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edit: BTW I have gotten most of my inspiration for this story from watching Disney's 'Cinderlla III' \t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t", "writing": "My Bittersweet End\n\nWritten by: Ainoko\n\nThis is a brief footnote from an Elite warrior named Ainoko about the Ch’arth’a invasion that nearly destroyed the Alliance almost two thousand years ago. His journal was found on the moon of a planet named Arridia. Remember this only one fur’s account of the invasion, and that historical records say that our ancestors repelled the invaders after hundreds of years of slavery. Only those Ch’arth’a who are still alive today can verify the words that are recorded in his journal. \n\nDestruction, death and ruin raining down from the sky…\n\nStrange, suited creatures herding furs into pens…\n\nMe fighting a large sinuous creature…\n\nThen…\n\nDarkness.\t\n\n “NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I scream in terror from my nightmare as I wake sweating bullets. Sitting up in my bunk, I wipe a trembling paw over my muzzle trying to remember as much of the dream as possible. I get out of the bunk and pad over to my desk to begin recording the details of the dream for my counselor. \n\nOnce done, I push away from the desk and go to the sonic to get scent of fear off my fur before heading to the gym for more training. These dreams have been haunting me ever since the Mother Planet, Edora was attacked by aliens from a distant galaxy. \n\n We heard about the attack from the few furs that escaped Edora after the attacks were finished. What we were told was that the aliens appeared in orbit with no warning, blocking all outgoing and incoming transits and communications. They then began blasting every trans node on the planet that one could launch a ship to escape. \n\n The alliance immediately sent a fleet of destroyers containing four divisions of the Elite warriors to investigate the planet and to search for survivors. When they arrived at the planet, the aliens had already vanished to parts unknown. The survey crews were astonished at what they discovered. There was no life-forms native or otherwise larger than one meter in height was gone. The only furs the they found were the ones that were killed by the aliens when they destroyed the trans nodes on the planet.\n\nOur leaders were at a loss to explain why the aliens didn’t just occupy the planet once they conquered it. No fur knew where or when the aliens were going to attack next, our answer came a month later. They attacked the Terran system, home to a near extinct race of furless beings. We were ready for anything, anything that is but the size of their ships. The alien ships were the size of Terra’s moon, they were nearly 500 meters in length and shaped like masses of bubbles that our cubs play with. The bad thing was, that there were four of those monstrous ships in orbit of Terra. As soon as they made orbit, they began to fire at all planet-side and orbital trans and comm nodes. At that, our destroyers opened fire destroying one of the ships, making the remaining three ships retaliate utterly destroying the fleet. \n\n The aliens learned from that mistake, much to our dismay. The only way that we learned of a planetary system falling to the aliens, was when all traffic to and from that system ceased. When recovery teams arrived at the systems the aliens attacked, the story was the same, all life on the habitable planets disappeared. This went on for over a year when one day we heard from a survivor.\n\n A young cub was found, near death in a strange craft a few months ago. After his recovery, the story he told, frightened everyone to their inner core and put the entire alliance up in arms. The cub’s story was broadcast over the comm-link for every fur to hear. He said that after the aliens had subdued a planet, they would herd all surviving furs into large transports which they shuttled them to the ships in orbit. Once the transport unloaded the furs, the cubs were separated from the adults. The adults were then put in tanks that contained slimy, pink serpents. Once in the tanks the serpents would enter them from any opening before they were picked up by large gelatinous aliens and devoured. The cubs that were separated from the adults were forced to work as slaves until they were big enough to be eaten by the aliens.\n\n The cub then stated that the aliens were heading towards the Arridian system in order to give them a large supply of food. I shuddered when I heard that, as the planet Arridia is the center of the Alliance, not to mention nearly half of the population lives there. Our leaders then realized that if we were going to survive, we were going to have to mount a serious defense if we didn’t want our various species and races would not become extinct.\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "My Bittersweet End

Written by: Ainoko

This is a brief footnote from an Elite warrior named Ainoko about the Ch’arth’a invasion that nearly destroyed the Alliance almost two thousand years ago. His journal was found on the moon of a planet named Arridia. Remember this only one fur’s account of the invasion, and that historical records say that our ancestors repelled the invaders after hundreds of years of slavery. Only those Ch’arth’a who are still alive today can verify the words that are recorded in his journal.

Destruction, death and ruin raining down from the sky…

Strange, suited creatures herding furs into pens…

Me fighting a large sinuous creature…

Then…

Darkness.\t

   “NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I scream in terror from my nightmare as I wake sweating bullets. Sitting up in my bunk, I wipe a trembling paw over my muzzle trying to remember as much of the dream as possible. I get out of the bunk and pad over to my desk to begin recording the details of the dream for my counselor.

Once done, I push away from the desk and go to the sonic to get scent of fear off my fur before heading to the gym for more training.  These dreams have been haunting me ever since the Mother Planet, Edora was attacked by aliens from a distant galaxy.

      We heard about the attack from the few furs that escaped Edora after the attacks were finished. What we were told was that the aliens appeared in orbit with no warning, blocking all outgoing and incoming transits and communications. They then began blasting every trans node on the planet that one could launch a ship to escape.

     The alliance immediately sent a fleet of destroyers containing four divisions of the Elite warriors to investigate the planet and to search for survivors. When they arrived at the planet, the aliens had already vanished to parts unknown. The survey crews were astonished at what they discovered. There was no life-forms native or otherwise larger than one meter in height was gone. The only  furs the they found were the ones that were killed by the aliens when they destroyed the trans nodes on the planet.

Our leaders were at a loss to explain why the aliens didn’t just occupy the planet once they conquered it. No fur knew where or when the aliens were going to attack next, our answer came a month later. They attacked the Terran system, home to a near extinct race of furless beings. We were ready for anything, anything that is but the size of their ships. The alien ships were the size of Terra’s moon, they were nearly 500 meters in length and shaped like masses of bubbles that our cubs play with. The bad thing was, that there were four of those monstrous ships in orbit of Terra. As soon as they made orbit, they began to fire at all planet-side and orbital trans and comm nodes. At that, our destroyers opened fire destroying one of the ships, making the remaining three ships retaliate utterly destroying the fleet.

     The aliens learned from that mistake, much to our dismay. The only way that we learned of a planetary system falling to the aliens, was when all traffic to and from that system ceased. When recovery teams arrived at the systems the aliens attacked, the story was the same, all life on the habitable planets disappeared. This went on for over a year when one day we heard from a survivor.

     A young cub was found, near death in a strange craft a few months ago.  After his recovery, the story he told, frightened everyone to their inner core and put the entire alliance up in arms. The cub’s story was broadcast over the comm-link for every fur to hear. He said that after the aliens had subdued a planet, they would herd all surviving furs into large transports which they shuttled them to the ships in orbit. Once the transport unloaded the furs, the cubs were separated from the adults. The adults were then put in tanks that contained slimy, pink serpents. Once in the tanks the serpents would enter them from any opening before they were picked up by large gelatinous aliens and devoured. The cubs that were separated from the adults were forced to work as slaves until they were big enough to be eaten by the aliens.

     The cub then stated that the aliens were heading towards the Arridian system in order to give them a large supply of food. I shuddered when I heard that, as the planet Arridia is the center of the Alliance, not to mention nearly half of the population lives there. Our leaders then realized that if we were going to survive, we were going to have to mount a serious defense if we didn’t want our various species and races would not become extinct.

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