned over as well, their lips meeting halfway.  Their tongues danced around in each others maw whale they continued kissing all through the previews wrapping their arms around each other, Giggling and murring as their kiss deepened.  

Alvin gently ran his paw over Brittany's cheek and smiled as he broke the kiss.  Both of them were breathing heavily having being lost in their kiss for so long.  Neither of them had even noticed that the movie had started playing.  Alvin was starring off into space, smiling   Brittany giggled as she saw the lovesick look on Alvin's face.  “So...  What you wanna do?” she asked, running her paw gently down the front of Alvin's hoodie.  He couldn't help but to smile and giggle, having only one thought in mind.  
Blushing deeply, he leaned over and whispered “Wanna try and finish what we started last time?”  Brittany giggled and ran her paw over his chest once more in a teasing manner, circling his nipples slowly.  “We could...  And we do have the whole theater to ourselves.”  Alvin nodded slowly as she said this, his pants already beginning to tighten with anticipation.  She ran her paw down his front as she leaned in for another kiss, this one lasting nearly twice as long as the last.  The couple occasionally breaking the kiss only long enough to take a few quick breaths before diving right back in.

Her paw worked its way lower and lower, eventually reaching Alvin's lap.  Alvin murred at the feeling of her paw being just on the other side of his pants, rubbing ever so lightly over his crotch as they kissed. She seemed to know exactly what she was doing, continuing to rub over the crotch of his pants.  He quietly started to moan a bit as the tent in his pants continued to grow.  Brittany slowly pulled away breaking the kiss, giggling as she looked down at Alvin's lap.

Seeing the more than obvious bulge in Alvin’s pants Brittany slipped her paw under Alvin's hoodie, pushing him back in his seat before she started undoing his zipper with her free paw.  She had some trouble with his zipper, not only was it difficult due to the sizable tent in his pants but also her desire to get to what they had been longing to do for so long.  Before too long she had managed to get his zipper down about half way.  Continuing to fiddle with it she started to lift his shirt up as she ran her paw over his stomach and chest.  

Alvin smiled as he caught a glimpse of the determined look on Brittany's face as she fought with his zipper which seemed to be stuck.  Paying little to  no attention to their surroundings as she continued fighting with his zipper, they nearly jumped out of their seats when they heard what sounded like the door of the theater closing.  Not sure if they were still alone they quickly looked around the theater seeing they were still the only ones there.  

Once they were sure they were still the only ones in there, Brittany finally managed to pull Alvin's zipper down with a little help.  It was just enough to grant her access to what she wanted. She slipped her paw inside gently running her fingers along Alvin's bulge, separated now by only the thin pair of boxers he decided to wear.  Raising up a little as she slid his boxers down inside his pants, he shivered a little as the cool air in the theater ran over his member.

Alvin let out a quiet moan as she grasped his now exposed member.  He started squirming a little and continued to moan quietly as she started to stroke him gently, the soft warm fur of her paw feeling amazing.  Before too long he was fully erect and had started humping into her paw lightly, enjoying the sensations her gentle touch was giving him.  Her strokes gradually getting a little faster as she ran her paw over his tip, noticing that it was stating to get covered with pre.

Brittany paused for a moment before giving his tip a quick swipe with her tongue, causing him to moan louder than he had been, sending a chill down his spine.  Continuing to lick over his tip lightly, she found the slightly musky and salty taste of his pre to be more pleasant than she had thought it would be.  Alvin Started to lightly hump into Brittany's maw, moaning completely lost in their activities.

Brittany closed her eyes as she started to take his member into her maw, murring lightly.  She began running her tongue over his length as she went along.  Having taken almost all of him into her mouth as she continued teasing him with her tongue, starting to suckle on him lightly.  

They were so lost in what they were doing that they had not even noticed the movie had finished.  Just as the credits had finished one of the employees happened to stumble upon the couple of chipmunks.  Brittany opened her eyes just as the employee had started to turn and run to get the manager.  The sight of the employee startling her.  She gasped as she jumped quickly trying to hide what they had been doing but it was too late.  The manager was already there.  She had not even noticed she had knocked their soda into Alvin's lap causing him to nearly fly out of his seat only to be hit with the same shock as he saw the manager standing just beside them.  They both froze, neither of them able to speak.

Taking a deep breath the manager cleared his throat loudly.  His arms were crossed in front of his chest and he had a look of complete disbelief on his face.  “I know you weren't expecting us but would you mind covering your self up?” he said pointing to the crotch of Alvin's jeans.  Alvin's heart sunk almost instantly as he looked down seeing that his zipper was still completely down showing off all of his munkhood.  He quickly zipped his pants, brushing them off a little, though to no effect.  They were soaked through with soda.

Without a word they followed the manager to his office, sitting down on the bench just outside.  “Are your parents here with you two?” The manager asked, the same look still on his face.  “N-no...” Alvin responded, shaking his head slightly.  “There coming to pick us up.”  His voice was starting to get shaky as he spoke.  “And you?” He asked turning to Brittany.  She shook her head, tears running down her cheeks as she tried to find her voice.  “We came together.” Alvin said.  “I'm going to need to talk to your parents before I can let you two leave.” The manager said, still sounding disappointed.  “Can't we just...” Alvin started.  “No.  Either that or they can pick you up at the police station.  Your choice.”  The manager said firmly.

They both sat there for a moment, the only sound being that of Brittany's crying.  “But...”  Alvin fell short as he tried to think of a way out of having to tell Dave what they were doing.  “Well?” the manager asked, starting to get annoyed.  “I...  I guess...  Can I use the payphone?”  Alvin was still trying to think of any possible way out of it but still unable to think of a way.  

The manager led them over to the phone letting him call Dave.  Alvin put the coins in the slot as slowly as he could, only managing to upset the manager further.  Noticing this he did not dare continue delaying it.  He dialed Dave's phone number a little faster, pausing before hitting the last number to take a deep breath.  The phone seemed to ring forever before there was an answer.  

“Hello?” He heard Dave's voice say on the other end.  “D-dave?”  Alvin stuttered.  “This is.” Dave's voice responded.  “We...  We just got out of the movie...”  Alvin said trying to cover up the shakiness of his voice.  “Ok.  Ill be there soon.  Is everything ok Alvin?”  Dave was not sure but thought he heard sobbing in the background as he spoke.  “Ye...  Yeah...  We...  We'll be on the bench in the lobby.”  Alvin was nearly crying as he spoke.  “Alright.  And you sure everything is ok?”  He knew something was not right, but couldn't seem to pinpoint it or get an answer from Alvin.  “Yeah....  Were ok....  See you soon.”  Alvin hung up before Dave could ask anymore questions.  The manager Sighed as he led them back to the bench, offering them some tissues to dry their eyes.  Brittany took them as she sat down wiping her face, smearing her makeup and still crying.  

Dave arrived at the theater shortly after he hung up the phone.  He had left the house in quite a hurry, having not even taken the time to button his shirt or even tie his shoes.  The manager cornering him almost instantly as he walked towards the bench Alvin and Brittany were sitting on.  He lead Dave into his office and shut the door, their voices barely audible outside his office.

“Al....   Alvin?”  Alvin jumped almost instantly as he heard his name.  It was Theodore.  Their movie had just let out and he saw Simon and Jeannette off a ways as well.  “Is everything ok?  Whys Brittany crying?  Is she hurt?”  Theodore asked.  “No...”  Alvin responded  “Dave is gonna kill me...”  Alvin sighed as he saw the look on Theodore's face.  “You Didn't...?” He heard Simon say but did not respond.  Alvin avoided Simon's eye, looking quickly to the ground in front of him.  “How could you?  Why here?  Why now?  What were you thinking?”  Simon continued.  

Alvin opened his mouth to respond but just sat there.  Unable to speak, the look on Simon's face bringing tears to his eyes again.  “I...  I don't know Si...”  he managed to say after a while.  “Does Dave know?” Simon asked.  “Ye...  Yeah...  He is in there...  With the manager.”  Alvin pointed at the office door behind him, Dave's voice still barely able to be made out from time to time.  “I...  Im sorry Si.”  Alvin could not bring himself to look at his brother as he spoke, only to be shocked as his older brother hugged him.  “It'll be ok.” Simon said as he hugged him.  As much as Simon wanted to be mad at his brother for breaking his promise, for some reason he found it hard seeing him so scared.  “But...  What about Britt?”  Simon looked up as Alvin spoke.  “I...  I think it will work out in the end.”  Simon responded.

Dave emerged from the office a short while later.  “Are you all ready to go?”  He asked in a cool tone, looking at everyone as he spoke.  They all nodded, Brittany still sniffling a little, Jen sitting by her letting her rest her head on her shoulder as she tried to comfort her.  “Ok...  Well lets get you girls home before it gets too late.” Dave said as they got up and started heading out to the car.

No one dared to say a word on the way to the car or during the trip back to the Chippette's house.  Alvin sat upfront with Dave and Simon.  Brittany was still upset, she continued to sniffle and wipe the tears from her eyes during the ride home.  She was fearing what would happen when she got home.  What would Miss Miller do when she found out what they were doing in the theatre?  Alvin starred at the floor for the majority of the trip.  He knew now there was no way Dave would let Brittany come along with them on the camping trip.

Dave stopped the car in front of the Chippettes house, putting the car in park before he turned and spoke to them.  “Okay...  Do either of you two want to tell me what happened?” He asked, getting no response from anyone.  “Alvin?” Dave looked right at Alvin as he spoke.  “Well...  Um....  We sorta, well...  you know...”  Alvin was searching for the right words to use, not wanting to just sat what they had been doing in front of everyone.  “Ok...  That is what I thought you were doing...”  He did not seem to sound surprised at all.  “Do either of you realize how lucky you two are that he did not have you arrested?  Did you ever stop to think what would happen when you got caught?”  Dave sounded more disappointed than anything else.  

“Are...  Are you gonna tell Miss Miller?”  Brittany asked as she tried to dry her eyes again.  “No.  I think you should tell her.  But I'm not going to make you...”  Brittany relaxed quite a bit, finding it easier to stop crying as he said this.  “But.  I think you both know that Brittany will not be joining us on the camping trip this year.  And i think you two need to take a break for a while.”  Alvin knew he was going to say that, but hearing it still made him a little sad.

What exactly did Dave mean by “take a break”?  Did he mean they needed to lay low for a while and not spend so much time together or...?  Was he saying they should break up...?   Alvin could not bare to think about it anymore.  The thought of breaking up with Brittany was too much for him to take.  The embarrassment of being caught with his pants undone like that alone was more than enough.

They sat there and continued talking for a little while before the girls got out and headed inside.  As soon as they were inside Dave drove away heading home.  The remainder of the trip seemed to take forever.  Though they lived just a few blocks away from the Chipettes time seemed to almost come to a halt, every block seeming like miles.

Arriving home after what seemed like hours, Dave pulled into the driveway and turned off the car.  Alvin was the first one to get out of the car, having barely waited for Dave to put the car into park before undoing his seat belt and hopping out.  He quickly made his way to the front door, followed closely by his brothers and Dave. He nearly tripped as he came to the front step, the events of the night playing back in his mind like a bad horror film.
 
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