WARNING THE FOLLOWING PIC AND STORY MAY BE DISTURBING AND CAN AND POSSIBLY WILL CAUSE NIGHTMARES, CONSTANT PAWING OFF AND/OR EROTIC DREAMS.
BY VIEWING THE PIC AND READING THE MINI STORY, YOU *THE VIEWER* WILL NOT HOLD ME LIABLE FOR ANY TRAUMA RESULTING FROM PROCEEDING FURTHER TO THE COMING STORY.
BY VIEWING THE PIC AND READING THE MINI STORY, YOU *THE VIEWER* WILL NOT HOLD ME LIABLE FOR ANY TRAUMA RESULTING FROM PROCEEDING FURTHER TO THE COMING STORY.
I had a far different story in mind for this pic, however, my muse had a different story, a far different story that wrote itself. For the record, I would and will never condone such actions as depicted in the following short story...
So as I have asked before, please give me honest feedback and critiques.
He knew that it wouldn't be much longer before his spirit finally broke free of its mortal shell and found its way to its final judgement. He was unjustly convicted and and sentenced to death by spitting for crimes against nature for being attracted to other males and not settling down with a woman to produce horrible little parasites in order to perpetuate the population. Both he and his lover knew the risks that those like them faced when getting together for intimate dates, death by beheading, and he was willing to lose his head and life to be with his lover and confidant.
No sooner than his foxy lover tied inside him and before he could get his release, the King's guards burst into his home, arresting the two for their crimes. The guards made the two march naked through the town proper, only after tying a knot tightly and painfully around his own knot in order to keep his fully erect as his lover was forced to walk behind still tied in him from behind. He proudly held his head high not ashamed of what he was caught doing, as he heard the fox whimper in shame.
It wasn't long before the two found themselves outside the King's castle with the entire population of the town gathered around to watch their coming execution. He was surprised to see more than a dozen long, thick lances resting against the castle walls with a wooden stockade and bench nearby. Before he knew it, two of the guards approached and grabbing the two males by their waists, roughly pulled them apart from each other, painfully ripping the foxes rather large knot out of his tailhole.
He watched as the fox was led to the wooden device, forced face down before tying his arms and legs to the metal rungs on both sides. Then to his surprise, the executioner took one of the lances and placed the sharp end at the base of the foxes hole.
"Deathclub," The captain of the guards intoned as he read from a piece of parchment, "Both you and Ainoko have been found guilty of committing unnatural acts against nature by sleeping with each other as a man does with his woman. As beheading seems to have no effect in stopping these unnatural acts, you king has decreed that all males like you will be spitted alive and placed from the highest portal of the castle to show others like you what their fate will be when they are caught. You will remain on these lances until your dead, rotted carcasses fall to the ground as fertilizer."
At that the executioner pressed the lance into Deathclub's exposed tailhole, making the fox yelp and struggle from the pain of his final violation. He watched in mute horror for the next ten minutes as the pole was slowly pushed through the foxes body before the bloody point of the pole pushed its way out of the foxes muzzle. Once the executioner was satisfied that the fox was sufficiently impaled, he nodded to the guards who began tying the foxes arms and legs both to the pole and behind his back. Once the guards had the impaled fox on their shoulders, the executioner made sure that the fox experience one last moment of shame before having him hauled to the upper portals.
Ainoko was led to the wooden device and placed into the same position as the fox, shivering as one of the guards held his tail high to expose his tailhole for the executioner. Just as he felt the point of the lance touch his exposed hole, he took a deep breath, preparing himself for what was to come. The next thing he felt was the thick, rough lance getting forced slowly and painfully into his body. Tears streamed down his muzzle as he whimpered painfully as the lance slowly bore through his body, snaking its way between his lungs and heart before exiting out of his muzzle like his lover.
Once the lance stopped its painful journey through his body, he felt his arms and legs fall heavily from the device before getting tied painfully like Deathclub's. He felt his body rise off the device before stopping to rest on the guards shoulders. He jumped as the executioner grasped his rock hard cock, untied the rope that was keeping it hard and began stroking him slow and hard. He shivered as each stroke from the executioner's paw sent powerful jolts of electricity through his tender flesh. It wasn't long until he felt his balls draw up into his body as his cock exploded painfully spraying the ground with his last load of seed.
"Just as Deathclub, I gave you your last release of your miserable life to teach you and others like you what happens to aberrations like you."
A few minutes later, he found himself outside the castle portals, looking down at the ground as thick drops of his blood slowly dripped from the pole and fell to the ground. He looked to his right with his eyes to see his lover's lifeless body hanging limply from the pole he was on as numerous carrion birds circled their impaled bodies.
He had no idea if he was up there for hours, minutes or days, but he was surprised that he was able to last this long before his body began shutting down from the lack of water, food and oxygen. As death began drawing near to claim his soul, he prayed that the gods were more forgiving than his people.
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